Poems About Relationships by Top Critiquers
#relationships
Poems about relationships by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
I love a few…
I’ve got a big heart
So big
It can fit
More than one
I’ve found that life
People
Offer various gifts
And not one gift alone
Satisfies
Sometimes it’s a dilemma
But it’s certainly
Not boring
Kinda keeps me
On my toes
On cloud nine
Riding a roller coaster
I wouldn’t trade it though
I was alone
For far too long
I’ll take this
Over that
Any day
So big
It can fit
More than one
I’ve found that life
People
Offer various gifts
And not one gift alone
Satisfies
Sometimes it’s a dilemma
But it’s certainly
Not boring
Kinda keeps me
On my toes
On cloud nine
Riding a roller coaster
I wouldn’t trade it though
I was alone
For far too long
I’ll take this
Over that
Any day
#love
#relationships
#confessional
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Don’t you think
Don’t you think
you not talking to me
constitute a stab
in the heart?
You could at least
have given me a kiss
sent me away
on my way to hell
You could at least
have sent me word,
told me a lie,
or gave me a heads start
What have I done
to deserve all that
to cast me aside
like a broken shell
If I had known
what your love did
I would have left
or we stayed apart
If ever you do care for me,
then help me cure
your curse
and all that it...
you not talking to me
constitute a stab
in the heart?
You could at least
have given me a kiss
sent me away
on my way to hell
You could at least
have sent me word,
told me a lie,
or gave me a heads start
What have I done
to deserve all that
to cast me aside
like a broken shell
If I had known
what your love did
I would have left
or we stayed apart
If ever you do care for me,
then help me cure
your curse
and all that it...
#love
#relationships
#friendship
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8 Comments
2 A.M.
Its two in the morning and I'm wide awake
Hating myself for every single mistake
How many times can I make my heart break
And how much anguish can I possibly take
So many chances I just pissed away
So many things that i just couldnt say
Should have done something to make you stay
But my insecurities always got in the way
Why couldn't I just let you know how I feel
Making up scenarios until they were real
Should have been open but I chose to conceal
Then you said you were done and I tried to appeal
Why did I have...
Hating myself for every single mistake
How many times can I make my heart break
And how much anguish can I possibly take
So many chances I just pissed away
So many things that i just couldnt say
Should have done something to make you stay
But my insecurities always got in the way
Why couldn't I just let you know how I feel
Making up scenarios until they were real
Should have been open but I chose to conceal
Then you said you were done and I tried to appeal
Why did I have...
#disappointment
#regret
#relationships #sadness
#relationships #sadness
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4 Comments
Get me a cold beer, or else!!
During the 1990's a severe winter storm kept temperatures in the 20's and thousands of homes in Amarillo Texas, without power for several days. It was perhaps a combination of cabin fever and alcohol that led one woman to shoot her 73 year old husband to death in the kitchen of their home. He gave her a can of warm beer. It had occurred to neither one of them to chill a six-pack on the back porch!
#alcohol
#death
#relationships
#ShortStory
#winter
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8 Comments
confessions
an expert in evading feeling
I twirl my emotions inside me then block them out
it's a gift really forgetting
but there is a great fear in me
of losing my beloved
I wonder when I let him in?
I mean, I didn't intend to
my plan was to fill my loneliness
when did I become so needful
needing his love, needing his affections
I'm usually cold on the outside
this admission would surprise him
I don't let my emotions show
that would be a weakness
most you'll get from me
is a flicker in the eyes
I...
I twirl my emotions inside me then block them out
it's a gift really forgetting
but there is a great fear in me
of losing my beloved
I wonder when I let him in?
I mean, I didn't intend to
my plan was to fill my loneliness
when did I become so needful
needing his love, needing his affections
I'm usually cold on the outside
this admission would surprise him
I don't let my emotions show
that would be a weakness
most you'll get from me
is a flicker in the eyes
I...
