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Whoopsie-Daisy -  with journeychase

in my whoopsie-daisy of the fallen
the feral arrogance of the rose
with words sharper than thorns
where bastard weeds grow
in the diary of my soul
as old fools troll

MY REPLY

beneath the dreaded surface
lay broken the words
that were once beautiful lies
oh, what sinful secrets
your soul bares
for me only to trust
what stains your sweet lips
adagio
Written by adagio
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Author's Note
Thank you, journeychase, for sharing your mind with me.
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