Poems About Relationships by Top Critiquers
#relationships
Poems about relationships by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Seductive Whisper
Seductive whisper taunts a fragile soul
Peddling fantasies to obtain full control
Coincidence's don’t happen by chance
Unable to read intent in a passing glance
Loving her could end in spiritual death
Cursing me under her cinnamon breath
Peddling fantasies to obtain full control
Coincidence's don’t happen by chance
Unable to read intent in a passing glance
Loving her could end in spiritual death
Cursing me under her cinnamon breath
#relationships
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Former Plant Killer
I killed plants labeled indestructible
Black thumb that I had
I was desperate to keep those things alive
I nurtured them to death
Never realizing
That was the problem
When you step back
And let be
That’s when you give life
Loving
Isn’t smothering
Loving
Is
Granting the freedom to blossom
Black thumb that I had
I was desperate to keep those things alive
I nurtured them to death
Never realizing
That was the problem
When you step back
And let be
That’s when you give life
Loving
Isn’t smothering
Loving
Is
Granting the freedom to blossom
#relationships
#metaphor
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So what if I f**ked your girlfriend, you don't!
#dirty
#lust
#orgasm
#relationships
#sex
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Adonai
touching you so intimately feeling shy
your brutality cruelly seduces me
Adona, who grooms my seduction
allowing those feelings to flow free
you adore an aggressive woman
but not with me you prefer a torrid affair
concubine over the immortal
awaiting your touch
you will tease and not quench my thirst
pleading redemption in your caress
expressing the moment in stiff rebuke'
bringing me to my breaking point
there is no gray in my skies
You have filled them with a rainbow
with knowledge of who you are ...
your brutality cruelly seduces me
Adona, who grooms my seduction
allowing those feelings to flow free
you adore an aggressive woman
but not with me you prefer a torrid affair
concubine over the immortal
awaiting your touch
you will tease and not quench my thirst
pleading redemption in your caress
expressing the moment in stiff rebuke'
bringing me to my breaking point
there is no gray in my skies
You have filled them with a rainbow
with knowledge of who you are ...
#God
#lover
#relationships #witches
#relationships #witches
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The Storm
The Storm
The storm is my friend
You can't see me
The storm is my friend
The storm
The storm is not my friend
I can feel you
The storm will bring my end
The storm
The storm is my friend
You can't hear me
The storm is my friend
The storm
The storm never ends
I tried to reach you
I know this storm is my end
As I entered, the lighting crackle shelter me
The storm, the storm is my friend
As I climb the stairs, the thunder disguises me
The storm is my friend
Once inside...
The storm is my friend
You can't see me
The storm is my friend
The storm
The storm is not my friend
I can feel you
The storm will bring my end
The storm
The storm is my friend
You can't hear me
The storm is my friend
The storm
The storm never ends
I tried to reach you
I know this storm is my end
As I entered, the lighting crackle shelter me
The storm, the storm is my friend
As I climb the stairs, the thunder disguises me
The storm is my friend
Once inside...
#dark
#relationships
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"If" - A Haiku on Relationships
If she laughs near you
It is a sign she likes you
But if she farts loud...
It is a sign she likes you
But if she farts loud...
#relationships
#haiku
#funny
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Women
I
Women are allowed to break oaths
professions sewn from hope
burn bridges to the ground
to make room for what counts
II
The problem with violence
is that it captures attention—
making it effective
When our bodies vibrate into action
we reach for reason
to hypnotize us
into balanced numbness
III
In my domestic violence exhibit
at the local library
one victim had written: ...
Women are allowed to break oaths
professions sewn from hope
burn bridges to the ground
to make room for what counts
II
The problem with violence
is that it captures attention—
making it effective
When our bodies vibrate into action
we reach for reason
to hypnotize us
into balanced numbness
III
In my domestic violence exhibit
at the local library
one victim had written: ...
#women
#relationships
#feminism #DomesticViolence
#feminism #DomesticViolence
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ECHOES OF US (INSPIRED BY MOROCCAN POET)
#bittersweet
#erotic
#love
#relationships
#sadness
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Bookmark my lust.
Oh that I were a book
touched by your hands each night
held tenderly into the hushed hours
pages turned with anticipation
devoured with passion
one more page
one last sigh
a carnal bookmark
holds the spot
your eyes close
I vanish
you're drifting now
sinking
ever sinking
into the mattress
to the emptiness of sleep.
touched by your hands each night
held tenderly into the hushed hours
pages turned with anticipation
devoured with passion
one more page
one last sigh
a carnal bookmark
holds the spot
your eyes close
I vanish
you're drifting now
sinking
ever sinking
into the mattress
to the emptiness of sleep.
#relationships
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Lysistrata Redux
Neo-Confederate MAGA
has long promoted rape
with an electorate saga
the ladies can't escape.
So now..."fuck around and find out",
we hear without a doubt
so dudes look to your brazen snout
to see what's she's about.
And don't forget that their old men
can pull a Glock to cock
to fight your civil war again
and outline you in chalk.
Cuz no one wants to be your slave
or hear your incel bleat
when she can put you in a...
has long promoted rape
with an electorate saga
the ladies can't escape.
So now..."fuck around and find out",
we hear without a doubt
so dudes look to your brazen snout
to see what's she's about.
And don't forget that their old men
can pull a Glock to cock
to fight your civil war again
and outline you in chalk.
Cuz no one wants to be your slave
or hear your incel bleat
when she can put you in a...
#lies
#manipulation
#relationships
#sex
#war
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4 Comments
JUST ANOTHER BEGINNING
There will come a time in each of our lives, that we may have to face some heartship, and sorrow through this life with hardship as well. But yet nothing is more damaging than DEATH, but what is so frightening is not knowing how or whether, it's time for your life to come to an end. For the betterment of life and dreams, with endless arrays of possibilities, for the elders they say that when we die. IT'S just a new beginning in our lives, for let the truth be told to those who know and believe. For death is a natural form of life, yet still it is necessary to understand that when we are...
#dialogue
#emotional
#marriage
#relationships
#StreamOfConsciousness
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Love Game
Compete for a girl
No matter the cost
Even when you look
Ridiculous
Create a new world
With only us
The only occupant
I can trust
Provide the resources
That's a must
Or I won't take you
Serious
Stop the attention
And I'll give up
Cater to the next
Runner up
No matter the cost
Even when you look
Ridiculous
Create a new world
With only us
The only occupant
I can trust
Provide the resources
That's a must
Or I won't take you
Serious
Stop the attention
And I'll give up
Cater to the next
Runner up
#relationships
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9 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Relationships by Top Critiquers