Poems About Religion Seeking Honest Critique
#religion
Poems about religion seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
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Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
24th Jan 2022 12:17pm
24th Jan 2022 12:17pm
New Religion
New religion
Your body is my religion at your Sacred place I've come to pray, I kneel before your alter, bringing offerings today
My stanzas are my offerings, I hope you see their blessed, trying to say how you make me feel or at least know I've done my best
Each word crafted by my heart, carefully laid out in a line, prayers to you my Goddess, written out in rhyme
Testaments of devotion, sent out into the great unknown, promises of my feelings, carved out of my heart that once was stone
Now it beats once more, you've brought it back...
Your body is my religion at your Sacred place I've come to pray, I kneel before your alter, bringing offerings today
My stanzas are my offerings, I hope you see their blessed, trying to say how you make me feel or at least know I've done my best
Each word crafted by my heart, carefully laid out in a line, prayers to you my Goddess, written out in rhyme
Testaments of devotion, sent out into the great unknown, promises of my feelings, carved out of my heart that once was stone
Now it beats once more, you've brought it back...
#love
#erotic
#dreams #religion
#dreams #religion
100 reads
2 Comments
Ashley_M_Hardy
Poem Published
24th Jan 2022 6:26am
24th Jan 2022 6:26am
That Vatican Action
Vanta
Phantom
Magnanimous
Fans of Us
Crests
Crux, of the conversation
Crucifix
Autonomous
A quarter spinning on a table
Equations
Black
Dusk
Dawn
Fawn
So elated by the calling
Suspension
Sailing
Flailing
The Vatican is flaming
Maiming
Lamenting on the memories
History
Cruising
What will be said about US
Lust, greed, need, deceive
Cursing
Everything we knew
Lurking
Pluralist in theory only
You have no say, that’s why the...
Phantom
Magnanimous
Fans of Us
Crests
Crux, of the conversation
Crucifix
Autonomous
A quarter spinning on a table
Equations
Black
Dusk
Dawn
Fawn
So elated by the calling
Suspension
Sailing
Flailing
The Vatican is flaming
Maiming
Lamenting on the memories
History
Cruising
What will be said about US
Lust, greed, need, deceive
Cursing
Everything we knew
Lurking
Pluralist in theory only
You have no say, that’s why the...
#rejection
#religion
#emotions
25 reads
3 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
20th Jan 2022 1:09pm
20th Jan 2022 1:09pm
God et all
I was taught there is a God
I wasn't taught how to believe
So when people preach
I turn off
Things have happened where I could believe
Yet they could be coincidence
I believe in the power of prayer
The recipient doesn't matter
Often I say it's to my toaster
Sometimes I pray in the shower
I'm careful whom I say that to....
I wasn't taught how to believe
So when people preach
I turn off
Things have happened where I could believe
Yet they could be coincidence
I believe in the power of prayer
The recipient doesn't matter
Often I say it's to my toaster
Sometimes I pray in the shower
I'm careful whom I say that to....
#religion
#God
#faith
#honesty
#PowerOfWords
76 reads
17 Comments
SamSung
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2022 6:33am
3rd Jan 2022 6:33am
Something Precious and Priceless
How can you know me?
When you are yet to know yourself.
How can you meet me?
When you are far from yourself.
How can you hear from me?
When you are deaf to yourself.
How can you see me?
When you are blind.
How can you speak to me?
When you are dumb.
Seeing my mortal self
You think you know me:
Dissecting
Analyzing....
And assuming.
I am more than the masquerade
You see standing before you
Speaking and listening to you;
I am more than the mask
Smiling and laughing with you.
I am...
When you are yet to know yourself.
How can you meet me?
When you are far from yourself.
How can you hear from me?
When you are deaf to yourself.
How can you see me?
When you are blind.
How can you speak to me?
When you are dumb.
Seeing my mortal self
You think you know me:
Dissecting
Analyzing....
And assuming.
I am more than the masquerade
You see standing before you
Speaking and listening to you;
I am more than the mask
Smiling and laughing with you.
I am...
#religion
#spiritual
#philosophical
58 reads
2 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
31st Dec 2021 6:48pm
31st Dec 2021 6:48pm
Ha! Ha! Ha!
Professors taught us that the earth and physical life came from a big bang.
Frankly, the only thing that comes from a big explosion is destruction.
Archaeologists said that mankind evolved from monkeys over a long period.
There is not a shred of evidence to confirm this ridiculous and absurd theory.
Historians told us that dinosaurs roamed the earth millions of years ago.
And they deceived some people with the skeletal fossils that they sculpted.
Scientists with bad intent have tried in vain to find out the secret of life.
They can...
Frankly, the only thing that comes from a big explosion is destruction.
Archaeologists said that mankind evolved from monkeys over a long period.
There is not a shred of evidence to confirm this ridiculous and absurd theory.
Historians told us that dinosaurs roamed the earth millions of years ago.
And they deceived some people with the skeletal fossils that they sculpted.
Scientists with bad intent have tried in vain to find out the secret of life.
They can...
#politics
#war
#religion
#evolution
#deception
64 reads
0 Comments
JohnnyBlaze
Poem Published
30th Dec 2021 1:25am
30th Dec 2021 1:25am
[ Short Shorts ] It never fails
Everytime someone erases
what you've said and puts
words in your mouth instead
a devil gets its wings
what you've said and puts
words in your mouth instead
a devil gets its wings
#politics
#religion
#vanity
#minimalist
#manipulation
159 reads
11 Comments
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Semaj
Semaj
Poem Published
28th Dec 2021 5:57am
28th Dec 2021 5:57am
the gun point of convention
while the philosopher fared poorly against
the red-knuckled pugilist
and the doctor fared worse against
the headless corpse
the incredulity of thomas was easily assuaged with a bedside story
and a jumbo jet
until the under-bed monsters began scratching and the puzzled planes dismembered guests
were never found in the pacific
and the up down rhetoric of money
proclaimed the murderers as the victims
thus requiring a few more stints in the
flight simulator to ennoble...
the red-knuckled pugilist
and the doctor fared worse against
the headless corpse
the incredulity of thomas was easily assuaged with a bedside story
and a jumbo jet
until the under-bed monsters began scratching and the puzzled planes dismembered guests
were never found in the pacific
and the up down rhetoric of money
proclaimed the murderers as the victims
thus requiring a few more stints in the
flight simulator to ennoble...
