Poems About Religion by Top Critiquers
#religion
Poems about religion by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
New Revelation
An Angel descended to the earth
And blew his trumpet
And he called to judgment all the living
And all those who lay in the tomb
But it was already to late
And every sinner was fast asleep
And the trumpet voice was in vain
And only one rose up
Over a world that has fallen asleep
He rises in the shadow, an ominous
evil raised from the pits of hell
A formidable idol with an animal grin
The new Revelation
His empty eye sockets are watching
behind our dreams
...
And blew his trumpet
And he called to judgment all the living
And all those who lay in the tomb
But it was already to late
And every sinner was fast asleep
And the trumpet voice was in vain
And only one rose up
Over a world that has fallen asleep
He rises in the shadow, an ominous
evil raised from the pits of hell
A formidable idol with an animal grin
The new Revelation
His empty eye sockets are watching
behind our dreams
...
#dark
#evil
#religion
#devil
#angels
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22 Comments
If You Go with the Flow
Sure it’s easier if you go with the flow
As I once heard, water is lazy
At first I thought it sounded crazy
Somehow it made sense
And why not, there is strength in numbers
So when the majority have the same mentality
Everything just seems to move better
Movements like that are meant to make life easy
I lost my faith and found it and lost it again and found it and…
So many times
Because in the examples I read and saw
Something wasn’t adding up
Then I realized, a lot of of these beliefs
Were driven by guilt ...
As I once heard, water is lazy
At first I thought it sounded crazy
Somehow it made sense
And why not, there is strength in numbers
So when the majority have the same mentality
Everything just seems to move better
Movements like that are meant to make life easy
I lost my faith and found it and lost it again and found it and…
So many times
Because in the examples I read and saw
Something wasn’t adding up
Then I realized, a lot of of these beliefs
Were driven by guilt ...
#LifeStruggles
#religion
#SelfReflection
107 reads
3 Comments
God et all
I was taught there is a God
I wasn't taught how to believe
So when people preach
I turn off
Things have happened where I could believe
Yet they could be coincidence
I believe in the power of prayer
The recipient doesn't matter
Often I say it's to my toaster
Sometimes I pray in the shower
I'm careful whom I say that to....
I wasn't taught how to believe
So when people preach
I turn off
Things have happened where I could believe
Yet they could be coincidence
I believe in the power of prayer
The recipient doesn't matter
Often I say it's to my toaster
Sometimes I pray in the shower
I'm careful whom I say that to....
#religion
#God
#faith
#honesty
#PowerOfWords
170 reads
19 Comments
solitude is a c**t
silent prayers said to the cobwebs maybe they'll catch them inside the hurt
I cry bitterly I don't know who the hell I am in the breaking dawn
this world isn't one I recognize and I'm not either
the brittle truth is falling apart
we pick reality from the empties
we are emptier still believing platitudes while we fade
heil to the new world
we believe we're getting somewhere
all the while we drift further into our solitude
I cry bitterly I don't know who the hell I am in the breaking dawn
this world isn't one I recognize and I'm not either
the brittle truth is falling apart
we pick reality from the empties
we are emptier still believing platitudes while we fade
heil to the new world
we believe we're getting somewhere
all the while we drift further into our solitude
#dark
#religion
225 reads
25 Comments
Unto My Heavenly Father...
This particular incantation is about the wickedness of the human heart and sometimes, yes God uses his most humbling servants to do battle to balance the scales of good and evil, therefore, sometimes you most utilize the tongue of evil and the sword to castrate the wicked tree to make room to sow the reaping of good harvest.
In a better sense of judgment, take Lucifer the highest and most Cherub in Heaven until he tried to overtake the third Heaven upon where God sits.
It was his envious not as he stood as the highest, but the knowledge, and spiritual wisdom he...
In a better sense of judgment, take Lucifer the highest and most Cherub in Heaven until he tried to overtake the third Heaven upon where God sits.
It was his envious not as he stood as the highest, but the knowledge, and spiritual wisdom he...
#religion
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#humankind
#philosophical
140 reads
9 Comments
Mother Nature V Human Nature
Episodes of High Strangeness (Mother Nature V Human Nature)
#religion
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#pagan
#tradition
200 reads
6 Comments
Father of Hope
An enriched bountiful heart
With the power of wealth
On a zenith pilgrimage
Of the golden age of ages
Leaving decadence footprints
Woven in maps of opulence
Lavishing the poor
Converting the whores
Brocades draped over slaves
An entourage of silk brigades
A journey of sand miles
Lead by gold dust camels
To an enlightened path
Guided by jeweled staffs
Chronicled of his reign
Compassion without chains
With the power of wealth
On a zenith pilgrimage
Of the golden age of ages
Leaving decadence footprints
Woven in maps of opulence
Lavishing the poor
Converting the whores
Brocades draped over slaves
An entourage of silk brigades
A journey of sand miles
Lead by gold dust camels
To an enlightened path
Guided by jeweled staffs
Chronicled of his reign
Compassion without chains
#religion
#spiritual
#travel #SelfDiscovery
#travel #SelfDiscovery
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8 Comments
NUDITY, THEOLOGY, FEMININITY
Did not God think it 'VERY good'
when he had made first humans nudd?
