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Black moon shirt, red negligee burns...
The Night was made for lust...
Unbuttoning the black moon shirt
Pale light of flesh calling
Tightening the noose of desire
Bound by the breath and ropes
Arched back, Fallen Angels bend
Quivering mouths, angelic tongues
Lip synced splitting her open
Red negligee burns mortal flames
Dark petals bursting and wet
This fire within them only grows
Ephemeral hands, the eternal florist
Plugging into my soul like you do
Urgent hymns trying to break me
Preying like a mantis at my temple
Pearls will always line my streets
In the night, dripping from my bud
Each edge opens earthly paradise
Bruises in the back alley entice
My fair best at midnight, in the shadows
The satin walls caress your body
As you plunge into the deepest trench
Drifting over the cliff, the fallen
Rusty chains still holding on tight
Gravediggers always seeking coffins
Survival is all about passion
And angels wearing out the beds
Mausoleum of pouts and leather boots
I will never surrender to anything
The flight of light extinguished
Descending into me step by step.
Unbuttoning the black moon shirt
Pale light of flesh calling
Tightening the noose of desire
Bound by the breath and ropes
Arched back, Fallen Angels bend
Quivering mouths, angelic tongues
Lip synced splitting her open
Red negligee burns mortal flames
Dark petals bursting and wet
This fire within them only grows
Ephemeral hands, the eternal florist
Plugging into my soul like you do
Urgent hymns trying to break me
Preying like a mantis at my temple
Pearls will always line my streets
In the night, dripping from my bud
Each edge opens earthly paradise
Bruises in the back alley entice
My fair best at midnight, in the shadows
The satin walls caress your body
As you plunge into the deepest trench
Drifting over the cliff, the fallen
Rusty chains still holding on tight
Gravediggers always seeking coffins
Survival is all about passion
And angels wearing out the beds
Mausoleum of pouts and leather boots
I will never surrender to anything
The flight of light extinguished
Descending into me step by step.
Author's Note
This is another from the Kristina's mirror series of inspired writes. There is a lot of inspiration around here. ;)
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/464726-because-the-night-belongs-to-lust/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/464726-because-the-night-belongs-to-lust/
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Re. Black moon shirt, red negligee burns...
7th Nov 2022 00:37am
Absolutely awesome write, very erotic read
Great job gorgeous
Love and light
Ron xx
Great job gorgeous
Love and light
Ron xx
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7th Nov 2022 1:04am
And I adore your awesome comment Ron. So happy you like it and could feel the very erotic nature of it. Of course with a substantial amount of darkness mixed in as well. ;) Lots of love and light back atcha always!
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7th Nov 2022 1:33am
I absolutely adore how you described this one; very erotic, clever, moving, and edgy is perfect if you ask me and with a fair amount of darkness mixed in as well. 'a style that you have mastered here' is such an incredible compliment Ted. I am speechless, that means so much to me. :)
Re. Black moon shirt, red negligee burns...
7th Nov 2022 2:03am
Hey Kistina:)
I love this!!! Unbuttoning the black moon shirt - just wow amiga.
It is all crafted with such care and attention to detail.
But in all honesty I could not take my eyes off his arms!!! OMG
GREAT PIC!!!
It's nice to please the ladies too in your pics - so thank you!!! hahahaha
I love this!!! Unbuttoning the black moon shirt - just wow amiga.
It is all crafted with such care and attention to detail.
But in all honesty I could not take my eyes off his arms!!! OMG
GREAT PIC!!!
It's nice to please the ladies too in your pics - so thank you!!! hahahaha
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7th Nov 2022 2:23am
I absolutely thought of you when I put that in the title. I knew you would dig that line too because you always have such wonderful and colorful imagery in your writing. ;) And when you say amiga that just sounds so sexy. I love that you found it crafted with care and attention to detail. But Rob deserves the credit for the inspiration, like with any of these. I just write them in my head extremely fast. :p
Haha, those arms are pretty awesome I have to admit. lol I am so glad I was able to please the ladies with this one. ;) The girl in the pic looks pretty damn sexy too. Something for everyone.
You always make me smile, and everyone else too chica... ;) Not really much of a secret but I like telling you anyway.
