Poems About the Night by Top Critiquers
#night
Poems about the night by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
In The Shadows...
I come to you only in whispers,
In shadows,
Once everyone has left the show -
Where chairs lay upon tables.
Only when the moon is glowing,
Am I showing -
Myself to you...
Allowing you in -
Where secrets hide.
In shadows,
Once everyone has left the show -
Where chairs lay upon tables.
Only when the moon is glowing,
Am I showing -
Myself to you...
Allowing you in -
Where secrets hide.
#secrets
#moon
#night
#SelfDiscovery
#emotions
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28 Comments
Flight
**** flight *****
here comes the time again
for ethereal flowers to fly
for the poet to watch and sigh,
to only behold without asking why?
here's a dandelion about to fade away
the music dissolving into atmosphere
with the slightest touch of the breeze
and your heart takes flight overseas
carried aloft, into heaven's relief
stripped from any mundane grief
entranced the feel, a delightful sheer
and quietly the dark leaves the night
a bright tide, then illuminates the light ...
here comes the time again
for ethereal flowers to fly
for the poet to watch and sigh,
to only behold without asking why?
here's a dandelion about to fade away
the music dissolving into atmosphere
with the slightest touch of the breeze
and your heart takes flight overseas
carried aloft, into heaven's relief
stripped from any mundane grief
entranced the feel, a delightful sheer
and quietly the dark leaves the night
a bright tide, then illuminates the light ...
#dawn
#morning
#night
#spring
#summer
61 reads
4 Comments
Smoke the Night
Summon Night
Mary Jane is here
We smoke her
like there is no tomorrow
cuz she screws our pain
which help us
live live
So Summon Night
We must get laid!
Mary Jane is here
We smoke her
like there is no tomorrow
cuz she screws our pain
which help us
live live
So Summon Night
We must get laid!
#women
#sex
#night
#marijuana
#dirty
572 reads
4 Comments
Ephah
It's late
I want to write
I don't want to read
nor scry
I don't want to design
consumeristic graphics
I simply want words
to emerge as the Moon
from behind clouds
illuminating the field
while I, as Ruth, glean
what's left behind
before threshing
the miniscule amount
into an ephah of poem
to carry home
~
I want to write
I don't want to read
nor scry
I don't want to design
consumeristic graphics
I simply want words
to emerge as the Moon
from behind clouds
illuminating the field
while I, as Ruth, glean
what's left behind
before threshing
the miniscule amount
into an ephah of poem
to carry home
~
#moon
#night
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
#PowerOfWords
890 reads
31 Comments
Night moves
In darkness, we are
dim outlines,
surprise touches,
whispered poetry
sensing
reaching
savouring
responding
I imagine
you could be anyone
and therefore
so can I
dim outlines,
surprise touches,
whispered poetry
sensing
reaching
savouring
responding
I imagine
you could be anyone
and therefore
so can I
#night
#lover
#passion
769 reads
16 Comments
mystery of night
I met
many people
came to
ejaculate
in the
candlelit room,
but
that white shadow
of your luxurious love
never allowed me to feel
a pleasant experience...
You always floating
in my eyes
by wearing wings
and disappear
into the lake
full of stars
as soon as
the sun's rays
fall on the earth...
many people
came to
ejaculate
in the
candlelit room,
but
that white shadow
of your luxurious love
never allowed me to feel
a pleasant experience...
You always floating
in my eyes
by wearing wings
and disappear
into the lake
full of stars
as soon as
the sun's rays
fall on the earth...
#night
#mystery
209 reads
18 Comments
Not Quite Haiku
I
June
opens her
eyes...
butterfly
wings
fluttering...
scenting
the breeze
with summer
II
Tide of
stars
in sky
She/he is
a bottle
of saki...
her/his plums
intoxicate
June
opens her
eyes...
butterfly
wings
fluttering...
scenting
the breeze
with summer
II
Tide of
stars
in sky
She/he is
a bottle
of saki...
her/his plums
intoxicate
#summer
#fall
#spring
#morning
#night
425 reads
6 Comments
The Night is Primary
#BDSM
#night
#nature
318 reads
15 Comments
Building in the night
#love
#lust
#night
269 reads
2 Comments
Re-Entry
It was a doozy of a star
that shot from south to north
in flying colors most bizarre
sizzling back and forth.
But that event, so rare and quick,
in no way could compare,
to Luna's witching hour trick
for mesmerizing air!
And so I sat there in the yard
upon a cushioned chair
and gave the moon a slow regard
via hypnotic stare.
Next thing I knew the skies were bright
and stars began to fade
when cognizance returned the sight...
where once those moonbeams played.
that shot from south to north
in flying colors most bizarre
sizzling back and forth.
But that event, so rare and quick,
in no way could compare,
to Luna's witching hour trick
for mesmerizing air!
And so I sat there in the yard
upon a cushioned chair
and gave the moon a slow regard
via hypnotic stare.
Next thing I knew the skies were bright
and stars began to fade
when cognizance returned the sight...
where once those moonbeams played.
#moon
#sky
#night #dawn
#night #dawn
68 reads
6 Comments
I Watch the Night
As dawn approaches
The cold winter mountain air whispers
Everything else whether near or far is silent
Every living creature seem lost in their dreams until the break of day
The gloom of the night slowly fades away
As the dark sky begins to turn a different hue
The loneliness lurking in that stillness like a ghost
Rustles through the trees with a hum resonating through mind and time
The cold lingers with a harsh chill to the bones
While the lights from the stars languish in the distance
Soon the rest of the world will awake to...
The cold winter mountain air whispers
Everything else whether near or far is silent
Every living creature seem lost in their dreams until the break of day
The gloom of the night slowly fades away
As the dark sky begins to turn a different hue
The loneliness lurking in that stillness like a ghost
Rustles through the trees with a hum resonating through mind and time
The cold lingers with a harsh chill to the bones
While the lights from the stars languish in the distance
Soon the rest of the world will awake to...
#hope
#winter
#night #nature
#night #nature
135 reads
2 Comments
Black moon shirt, red negligee burns...
The Night was made for lust...
Unbuttoning the black moon shirt
Pale light of flesh calling
Tightening the noose of desire
Bound by the breath and ropes
Arched back, Fallen Angels bend
Quivering mouths, angelic tongues
Lip synced splitting her open
Red negligee burns mortal flames
Dark petals bursting and wet
This fire within them only grows
Ephemeral hands, the eternal florist
Plugging into my soul like you do
Urgent hymns trying to break me
Preying like a mantis at my temple
Pearls will always...
Unbuttoning the black moon shirt
Pale light of flesh calling
Tightening the noose of desire
Bound by the breath and ropes
Arched back, Fallen Angels bend
Quivering mouths, angelic tongues
Lip synced splitting her open
Red negligee burns mortal flames
Dark petals bursting and wet
This fire within them only grows
Ephemeral hands, the eternal florist
Plugging into my soul like you do
Urgent hymns trying to break me
Preying like a mantis at my temple
Pearls will always...
#lust
#dark
#erotic
#night
#temptation
769 reads
42 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About the Night by Top Critiquers