Poems About Religion Seeking Honest Critique
#religion
Poems about religion seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Naajir
Poem Published
Today 2:36am
Today 2:36am
Mood Swing # 22: A Stringed Theory
as per God
...
i spread your thighs
part your Sea of Disturbia....in-sert my Serpentine Rod
cata-corner you...Feng Shui your insides...
prep you through multiple reps...pace you thru the steps
rake you over my Spiritual coals
bend you over...face mushed to mattress...bottom line you from the back
deep stroke your interior...slow stroke your intellect
lick your scalp...taste your thoughts...inhale your sweaty essence
my...
...
i spread your thighs
part your Sea of Disturbia....in-sert my Serpentine Rod
cata-corner you...Feng Shui your insides...
prep you through multiple reps...pace you thru the steps
rake you over my Spiritual coals
bend you over...face mushed to mattress...bottom line you from the back
deep stroke your interior...slow stroke your intellect
lick your scalp...taste your thoughts...inhale your sweaty essence
my...
#dirty
#erotic
#spiritual
#religion
#dark
106 reads
3 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
8th Apr 2025 2:21am
8th Apr 2025 2:21am
Overcoming Fear
It wasn’t so much the fear of what happens after death
But the constant guilt over things beyond my control
It just felt like many of the decisions I made in my youth
Were based on the premise – I was trying to save my soul
And yet for some reason it felt like something was missing
Many of the things I saw and witnessed didn’t make sense
I had lost faith and found it and lost it over and over again
And until the veil was lifted it stripped away that innocence
Then I believed I’d achieve something with a bigger purpose
Even the little...
But the constant guilt over things beyond my control
It just felt like many of the decisions I made in my youth
Were based on the premise – I was trying to save my soul
And yet for some reason it felt like something was missing
Many of the things I saw and witnessed didn’t make sense
I had lost faith and found it and lost it over and over again
And until the veil was lifted it stripped away that innocence
Then I believed I’d achieve something with a bigger purpose
Even the little...
#faith
#humankind
#PersonalGrowth
#religion
#spiritual
48 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 8:34pm
1st Apr 2025 8:34pm
The Almighty
Because of sin
The death
Has gained ground
in human life
The earth
has become cursed
The wickedness
spread
The payment
of sin
is
death
Only
the sacrifice
can be
wiped out
The son of god took human flesh
came to the earth and died on the cross instead of me.
He died and resurrected the third day
He is the glorious king forever.
Jesus is the way, the truth and the life
Who believes in him
will live, even though they die
in...
The death
Has gained ground
in human life
The earth
has become cursed
The wickedness
spread
The payment
of sin
is
death
Only
the sacrifice
can be
wiped out
The son of god took human flesh
came to the earth and died on the cross instead of me.
He died and resurrected the third day
He is the glorious king forever.
Jesus is the way, the truth and the life
Who believes in him
will live, even though they die
in...
#Christian
#God
#religion
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
85 reads
8 Comments
Loki_Undercover
Wannabe-Poet
Wannabe-Poet
Poem Published
30th Mar 2025 8:51pm
30th Mar 2025 8:51pm
I woke up surprised
I remember it vividly
It was all about forgetting everything
That night it happened was a first of many
By the end, I took more than twenty
It was all about forgetting everything
That night it happened was a first of many
By the end, I took more than twenty
#relationships
#religion
#SelfHarm
29 reads
0 Comments
Wordsmith
Poem Published
30th Mar 2025 7:25am
30th Mar 2025 7:25am
Eid of Light and Longing
The crescent rose; the night stood still
A whispered joy; a sacred thrill
Though hunger knocked and pockets sighed
Still we prayed; still we tried
Eid has come; the air is bright
A morning bathed in golden light
Children race with laughter free
In clothes that dance like poetry
The markets roared; the butchers grinned
The scent of spice and meat within
Some feast with plenty; some with few
Yet hearts are full where faith is true
Oh Allah; let this joy remain
Let ease be poured where once was pain
Let every...
A whispered joy; a sacred thrill
Though hunger knocked and pockets sighed
Still we prayed; still we tried
Eid has come; the air is bright
A morning bathed in golden light
Children race with laughter free
In clothes that dance like poetry
The markets roared; the butchers grinned
The scent of spice and meat within
Some feast with plenty; some with few
Yet hearts are full where faith is true
Oh Allah; let this joy remain
Let ease be poured where once was pain
Let every...
#God
#happiness
#religion #spiritual
#religion #spiritual
44 reads
0 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 5:54pm
29th Mar 2025 5:54pm
...and the doves gathered
called out to God
he answered
amazed
he answered
amazed
#prayer
#religion
102 reads
7 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 12:46pm
29th Mar 2025 12:46pm
It Was Very Good
In those moments as I rocked gently over Shawn,
I suddenly felt the thoughts of past lives swirling in my head.
I continued rising and falling against Shawn’s firmness
while watching feelings of guilt drifting through an open window
as if pulled by a draft into the night sky.
I felt fears, loss, and brokenness falling from my body
and being pulled into the night.
I was in the moment and felt Shawn’s presence within me,
but I’d stepped back like a witness,
observing without judgment.
Gradually I came to realize ...
I suddenly felt the thoughts of past lives swirling in my head.
