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mystery of night
I met
many people
came to
ejaculate
in the
candlelit room,
but
that white shadow
of your luxurious love
never allowed me to feel
a pleasant experience...
You always floating
in my eyes
by wearing wings
and disappear
into the lake
full of stars
as soon as
the sun's rays
fall on the earth...
many people
came to
ejaculate
in the
candlelit room,
but
that white shadow
of your luxurious love
never allowed me to feel
a pleasant experience...
You always floating
in my eyes
by wearing wings
and disappear
into the lake
full of stars
as soon as
the sun's rays
fall on the earth...
Published 15th Jan 2024
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15th Jan 2024 5:09pm
The first part made us smile at first but then we thought of our former lovers now no more than ghost of yester years and we appreciated this. Tight work Lady
16th Jan 2024 4:06am
Anonymous
15th Jan 2024 5:11pm
Raising our hopes and falling into the lake of admiration can sometimes leave us stranded. This is a sad poem.
15th Jan 2024 6:36pm
16th Jan 2024 4:08am
your absolutely right..n yaa thanks very much for decorating your RL by my stuff..
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16th Jan 2024 1:00am
I feel your sadness, dimpy. Intimacy can be painful when the love felt is one-sided.
16th Jan 2024 4:13am
And I always have one-sided love ...well not love...juz attraction !!! i don't know the definition of true love...thank you Marry...hope you are well
17th Jan 2024 12:42pm
It will find you, dimpy. When you are not looking, when you least expect it and most likely from the most unexpected of places (people). I never believed it myself until it happened.
Keep being beautiful, open, loving you.
I am doing very well, thank you :)
Sending you a huge cup of wonderful today.
Keep being beautiful, open, loving you.
I am doing very well, thank you :)
Sending you a huge cup of wonderful today.
17th Jan 2024 1:29pm
Anonymous
17th Jan 2024 3:19pm
Being on the heavier side of a one-sided love can weigh one down. Beautifully expressed
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