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the final push

I am...
...unraveling
molecules departing their order
I am...
...disordered
trying to remember
oxygen is necessary
yet it escapes me
too discombobulated to breathe
seeing pinpoints of light
as stars dance before my eyes
I writhe
anchored unquestionably to my undoing
clinging desperately to the sofa
draped {pressed} over its arm
standing on wobbly legs
precariously braced on pointed toes
I require their added height
as frenzied density tunnels into me
pushing my limits
full to capacity
throbbing
flames erupting within
rippling walls become something else
flooding
drawing ferocity deeper
hips angling greedily
anxious to claim more of what's needed
until endurance is exceeded
and I crumble
tumble into the abyss
dying a thousand exquisite deaths
quaking chamber making demands
dragging guttural growls from behind
as he plunges one last time
leaving no room to spare
buried in the depths of my inferno
both gasping for air
losing all sense of self
as he gifts me his essence
we fall
into a moment of forever

Written by WillowsWhimsies

Published 1st Oct 2023

Author's Note

#erotic #lover #sensual

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Re. the final push

Solomon_Song

- Edited 1st Oct 2023 5:42pm

1st Oct 2023 5:41pm

Orgasmic piece, the final overflow (overthrow?). Favourite chunk

as frenzied density tunnels into me
pushing my limits
full to capacity
throbbing
flames erupting within
rippling walls become something else
flooding
drawing ferocity deeper
hips angling greedily
anxious to claim more of what's needed
until endurance is exceeded