I continued rising and falling against Shawn’s firmness
while watching feelings of guilt drifting through an open window
as if pulled by a draft into the night sky.
I felt fears, loss, and brokenness falling from my body
and being pulled into the night.
I was in the moment and felt Shawn’s presence within me,
but I’d stepped back like a witness,
observing without judgment.
Gradually I came to realize ...
#forgiveness
#religion
#sex
174 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Mar 2025 9:39pm
28th Mar 2025 9:39pm
The Upbringing
Your parents have a problem and you live in constant pain
Your atmosphere is darkness as you begin to go insane
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
You hear the words of wisdom as you practice what they tell
You follow your parents teachings, as they threaten you to hell
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
My advice to you, is to follow what's in your heart
For if you don't, you'll be finished before you ever start
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
Your atmosphere is darkness as you begin to go insane
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
You hear the words of wisdom as you practice what they tell
You follow your parents teachings, as they threaten you to hell
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
My advice to you, is to follow what's in your heart
For if you don't, you'll be finished before you ever start
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
#LifeStruggles
#lyrics
#parent
#religion
#rhyming
98 reads
8 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
24th Mar 2025 11:52pm
24th Mar 2025 11:52pm
Myth Haikus
Thoth
Scroll of stars unfolds,
wisdom flows through measured time.
Eye records it all.
Gilgamesh
Walls rise to the sky,
friendship forged, yet doomed to fade.
Mortals seek their name.
Tupă
Thunder splits the night,
roaring whispers through the storm.
Creation takes breath.
Amaterazu
Hidden in her cave,
sunlight fades, the world grows cold.
Hope draws her to dance.
Shango
Drums thunder the sky,
lightning splits the heavens wide. ...
Scroll of stars unfolds,
wisdom flows through measured time.
Eye records it all.
Gilgamesh
Walls rise to the sky,
friendship forged, yet doomed to fade.
Mortals seek their name.
Tupă
Thunder splits the night,
roaring whispers through the storm.
Creation takes breath.
Amaterazu
Hidden in her cave,
sunlight fades, the world grows cold.
Hope draws her to dance.
Shango
Drums thunder the sky,
lightning splits the heavens wide. ...
#culture
#mirror
#mythology
#religion
#tradition
78 reads
6 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
18th Mar 2025 1:12pm
18th Mar 2025 1:12pm
Co-Creators
I kneel before him in prayer, caught in a whirlwind of
a man who stands at the pulpit of a Dallas church.
There's an energy about him that I can't escape,
nor do I wish to.
Even when my body feels weak,
I yearn for his presence.
Sleep loses its allure when
weighed against the possibility of
basking in his warmth.
I want him inside me. All the time.
I want his weight on top of me.
I want to squeeze him in deep.
The ache of this longing
is the sweetest hurt.
My arms possess a strength
born of...
a man who stands at the pulpit of a Dallas church.
There's an energy about him that I can't escape,
nor do I wish to.
Even when my body feels weak,
I yearn for his presence.
Sleep loses its allure when
weighed against the possibility of
basking in his warmth.
I want him inside me. All the time.
I want his weight on top of me.
I want to squeeze him in deep.
The ache of this longing
is the sweetest hurt.
My arms possess a strength
born of...
#God
#morality
#religion #sex
#religion #sex
155 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Mar 2025 9:25am
14th Mar 2025 9:25am
I know your heart is wicked
Little Harry Sack was barely 6 years old when he found out by his parents that his heart was wicked
His parents were religious fanatics, who read the good book each and every hour
They isolated little Harry from the rest of the world
His father worked on the farm producing milk & meat to sell in town
His mother was a stay at home mom, strict and overbearing
Many of the locals didn't even know Harry Sack existed
His parents taught him that in order to be faithful to the lord, you must do what we say or want
Harry was given chores from morning...
His parents were religious fanatics, who read the good book each and every hour
They isolated little Harry from the rest of the world
His father worked on the farm producing milk & meat to sell in town
His mother was a stay at home mom, strict and overbearing
Many of the locals didn't even know Harry Sack existed
His parents taught him that in order to be faithful to the lord, you must do what we say or want
Harry was given chores from morning...
#family
#memories
#prison
#religion
#violence
75 reads
8 Comments
drivelicious13
alon aLion
alon aLion
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 10:00pm
13th Mar 2025 10:00pm
Judgement Day (ReMix --- Timely as F !)
twitter carbuncle
personal hygiene
worse
than a monkey's uncle
stinkier than
a skunkle
constantly amidst
rhetorical rumble
somehow positioned
and in process
of making
Advancements tumble
was he behind
the back draft
of notre damn?
either way
not nearly matching
the shame
her ancient
institution arcane
perpetrates
through the ages
and nuff
of her "sages"
...
personal hygiene
worse
than a monkey's uncle
stinkier than
a skunkle
constantly amidst
rhetorical rumble
somehow positioned
and in process
of making
Advancements tumble
was he behind
the back draft
of notre damn?
either way
not nearly matching
the shame
her ancient
institution arcane
perpetrates
through the ages
and nuff
of her "sages"
...
#CallToAction
#HumanRights
#politics
#religion
#tragedy
100 reads
0 Comments
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