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The orange light
O setting sun..!!!
you know that
it has become
my habit
to look at you every day…
Every evening
I do not feel at ease
until your saffron face
and your stunning beauty
is reflected in my naked eyes...
you know??
I always bath in your
red, yellow n orange
dried warmth...
the playful touch
of your gentle rays
and soundless music
of your existence
mesmerizes me
and fills me with
heavenly fragrance...
I always begin to melt
in the presence
of your passionate heat...
People worship
the rising sun
but I worship you...
Every day
I capture you
in my camera...
I feel jealous
when the dark night
clings to you
can't you shake off
the cobwebs of that
long night?
I feel restless
when I can not see you
in the rainy season
many times
I get distressed
thinking what will happen
the day I have to say
goodbye to this world?
Will I be lucky to see a
glimpse of you while leaving?
Will you be there
when I stop breathing?
Can't I join your aura???
you know that
it has become
my habit
to look at you every day…
Every evening
I do not feel at ease
until your saffron face
and your stunning beauty
is reflected in my naked eyes...
you know??
I always bath in your
red, yellow n orange
dried warmth...
the playful touch
of your gentle rays
and soundless music
of your existence
mesmerizes me
and fills me with
heavenly fragrance...
I always begin to melt
in the presence
of your passionate heat...
People worship
the rising sun
but I worship you...
Every day
I capture you
in my camera...
I feel jealous
when the dark night
clings to you
can't you shake off
the cobwebs of that
long night?
I feel restless
when I can not see you
in the rainy season
many times
I get distressed
thinking what will happen
the day I have to say
goodbye to this world?
Will I be lucky to see a
glimpse of you while leaving?
Will you be there
when I stop breathing?
Can't I join your aura???
Published 17th Jan 2024
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17th Jan 2024 3:04pm
I have a friend that loves sunsets and loves photographing them. I think she would enjoy this too.
The stanza
“you know??
I always bath in your
red, yellow n orange
dried warmth...”
Makes me think of a sunbather at the beach taking in the sunset.
Great write
The stanza
“you know??
I always bath in your
red, yellow n orange
dried warmth...”
Makes me think of a sunbather at the beach taking in the sunset.
Great write
17th Jan 2024 3:49pm
17th Jan 2024 7:54pm
You already have joined her aura, dimpy.
You have a brilliance many cannot match . Keep shining.
Beautiful poem.
You have a brilliance many cannot match . Keep shining.
Beautiful poem.
19th Jan 2024 4:41pm
17th Jan 2024 11:23pm
Watching the sunrise and sunset with you is very beautiful. Keep on writing.
19th Jan 2024 4:41pm
Anonymous
18th Jan 2024 9:29am
Sunset is a magical moment. Beautifully captured here
19th Jan 2024 2:37pm
Anonymous
19th Jan 2024 4:32pm
Such beautiful words, Dimpy. Your thoughts proclaim the importance and relevance of what keeps us warm and lights our way.
Without your delicately chosen words, this would not be as good.
You always impress me.
Excellent writing.
Without your delicately chosen words, this would not be as good.
You always impress me.
Excellent writing.
19th Jan 2024 4:40pm
Hey Tim
First of all welcome once again dear friend n Yaa
Thank you for so much praise..it is difficult to digest... 🤣
First of all welcome once again dear friend n Yaa
Thank you for so much praise..it is difficult to digest... 🤣
20th Jan 2024 2:23pm
Hmmmm,,,, I share in your delight. I just came in from a breathtaking view of sunset on the Lake, I know just what you mean.
20th Jan 2024 3:58pm
20th Jan 2024 4:00pm
This is lovely, Dimpy. The World somehow feels at peace during the setting sun, I know. 😊
20th Jan 2024 4:13pm
Hey snaggy
Thank you for RL entry
Well setting of sun..those pleasent moments bring me peace every day... 😻
Thank you for RL entry
Well setting of sun..those pleasent moments bring me peace every day... 😻