Haha, those arms are pretty awesome I have to admit. lol I am so glad I was able to please the ladies with this one. ;) The girl in the pic looks pretty damn sexy too. Something for everyone.
You always make me smile, and everyone else too chica... ;) Not really much of a secret but I like telling you anyway.
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7th Nov 2022 2:27am
I just read his and left a comment:)
Sometimes I get here too late and miss all the good stuff
so I really appreciate your mirror series!!!
Awwhh - thanks for the smile comment:)
Sometimes I get here too late and miss all the good stuff
so I really appreciate your mirror series!!!
Awwhh - thanks for the smile comment:)
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7th Nov 2022 3:05am
In all honesty, I didn't even notice the guy at all! Til you mentioned it in your comment. Lol
I guess its all fair after all. ;-)
I guess its all fair after all. ;-)
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Re. Black moon shirt, red negligee burns...
7th Nov 2022 2:07am
Ms Kristina you make me want to do naughty things to you. Keep on writing you sexy woman.
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7th Nov 2022 2:32am
I love making people want to do naughty things with me. ;) Always makes me think of I want to do bad things with you by Jace Everett. You know the song from True Blood. Love it!
That and catching things on fire. lol Oh there are so many bad things to do with me. lol And I do like writing things to share with you guys. ;)
That and catching things on fire. lol Oh there are so many bad things to do with me. lol And I do like writing things to share with you guys. ;)
Re: Re. Black moon shirt, red negligee burns...
7th Nov 2022 2:55am
Pour some sugar over me by Def Leppard. Ms Kristina I want to pleasure all night long and the next day.
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7th Nov 2022 3:13am
Great song, love it!!! ;) And who doesn't love to be pleasured all night long and the next day. If not, better get their priorities straight. ;)
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8th Nov 2022 2:30am
Always give her what she wants. If she's knocked up then you did right, LOL.
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Re. Black moon shirt, red negligee burns...
7th Nov 2022 2:46am
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7th Nov 2022 3:09am
You know how I love steaming the place up. ;) Steam rooms are awesome, you made me think of the spa in Bath, England... It was pretty awesome with the thermal pool on the roof. Steam rooms and stuff. I will just have to settle for fogging up your glasses. I miss European style steam rooms, cold plunge, saunas, hammams, and such... Clothing optional. ;)
Re. Black moon shirt, red negligee burns...
7th Nov 2022 3:18am
I'm requesting to the DUP monitors that they install a fire extinguisher beside your poems. You're a fire hazard!
Every time you post something, someone pulls the fire alarm now...
Incinerating write, Miss Blaze.
Every time you post something, someone pulls the fire alarm now...
Incinerating write, Miss Blaze.
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7th Nov 2022 3:37am
Don't get me in any more trouble damnit! lol I do that really well on my own. :p But a fire extinguisher is never a bad idea. And I do love starting fires. Still trying to remember who called me a little arsonist. lol Haha, don't pull the fire alarm. Definitely trying to get me in trouble. ;) I see what you are doing. But we can stay behind because breaking the rules is fun. Incinerating, ooooo love that... now that's hot! ;)
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7th Nov 2022 4:33am
A Very well crafted com-position. Initially no pun intended but what the hell I'll take it. You're definitely on top of your game with your articulation skills with grade X+ material. You put the X in wow so keep 'em coming.
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7th Nov 2022 12:58pm
Com-position works for me. ;) Haha, I love puns... and taking it! ;p * naughty look * I definitely love that you can understand me zinn. My articulation can be really different sometimes. ;) But I love variety, it's the spice of life after all. Always grade X, that's all the intense passion; I just can't hold that back. Put the X in wow... now that's just awesome. I will keep 'em coming. ;) Because what could be better than coming. Going to shut up now. lol
Re. Black moon shirt, red negligee burns...
Kristina, you have outdone yourself. This is erotica elevated into high art. The gothic feel here encompasses me in a cocoon of magic. You write the imagery in a vivid but elegant way. This is a masterpiece of erotic literature that grabs me as I read and takes me into the heart of your poetic eroticism. I thoroughly enjoyed this. A thrill to read.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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7th Nov 2022 12:58pm
Damn! John. You definitely leave me speechless, that was your evil plan wasn't it. lol To leave me sitting here trying to reply. Erotica elevated into high art, absolutely love that to pieces. And that you were able to get the gothic feel, I almost used gothic as a theme. That cocoon of magic means I have you fully under my control. Perhaps a dangerous position to be in. lol Vivid and elegant imagery is perfect. I definitely meant to grab you so don't get me in trouble. lol Where better to be than the heart of my poetic eroticism. ;) Your comment was a thrill to read.
