Poems About Religion Seeking Honest Critique
#religion
Poems about religion seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
LostViking
Poem Published
31st May 2020 11:55am
31st May 2020 11:55am
Born-Again Steady Girl
#teens
#sex
#erotic #religion
#erotic #religion
94 reads
1 Comment
Neoma
Poem Published
30th May 2020 7:27pm
30th May 2020 7:27pm
My Crucifix
Has tits, strangely enough.
#religion
28 reads
2 Comments
Inkerpoet
Poem Published
24th May 2020 1:39am
24th May 2020 1:39am
did you not notice
have you seen
these nut jobs
in the church?
they come for
repentance
and the pastor
jerks the congregation.
and the pastor
let's his hands
slip under
a young woman's dress.
and the devil
whispers things
in those places.
these nut jobs
in the church?
they come for
repentance
and the pastor
jerks the congregation.
and the pastor
let's his hands
slip under
a young woman's dress.
and the devil
whispers things
in those places.
#religion
#humankind
33 reads
0 Comments
Ely
E.A.Rothwell
E.A.Rothwell
Poem Published
22nd May 2020 7:12am
22nd May 2020 7:12am
this life
I made more people happy…
than I made sad;
learned to be happy
with what I had…
Was taught not to take life
too seriously…
What's the point, after all;
It's like Christianity…
Their Bible's... a wonder...with it
you can prove
opposing viewpoints and
political moves…
than I made sad;
learned to be happy
with what I had…
Was taught not to take life
too seriously…
What's the point, after all;
It's like Christianity…
Their Bible's... a wonder...with it
you can prove
opposing viewpoints and
political moves…
#happiness
#hope
#religion #mystery
#religion #mystery
47 reads
4 Comments
LostViking
Poem Published
21st May 2020 12:54pm
21st May 2020 12:54pm
Bodies We Have Loved
Bodies we have loved. A lost soul in each.
Fossils now, beyond our reach
Once loud and laughing, feeling their skin
(open to continue)
Fossils now, beyond our reach
Once loud and laughing, feeling their skin
(open to continue)
#love
#erotic
#death
#earth
#religion
121 reads
4 Comments
Drieks
Poem Published
21st May 2020 8:51am
21st May 2020 8:51am
This human race of ours
Flawless like a rose without its thorns.
Painless like a death without its mourns.
Endless like a lake without its shore.
Worthless like a nuke without its core.
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Why do people aim for achievement?
When the end is the same for us all
Why do people care for opinions?
When their opinion rules over them all
We can all see that it’s pointless
Cause the proof is right there in our face
Forever the race of obliviousness
And always the race for first place
How can two equals hate each other?
Our minds are...
Painless like a death without its mourns.
Endless like a lake without its shore.
Worthless like a nuke without its core.
-
Why do people aim for achievement?
When the end is the same for us all
Why do people care for opinions?
When their opinion rules over them all
We can all see that it’s pointless
Cause the proof is right there in our face
Forever the race of obliviousness
And always the race for first place
How can two equals hate each other?
Our minds are...
#politics
#religion
#TruthOfLife #rap
#TruthOfLife #rap
82 reads
2 Comments
ValerieCD92
Poem Published
17th May 2020 6:41pm
17th May 2020 6:41pm
2003 (The Book of James)
#religion
52 reads
2 Comments
TCLilly
Odette
Odette
Poem Published
17th May 2020 00:16am
17th May 2020 00:16am
Before I Bit the Apple
Before I bit the apple
All I knew was its perfume
Then sweet nectar struck my lips
In buzzing liquid blooms
All the colors of the world
Were now revealed to me
And each new discovery unfurled
Yet still another mystery
I found myself uncovered
And wanted you to see
So you agreed to taste the fruit
To show your love to me
© Tanzen Lilly 5/15/2020
All I knew was its perfume
Then sweet nectar struck my lips
In buzzing liquid blooms
All the colors of the world
Were now revealed to me
And each new discovery unfurled
Yet still another mystery
I found myself uncovered
And wanted you to see
So you agreed to taste the fruit
To show your love to me
© Tanzen Lilly 5/15/2020
#love
#religion
#narrative
39 reads
2 Comments
diamonddave75
Poem Published
16th May 2020 00:22am
16th May 2020 00:22am
Mistaken
smaller hands clasped together
reflecting the position of man
praying for redemption forever
following his sacred plan
armageddon seems possible
spending out our final days
just call another audible
to avoid these archaic ways
are you whispering to the father
or simply playing the part
no you wouldn’t bother
defending his scared heart
happenstance in virus form
destiny clouds ancient maps
outrage is the repeated norm
master hand calculated slaps
baptized in your word
i feel abruptly forsaken ...
reflecting the position of man
praying for redemption forever
following his sacred plan
armageddon seems possible
spending out our final days
just call another audible
to avoid these archaic ways
are you whispering to the father
or simply playing the part
no you wouldn’t bother
defending his scared heart
happenstance in virus form
destiny clouds ancient maps
outrage is the repeated norm
master hand calculated slaps
baptized in your word
i feel abruptly forsaken ...
#rejection
#religion
#honesty
38 reads
4 Comments
rabbitquest
Poem Published
14th May 2020 6:11am
14th May 2020 6:11am
So that's why religion is faltering
The car runs good has some body blemishes. The car is missing the catholic converter.
#religion
24 reads
1 Comment
Jermainesplain
Poem Published
14th May 2020 00:30am
14th May 2020 00:30am
Thumb In My Bum
#erotic
#religion
#Christian
118 reads
0 Comments
Jermainesplain
Poem Published
13th May 2020 7:46am
13th May 2020 7:46am
I’ll Stop The World And autoerotic asphyxiate With You
The Belt tightens around my neck
My eyes slinky outward
I am a fan of Kung Fu The Legend Continues
That is what brought me here
To this sex closet
This last time was a close one
I saw my life flash before my eyes
My spirit left my body through my fully erect cock
And like a pebble skipped across the water
Leap frogged across a sea of nipples
I know why the gates of Heaven are pearly
It’s a free for all, an orgy
Angels with their arms up other angels dresses
Making messes
Ain’t nothing to fear in...
My eyes slinky outward
I am a fan of Kung Fu The Legend Continues
That is what brought me here
To this sex closet
This last time was a close one
I saw my life flash before my eyes
My spirit left my body through my fully erect cock
And like a pebble skipped across the water
Leap frogged across a sea of nipples
I know why the gates of Heaven are pearly
It’s a free for all, an orgy
Angels with their arms up other angels dresses
Making messes
Ain’t nothing to fear in...
#erotic
#religion
65 reads
2 Comments
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