#forest
#religion
#philosophical
69 reads
0 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
21st Dec 2021 1:50am
21st Dec 2021 1:50am
An Interview With An American Pastor, A Chinese Pastor, And A Jamaican Pastor
The interviewer asks the American pastor, “Pastor, how do you manage the contributions at your church?”
The American pastor replies, “I divide the money fifty-fifty, half is for the ministry and half is for me.”
The interviewer asks the Chinese pastor, “Pastor, how do you manage the contributions at your church?”
The Chinese pastor replies, “I draw a line on the floor then I throw the money in the air and what falls on my side of the line is mine and what falls on the other side is for the church.”
The interviewer asks the Jamaican pastor, “Pastor, how do you...
The American pastor replies, “I divide the money fifty-fifty, half is for the ministry and half is for me.”
The interviewer asks the Chinese pastor, “Pastor, how do you manage the contributions at your church?”
The Chinese pastor replies, “I draw a line on the floor then I throw the money in the air and what falls on my side of the line is mine and what falls on the other side is for the church.”
The interviewer asks the Jamaican pastor, “Pastor, how do you...
#religion
#money
#funny
38 reads
0 Comments
TimWombles
Poem Published
18th Dec 2021 5:57pm
18th Dec 2021 5:57pm
Looking for God
I see people looking for God in all the wrong places
If you really want to see him then look in other peoples faces
There is a little bit of God in everyone you know
A little bit of Heaven wherever you go
If you really want to see him then look in other peoples faces
There is a little bit of God in everyone you know
A little bit of Heaven wherever you go
#religion
#God
#uplifting
94 reads
6 Comments
Demetria_Bennett
Poem Published
18th Dec 2021 00:23am
18th Dec 2021 00:23am
IN GOD WE TRUST
Pedals for these medals
The world spins like a bezel,
I aim for stars just to see your face, As I take my place,
We are on a race,
So allow me to state my case;
I’m in this world weighted by hate, I’m here trying to balance the weight. Honestly, I’m scared for my fate
And the things I might face.
Perpetually,
This is connecting me,
To the intensity,
Of my own reality-
God has made us all crazy.
Excuses for life this god has made,
In many proportions and different shades,
It gave us reasons to be at war,
Please don’t...
The world spins like a bezel,
I aim for stars just to see your face, As I take my place,
We are on a race,
So allow me to state my case;
I’m in this world weighted by hate, I’m here trying to balance the weight. Honestly, I’m scared for my fate
And the things I might face.
Perpetually,
This is connecting me,
To the intensity,
Of my own reality-
God has made us all crazy.
Excuses for life this god has made,
In many proportions and different shades,
It gave us reasons to be at war,
Please don’t...
#LifeStruggles
#atheism
#religion
#God
#spiritual
50 reads
0 Comments
archie23
Poem Published
17th Dec 2021 10:44am
17th Dec 2021 10:44am
THE REALITY SPHERE
THE REALITY SPHERE
Everyone has their own perception of reality
None of their views have anything to do
with what is truly going on within the construction
of the whirlwind whirl of the world wrapping
around itself as Sin sang dancing within a constant
embrace within a never ending unbending
twirl of perfection and disgrace
"The sin of angels sang!!!!!!!"
as light and darkness swam through the Yin Yang
No fear here as we keep
spinning the reality sphere
(REALITY SPHERE)
(REALITIE'S FEAR)
(REALITEI'S HERE) ...
Everyone has their own perception of reality
None of their views have anything to do
with what is truly going on within the construction
of the whirlwind whirl of the world wrapping
around itself as Sin sang dancing within a constant
embrace within a never ending unbending
twirl of perfection and disgrace
"The sin of angels sang!!!!!!!"
as light and darkness swam through the Yin Yang
No fear here as we keep
spinning the reality sphere
(REALITY SPHERE)
(REALITIE'S FEAR)
(REALITEI'S HERE) ...
#universe
#religion
#apocalypse #evolution
#apocalypse #evolution
142 reads
8 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
15th Dec 2021 2:45am
15th Dec 2021 2:45am
Society’s Paroxysm Child…
(Buddhology Lesson 1 of 3)
The labyrinth of deceitful deities we give allegiance in the merit
Cubic zirconia never to reach that five carat
Blacken expressions of buried insight prowling on earth in this time
To bring the four corners of the world to one existence not found by its obliviousness's designs
Confusion, cruelty of the spiritual creed to give credence to intellects to remain strong to believe
Lackluster words to encourage the deep seas or the earth to move
Too inexperience by rite to cuddle society in the valley of the shadow of...
The labyrinth of deceitful deities we give allegiance in the merit
Cubic zirconia never to reach that five carat
Blacken expressions of buried insight prowling on earth in this time
To bring the four corners of the world to one existence not found by its obliviousness's designs
Confusion, cruelty of the spiritual creed to give credence to intellects to remain strong to believe
Lackluster words to encourage the deep seas or the earth to move
Too inexperience by rite to cuddle society in the valley of the shadow of...
#religion
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical
#culture
128 reads
9 Comments
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