Senryu 2

Hope you feel good without them.  The booze you can go without.  Coffee might be difficult.  Keep on writing

I love them both
Just a little experiment....

Thx Cisco

No downer at all
No coffee that can not be
Still a Senryū!

🌹 ☕️

I hear ya
Redemption never lasts long
You'll be the first to know

🤠

good evening dearest Poet
at least you have the power over your body
to say I can do without it...

great write I love hearing from you...

My sleeping patterns suck
So taking action
I love all my vices
They however may not feel the same about me

Thx B

Xx

It'll be worth it.
Sleep like a baby.

I don't abuse any of it
But at this age there's a price  no doubt

Thanks J

Charles Bukowski meets the senryu ... nicely poeted PS ...

The format fit the the Buk edge
Good call
Dig the comment

Thx L

Take a break from booze 🍹
Still coffee is just divine, ☕️
but Sex is better 🍌  

That's my senryu for you. ;)

Putting you down for a Double
BIG BIG LIKE

Thx KX

I quit both years ago.  Maybe not totally healthy in some regards, but better for the pocketbook.  Regards, Robert.

I'm in and out on both
Booze is bad for my sleep but I do enjoy it when I'm awake but in moderation now

Thx Robert

I could understand the booze, but no coffee?
Nice senryu Poet.

I know
Tough to give  that one up  
Back on both in moderation