Poems About Betrayal by Top Critiquers
#betrayal
Poems about betrayal by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
f**k you!
18 years and i never turned my back on you
As far as your side, now we're at number two
8 months you went behind my back and fucked another dude
I came back and stayed when i found out you got pregnant too
Im not perfect I had faults I admit it
But even with the proof you still tried to say you didn't
I should have walked
Instead we talked
And somehow I convinced you to stay
I took the blame for you treating me that way
I cried.... not for me but for you
For the terrible thing that I made you do
Can you imagine...
As far as your side, now we're at number two
8 months you went behind my back and fucked another dude
I came back and stayed when i found out you got pregnant too
Im not perfect I had faults I admit it
But even with the proof you still tried to say you didn't
I should have walked
Instead we talked
And somehow I convinced you to stay
I took the blame for you treating me that way
I cried.... not for me but for you
For the terrible thing that I made you do
Can you imagine...
#anger
#betrayal
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Betrayed, Fey's Sorrow
she lived within the shadows
of wan moonlit nights
around her like love's lust
her sorrow lingers, dreams took flight
the ghost named Fey
so beautiful and ethereally fair
wandering, seeking for her lover
sadly burdened with dark despair
she wandered around the walls
of the home that was once hers
she meandered with her memories
peeling back the clock's chimes
a spectral host begging for a morsel
of the love that was once hers
the embrace with the gold shackle
that held her through the...
of wan moonlit nights
around her like love's lust
her sorrow lingers, dreams took flight
the ghost named Fey
so beautiful and ethereally fair
wandering, seeking for her lover
sadly burdened with dark despair
she wandered around the walls
of the home that was once hers
she meandered with her memories
peeling back the clock's chimes
a spectral host begging for a morsel
of the love that was once hers
the embrace with the gold shackle
that held her through the...
#betrayal
#death
#revenge
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Participant
Participant, depicted.
Indifferent, intrinsic.
Affiliates, contingent.
Predicament, existent.
Definitive, dominion.
Envisioning, volition.
Exhibited, opinion.
Derivative, encrypted.
Inquisitive, admission.
Attributed, description.
Meticulous, specific.
Conspicuous, position.
Elicited, division.
Permissiveness, suspicion.
Deliberate, decision.
Bewildering, distinction.
Divisiveness, derision.
Discriminant, vindictive.
Fictitiousness, explicit.
Insidious, insistent.
...
Indifferent, intrinsic.
Affiliates, contingent.
Predicament, existent.
Definitive, dominion.
Envisioning, volition.
Exhibited, opinion.
Derivative, encrypted.
Inquisitive, admission.
Attributed, description.
Meticulous, specific.
Conspicuous, position.
Elicited, division.
Permissiveness, suspicion.
Deliberate, decision.
Bewildering, distinction.
Divisiveness, derision.
Discriminant, vindictive.
Fictitiousness, explicit.
Insidious, insistent.
...
#lies
#betrayal
#rhyming
#manipulation
#deception
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Pimping
#betrayal
#porn
#dirty
317 reads
15 Comments
Milkman's Delivery
The Milkman truck
had a few bullet holes
in it from a jealous
husband who caught
The Milkman porking
His wife in every
sexual position while
inventing new ones
She was enjoying
herself while saying
Sweet Mercy
While the Milkman
was enjoying his
his golden nectar
While his Johnson
was filling her
Kitty up to the core
had a few bullet holes
in it from a jealous
husband who caught
The Milkman porking
His wife in every
sexual position while
inventing new ones
She was enjoying
herself while saying
Sweet Mercy
While the Milkman
was enjoying his
his golden nectar
While his Johnson
was filling her
Kitty up to the core
#women
#men
#sex
#erotic
#betrayal
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The Miller's Tale ( Pushkin Sonnet )
Young housewives—dark thrills inspire them;
but, when pressed for action doth feign
virtue against a parish man,
while bedding a more nobler Cane.
Ye husbands! heed this chronicle!
When deceit doth snake full circle
seeking to utterly deceive,
truth can be too hard to believe.
The poor husband, an innocent,
reputable among town folk,
unwittingly becomes a joke
in the sinner's moral dissent!
The husband prays for a godsend;
The parishioner! He's a...
but, when pressed for action doth feign
virtue against a parish man,
while bedding a more nobler Cane.
Ye husbands! heed this chronicle!
When deceit doth snake full circle
seeking to utterly deceive,
truth can be too hard to believe.
The poor husband, an innocent,
reputable among town folk,
unwittingly becomes a joke
in the sinner's moral dissent!
The husband prays for a godsend;
The parishioner! He's a...
