Poems About Relationships by Top Critiquers
#relationships
Poems about relationships by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
WHATS UNDER THE HOOD
#lust
#relationships
#romantic #rhyming
#romantic #rhyming
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Fire Burns
Fire burns
Fire burns
Comes down
From the heavens
Destroying doubts
Of raging passions
Winds of love blow
Through loneliness
Into the heart
Not fate but destiny
To feel her eyes
Cherish my soul
Her love
Shall move mountains
Shake the world
Will not shudder
At her will
But stand beside when she falls
The gods themselves
Only know such love
She is sun
She is moon
To the earth
Of my soul
Fire burns
Comes down
From the heavens
Destroying doubts
Of raging passions
Winds of love blow
Through loneliness
Into the heart
Not fate but destiny
To feel her eyes
Cherish my soul
Her love
Shall move mountains
Shake the world
Will not shudder
At her will
But stand beside when she falls
The gods themselves
Only know such love
She is sun
She is moon
To the earth
Of my soul
#love
#relationships
#admiration
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Beauty Incarnate - with Her
Love's panacea comes at night
with sweet taste closing eyes
like a book unread
of twilight's sangria
and ambrosia
whispering lullabies
from words of prayer
of requited love
rekindling life's candle
loves reckoning comes with dawn
intended breath for my inamorata
her beauty incarnate
with sweet taste closing eyes
like a book unread
of twilight's sangria
and ambrosia
whispering lullabies
from words of prayer
of requited love
rekindling life's candle
loves reckoning comes with dawn
intended breath for my inamorata
her beauty incarnate
#love
#relationships
#romantic #collaboration
#romantic #collaboration
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How Long (Revisited)
There are times when a man needs to back down from his strength
And remember his weakness…
The way isn’t always easy to see but the feeling is unmistakable
My heart has missed you
You who are closest to me…
And how can that be
Have you learned to live around me instead of with me
If I think I lead
Where have I lead us to
A place where we each go our own way
And say we’re together
Can I still touch the part of you that thought I was everything
Because I so desperately want to feel like that person again
Would you be...
And remember his weakness…
The way isn’t always easy to see but the feeling is unmistakable
My heart has missed you
You who are closest to me…
And how can that be
Have you learned to live around me instead of with me
If I think I lead
Where have I lead us to
A place where we each go our own way
And say we’re together
Can I still touch the part of you that thought I was everything
Because I so desperately want to feel like that person again
Would you be...
#love
#relationships
#TruthOfLife
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certainity
It is very important to have certainty
in any relationship, the certainty that
I will apologize and he will forgive me.
the certainty that if I will fight with him
and will get angry with him yet he will
do message to me. a firm belief that
even if he feels bad about something
of mine, about my bad behavior yet n yet
he will not leave me at all, he will always
wait for me. the surety that everyday with
the rising of the sun, he will forget the old
things and will start the new day with new
freshness and new sweet...
in any relationship, the certainty that
I will apologize and he will forgive me.
the certainty that if I will fight with him
and will get angry with him yet he will
do message to me. a firm belief that
even if he feels bad about something
of mine, about my bad behavior yet n yet
he will not leave me at all, he will always
wait for me. the surety that everyday with
the rising of the sun, he will forget the old
things and will start the new day with new
freshness and new sweet...
#relationships
#faith
#honesty
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Ice Scraper....
The little things of life,
are the Mosaic of Eternity.
Crookedly laid, obliquely marked.
Random puzzles are roughly fitted.
Eternal truths look like dogmas.
It will endure and sweeten, or else.
There is a time for every moment.
Everything that is not given will become desires.
Puzzles will be put together with gravestones.
The little things of life hold the pieces together.
Someone with a rose, someone with a club.
Crookedness is straightened, truth is crooked,
and in Eternity they will draw closer -
to each other by signs of...
are the Mosaic of Eternity.
Crookedly laid, obliquely marked.
Random puzzles are roughly fitted.
Eternal truths look like dogmas.
It will endure and sweeten, or else.
There is a time for every moment.
Everything that is not given will become desires.
