Poems About Relationships by Top Critiquers
#relationships
Poems about relationships by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
certainity
It is very important to have certainty
in any relationship, the certainty that
I will apologize and he will forgive me.
the certainty that if I will fight with him
and will get angry with him yet he will
do message to me. a firm belief that
even if he feels bad about something
of mine, about my bad behavior yet n yet
he will not leave me at all, he will always
wait for me. the surety that everyday with
the rising of the sun, he will forget the old
things and will start the new day with new
freshness and new sweet...
in any relationship, the certainty that
I will apologize and he will forgive me.
the certainty that if I will fight with him
and will get angry with him yet he will
do message to me. a firm belief that
even if he feels bad about something
of mine, about my bad behavior yet n yet
he will not leave me at all, he will always
wait for me. the surety that everyday with
the rising of the sun, he will forget the old
things and will start the new day with new
freshness and new sweet...
#relationships
#faith
#honesty
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Fire Burns
Fire burns
Fire burns
Comes down
From the heavens
Destroying doubts
Of raging passions
Winds of love blow
Through loneliness
Into the heart
Not fate but destiny
To feel her eyes
Cherish my soul
Her love
Shall move mountains
Shake the world
Will not shudder
At her will
But stand beside when she falls
The gods themselves
Only know such love
She is sun
She is moon
To the earth
Of my soul
Fire burns
Comes down
From the heavens
Destroying doubts
Of raging passions
Winds of love blow
Through loneliness
Into the heart
Not fate but destiny
To feel her eyes
Cherish my soul
Her love
Shall move mountains
Shake the world
Will not shudder
At her will
But stand beside when she falls
The gods themselves
Only know such love
She is sun
She is moon
To the earth
Of my soul
#love
#relationships
#admiration
426 reads
3 Comments
Men in the Feminine Products Isle
How many men have stood in the feminine products isle
Looking bewildered and confused by piles and styles
Knowing their wives or girlfriends sent them on a run
And it’s urgent so they know this shopping is not fun
Oh the deer in headlights look of these young men at first
Talking on their phones asking her before it gets worse
Eyes cast down embarrassed that it’s come down to this
But they better get right or else she may get pissed
And when two men walk by each other on this isle
They greet each other with a slight nod and...
Looking bewildered and confused by piles and styles
Knowing their wives or girlfriends sent them on a run
And it’s urgent so they know this shopping is not fun
Oh the deer in headlights look of these young men at first
Talking on their phones asking her before it gets worse
Eyes cast down embarrassed that it’s come down to this
But they better get right or else she may get pissed
And when two men walk by each other on this isle
They greet each other with a slight nod and...
#love
#relationships
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18 Comments
A BIG Decision...
I made a BIG decision this day....
I had to choose between to people
Neither of which I knew very long
So worried
And....*sighs*
So torn
But the words that kissed my ears
Made the decision that much harder to make
This isn't the dating game
It's something much more mysterious
Why do I feel at such a loss
When I finally make a choice
Hm?
But in the end
I made my decision
Though it pained me so much to do so....
To make a choice....
But in the end......
As my new journey begins.....
I...
I had to choose between to people
Neither of which I knew very long
So worried
And....*sighs*
So torn
But the words that kissed my ears
Made the decision that much harder to make
This isn't the dating game
It's something much more mysterious
Why do I feel at such a loss
When I finally make a choice
Hm?
But in the end
I made my decision
Though it pained me so much to do so....
To make a choice....
But in the end......
As my new journey begins.....
I...
#relationships
551 reads
4 Comments
Damn that Dream
Prolific it was
After all those years I worked to avoid you
At the time how could I know
How much I would try to fit into your world
How much I would cry
How worldly you would become
I struggled to understand your bruises
Your scars proved our distance
Not knowing until it was too late
That you would categorize me
The same way you did those after me
My possibilities
Not enough to save you
I wondered about all the great what if’s
What if I moved in
What if we married
What if our life was grand ...
After all those years I worked to avoid you
At the time how could I know
How much I would try to fit into your world
How much I would cry
How worldly you would become
I struggled to understand your bruises
Your scars proved our distance
Not knowing until it was too late
That you would categorize me
The same way you did those after me
My possibilities
Not enough to save you
I wondered about all the great what if’s
What if I moved in
What if we married
What if our life was grand ...
#relationships
#breakup
#conflict #confessional
#conflict #confessional
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WHATS UNDER THE HOOD

#lust
#relationships
#romantic #rhyming
#romantic #rhyming
372 reads
6 Comments
Ardency
28/30
Ardency
I believe that love,
divine love but without
deism, deities…..deis
one-sidedness sits
is
unselfish
motivated to be
proactive
reactive
active
and passive
However, inactive love
becomes stagnant
over time
creating consternation
and angst far deeper
within than one, anyone
might imagine possible
If caught in the mire
of unrequited quiet
how long can one remain
inert before aching hurt
consumes
every waking hour? ...
