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Smoke the Night
Summon Night
Mary Jane is here
We smoke her
like there is no tomorrow
cuz she screws our pain
which help us
live live
So Summon Night
We must get laid!
Mary Jane is here
We smoke her
like there is no tomorrow
cuz she screws our pain
which help us
live live
So Summon Night
We must get laid!
Published 12th Feb 2020
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Ok, I get what you're smokin' here but is it really necessary to get that mellow if you're actually enjoying their company? Wouldn't they ignite your senses anyhow? Sorry for the lecture. ;-)
13th Feb 2020 2:33am
13th Feb 2020 10:13pm
that's going to be a wild ride grab the water pipe snort the China white
keep up the good work
keep up the good work
14th Feb 2020 8:03am
Hooking up with a hookah ? Fantastic two in one sassy poem on drugs. Kudos.
Pls Pleez do comment my newest poem too, as interaction via comments is cool I feel and thoughts are best written.
Pls Pleez do comment my newest poem too, as interaction via comments is cool I feel and thoughts are best written.
