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4 intimacy
I could die
Not the chosen event
Cocktails on veranda preferable
Heavy air
Humid thoughts
Savigugon Blanc
Small plates
Dizzying
Consuming
Leading to
?
Not the chosen event
Cocktails on veranda preferable
Heavy air
Humid thoughts
Savigugon Blanc
Small plates
Dizzying
Consuming
Leading to
?
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Re. 4 intimacy
4th Jan 2024 7:40pm
Sounds like a swanky affair. Worth attending though for your company!
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4th Jan 2024 8:38pm
Re. 4 intimacy
4th Jan 2024 7:45pm
This is raw. You were there, the scene familiar. Now longing for that “where does this go from here” moment. Quite powerful in its brevity. Bravo.
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4th Jan 2024 8:40pm
You always want to know after a few drinks what the possibilities are ..
Raw should be my middle name
Thx T
Raw should be my middle name
Thx T
Re. 4 intimacy
4th Jan 2024 9:40pm
Leading the ladies to love all night and long day long. Keep on writing.
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4th Jan 2024 10:04pm
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4th Jan 2024 10:44pm
Re. 4 intimacy
4th Jan 2024 10:53pm
"Leading to what's behind the secret door, only for Generals...asking permission, Sir!
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4th Jan 2024 11:12pm
Re. 4 intimacy
4th Jan 2024 10:53pm
"Leading to what's behind the secret door, only for Generals...asking permission, Sir!
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4th Jan 2024 11:21pm
Biting is a mark of valor and sign of going were most men haven't gone; only the brave surge on UP and away. XO
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4th Jan 2024 11:55pm
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5th Jan 2024 00:01am
There is a reciprocal biting return as the world reverses its spin to say YES. With respect awaiting my general's orders. XO
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5th Jan 2024 00:28am
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5th Jan 2024 00:46am
I await my General's advice
I know it will be real
and more that erotic nice
so I wait as he thinks twice
I know it will be real
and more that erotic nice
so I wait as he thinks twice
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Re. 4 intimacy
5th Jan 2024 2:16am
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5th Jan 2024 2:40am
Though I don't like humidity it does work in a poetic sense in terms of desire dear pink ...
Re. 4 intimacy
6th Jan 2024 00:12am
It seems those of us left among the living, we hunger for that which is no longer attainable by the dead. The feel of a deep breath of air, and the thirst and hunger that follows a funeral reminds us that we are among the living. But later we desire, no we need more preferably with someone that we don't know. Because we hunger most for that session to top all prior sessions, we nee the heat, the brutality, and that draining finish only achieved by the living. Tight one dude
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6th Jan 2024 00:25am
My age tells one story and my mind another.
Mostly though I go with my heart ….
Nothing replaces being on the end of a collected experience. Or on the verge of that excitement with someone in the beginning ..
Great comment and analysis ME.
Appreciate it
Thx
Mostly though I go with my heart ….
Nothing replaces being on the end of a collected experience. Or on the verge of that excitement with someone in the beginning ..
Great comment and analysis ME.
Appreciate it
Thx
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6th Jan 2024 1:05am
Dude, you're not old, we only roll with dudes older than us, and older than than you most of them. We could never repay the knowledge, all of the heads up that have steered us around trouble
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6th Jan 2024 1:28am
Best part about this age is passing on the knowledge and most of all the wisdom. Being able to see and feel the things you couldn't do earlier in life. Being a mentor. I like that..
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8th Jan 2024 4:55pm
Re. 4 intimacy
8th Jan 2024 5:09pm