Poems About Relationships by Top Critiquers
#relationships
Poems about relationships by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Seductive Whisper
Seductive whisper taunts a fragile soul
Peddling fantasies to obtain full control
Coincidence's don’t happen by chance
Unable to read intent in a passing glance
Loving her could end in spiritual death
Cursing me under her cinnamon breath
Peddling fantasies to obtain full control
Coincidence's don’t happen by chance
Unable to read intent in a passing glance
Loving her could end in spiritual death
Cursing me under her cinnamon breath
#relationships
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Your cuticles are sexy
She was a cutie
Young, hot and had an extraordinary appetite for sex
She knew her way around my body and knew what I enjoyed
There was just one problem...
She had a disgusting habit of frequently and repeatedly gnawing on her skin
Most of the time it was her cuticles or her hand
The area would become red & raw
Many times the affected area would bleed
She had a disease called Dermatophagia
In the beginning of our time together it wasn't bad
After several months her hands looked like someone cut & chopped her skin up with a...
Young, hot and had an extraordinary appetite for sex
She knew her way around my body and knew what I enjoyed
There was just one problem...
She had a disgusting habit of frequently and repeatedly gnawing on her skin
Most of the time it was her cuticles or her hand
The area would become red & raw
Many times the affected area would bleed
She had a disease called Dermatophagia
In the beginning of our time together it wasn't bad
After several months her hands looked like someone cut & chopped her skin up with a...
#dark
#MentalHealth
#relationships
#satirical
#suffering
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Adonai
touching you so intimately feeling shy
your brutality cruelly seduces me
Adona, who grooms my seduction
allowing those feelings to flow free
you adore an aggressive woman
but not with me you prefer a torrid affair
concubine over the immortal
awaiting your touch
you will tease and not quench my thirst
pleading redemption in your caress
expressing the moment in stiff rebuke'
bringing me to my breaking point
there is no gray in my skies
You have filled them with a rainbow
with knowledge of who you are ...
your brutality cruelly seduces me
Adona, who grooms my seduction
allowing those feelings to flow free
you adore an aggressive woman
but not with me you prefer a torrid affair
concubine over the immortal
awaiting your touch
you will tease and not quench my thirst
pleading redemption in your caress
expressing the moment in stiff rebuke'
bringing me to my breaking point
there is no gray in my skies
You have filled them with a rainbow
with knowledge of who you are ...
#God
#lover
#relationships #witches
#relationships #witches
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Personal Thoughts
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ What I would like to know from thyself own personal experiences, do you remember when you had a disagreement with someone, that we would just pick up the phone and dial the number. 🤔 Yeah I know that times have changed over the years 😔 with this new wave of communications. BUT yet do you remember what it use to be like to just talk, about what went wrong with just talking to someone. 😡 Now we just go on a web site and voice our thoughts and opinions, to the whole world 🌎 about our situations in...
#honesty
#kindness
#relationships
#respect
#support
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TPK
We built worlds
like elite DMs,
built lives
and diversions
and adventures,
and stuck a purple dildo
in the butt crack of
rationality
and fucked the hell out of the
space-time continuum
but we never found
the spell
to give
life back
to these ragged
bones of us
My ghost wafts aimless
in the graveyard,
and looks fondly
at the corpse
of a love
I thought
had a zillion
hit points
but went down
with a few
misplaced
goodbyes
and your...
like elite DMs,
built lives
and diversions
and adventures,
and stuck a purple dildo
in the butt crack of
rationality
and fucked the hell out of the
space-time continuum
but we never found
the spell
to give
life back
to these ragged
bones of us
My ghost wafts aimless
in the graveyard,
and looks fondly
at the corpse
of a love
I thought
had a zillion
hit points
but went down
with a few
misplaced
goodbyes
and your...
#breakup
#lover
#relationships
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10 Comments
No Name
What’s your name?
No point in saying it. I’ll lie to ya
Give me something
Lena
You with someone?
Ya you
What’s with the attitude?
If you wanted nice,
You didn’t want me
Nothing about me said nice
What do you say?
I say One night
King size bed
Scratches and moans
Giving each other head
Once we're through
Then I’m gone
Wow, you're not a ….
Nope
Then I don’t have to pay?
Maybe tomorrow your ...
No point in saying it. I’ll lie to ya
Give me something
Lena
You with someone?
Ya you
What’s with the attitude?
If you wanted nice,
You didn’t want me
Nothing about me said nice
What do you say?
I say One night
King size bed
Scratches and moans
Giving each other head
Once we're through
Then I’m gone
Wow, you're not a ….
Nope
Then I don’t have to pay?
