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could you please be a bit more specific...
he likes things clearly defined
has no patience for semantics
we have that in common
give me clear unfiltered expectations
solid guidelines & understood rules
and I can rock them
because I’ll know exactly what to do
but nebulous concepts
meaning this…
…or maybe that...
always depending on interpretation
confound me
and I don’t like being adrift
they speak from both sides of their mouth
and I’m supposed to just...
figure it out
there’s no reason to their rhyme
no rhyme to their reason
so untidy
give me structure
perfect clarity
pull it all together with decent cohesion
that’s something I can follow
and he says I’m so damn intuitive
never has to say anything twice
maybe...
but it's not the entire truth
I know exactly what he’s meaning
because he speaks clearly
fully answering any questions
and that is my kind of language
direct
clarifying
and very precise
Published 2nd Oct 2023
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3rd Oct 2023 00:12am
Then he's perfect and we do agree with this type of person. You really know how to put it out there, tight work Lady
3rd Oct 2023 9:54pm
He's one conversationalist I can easily jibe with. Never left wondering or guessing. Thank you so much! 😊
3rd Oct 2023 00:17am
A Cancer's middle name IS Intuition! He has NO idea! Yeah, clarity is the best. Lay the cards on the table and if we're not in the cards so be it.
3rd Oct 2023 9:55pm
He has a little idea...but only a glimmer 😂 I can't manage mind games and these days I find I no longer have the energy to try to decode language. Straight up, no ice, please. Thank you so much! 😊
3rd Oct 2023 00:37am
hello beautiful Willow I struggle with this...I think people should be straight but the heart is funny
it can sometimes not be straight with the person it inhabits... I like rules 💕
it can sometimes not be straight with the person it inhabits... I like rules 💕
3rd Oct 2023 9:57pm
You're right, Brenda. People do sometimes struggle with being straight with themselves, which leads to never being straight with others. Thank you so much! 😊
I simply adore this described openness. Being candid is my love language, as well. I have lived life longer than I should have trying my utmost to figure out things via 'context clues' and ultimately failing miserably, so this beautiful type of relationship is truly something important, value and deeply appreciated on my end... well done, you, dear poetess!
Really enjoyed this raw truth and found it's impact so ,so immeasurable.
Thank you.
🌹💙
Really enjoyed this raw truth and found it's impact so ,so immeasurable.
Thank you.
🌹💙
3rd Oct 2023 9:58pm
Lately I've found myself starting conversations with a variation of "I no longer have a filter...tell me straight..." Sometimes it helps. Sometimes people are too ingrained in their circular language habits to try. Thank you so much! Honored by the list add! 😊
4th Oct 2023 2:53am
Hi Willow:)
This feels like dinner with you're friends. You're sitting there drinking a glass of wine or maybe
whisky and afterwards telling them exactly what you need and how he fits the bill. It reads so easy
and smoothly. Great write:)
This feels like dinner with you're friends. You're sitting there drinking a glass of wine or maybe
whisky and afterwards telling them exactly what you need and how he fits the bill. It reads so easy
and smoothly. Great write:)
4th Oct 2023 11:19pm
A lot of times I write as the thought moves through my mind and don't edit...so it comes out as conversation. Thank you so much for getting the vibe on this one! 😊