Re. Black moon shirt, red negligee burns...
7th Nov 2022 6:25am
You steam the site up well with this, judging by the comments from both men and women. Favourite verse, for its inflaming tones:
Red negligee burns mortal flames
Dark petals bursting and wet
This fire within them only grows
Also like this pair of lines:
Survival is all about passion [often thoughts of our passions keep us alive]
And angels wearing out the beds [passion makes us succumb to less than heavenly desires]
Red negligee burns mortal flames
Dark petals bursting and wet
This fire within them only grows
Also like this pair of lines:
Survival is all about passion [often thoughts of our passions keep us alive]
And angels wearing out the beds [passion makes us succumb to less than heavenly desires]
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7th Nov 2022 1:16pm
I do love steaming up the site, and it's always great to get comments from both men and women... That always makes me happy. Ah, I also love that you tell me your favorite lines. Those are definitely some of my favorites as well. That why I wanted to work red negligee into the title. ;) I love the combination of black and red, it's a beautiful pairing in my mind. Lingering tones of Halloween too. Without passion, life would be boring and mundane; lacking excitement. What a Hell. Passion for a lover, passion for hobbies, passion for work ... For me, it's absolutely essential. Ah yes! I love that line and was capturing the contrast that even Angels give in to lust and passion. After all there are a number of verses that reference Angels saw mortal women as beautiful and committed sins with them. Yeah, mortal women are very bad. lol
Re. Black moon shirt, red negligee burns...
7th Nov 2022 8:36am
Dear K,
Honestly, Id just be tripping over my tongue to try and describe whatever I could possibly be experiencing with my thoughts. With picture poems I cover the photo and read the poem first then see if my minds eye was close to the pic. It never is. The balance of sizzle between the words and the photo are so evenly matched it was difficult to tear my eyes away. I actually did have a red negligee once upon a time ago big dig write. H🌷
Honestly, Id just be tripping over my tongue to try and describe whatever I could possibly be experiencing with my thoughts. With picture poems I cover the photo and read the poem first then see if my minds eye was close to the pic. It never is. The balance of sizzle between the words and the photo are so evenly matched it was difficult to tear my eyes away. I actually did have a red negligee once upon a time ago big dig write. H🌷
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7th Nov 2022 1:22pm
Haha, 'tripping over my tongue to try and describe whatever I could possibly be experiencing with my thoughts. Damn! I LOVE that. I really want to know what you are experiencing for sure now. lol That's a great idea covering the photo first. I always like how they look with a picture, perhaps it's my OCD. But although impatient with finding pics I am pretty picky about them. I want something that I feel matches... I felt the red really helped to display the dark desires. That's my devious plan, to keep you from tearing your eyes away. ;) Red negligee are beautiful and sensual, you should get another one. I adore the big dig and always love seeing you Honoria. :)
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7th Nov 2022 10:22am
Flattered & humbled. You spread your own skin over my flesh wordscape. To inspire and be inspired are all we can ask for on a social media site. Tis a joy to observe your enthusiasm and passion for all things poetica. Mae fy nghalon yn llawn.
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7th Nov 2022 1:31pm
If you are flattered and humbled then I feel like I accomplished something. ;) And I love your way with words, 'You spread your own skin over my flesh wordscape' Now that is something just waiting to be written... What an amazing line. Finding inspiration anywhere and in anything; what could be better than that passion for life and to be inspired, thrilled, and excited. So much enthusiasm to share and of course tons of passion too. ;) Thanks for inspiring this one. Ac yn awr felly y mae fy un i.
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7th Nov 2022 3:01pm
Hoi hoi
Clever and witty turns. Beautiful imagery. Thanks how you keep me returning to your writes. The weather is foul, but the day is beautiful!
Thank you for posting it.