#love
#husband
#relationships #confessional
#relationships #confessional
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3 Comments
Cherry Coke
#boyfriend
#FirstLove
#girlfriend
#relationships
#sex
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10 Comments
recovery runs through our morgue
KT tape and sheer ugly will
hold me together
after five hard miles,
and I’m low on both
as my thigh quivers to
keep my knee under me
I stop to water
a tree with
forehead sweat and
angst-filled
swear words
reveling in
my weakness.
A dead person’s
sinew is screwed
into my new knee,
and, fuck if some days
I can't feel the
cadaver’s ghost
asking for it back
My lips stick to my teeth
as my leg shakes.
I didn’t bring...
hold me together
after five hard miles,
and I’m low on both
as my thigh quivers to
keep my knee under me
I stop to water
a tree with
forehead sweat and
angst-filled
swear words
reveling in
my weakness.
A dead person’s
sinew is screwed
into my new knee,
and, fuck if some days
I can't feel the
cadaver’s ghost
asking for it back
My lips stick to my teeth
as my leg shakes.
I didn’t bring...
#conflict
#hurt
#love
#obsession
#relationships
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14 Comments
Loose Lips
You can gossip
about me
If you like
If your words
Should find
Their way
Back to me
I would never
Let it phase me.
Your words don't
Even matter
To me anymore.
about me
If you like
If your words
Should find
Their way
Back to me
I would never
Let it phase me.
Your words don't
Even matter
To me anymore.
#dialogue
#relationships
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20 Comments
THE SHALL WE DO IT QUESTION
We've hung around each other long,
the bond we have is growing strong.
Tell me, honey, what would you do
if I asked to make love to you?
Would you say "Yes", give me a go,
or shake your pretty head, say "No"
and turn your back upon the chance
of a consummated romance.
or take the third way, hesitating,
by insisting on us waiting
until about this you're more sure
of wanting sexual pleasure?
the bond we have is growing strong.
Tell me, honey, what would you do
if I asked to make love to you?
Would you say "Yes", give me a go,
or shake your pretty head, say "No"
and turn your back upon the chance
of a consummated romance.
or take the third way, hesitating,
by insisting on us waiting
until about this you're more sure
of wanting sexual pleasure?
#love
#relationships
#romantic
#sex
#rhyming
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2 Comments
Happy Endings.
I would love to wax poetic
the moon and stars.
How beautiful life is~
shared with my one true love,
Prince Bullshit.
That’s not what happened
that’s not who I became.
I’m not soft and huggable.
Life taught me not to trust,
and I believed it with
ferocious willingness.
Far from being all in,
I’m completely out.
My purse contents:
credit card,
passport,
lipstick.
The color~
“Fuck You”.
the moon and stars.
How beautiful life is~
shared with my one true love,
Prince Bullshit.
That’s not what happened
that’s not who I became.
I’m not soft and huggable.
Life taught me not to trust,
and I believed it with
ferocious willingness.
Far from being all in,
I’m completely out.
My purse contents:
credit card,
passport,
lipstick.
The color~
“Fuck You”.
#sadness
#relationships
927 reads
46 Comments
HELLO DARKNESS, MY OLD FRIEND
Hello darkness, my old friend
It's been a minute since you came
I know its now the end of the game
And I can not bring any of my fame
So, who is that you're calling lame?
And there's noone to depend upon
The broken links that don't bend
You are still with me until the end
And my heart will still not contend
As I still can't hold no other man
So, let's go home together, friend.
It's been a minute since you came
I know its now the end of the game
And I can not bring any of my fame
So, who is that you're calling lame?
And there's noone to depend upon
The broken links that don't bend
You are still with me until the end
And my heart will still not contend
As I still can't hold no other man
So, let's go home together, friend.
#strength
#courage
#relationships
#disappointment
#bittersweet
230 reads
4 Comments
BLENDED DIFFERENCES
#love
#relationships
#romantic
#admiration
#obsession
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0 Comments
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