Poems About Religion Seeking Honest Critique
#religion
Poems about religion seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Betrayal
The Day I returned
Awakened
Harmony divided
In my faith
Past memories
God is who I hate
Searching the betrayal
Shadows of light
Silent Tomorrow's
Endless night's
Awakened
Harmony divided
In my faith
Past memories
God is who I hate
Searching the betrayal
Shadows of light
Silent Tomorrow's
Endless night's
#betrayal
#night
#religion
#spiritual
#rhyming
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I don't see the face of God here...
All faith is false and all truth is faith
as if a mirror exploded and each one
chose a sliver to be his entire mirror.
as if a mirror exploded and each one
chose a sliver to be his entire mirror.
#religion
#God
#faith
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An Exorcism
We waited until he came home
and tied him to a chair.
We knew what had been going on,
and weren’t afraid to tell him so.
He said he didn’t know
what we were talking about
and I, I must confess, faltered
a moment on seeing him so scared,
our 16-year-old son. But we held firm
in faith and carried on, we knew
he wasn’t like the other boys,
and hadn’t been since 12 or thereabouts.
The moonlight came in slats
between the bars
of our cellar windows, high up and rectangular,
like heaven’s watchers keeping time.
I...
and tied him to a chair.
We knew what had been going on,
and weren’t afraid to tell him so.
He said he didn’t know
what we were talking about
and I, I must confess, faltered
a moment on seeing him so scared,
our 16-year-old son. But we held firm
in faith and carried on, we knew
he wasn’t like the other boys,
and hadn’t been since 12 or thereabouts.
The moonlight came in slats
between the bars
of our cellar windows, high up and rectangular,
like heaven’s watchers keeping time.
I...
#abuse
#religion
#devil #hell
#devil #hell
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Making Love on Easter Morning
I held you close, and would not release until
you led me with velvet hands to the chamber
given by your mother where you were conceived..
The curtains of your chamber were parted
like a new bloom for my delight.
See how it glistens with the same morning dew
shared by all women of Mother Earth.
I tasted you and knew our Creator was good.
you led me with velvet hands to the chamber
given by your mother where you were conceived..
The curtains of your chamber were parted
like a new bloom for my delight.
See how it glistens with the same morning dew
shared by all women of Mother Earth.
I tasted you and knew our Creator was good.
#sex
#religion
#lover
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Do Not Cry
When it's time for me to leave...
For my body do not grieve...
My soul has been lifted to the Heaven's on high...
So for my body do not cry...
For my body do not grieve...
My soul has been lifted to the Heaven's on high...
So for my body do not cry...
#religion
#faith
#rebirth
#spiritual
#sacrifice
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The Teaching about Easter Is Falsehood
I will make this a short poem.
Easter means nothing to me.
I do not observe Easter traditions.
Do you know the root of Easter?
Easter is a pagan celebration.
The Bible does not mention Easter.
Good Friday is not the Scriptures.
Easter Sunday is not in the Bible.
Easter Monday is not in the bible.
Bunny rabbit is not linked to Jesus.
Easter egg is not linked to Jesus.
Who came up with such foolishness?
Easter means nothing to me.
I do not observe Easter traditions.
Do you know the root of Easter?
Easter is a pagan celebration.
The Bible does not mention Easter.
Good Friday is not the Scriptures.
Easter Sunday is not in the Bible.
Easter Monday is not in the bible.
Bunny rabbit is not linked to Jesus.
Easter egg is not linked to Jesus.
Who came up with such foolishness?
#Easter
#religion
#tradition
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Christ the Gardner
Ever since my accident
I had Jesus Christ (JC) become my Gardner
he's a slaphappy messiah
all he wants in life is kool-aid, scratch-offs and cigarettes
oh and he enjoys calling up Lucifer (Satan) to meet him at the bowling alley
the priests throughout the neighborhood dislike him
probably because he don't follow all the rules and guidelines,
that are scripted in that fictional book called the Bible
none of the nuns don't like his message (nuns have no fun)
those wrinkled up penguins
flock to my home to get a glimpse of him
their turned...
