Poems About Relationships Seeking Honest Critique
#relationships
Poems about relationships seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Reunion
Words are slipping away
From my lips
Flooded with emotion
I am
As the mirage finally came to life
Joy is filling my soul,
Radiating from my face
I look at you
And modesty holds me down
As your body entices me
To become intimate with you
From my lips
Flooded with emotion
I am
As the mirage finally came to life
Joy is filling my soul,
Radiating from my face
I look at you
And modesty holds me down
As your body entices me
To become intimate with you
#relationships
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Dance Of Dahlias
Sometimes I bathe in the maelstrom
Deep in the cold of the eye
Sometimes in this mausoleum
Color the truth, deify
Unlike flora you are thinking
More like a clover of time
Rose is the future filled dreaming
Body with sweetness divine
Drowning in drippings of honey
Etchings turned stone gone awry
Pouring like it costs us money
Savor the lows with the high
Sometimes I get lost in autumn
I don't believe in goodbyes
Muses distraught now begotten
Patterns that we amplify.
Deep in the cold of the eye
Sometimes in this mausoleum
Color the truth, deify
Unlike flora you are thinking
More like a clover of time
Rose is the future filled dreaming
Body with sweetness divine
Drowning in drippings of honey
Etchings turned stone gone awry
Pouring like it costs us money
Savor the lows with the high
Sometimes I get lost in autumn
I don't believe in goodbyes
Muses distraught now begotten
Patterns that we amplify.
#love
#dark
#relationships
#spiritual
#FallingInLove
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The Goodbye
I’m here to tell you goodbye
It’s been so hard for me to accept
I’ve clung to the hope of us
Our love has made this so difficult
Our calmness in this storm so confusing
But I want a life of emotion
I want to feel deeply, not skim the surface
I want to risk, to experience, to live
I want to love hard
I want to love securely
I’m here for the ride of my life
Not a gentle amble
I don’t want a safety net
So it’s best we go now and heal
Separately and begin to forget
Meet new people eventually and fall in love again ...
It’s been so hard for me to accept
I’ve clung to the hope of us
Our love has made this so difficult
Our calmness in this storm so confusing
But I want a life of emotion
I want to feel deeply, not skim the surface
I want to risk, to experience, to live
I want to love hard
I want to love securely
I’m here for the ride of my life
Not a gentle amble
I don’t want a safety net
So it’s best we go now and heal
Separately and begin to forget
Meet new people eventually and fall in love again ...
#relationships
#heartbroken
#breakup
#TimeHeals
#acceptance
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A TICKLE, A DRIP AND A RIP
Love's a hairy beast
A million hairs of love
May now tickle you
---
I can take
Whatever drips
And spills of time
You have for me
Because in truth
I am always
With you
---
Being ripped open
Is not very fun
But it is like
All growing pains
A million hairs of love
May now tickle you
---
I can take
Whatever drips
And spills of time
You have for me
Because in truth
I am always
With you
---
Being ripped open
Is not very fun
But it is like
All growing pains
#love
#relationships
#SelfDiscovery
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Men in the Feminine Products Isle
How many men have stood in the feminine products isle
Looking bewildered and confused by piles and styles
Knowing their wives or girlfriends sent them on a run
And it’s urgent so they know this shopping is not fun
Oh the deer in headlights look of these young men at first
Talking on their phones asking her before it gets worse
Eyes cast down embarrassed that it’s come down to this
But they better get right or else she may get pissed
And when two men walk by each other on this isle
They greet each other with a slight nod and...
Looking bewildered and confused by piles and styles
Knowing their wives or girlfriends sent them on a run
And it’s urgent so they know this shopping is not fun
Oh the deer in headlights look of these young men at first
Talking on their phones asking her before it gets worse
Eyes cast down embarrassed that it’s come down to this
But they better get right or else she may get pissed
And when two men walk by each other on this isle
They greet each other with a slight nod and...
#love
#relationships
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THE POWER COUPLE
Their photo:
A grenade of beauty and activism—
My head explodes
A grenade of beauty and activism—
My head explodes
#relationships
#power
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Alchemist III
In spilled curses where you name me
In basins splintered by design
Visions of what is and will be
I feel my smoke, your breath
In every smothered line
On mountains of vessels buried
On crimson hilltops grinning low
Falling beneath labors carried
If it leads me to Hell
On your word I will go
When all the voices are boring
We hear the delight of the gun
When all these worlds crumble away
I return to the only one
With all our talk of morning
We sure...
