Poems About Betrayal by Top Critiquers
#betrayal
Poems about betrayal by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Her
Poem Published
14th Apr 2024 10:46pm
14th Apr 2024 10:46pm
Piece of …
Yeah
I’m talking to you
You think you’re slick
But I know
What you’re up to
No worries, baby
Fuck her
All you want
Enjoy her
While you can
Seriously
Cuz not long from now
Your head
Will be spinning
Cuz I’ll be gone
And so will she
She’ll be fucking me
I’m talking to you
You think you’re slick
But I know
What you’re up to
No worries, baby
Fuck her
All you want
Enjoy her
While you can
Seriously
Cuz not long from now
Your head
Will be spinning
Cuz I’ll be gone
And so will she
She’ll be fucking me
#lust
#betrayal
#revenge
181 reads
21 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Apr 2024 10:57am
8th Apr 2024 10:57am
Betrayal
The Day I returned
Awakened
Harmony divided
In my faith
Past memories
God is who I hate
Searching the betrayal
Shadows of light
Silent Tomorrow's
Endless night's
Awakened
Harmony divided
In my faith
Past memories
God is who I hate
Searching the betrayal
Shadows of light
Silent Tomorrow's
Endless night's
#betrayal
#night
#religion
#spiritual
#rhyming
66 reads
12 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
14th Apr 2024 7:56pm
14th Apr 2024 7:56pm
Chasing Women
You're chasing other women
While you're seeing me
Women here
Women there
Why can't I
Be first?
While you're seeing me
Women here
Women there
Why can't I
Be first?
#love
#lust
#betrayal #passion
#betrayal #passion
99 reads
7 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
11th Jul 2023 12:49pm
11th Jul 2023 12:49pm
Earthquake
Each unveiled word created seismic earthquakes.
Your dark energy rupturing my souls lithosphere.
Shaking me to my deepest, darkest core.
Complete obliteration of a forever more.
Pieces of my heart breaking off into crystals and crumbles.
Thoughts broken of trust in a rubble of rejection.
You shattered me with such damaging perfection.
Your dark energy rupturing my souls lithosphere.
Shaking me to my deepest, darkest core.
Complete obliteration of a forever more.
Pieces of my heart breaking off into crystals and crumbles.
Thoughts broken of trust in a rubble of rejection.
You shattered me with such damaging perfection.
#heartbroken
#betrayal
218 reads
10 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
14th Apr 2024 6:52pm
14th Apr 2024 6:52pm
Betrayal
winding in the energies, riding the winds
realizing my power I no longer withhold
letting it ride I right some wrongs
distant thunder the wind picks up speed
dispersing the dark building in me
ignoring my power thinking it wasn't manifesting anyway
with a nod to the festering hole in me
coming from the Onyx Kingdom I use calculation and wait
treachery is afoot
like my Father of all dominions I am listening
paying close attention to all his movements
because the devil is in the detail
and he whispers I'm missing...
realizing my power I no longer withhold
letting it ride I right some wrongs
distant thunder the wind picks up speed
dispersing the dark building in me
ignoring my power thinking it wasn't manifesting anyway
with a nod to the festering hole in me
coming from the Onyx Kingdom I use calculation and wait
treachery is afoot
like my Father of all dominions I am listening
paying close attention to all his movements
because the devil is in the detail
and he whispers I'm missing...
#lies
#betrayal
#curse
73 reads
4 Comments
nightbirdblue
enbyblue
enbyblue
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 7:34pm
10th Apr 2024 7:34pm
Clandestine
Secrets kept
Now unfold
The stories told
Shaping the mold
Here I’ve wept
Never known
Knowledge withhold
Resentment grown
Cannot forget
The truth controlled
Not consoled
Deceit threefold
I confess
Mercy sold
For price unknown
For glittering gold
Words of regret
To behold
Guile foretold
I was scold’
Wisdom inept
Cowards not bold
Shaking cold
I’m all alone
Now unfold
The stories told
Shaping the mold
Here I’ve wept
Never known
Knowledge withhold
Resentment grown
Cannot forget
The truth controlled
Not consoled
Deceit threefold
I confess
Mercy sold
For price unknown
For glittering gold
Words of regret
To behold
Guile foretold
I was scold’
Wisdom inept
Cowards not bold
Shaking cold
I’m all alone
#secrets
#lies
#betrayal
#deception
#NaPoWriMo2024
65 reads
10 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
14th Apr 2024 00:11am
14th Apr 2024 00:11am
The Beast Has Risen
You wanted the teeth
You wanted the claws
When I came close
You put me behind bars
I don’t know what you thought
I don’t know what you’re thinking
I don’t give a shit
What you’ve been drinking
This is the monster
Since the day she was born
The beast came alive
Like a perfect storm
You wanted me to kneel
You wanted me to beg
When I looked up
This is what you said
“I came to you
And gave you the words
Gave you the sweetness
And this shit occurs
Words
Words ...