I had Jesus Christ (JC) become my Gardner
he's a slaphappy messiah
all he wants in life is kool-aid, scratch-offs and cigarettes
oh and he enjoys calling up Lucifer (Satan) to meet him at the bowling alley
the priests throughout the neighborhood dislike him
probably because he don't follow all the rules and guidelines,
that are scripted in that fictional book called the Bible
none of the nuns don't like his message (nuns have no fun)
those wrinkled up penguins
flock to my home to get a glimpse of him
their turned...
#motivational
#religion
#God
#devil
#fiction
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Golgotha's HIll
Video
#religion
#God
#Christian
#faith
#spiritual
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Who Possesses My Soul?
I can't understand this but I'm dead and I'm talking to you right now
Sounds crazy but it's true.
I was lowered into the ground yesterday around noon
My DOD was 3 days prior
What's really strange is that I remember being placed in the coffin
4 carpeted walls surround me
All different walks of religion say the same thing, a beautiful utopia awaits
Well where is it?
No one greeted me at the gates of heaven
Is this Purgatory?
I have not entered a state of peace, tranquility and serenity
Instead, I've been eager, agitated and...
Sounds crazy but it's true.
I was lowered into the ground yesterday around noon
My DOD was 3 days prior
What's really strange is that I remember being placed in the coffin
4 carpeted walls surround me
All different walks of religion say the same thing, a beautiful utopia awaits
Well where is it?
No one greeted me at the gates of heaven
Is this Purgatory?
I have not entered a state of peace, tranquility and serenity
Instead, I've been eager, agitated and...
#death
#utopia
#religion
#heaven
#hell
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Cancelled From Birth
The Devil stayed on me-so I turned out pretty bad
Punk-bitch old man was never around-so the evil within I just called dad,
“Every time mom dragged me to church I got crazy mad
That’s why every Sunday before and after church she was beating my ass,
“Because my attitude towards religion could be considered a sin
So, Brimstone Boulevard will be my final destination in the motherfuckin end,
“The bullshit lies she told, everyone thought I was possessed in the head
And her fucked up stories from the start was graveyard dead,
...
Punk-bitch old man was never around-so the evil within I just called dad,
“Every time mom dragged me to church I got crazy mad
That’s why every Sunday before and after church she was beating my ass,
“Because my attitude towards religion could be considered a sin
So, Brimstone Boulevard will be my final destination in the motherfuckin end,
“The bullshit lies she told, everyone thought I was possessed in the head
And her fucked up stories from the start was graveyard dead,
...
#anger
#religion
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What's In A Name
You call me Satan
name me Lucifer
make me the Devil
you practice war and pain
so many have been slaughtered
so many more will be slain
oppression and abuse
religion is your excuse
you cower and flee
is this why you created god?
is this why you created me?
name me Lucifer
make me the Devil
you practice war and pain
so many have been slaughtered
so many more will be slain
oppression and abuse
religion is your excuse
you cower and flee
is this why you created god?
is this why you created me?
#dark
#evil
#religion
#God
#rhyming
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Prejudice
Shame when you have to blame a poet for being narrow-minded, self centered, chauvinist,anti-semitic, xénophobe and more to say the least.......... Is he an illiterate person ?
''The poet is a cosmopolitan human being''
It seems that man was not born from Adam and Eve but from different fathers and mothers,some directly from dust and water, their acts are fair, their feelings are human, and their connections are normally interactive, while others, alas ! from gold and precious stones" it's what they blindly think"..
These ones, think they are...
''The poet is a cosmopolitan human being''
It seems that man was not born from Adam and Eve but from different fathers and mothers,some directly from dust and water, their acts are fair, their feelings are human, and their connections are normally interactive, while others, alas ! from gold and precious stones" it's what they blindly think"..
These ones, think they are...
#religion
#philosophical
#morality
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DU Poetry : Poems About Religion Seeking Honest Critique