In basins splintered by design
Visions of what is and will be
I feel my smoke, your breath
In every smothered line
On mountains of vessels buried
On crimson hilltops grinning low
Falling beneath labors carried
If it leads me to Hell
On your word I will go
When all the voices are boring
We hear the delight of the gun
When all these worlds crumble away
I return to the only one
With all our talk of morning
We sure...
#love
#dark
#relationships
#spiritual
#MentalHealth
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deflowered
a young man stills a rose to stir his beau
i.
the ravished rosebush bows her bleeding head,
disconsolately trembling in the dawn;
the hands of fate have tiptoed to her bed,
and now the flower of her youth is gone.
II.
sepals and petals crushed and pistil torn,
the motherbush weeps for her ruddy child:
cursed be the day, she says, that i was born,
my heaven and my earth unreconciled!
iii.
too soon the young man bows at jasmine's door,
intent to woo his love, bouguet in hand;
the severed rose is...
i.
the ravished rosebush bows her bleeding head,
disconsolately trembling in the dawn;
the hands of fate have tiptoed to her bed,
and now the flower of her youth is gone.
II.
sepals and petals crushed and pistil torn,
the motherbush weeps for her ruddy child:
cursed be the day, she says, that i was born,
my heaven and my earth unreconciled!
iii.
too soon the young man bows at jasmine's door,
intent to woo his love, bouguet in hand;
the severed rose is...
#relationships
#romantic
#ILoveYou
#rose
#FallingInLove
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A cascading love fountain
Sincerely my dear
I say this with no favor or fear
No amount of words can describe you my milky way
You are so magical, a hazy band of thoughts engrosses me in moments of your absentia
And that swings my mind into disturbia
I promise you will shade no tear
For you are the greatest gift life could ever give me as an offer
We have a bond I can't compare
Like Bluetooth devices, we pair
Your love intoxicates me like beer
That's how exceptionally unique your are, like an antique I mean, you are so rare
In nominee patris.... I...
I say this with no favor or fear
No amount of words can describe you my milky way
You are so magical, a hazy band of thoughts engrosses me in moments of your absentia
And that swings my mind into disturbia
I promise you will shade no tear
For you are the greatest gift life could ever give me as an offer
We have a bond I can't compare
Like Bluetooth devices, we pair
Your love intoxicates me like beer
That's how exceptionally unique your are, like an antique I mean, you are so rare
In nominee patris.... I...
#love
#relationships
#romantic
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our circadian rhythm
i watched her cook today
it's like clockwork
this is just like any other day
it's time for my dinner
i want to feel her soft skin
i thought of kissing her
i knew exactly where to begin
walking up to her
taking the spoon out of her hand
moving aside the strands
of her hair that covered her neck
i gave her small pecks
she turned around
and she kisses me with untamed adoration
i got on my knees and began dictation
while the sauce simmered
her body began to shimmer
her honey dripped into my mouth
stirring my...
it's like clockwork
this is just like any other day
it's time for my dinner
i want to feel her soft skin
i thought of kissing her
i knew exactly where to begin
walking up to her
taking the spoon out of her hand
moving aside the strands
of her hair that covered her neck
i gave her small pecks
she turned around
and she kisses me with untamed adoration
i got on my knees and began dictation
while the sauce simmered
her body began to shimmer
her honey dripped into my mouth
stirring my...
#love
#relationships
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serenade
the pleasures of requited love
i.
o i love you
love you i
like rays of morning sunshine
flaming the summits
of majestic hills
how sweet you are
sweet are you
as honey i must make mine
the wise man commits
as the thirst fulfills
ii.
i must tell you
tell you i
how gently on my bosom
your presence finds its rest
o how it thrives!
listen to me
hear you me
you whom to live apart from
cuts like the chilling zest
of flaming knives
iii,
o sacred vow ...
i.
o i love you
love you i
like rays of morning sunshine
flaming the summits
of majestic hills
how sweet you are
sweet are you
as honey i must make mine
the wise man commits
as the thirst fulfills
ii.
i must tell you
tell you i
how gently on my bosom
your presence finds its rest
o how it thrives!
listen to me
hear you me
you whom to live apart from
cuts like the chilling zest
of flaming knives
iii,
o sacred vow ...
#relationships
#romantic
#FallingInLove
#FirstLove
#passion
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felt like he’d been told
the landlady brought him a cup of tea he said it’s five in the morning
deary, she said, if I’d left it any later it would be cold ..
deary, she said, if I’d left it any later it would be cold ..
#relationships
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DU Poetry : Poems About Relationships Seeking Honest Critique