WET WORDS

beautiful Rain the power of words to bring us to such heights of ecstasy beautifully penned..

feeling the vibe..

love Crim

Crim, I ditto your sentiments. Words are very, very powerful! Thank you my beautiful friend!
Pen Love~

Thank you Lady T!  Love when I make my fellow poetess twitch down yonder. Lol
I’m glad I still have the poem, and remembered how to get in my damn google account to retrieve the video. AppreciateYa

Ms. Rain, this was a very sensual and so delicious write.
Loved the entire presentation; what
A sexy voice.  Love of someone expressed in a love of words; beautifully done.

Keith

Hey Keith, thank you so much sweety, I appreciate the compliment! :)  (hate my voice), but quite pleased with the end result. Appreciate the ink love....

Gorgeous piece...beautiful words...great musical comp by the Magically Mr M.
Love
Jen

Thank you so much Jen. Yes, Archie is pretty amazing with all things music...

If I read this before, my mind lost it in a moment of mental trauma. This is the sexiest rush of oral stimulation my liquid passion has flowed within for as long as my memory stretches. But to hear your voice express such oral desire is a flood of sweet sugar crashing into an eruption of molten insulin heating the blood beyond the boiling point until the volcano at the center of my soul roars with the thunder of rolling quakes beneath the surface of towering mountains and sunken valleys that cave to the craving in control of the beating orb within my chest. The lightning bolts you form in words electrify the senses and energize my imagination...  
I bow to your dominance oh Mistress of metrical verse... jj

....and a few of my talented constituents marveled at the fact that I created a poem inspired by a comment. Well folks, this is what inspiration reads like! lol….. JJ, your comment is nothing short of sheer poetry. Damn! That was gorgeous! Stunning, sexy, creative, smooth, and oh so you. So stoked by your words and pleased you've decided to keep her. :) I appreciate you more than you know. (btw…. I don't believe you read this last year. It was posted during your dry spell on DU). Thanks luv…

Wow lady Rain You deserve an Oscar for that poem and the brilliant performance of it. That I have access to your beautiful talent through this site is a great privilege.
Wonderful poetic flow, the RSVP (Rhythm Speed Volume and Pitch) were simply  exquisite .
Thank you.

*clears throat for Oscar speech*

“I want to thank my high school English teacher Mrs. Elmer, who caught me and a few friends behind the gym bleachers sipping on my pop’s stolen Jack Daniels. (I got my ass beat for that.)
Had I not gotten' suspended for cutting class, violating school drug free zone policy and a few others, I’d probably be a drug smuggler of some sort, but instead, I’m a wanna-be-somewhat-kinda-sorta-something like- a poet. I like to also thank my family, friends and fans who’ve cheered me on like the love ones of those American Idol contestants, who can’t sing worth shit, yet they encourage them just because... * You guys really know how to melt my heart* …..And finally, I want to thank our old and reliable family dog, Coco, (may she rest in peace) When I was 14 I would recite my poetry in the backyard (not really)and she would always bark vigorously, while wagging her tail. Whenever I would stop, she would do the same, and I thought, “She’s reciting along with me, isn’t that precious”, but I soon found out she was trying to drown out my words. She really wanted me to shut the fuck up. She was a wise dog.”  

Thank you my sweet funnyman! Your comment is so uplifting and I loved- RSVP. :) Happy you liked enough to keep her on your list. You’re the best! Hugs

I too remember these wonderfully wet words.......and still think you should record this type of "spoken word pieces" on a marketable EP.  As memorable to me today as the day we did this.  Glad that you chose to repost this one. 👏

I have been penning more about spoken and written words, as of late, so I thought how appropriate to repost in theme. You know this was my first voice-over music, so it’s pretty special to me, but you need to let that voice production thangy’ go already, lol…you know I’m not a fan of my voice, nobody wants to hear me. Thank you hun, appreciate you keeping her.

Very seductive, but you seem just as interested in the mind, which some believe to be the ultimate erotic zone.

"every syllable that drips from the lips of this man’s mind  
taste every verb and adjectives released from the tip of his tongue  
lick every glazed sentence soaked in his intellect  
just to wrap my mouth around his, thick linguistic  
Swallowing, the lyrical length of him  
….yeah…"

Sensual and intellectual both, a difficult combination to pull off.  I love your reading of this, by the way.  Nothing like the sound of Rain.....  

I just love your observation of this ink crowfly.  :) Yes, I absolutely love an intelligent mind! It's a huge turn-on.
Very pleased that you enjoyed my southern twang too. Thank you for  dropping a little ink-love my way. Very much appreciate....

Wooow...this poem really set the mood..background music on point..i enjoyed listening...sounds so sensual, hot and steamy.

Why thankya LyricalM! :) I do appreciate you stopping by soakin' in some of my words. I will definitely return the poetic-love soon....

such a sultry piece on adoration, lovely vid and voice... very humid, like tropical rain...

*smiling* Thank you Dean! I always enjoy your visits. Appreciateya...

Stirring thoughts whispered
Laced with lust
Undressed
With a kiss
Of words so wet

His reach is mighty
To steel the gasps
That exude
As he pnentrates
The stunning goddess

Rain this is a confession
That takes our breath away
Seductive writing
Captivating to listen too
Oh please never stop undressing the complex layers thar we all crave to caress

:) You really need to stop that G! lol.....  your words hook me, then reel me in and I'm totally vulnerable to your will.  Simply beautiful!

I'm drinking you in girl. I remember  this when you first posted it and still love it. You have  such a beautiful  voice.......xoxo

Love when you sip my ink slowly Lena! So pleased you enjoyed, and thank you for the compliment. (not a fan of my voice)
#Hug

i just squealed aloud. ohhh my stars [&] garters, lady rain, you have outdone yourself here...
"I wanted those words…so damn deep up in me,
until my body spoke in tongue and foreign languages-
I never knew existed."
^^^^^^^
... guuuuuuuurl i'ma be needing a transcript of those words please & fanksyew kindly ltm
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so glad you're posting some of your older pieces, looking forward to rereading some of your classics
loved this!
xoxox

lol......Love when you squeal dancedoll! :) I've got to say though, I think I only have a handful of my poems saved.
So happy you enjoyed..... Thank you beautiful!

your ink drops spill such exquisite ecstasy, and pleasing fluidity and dictation.
amazing write...rain1courtel...thank you for sharing :)

Barrie, it's so wonderful to hear from you lady! Your radiant presence was missed. Thank you for appreciating my wet words. ;)