Puzzles will be put together with gravestones.
The little things of life hold the pieces together.
Someone with a rose, someone with a club.
Crookedness is straightened, truth is crooked,
and in Eternity they will draw closer -
to each other by signs of...
#relationships
#conflict
#TruthOfLife #SelfDiscovery
#TruthOfLife #SelfDiscovery
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the colour of night
cigarette drops from
my hand
rolls across the floor
the walls breath in,
out
in,
out
picking up the
runaway fugitive
smoke
striking a match
the flame jumps
up like a frightened
cat
as disappointment
is washed up on
shore like a dead
fish...
a dead something
a dead anything
me, perhaps
absence paints the
colour of night with
the tongue of a
slobbering
dog
my hand
rolls across the floor
the walls breath in,
out
in,
out
picking up the
runaway fugitive
smoke
striking a match
the flame jumps
up like a frightened
cat
as disappointment
is washed up on
shore like a dead
fish...
a dead something
a dead anything
me, perhaps
absence paints the
colour of night with
the tongue of a
slobbering
dog
#relationships
#UnrequitedLove
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Patterns
Established roles
present problems
over time
Eventually,
one wants to play against type,
The resentment brews
if another continually calls the shots
And that breakdown
can create fractures
I never protested
under the guidance
of the many seductions
But there were times
when I craved to initiate
and you were rarely open to it
I would have taken charge
and I know that was a key contributor
to the downfall,
but that pattern
prevented it
from ever happening.
present problems
over time
Eventually,
one wants to play against type,
The resentment brews
if another continually calls the shots
And that breakdown
can create fractures
I never protested
under the guidance
of the many seductions
But there were times
when I craved to initiate
and you were rarely open to it
I would have taken charge
and I know that was a key contributor
to the downfall,
but that pattern
prevented it
from ever happening.
#breakup
#power
#relationships
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Harmony
Finding you as I moved through
the rhythm of life.
Amidst the heat of an inferno,
the strife seemed never-ending.
I drove in hot to pick you up.
Your laughter got woven into my heartbeat.
Although I am particular about my music,
I let you set the radio.
Alchemy transforms an intimate moment
and we are seamlessly pulled together
by a tempo of warm echoes
whispering to my soul.
Now I can dance in the firestorm.
the rhythm of life.
Amidst the heat of an inferno,
the strife seemed never-ending.
I drove in hot to pick you up.
Your laughter got woven into my heartbeat.
Although I am particular about my music,
I let you set the radio.
Alchemy transforms an intimate moment
and we are seamlessly pulled together
by a tempo of warm echoes
whispering to my soul.
Now I can dance in the firestorm.
#relationships
#romantic
#FallingInLove
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Stuart's Voice
Stuart's voice sounds like a garbage disposal;
like metal grinding metal.
Razor blades perhaps.
Decades ago,
when we were a couple,
Stuart's voice was carbonated lemon juice
a trace of sweetness,
sour in a fun way.
Now his strained vocalizations cut my ears.
I'm glad.
I'm glad because I wouldn't want to hear that voice every day.
I'm glad because now I don't want to be with him.
It would have been complicated,
his beautiful wife not going anywhere.
Stuart takes more and more vacations alone.
The more I...
like metal grinding metal.
Razor blades perhaps.
Decades ago,
when we were a couple,
Stuart's voice was carbonated lemon juice
a trace of sweetness,
sour in a fun way.
Now his strained vocalizations cut my ears.
I'm glad.
I'm glad because I wouldn't want to hear that voice every day.
I'm glad because now I don't want to be with him.
It would have been complicated,
his beautiful wife not going anywhere.
Stuart takes more and more vacations alone.
The more I...
#love
#relationships
#friendship #nostalgia
#friendship #nostalgia
122 reads
6 Comments
Eustasia
#relationships
#FirstLove
109 reads
7 Comments
"If" - A Haiku on Relationships
If she laughs near you
It is a sign she likes you
But if she farts loud...
It is a sign she likes you
But if she farts loud...
#relationships
#haiku
#funny
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