Ardency
I believe that love,
divine love but without
deism, deities…..deis
one-sidedness sits
is
unselfish
motivated to be
proactive
reactive
active
and passive
However, inactive love
becomes stagnant
over time
creating consternation
and angst far deeper
within than one, anyone
might imagine possible
If caught in the mire
of unrequited quiet
how long can one remain
inert before aching hurt
consumes
every waking hour? ...
#love
#relationships
#UnrequitedLove #NaPoWriMo2023
#UnrequitedLove #NaPoWriMo2023
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Super, Not Perfect
Once, when Superman was self hypNOzing
By way of vintage television set,
Lois Lane walked in to find him dozing
Which triggered her big city fiscal fret
"Is this how they pay the bills on Krypton?"
His reply claimed he contemplated aspect
And which ratio he was sweet on
For making solitude fortresses correct.
Her metro flair insisted on feng shui
For their street of dreams Arctic bungalow
And he could see that she should have her way
In getting their golden ratios to flow,
For flowing ratios neatly restore
Both Human and...
By way of vintage television set,
Lois Lane walked in to find him dozing
Which triggered her big city fiscal fret
"Is this how they pay the bills on Krypton?"
His reply claimed he contemplated aspect
And which ratio he was sweet on
For making solitude fortresses correct.
Her metro flair insisted on feng shui
For their street of dreams Arctic bungalow
And he could see that she should have her way
In getting their golden ratios to flow,
For flowing ratios neatly restore
Both Human and...
#relationships
#marriage
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1 Comment
If I Knew Then (with song)
If I knew then what I know now
I wonder what I would do..
Would I still believe that I was fat?
Would I think I wasn’t cool?
Would I spend more time just having fun
or would I focus more on school?
It’s hard to say... but one thing’s for sure…
If I knew then what I know now
I never would have been with you.
I never would have kissed those ashtray lips
or let you make me feel blue.
I wouldn’t have waited around so much
while you tried out someone new.
Yeah, if I knew then what I know now
I never would...
I wonder what I would do..
Would I still believe that I was fat?
Would I think I wasn’t cool?
Would I spend more time just having fun
or would I focus more on school?
It’s hard to say... but one thing’s for sure…
If I knew then what I know now
I never would have been with you.
I never would have kissed those ashtray lips
or let you make me feel blue.
I wouldn’t have waited around so much
while you tried out someone new.
Yeah, if I knew then what I know now
I never would...
#relationships
#breakup
#lyrics #memories
#lyrics #memories
80 reads
12 Comments
Lock And Key
Boo tell me why am I finding so many locks on your heart
I’m finding a need for a safecracker or locksmith to play their part
It’s as if after every relationship there’s another lock, different key or combination
But boo our love can’t be about different individuals and their so called relations
Yes learn from our past boo, but don’t let it stop you and me
We’re both digging into our past and each time there’s a need for a key
Should those old keys fit the locks that we have here and now
Are we unknowingly locking each other out from our hearts somehow...
I’m finding a need for a safecracker or locksmith to play their part
It’s as if after every relationship there’s another lock, different key or combination
But boo our love can’t be about different individuals and their so called relations
Yes learn from our past boo, but don’t let it stop you and me
We’re both digging into our past and each time there’s a need for a key
Should those old keys fit the locks that we have here and now
Are we unknowingly locking each other out from our hearts somehow...
#love
#relationships
#conflict
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0 Comments
elusive butterfly
i am lost
in her,
those wings
burn with desire
underneath
that candle-lit moon,
it is quiet
within
our embrace,
our kisses,
all delivered
within whispers
of my dreams.
in her,
those wings
burn with desire
underneath
that candle-lit moon,
it is quiet
within
our embrace,
our kisses,
all delivered
within whispers
of my dreams.
#love
#relationships
#romantic
#beauty
#admiration
105 reads
4 Comments
It All Begins With Smilely
Expresses emotions too risky, too intimate to commit to words
Makes crystal clear or confusingly obtuse authentic feelings or unattainable dreams
Obfuscates passion with encoded fruits and vegetables
Jumbles the intended signal when naively choosing the wrong one
Illustrates a panoply of unnatural, unabashed facial contortions
Sends messages subject to wild speculation by any and all readers
Makes crystal clear or confusingly obtuse authentic feelings or unattainable dreams
Obfuscates passion with encoded fruits and vegetables
Jumbles the intended signal when naively choosing the wrong one
Illustrates a panoply of unnatural, unabashed facial contortions
Sends messages subject to wild speculation by any and all readers
#relationships
#dialogue
#PowerOfWords
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2 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Relationships by Top Critiquers