Poems About Relationships by Top Critiquers
#relationships
Poems about relationships by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Seductive Whisper
Seductive whisper taunts a fragile soul
Peddling fantasies to obtain full control
Coincidence's don’t happen by chance
Unable to read intent in a passing glance
Loving her could end in spiritual death
Cursing me under her cinnamon breath
Peddling fantasies to obtain full control
Coincidence's don’t happen by chance
Unable to read intent in a passing glance
Loving her could end in spiritual death
Cursing me under her cinnamon breath
#relationships
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14 Comments
Please Disappear
Wake up, I want your lies
Don't die, it won't be nice
Is that what I've been waiting for?
Now I saw your face
You awoke!
You didn't die, it isn't so wonderful after all
Is that what I've been waiting for?
No.
Please disappear forever
Don't die, it won't be nice
Is that what I've been waiting for?
Now I saw your face
You awoke!
You didn't die, it isn't so wonderful after all
Is that what I've been waiting for?
No.
Please disappear forever
#death
#disappointment
#LifeChangingMoment
#regret
#relationships
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No Name
What’s your name?
No point in saying it. I’ll lie to ya
Give me something
Lena
You with someone?
Ya you
What’s with the attitude?
If you wanted nice,
You didn’t want me
Nothing about me said nice
What do you say?
I say One night
King size bed
Scratches and moans
Giving each other head
Once we're through
Then I’m gone
Wow, you're not a ….
Nope
Then I don’t have to pay?
Maybe tomorrow your ...
No point in saying it. I’ll lie to ya
Give me something
Lena
You with someone?
Ya you
What’s with the attitude?
If you wanted nice,
You didn’t want me
Nothing about me said nice
What do you say?
I say One night
King size bed
Scratches and moans
Giving each other head
Once we're through
Then I’m gone
Wow, you're not a ….
Nope
Then I don’t have to pay?
Maybe tomorrow your ...
#lover
#relationships
#temptation
220 reads
9 Comments
BLENDED DIFFERENCES

#love
#relationships
#romantic
#admiration
#obsession
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Life is short live it
Let's take a few seconds to let what I've said be an eye opener, 👁️👁️ for you to just THINK, If you could go back in your own thoughts, for just a minute I want you to be honest with thyself. FOR you should never let your emotions, and feelings lead you on your decisions. For if you could go back in time and really analyze, the depths of your own journeys and travels and walks. Within your own relationships in the past, for what would you change on how, you handled some situations, rather wrong or right. I want you to be honest and truthful, with your answers as...
#friendship
#LifeCycle
#memories
#relationships
#responsibility
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TPK
We built worlds
like elite DMs,
built lives
and diversions
and adventures,
and stuck a purple dildo
in the butt crack of
rationality
and fucked the hell out of the
space-time continuum
but we never found
the spell
to give
life back
to these ragged
bones of us
My ghost wafts aimless
in the graveyard,
and looks fondly
at the corpse
of a love
I thought
had a zillion
hit points
but went down
with a few
misplaced
goodbyes
and your...
like elite DMs,
built lives
and diversions
and adventures,
and stuck a purple dildo
in the butt crack of
rationality
and fucked the hell out of the
space-time continuum
but we never found
the spell
to give
life back
to these ragged
bones of us
My ghost wafts aimless
in the graveyard,
and looks fondly
at the corpse
of a love
I thought
had a zillion
hit points
but went down
with a few
misplaced
goodbyes
and your...
#breakup
#lover
#relationships
159 reads
10 Comments
"If" - A Haiku on Relationships
If she laughs near you
It is a sign she likes you
But if she farts loud...
It is a sign she likes you
But if she farts loud...
#relationships
#haiku
#funny
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4 Comments
Women
I
Women are allowed to break oaths
professions sewn from hope
burn bridges to the ground
to make room for what counts
II
The problem with violence
is that it captures attention—
making it effective
When our bodies vibrate into action
we reach for reason
to hypnotize us
into balanced numbness
III
In my domestic violence exhibit
at the local library
one victim had written: ...
Women are allowed to break oaths
professions sewn from hope
burn bridges to the ground
to make room for what counts
II
The problem with violence
is that it captures attention—
making it effective
When our bodies vibrate into action
we reach for reason
to hypnotize us
into balanced numbness
III
In my domestic violence exhibit
at the local library
one victim had written: ...
#women
#relationships
#feminism #DomesticViolence
#feminism #DomesticViolence
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Adonai
touching you so intimately feeling shy
your brutality cruelly seduces me
Adona, who grooms my seduction
allowing those feelings to flow free
you adore an aggressive woman
but not with me you prefer a torrid affair
concubine over the immortal
awaiting your touch
you will tease and not quench my thirst
pleading redemption in your caress
expressing the moment in stiff rebuke'
bringing me to my breaking point
there is no gray in my skies
You have filled them with a rainbow
with knowledge of who you are ...
your brutality cruelly seduces me
Adona, who grooms my seduction
allowing those feelings to flow free
you adore an aggressive woman
but not with me you prefer a torrid affair
concubine over the immortal
awaiting your touch
you will tease and not quench my thirst
pleading redemption in your caress
expressing the moment in stiff rebuke'
bringing me to my breaking point
there is no gray in my skies
You have filled them with a rainbow
with knowledge of who you are ...
#God
#lover
#relationships #witches
#relationships #witches
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2 Comments
I got baggage...
don't even pretend you don't
I'm not buying it
so don't try to go there
you know you do
it's not even a question
but this is...
how compatible is it with mine
is your dominant strong enough
...to counter my submissive
your structure firm enough
...to withstand my chaos
are you bold enough
...to encourage my timidity
is your patience up to the task
...of calming my uncertainty
do our interests coincide
we're not meant to be duplicates
but can we share
& enjoy each other's minds ...
I'm not buying it
so don't try to go there
you know you do
it's not even a question
but this is...
how compatible is it with mine
is your dominant strong enough
...to counter my submissive
your structure firm enough
...to withstand my chaos
are you bold enough
...to encourage my timidity
is your patience up to the task
...of calming my uncertainty
do our interests coincide
we're not meant to be duplicates
but can we share
& enjoy each other's minds ...
#confessional
#relationships
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22 Comments
I'LL TAKE YOU FOR A SPIN
I'll take you for a spin,
if it is not a sin
to ask this woman out
with me - it is my shout.
We can be " just be a pair"
who happen to car share.
In anonymity
you and I can just be,
away from gossipy
neighbours and family.
The time belongs to us,
not like being on bus.
No one will bat an eye
as they see us go by
to where I'm taking you.
You can choose what we do
at our destination.
Let loose imagination!
if it is not a sin
to ask this woman out
with me - it is my shout.
We can be " just be a pair"
who happen to car share.
In anonymity
you and I can just be,
away from gossipy
neighbours and family.
The time belongs to us,
not like being on bus.
No one will bat an eye
as they see us go by
to where I'm taking you.
You can choose what we do
at our destination.
Let loose imagination!
#dating
#love
#relationships #romantic
#relationships #romantic
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0 Comments
Çold Coffee
I left you
Then came back to you
You weren't mad
Actually happy to see me
We have a relationship you know
Sometimes were hot and cold
But
We need each other
The coffee is cold
Yet my temperature is rising
Then came back to you
You weren't mad
Actually happy to see me
We have a relationship you know
Sometimes were hot and cold
But
We need each other
The coffee is cold
Yet my temperature is rising
#relationships
#lover
#passion
#StreamOfConsciousness
#seductive
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41 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Relationships by Top Critiquers