You wanted the claws
When I came close
You put me behind bars
I don’t know what you thought
I don’t know what you’re thinking
I don’t give a shit
What you’ve been drinking
This is the monster
Since the day she was born
The beast came alive
Like a perfect storm
You wanted me to kneel
You wanted me to beg
When I looked up
This is what you said
“I came to you
And gave you the words
Gave you the sweetness
And this shit occurs
Words
Words ...
#anger
#betrayal
63 reads
6 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
5th Aug 2023 12:44pm
5th Aug 2023 12:44pm
There's Nothing Wrong with a Good Affair
Affairs are great
Cheating, an art
Could dress this up
But it is what it is
What it isn't either
Look ..
Attraction happens
Sometimes you're looking
Or else it finds you
Whatever the case
Mind your business
One rule only
DON'T GET CAUGHT
Could dress this up too
Choose not to
Full Stop
Cheating, an art
Could dress this up
But it is what it is
What it isn't either
Look ..
Attraction happens
Sometimes you're looking
Or else it finds you
Whatever the case
Mind your business
One rule only
DON'T GET CAUGHT
Could dress this up too
Choose not to
Full Stop
#lust
#betrayal
#lover
#temptation
#deception
243 reads
22 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
31st Jan 2024 1:49pm
31st Jan 2024 1:49pm
it's a living
it's gotta be Monday 2.0
waking up to another cup of what the fuck
still seeing darkness through the bedroom window
and that damn alarm screaming insistently
rubbing my last ragged nerve until it's raw
I'm not ready to rise
another day
another punch of the clock
grinding through corporate mediocrity
this isn't who I used to be
but that was another life
better times
today I'm filling pockets for some other guy
twice a month scoring another tiny paycheck
but it pays my bills & they're good to me, in all...
waking up to another cup of what the fuck
still seeing darkness through the bedroom window
and that damn alarm screaming insistently
rubbing my last ragged nerve until it's raw
I'm not ready to rise
another day
another punch of the clock
grinding through corporate mediocrity
this isn't who I used to be
but that was another life
better times
today I'm filling pockets for some other guy
twice a month scoring another tiny paycheck
but it pays my bills & they're good to me, in all...
#grief
#betrayal
#TimeHeals #MovingOn
#TimeHeals #MovingOn
127 reads
10 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
28th May 2023 7:03am
28th May 2023 7:03am
Thirty Pieces of Silver
For this
paltry sum
I’d throw
away
my
morality.
Is this, truly, who I am?
I ponder
the query
hoping not
but…
The sun
shines
brightly
as if oblivious
to my
deliberately
delicate
mental debate.
Turning a corner,
the dawning
of a new vision
sheds clarity
on an old
desire.
Yet,
the heart
pounds
stronger
for what
it’s been
denied.
Plucking
daisy petals
“I will do” ...
paltry sum
I’d throw
away
my
morality.
Is this, truly, who I am?
I ponder
the query
hoping not
but…
The sun
shines
brightly
as if oblivious
to my
deliberately
delicate
mental debate.
Turning a corner,
the dawning
of a new vision
sheds clarity
on an old
desire.
Yet,
the heart
pounds
stronger
for what
it’s been
denied.
Plucking
daisy petals
“I will do” ...
#betrayal
#confessional
#SelfReflection #NaPoWriMo2023
#SelfReflection #NaPoWriMo2023
626 reads
57 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
28th Jun 2023 6:08am
28th Jun 2023 6:08am
-USTING
Your aggressive thrusting,
making no adjusting,
outworking your lusting
until you were busting,
betrayed all my trusting.
making no adjusting,
outworking your lusting
until you were busting,
betrayed all my trusting.
#lust
#sex
#betrayal #rhyming
#betrayal #rhyming
235 reads
2 Comments
monovox128
Poem Published
5th Jul 2022 8:01am
5th Jul 2022 8:01am
REARRANGED
REARRANGED
Today sure unusual it was unlike any other
came home early to surprise my hot lover.
Anticipation to hug him & his smiling face
soon I overheard another voice in our place.
The grunts & growls made my heart numb
she was screaming, 'fill me up with your cum'.
I quickly took out my phone and I hit record
for what I was witnessing had me totally floored.
I aroused but stunned and also in total shock
as I watched her fuck every inch of his cock.
Quietly I slipped away & just sat in my car
I was dumbfounded...
Today sure unusual it was unlike any other
came home early to surprise my hot lover.
Anticipation to hug him & his smiling face
soon I overheard another voice in our place.
The grunts & growls made my heart numb
she was screaming, 'fill me up with your cum'.
I quickly took out my phone and I hit record
for what I was witnessing had me totally floored.
I aroused but stunned and also in total shock
as I watched her fuck every inch of his cock.
Quietly I slipped away & just sat in my car
I was dumbfounded...
#rejection
#heartbroken
#breakup
#betrayal
#disappointment
384 reads
2 Comments
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