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Runaway Fire
Her silhouette wasn't an apparition
She was real, close enough to touch
Entangled in his labyrinth mind
Her magnificent curves blossomed
His body, with her body
Fingers interlaced amorously
Whispering incantations upon her lobe
Breathing into him, her life
He watches in wanderlust
Her mouth, upon his
His shape, passing into hers
Becoming a fire, runaway fire
She was real, close enough to touch
Entangled in his labyrinth mind
Her magnificent curves blossomed
His body, with her body
Fingers interlaced amorously
Whispering incantations upon her lobe
Breathing into him, her life
He watches in wanderlust
Her mouth, upon his
His shape, passing into hers
Becoming a fire, runaway fire
Published 21st Jan 2016
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21st Jan 2016 9:59pm
This fire inspires, Tommie. Two lovers are consumed, becoming one, an elemental force. Spontaneous combustion at its best...
23rd Jan 2016 00:24am
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22nd Jan 2016 6:09am
so they become a tower of fire to burn down the stars.
blazing poetry, Tommie...
blazing poetry, Tommie...
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22nd Jan 2016 4:45pm
Tommie this is awesome! I love the mystical sensuality in the piece. You had me at "magnificent curves blossomed." Bravisima!
23rd Jan 2016 00:33am
All women are beautiful, I'm a big fan of the women that love thier curves and wear it well Sort to speak. Thank you GW 😊
22nd Jan 2016 5:44pm
Ahhh . . . You completely captivated me with you excellent wordplay, Tommie.
Sensuous, without being so in your face with the "fuck" syndrome . . .
Sensuous, without being so in your face with the "fuck" syndrome . . .
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