Poems About Revenge Seeking Honest Critique
#revenge
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 9:12pm
10th Apr 2024 9:12pm
There time will come
In life I was silenced, never free
by those individuals who didn't respect me
In death
I won't rest
Feelings I will express
Agitated
Retaliation Prosecution
Vindication Exoneration
I'm free
by those individuals who didn't respect me
In death
I won't rest
Feelings I will express
Agitated
Retaliation Prosecution
Vindication Exoneration
I'm free
#silence
#rhyming
#freedom #revenge
#freedom #revenge
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Mar 2024 7:33pm
25th Mar 2024 7:33pm
War is Hell, Hell is War!
In the grip of winter
Impending dread
The opposing army seized their home
Family fought them hard and with honor
Critical madness
All of his family slaughtered
Disemboweled
Stillborn removed
Torched
Charred remains
He was the last survivor
Barely endured the massacre
Ridden with disease
Severed survival
Gasping for air
On life support
A vacant coffin awaits
Retribution for the dead
Impending dread
The opposing army seized their home
Family fought them hard and with honor
Critical madness
All of his family slaughtered
Disemboweled
Stillborn removed
Torched
Charred remains
He was the last survivor
Barely endured the massacre
Ridden with disease
Severed survival
Gasping for air
On life support
A vacant coffin awaits
Retribution for the dead
#dark
#violence
#war
#death
#revenge
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5 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Mar 2024 3:51pm
10th Mar 2024 3:51pm
Epitaph
Yesterday my Epitaph read...
Unknown to some for he has died
Beware to others for he's still alive
His revenge will come, when you least suspect
Ponder your thoughts now, time to reflect
You smothered and silenced him throughout life
Victimized his family, causing pain and strife
He leaves you now with one more warning
Confession will heal in time of mourning
Unknown to some for he has died
Beware to others for he's still alive
His revenge will come, when you least suspect
Ponder your thoughts now, time to reflect
You smothered and silenced him throughout life
Victimized his family, causing pain and strife
He leaves you now with one more warning
Confession will heal in time of mourning
#grief
#death
#silence #revenge
#silence #revenge
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Mar 2024 10:56am
8th Mar 2024 10:56am
At the Beach
One day at the beach along the coast of the Jersey Shore.
There was an In Shape Man and an Out of Shape Man.
The In Shape Man said to the Out of Shape Man, “Look at me I am tall, strong, tan, graceful & beautiful.”
He went on by saying, “Look at you, your small, ugly, pale, weak and untidy.”
The Out of Shape Man was hurt by the remarks. He knew he wasn’t fit, gorgeous, or tall. It took him much longer to gain courage and talk to anyone let alone a girl. He had no self-esteem.
Girls flocked over to the In Shape Man. He would flex and show...
There was an In Shape Man and an Out of Shape Man.
The In Shape Man said to the Out of Shape Man, “Look at me I am tall, strong, tan, graceful & beautiful.”
He went on by saying, “Look at you, your small, ugly, pale, weak and untidy.”
The Out of Shape Man was hurt by the remarks. He knew he wasn’t fit, gorgeous, or tall. It took him much longer to gain courage and talk to anyone let alone a girl. He had no self-esteem.
Girls flocked over to the In Shape Man. He would flex and show...
#conflict
#motivational
#vanity
#SelfReflection
#revenge
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NetherAbyss
Poem Published
7th Feb 2024 2:31pm
7th Feb 2024 2:31pm
The Saint Mind of a Heathen Heart
At the gates of Pandemonium I gaze upon the edifice of abominable domain
Sniffing in the pungency, unsufferable stench of aeon’s anguish, exuding therein
Rewarded unto me the dreaded kingdom of listless pleasures, a fit for me, for Cain
And you, you Abel, guiding me in, since I am the reason you lay wherein
For I am the reason that we are herein
Doors of rosebay creak, moan in inexplicable agony as if thousand bones shatter
My knees tremble, my teeth clatter, alas I can’t tell of my heart what horrors it fancies
I feel your gentle hand on mine inciting...
Sniffing in the pungency, unsufferable stench of aeon’s anguish, exuding therein
Rewarded unto me the dreaded kingdom of listless pleasures, a fit for me, for Cain
And you, you Abel, guiding me in, since I am the reason you lay wherein
For I am the reason that we are herein
Doors of rosebay creak, moan in inexplicable agony as if thousand bones shatter
My knees tremble, my teeth clatter, alas I can’t tell of my heart what horrors it fancies
I feel your gentle hand on mine inciting...
#dark
#despair
#denial #revenge
#denial #revenge
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Kou_Indigo
Poem Published
31st Jan 2024 00:03am
31st Jan 2024 00:03am
Ancient Memories: Justice on Centar Thir
#technology
#war
#aliens
#revenge
#morality
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Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2023 11:39pm
23rd Dec 2023 11:39pm
A Christmas Ghost Story
We live in fear of Santa in this house,
said Mark Abel before the fireplace.