#secrets
#betrayal
#parody
#satirical
#sonnet
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The Art Of The Deal
MANHATTAN, NEW YORK
Fifth Avenue
Artesia walked out of Fashion and Accessories Boutique.
She strolled to her two-seater convertible BMW, unlocked the door, and placed her shopping parcels on the passenger seat. She pushed the door close and walked around to the driver side of her vehicle. She opened the door, got in, and pulled the door close. She pulled the sun-visor down and looked at her reflection in the mirror. She touched her upswept hairstyle.
“Nice job Leslie.”
Artesia plugged the key inside the ignition, snapped her...
Fifth Avenue
Artesia walked out of Fashion and Accessories Boutique.
She strolled to her two-seater convertible BMW, unlocked the door, and placed her shopping parcels on the passenger seat. She pushed the door close and walked around to the driver side of her vehicle. She opened the door, got in, and pulled the door close. She pulled the sun-visor down and looked at her reflection in the mirror. She touched her upswept hairstyle.
“Nice job Leslie.”
Artesia plugged the key inside the ignition, snapped her...
#lust
#betrayal
#UnrequitedLove
#choices
#deception
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Whoopsie-Daisy - with journeychase
in my whoopsie-daisy of the fallen
the feral arrogance of the rose
with words sharper than thorns
where bastard weeds grow
in the diary of my soul
as old fools troll
MY REPLY
beneath the dreaded surface
lay broken the words
that were once beautiful lies
oh, what sinful secrets
your soul bares
for me only to trust
what stains your sweet lips
the feral arrogance of the rose
with words sharper than thorns
where bastard weeds grow
in the diary of my soul
as old fools troll
MY REPLY
beneath the dreaded surface
lay broken the words
that were once beautiful lies
oh, what sinful secrets
your soul bares
for me only to trust
what stains your sweet lips
#philosophical
#collaboration
#betrayal
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Poem
walking thru the crowds
while visiting a local
small town Apple
festival
stood on a corner
to give myself a
break from the herd
mindlessly milling
about
looked over and saw
you
what had it been...
eleven
twelve years?
you were walking
along with your old
father by your side
I looked away
not out of some
sullen nostalgia
or to hide a tear
falling from the
corner of my eye
but in the monster ...
while visiting a local
small town Apple
festival
stood on a corner
to give myself a
break from the herd
mindlessly milling
about
looked over and saw
you
what had it been...
eleven
twelve years?
you were walking
along with your old
father by your side
I looked away
not out of some
sullen nostalgia
or to hide a tear
falling from the
corner of my eye
but in the monster ...
#anger
#betrayal
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Today
Oh what drab, colorless roils drape the sky
As the sky, ashen, grey faced the sun
Clouds billowing
Spread out as tho' to compass all
The sun, the moon, and stars do hide
Those lamps of heavens reaffirming light
Tho' not darkest all -
Not as dark as familiar men's souls
Now conspiracy and conceit do creep
As knavery, treachery, like the worm doth crawl
Burrowing archly in soft rot
Not as men who on stout legs stand
Thin voices hiss the birthing of death
So discourse this discordant band
Full of hubris and cold...
As the sky, ashen, grey faced the sun
Clouds billowing
Spread out as tho' to compass all
The sun, the moon, and stars do hide
Those lamps of heavens reaffirming light
Tho' not darkest all -
Not as dark as familiar men's souls
Now conspiracy and conceit do creep
As knavery, treachery, like the worm doth crawl
Burrowing archly in soft rot
Not as men who on stout legs stand
Thin voices hiss the birthing of death
So discourse this discordant band
Full of hubris and cold...
#men
#betrayal
#manipulation #deception
#manipulation #deception
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Pacman; Ghosts of the past
Haven't the ghosts driven you crazy yet?
Their attitude is not encouraging
Life after life, is it the same as before?
So what is this zeal for? ...
Fighting ghosts, even after death,
Break on a visit, chase and break bones with
ethereal jaws, worn out mouths
On a completely virtual firmament
They feed on lives, and only live on that
You get stronger, but only for a while
You change roles, but again a blow to your crown
And even the end of the game is not the end,
the Credits lie
Always wandering...
Their attitude is not encouraging
Life after life, is it the same as before?
So what is this zeal for? ...
Fighting ghosts, even after death,
Break on a visit, chase and break bones with
ethereal jaws, worn out mouths
On a completely virtual firmament
They feed on lives, and only live on that
You get stronger, but only for a while
You change roles, but again a blow to your crown
And even the end of the game is not the end,
the Credits lie
Always wandering...
#conflict
#lies
#betrayal
#LifeStruggles
#nostalgia
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Po’ Thang
#anger
#sex
#betrayal
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DU Poetry : Poems About Betrayal by Top Critiquers