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Whoopsie-Daisy - with journeychase
in my whoopsie-daisy of the fallen
the feral arrogance of the rose
with words sharper than thorns
where bastard weeds grow
in the diary of my soul
as old fools troll
MY REPLY
beneath the dreaded surface
lay broken the words
that were once beautiful lies
oh, what sinful secrets
your soul bares
for me only to trust
what stains your sweet lips
the feral arrogance of the rose
with words sharper than thorns
where bastard weeds grow
in the diary of my soul
as old fools troll
MY REPLY
beneath the dreaded surface
lay broken the words
that were once beautiful lies
oh, what sinful secrets
your soul bares
for me only to trust
what stains your sweet lips
Published 19th Sep 2021
Author's Note
Thank you, journeychase, for sharing your mind with me.
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19th Sep 2021 9:04pm
Dear JC and A,
Great collaboration between the two of you. I rather enjoyed the conversational style between the two thoughts. Well done. H🌷
Great collaboration between the two of you. I rather enjoyed the conversational style between the two thoughts. Well done. H🌷
19th Sep 2021 9:07pm