The family ‘stead once used to hunt grouse
had in it arranged a party of six,
observed by nought but a grandfather’s ticks.
‘Twas in the winter’s keep, continued Mark,
when an old fat man was seen on the roof.
Yet gifts were not found, come Xmas Day’s lark,
but in father’s room? The patriarch dead,
a red cap with white trim on his old pale head.
Perhaps this is not, said Mrs Abel,
what we should be hearing tonight. Nonsense!
cried Mark, with a...
said Mark Abel before the fireplace.
The family ‘stead once used to hunt grouse
had in it arranged a party of six,
observed by nought but a grandfather’s ticks.
‘Twas in the winter’s keep, continued Mark,
when an old fat man was seen on the roof.
Yet gifts were not found, come Xmas Day’s lark,
but in father’s room? The patriarch dead,
a red cap with white trim on his old pale head.
Perhaps this is not, said Mrs Abel,
what we should be hearing tonight. Nonsense!
cried Mark, with a...
#Christmas
#ghosts
#revenge #horror
#revenge #horror
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Maeve_Edmonson
Poem Published
4th Nov 2023 4:30am
4th Nov 2023 4:30am
I Should Have A Warning Label
A hot-plated branding iron prodded his chest,
I repulsively marked him with the beast.
Rope keeps sawing his wrists and ankles,
I cackled as I let the rats out to feast.
Razor sharp teeth pricked his raw flesh
as I dashed salt upon his wounds.
His legs flung in the air, he let out a scream,
but I have him trapped in this iron womb.
I start to reach for my black sewing scissors
and began to cut the garment from his groin.
He flinched as he saw me inch toward his skin,
I plucked his manhood into fresh tenderloin.
...
I repulsively marked him with the beast.
Rope keeps sawing his wrists and ankles,
I cackled as I let the rats out to feast.
Razor sharp teeth pricked his raw flesh
as I dashed salt upon his wounds.
His legs flung in the air, he let out a scream,
but I have him trapped in this iron womb.
I start to reach for my black sewing scissors
and began to cut the garment from his groin.
He flinched as he saw me inch toward his skin,
I plucked his manhood into fresh tenderloin.
...
#breakup
#conflict
#betrayal
#revenge
#horror
187 reads
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Maeve_Edmonson
Poem Published
3rd Nov 2023 6:06pm
3rd Nov 2023 6:06pm
The Demon In Me
Seen the killers on tv?
She wants that to be me.
The bloody corpses,
the stench of flesh,
Oh to savor
the smell so fresh!
"It's okay. Just do it."
She says as I hold the knife.
"Revenge is the sweetest.
You control this life."
I stand over him
as he begs and pleads.
"Am I a killer? Is this me?"
The rotting smell oozes
from his wounds.
Light stabs so blood
doesn't rush too soon.
He looks up as a tear
rolls down his cheek.
Now he's...
She wants that to be me.
The bloody corpses,
the stench of flesh,
Oh to savor
the smell so fresh!
"It's okay. Just do it."
She says as I hold the knife.
"Revenge is the sweetest.
You control this life."
I stand over him
as he begs and pleads.
"Am I a killer? Is this me?"
The rotting smell oozes
from his wounds.
Light stabs so blood
doesn't rush too soon.
He looks up as a tear
rolls down his cheek.
Now he's...
#violence
#fiction
#MentalHealth
#suffering
#revenge
190 reads
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Kou_Indigo
Poem Published
17th Oct 2023 8:48pm
17th Oct 2023 8:48pm
Eloise's Revenge: Unholy Terror
#dark
#corruption
#abuse
#revenge
#horror
81 reads
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Naajir
Poem Published
23rd Sep 2023 6:31am
23rd Sep 2023 6:31am
Get These Feet
we all know someone
who really deserves to get
that flying drop kick
who really deserves to get
that flying drop kick
#anger
#violence
#funny
#CallToAction
#revenge
244 reads
5 Comments
Dragonnora
Nora
Nora
Poem Published
27th Aug 2023 9:48pm
27th Aug 2023 9:48pm
Just right
I did the right thing
Again, just right
Not causing a stir
So mature, really growing
Listening to my feelings
And my needs, but taking
Into account theirs
All their many many needs
Honesty, kindness
Just right, but not righteous
So why am I nauseous
And exhausted
Goodness tugs at me
Grabs my shoulders
Pushes me up and down
I want to go down
Lower
All the way to the bottom
Screaming and tearing
Throwing a tantrum
Making a scene
Be obscene and aggressive and awful
I would love to be...
Again, just right
Not causing a stir
So mature, really growing
Listening to my feelings
And my needs, but taking
Into account theirs
All their many many needs
Honesty, kindness
Just right, but not righteous
So why am I nauseous
And exhausted
Goodness tugs at me
Grabs my shoulders
Pushes me up and down
I want to go down
Lower
All the way to the bottom
Screaming and tearing
Throwing a tantrum
Making a scene
Be obscene and aggressive and awful
I would love to be...
#anger
#hate
#heartbroken
#frustration
#revenge
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