'Male and female He created',
His father heart demonstrated,
Naked and without any shame
of their divinely finished frame.
It was that pesky little snake
who got folk 'shamed of bits that shake
and would have had them cover up
the parts God made to help them 'tup'
and, in woman's case, suckle young
upon the breasts on top half hung.
To those who down the ages blame
women for man's fall, I'd cry 'Shame!
You've been barking up the wrong tree ...
when he had made first humans nudd?
'Male and female He created',
His father heart demonstrated,
Naked and without any shame
of their divinely finished frame.
It was that pesky little snake
who got folk 'shamed of bits that shake
and would have had them cover up
the parts God made to help them 'tup'
and, in woman's case, suckle young
upon the breasts on top half hung.
To those who down the ages blame
women for man's fall, I'd cry 'Shame!
You've been barking up the wrong tree ...
#women
#religion
#spiritual #rhyming
#spiritual #rhyming
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0 Comments
New Religion
New religion
Your body is my religion at your Sacred place I've come to pray, I kneel before your alter, bringing offerings today
My stanzas are my offerings, I hope you see their blessed, trying to say how you make me feel or at least know I've done my best
Each word crafted by my heart, carefully laid out in a line, prayers to you my Goddess, written out in rhyme
Testaments of devotion, sent out into the great unknown, promises of my feelings, carved out of my heart that once was stone
Now it beats once more, you've brought it back...
Your body is my religion at your Sacred place I've come to pray, I kneel before your alter, bringing offerings today
My stanzas are my offerings, I hope you see their blessed, trying to say how you make me feel or at least know I've done my best
Each word crafted by my heart, carefully laid out in a line, prayers to you my Goddess, written out in rhyme
Testaments of devotion, sent out into the great unknown, promises of my feelings, carved out of my heart that once was stone
Now it beats once more, you've brought it back...
#love
#erotic
#dreams #religion
#dreams #religion
315 reads
2 Comments
Splicing The Darkness
Are we reverting back into time
When everyone was free to exercise their minds
The churches were ruling and creating BDSM
Looking upon queens of desire, and yet demanding him
High levels of rule used to abuse
Religion itself became no more than a tool
If you don’t agree with them, then you have to be guilty
Fucking power incarnated, dark, oozing, and pus milky
We heard words originally designed to entice
Syphilis attacking skin and bones, flaking heads covered in lice
It’s not about the exodus or deciding to follow the...
When everyone was free to exercise their minds
The churches were ruling and creating BDSM
Looking upon queens of desire, and yet demanding him
High levels of rule used to abuse
Religion itself became no more than a tool
If you don’t agree with them, then you have to be guilty
Fucking power incarnated, dark, oozing, and pus milky
We heard words originally designed to entice
Syphilis attacking skin and bones, flaking heads covered in lice
It’s not about the exodus or deciding to follow the...
#dark
#religion
#humankind
158 reads
12 Comments
Spiritualities
Juha Jarrinen
Has found his Spiritual way
While also creating marvelous works.
You sense that he has achieved inner peace
While also keeping his feet on the ground.
He takes his time to let the wood speak to him
Just like the artist who looks at a block of marble
And while chiseling away finds the great wonder inside,
Just like Michelangelo did.
Jarrinen feels there will be the right and long lasting connection
Between a specific drum and the appropriate Shaman.
Michelangelo worked for a pope
A different sort of spirituality ...
Has found his Spiritual way
While also creating marvelous works.
You sense that he has achieved inner peace
While also keeping his feet on the ground.
He takes his time to let the wood speak to him
Just like the artist who looks at a block of marble
And while chiseling away finds the great wonder inside,
Just like Michelangelo did.
Jarrinen feels there will be the right and long lasting connection
Between a specific drum and the appropriate Shaman.
Michelangelo worked for a pope
A different sort of spirituality ...
#religion
#spiritual
#tradition
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0 Comments
I want to be real
I want to be real. My face from the inside, almost always, like, a lot of percent, feels like eyes looking out from a man's face. Like that is what I'm looking out from behind, and even though I know it's not real, like the red hot iron mask which disfigures the outside, causing resultant disfigurement on the inside. I hate it bad but it's just habit, just not staying background focused enough. That's the trick, and I haven't trained myself yet well enough, so im always falling down around myself over it. That's how i live. Trying to train myself to allow my own face, my own eyes, instead of...
#religion
#faith
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1 Comment
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