Maybe tomorrow your ...
#lover
#relationships
#temptation
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I'LL TAKE YOU FOR A SPIN
I'll take you for a spin,
if it is not a sin
to ask this woman out
with me - it is my shout.
We can be " just be a pair"
who happen to car share.
In anonymity
you and I can just be,
away from gossipy
neighbours and family.
The time belongs to us,
not like being on bus.
No one will bat an eye
as they see us go by
to where I'm taking you.
You can choose what we do
at our destination.
Let loose imagination!
if it is not a sin
to ask this woman out
with me - it is my shout.
We can be " just be a pair"
who happen to car share.
In anonymity
you and I can just be,
away from gossipy
neighbours and family.
The time belongs to us,
not like being on bus.
No one will bat an eye
as they see us go by
to where I'm taking you.
You can choose what we do
at our destination.
Let loose imagination!
#dating
#love
#relationships #romantic
#relationships #romantic
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Marriage Stuff
We come and go
Independent contractors of a life
Watching the news together
A slow motion work in progress
Together many years
Dog walks, family stuff, sharing
A popsicle after dinner
Coconut for her, lemon for me
Moments in a marriage
Affection, gentle touch, sharing
Respect, dignity, love
Independent contractors of a life
Watching the news together
A slow motion work in progress
Together many years
Dog walks, family stuff, sharing
A popsicle after dinner
Coconut for her, lemon for me
Moments in a marriage
Affection, gentle touch, sharing
Respect, dignity, love
#love
#marriage
#philosophical
#relationships
#TruthOfLife
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14 Comments
‘0’ ppm memory armies.. of an invalidish resurgence
pure breezing midnight airs
feels a fresh lease of chillaxing
generous waving in curvy turns
of a gracing unasked heaven
in its outpour ozone stream..
that’s now in a domineering
chemical infiltration.. from the many
ghostly demarcating white danger
zones zeroing in :: knifing in
pungent chlorine, the so~ pandemic
repellent airs.. from the panicky
knocking in, the affected
neighborhood adjacencies
more acrid than this
is the sinking in lumpsome
difficulty.. those
read words of a broken...
feels a fresh lease of chillaxing
generous waving in curvy turns
of a gracing unasked heaven
in its outpour ozone stream..
that’s now in a domineering
chemical infiltration.. from the many
ghostly demarcating white danger
zones zeroing in :: knifing in
pungent chlorine, the so~ pandemic
repellent airs.. from the panicky
knocking in, the affected
neighborhood adjacencies
more acrid than this
is the sinking in lumpsome
difficulty.. those
read words of a broken...
#love
#relationships
#faith
#memories
#pandemic
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6 Comments
Wizard
When I see you
#love
#relationships
#romantic
#lover
#passion
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42 Comments
{re}assess the situation
16 of 30
they show you
...in those early days
how much they're prepared to do
the time they're willing to invest
...to secure your affections
beyond that...
listen closely...
when the standard previously set
no longer matches current behavior
it isn't a reflection of your worth
merely a shift in their attention
believing you caught...
& their time no longer required
they...drift
if your place in their priorities
no longer meets satisfaction
don't assume it's anything you...
they show you
...in those early days
how much they're prepared to do
the time they're willing to invest
...to secure your affections
beyond that...
listen closely...
when the standard previously set
no longer matches current behavior
it isn't a reflection of your worth
merely a shift in their attention
believing you caught...
& their time no longer required
they...drift
if your place in their priorities
no longer meets satisfaction
don't assume it's anything you...
#honesty
#relationships
#SelfWorth
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4 Comments
Angels
(Fia Naturie/Billy Snagg)
I cannot compare thee to anything.
One look stops the very air that I breathe.
As angels kiss lips as soft as dew, sing,
For all that I yearn will make me believe.
And I carry on musing just the same,
Through life's tribulations, dancing a tune.
Loving each other, there can be no shame,
Proceeding in time to the sound of June.
Now when I think back to those pastures ripe -
Carefree and joyous for all we were worth,
Even on days we would carry a gripe -
Still you're my sunshine, my heaven on...
I cannot compare thee to anything.
One look stops the very air that I breathe.
As angels kiss lips as soft as dew, sing,
For all that I yearn will make me believe.
And I carry on musing just the same,
Through life's tribulations, dancing a tune.
Loving each other, there can be no shame,
Proceeding in time to the sound of June.
Now when I think back to those pastures ripe -
Carefree and joyous for all we were worth,
Even on days we would carry a gripe -
Still you're my sunshine, my heaven on...
#love
#motivational
#relationships
#respect
#sonnet
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19 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Relationships by Top Critiquers