Kind regards, Gus
Clever and witty turns. Beautiful imagery. Thanks how you keep me returning to your writes. The weather is foul, but the day is beautiful!
Thank you for posting it.
Kind regards, Gus
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7th Nov 2022 3:46pm
Well hey Johnny, clever and witty turns to keep you paying attention while you drive through the beautiful imagery. ;) Awww, I love that you keep returning, that's great to know. I am weird, I love foul weather. Rain, storms, and darkness... just make me feel cozy or like I want to go out in it. And so many naughty things to do. Also swimming in the ocean while it's dark with a storm in the distance, lightning going horizontally... so beautiful. I am swam in the North sea once when it was really cold out in the Netherlands. I was blue when I got out and could not feel the wind at all. lol The Netherlands is a unique and awesome place. You are so welcome Gus. I very much appreciate the visit and sharing your thoughts with me. Gezelligheid kent geen tijd
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7th Nov 2022 3:22pm
Dearest, Kristina
This a delicious slice of sensuality. The imagery is breathtakingly vivid like "Dark petals bursting and wet" and
"Pearls will always line my streets
In the night, dripping from my bud"
Bravissima! Güzel, seksi tanrıça şair
This a delicious slice of sensuality. The imagery is breathtakingly vivid like "Dark petals bursting and wet" and
"Pearls will always line my streets
In the night, dripping from my bud"
Bravissima! Güzel, seksi tanrıça şair
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7th Nov 2022 3:57pm
Cutting a delicious slice of sensuality for you to share with me GW always. I love that people are feeling the imagery. I sure did writing it. Ah, two of my favorite lines. The darkness has a way making the petals burst with wetness. And those pearls... mmmmm.... yeah... It's the biggest thrill when they line the streets. ;) Dripping from the bud. ;) Awww... I love that. It's such a beautiful thing to say. I love that you stopped by in you black moon shirt to read me and share your thoughts. ;)
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I love it ! ... ... ... 😍👍
... ... ... ...
"... Survival is all about passion... And angels wearing out the beds..."
That is almost apocalyptic... ( I should write *apoKalyptiK* with two Kays ) ... 😉
... 👍
... ... ... ...
"... Survival is all about passion... And angels wearing out the beds..."
That is almost apocalyptic... ( I should write *apoKalyptiK* with two Kays ) ... 😉
... 👍
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13th Nov 2022 00:45am
Well I love this comment. lol Survival is indeed all about passion, at least for me. And definitely about wearing out beds... That's an absolute necessity. ;) apoKalyptiK, ABSOLUTELY!. I need that complete destruction, over and over... So that I can be reborn again. Now that's passion. So many Ks. ;)
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17th Nov 2022 7:44pm
The angelic fallen, like lucifer falls. The good and innocent seeking more.
The dark remains your chamber of solace, like a Mausoleum; where passion, submission, aggression and cardinal need flourish. The living and the dead try to take; but youll only give what they can provide in return.
The dark remains your chamber of solace, like a Mausoleum; where passion, submission, aggression and cardinal need flourish. The living and the dead try to take; but youll only give what they can provide in return.
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17th Nov 2022 7:55pm
The good and innocent always need more, always seeking more. The angelic falls, the bringer of light and fire, burning the soul in passion.
And it's the dark that is honest and gives into those desires. Passion, submission, aggression, and so much more. Those eternal needs that were born of sin and tasting the sweet juices of the apple. A give and take for eternity, always seducing the soul. Always seducing the body...
And it's the dark that is honest and gives into those desires. Passion, submission, aggression, and so much more. Those eternal needs that were born of sin and tasting the sweet juices of the apple. A give and take for eternity, always seducing the soul. Always seducing the body...
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18th Nov 2022 4:03pm
There are so many visual aspects to this it's very enticing.
"Quivering mouths, angelic tongues" I was like "Holy Moly". You really have a gift for pulling in your audience into these scenarios with great titillating lines. You could probably write a series of books in this genre and make millions. As you can see, you already have many fans here.
Amazing work.
"Quivering mouths, angelic tongues" I was like "Holy Moly". You really have a gift for pulling in your audience into these scenarios with great titillating lines. You could probably write a series of books in this genre and make millions. As you can see, you already have many fans here.
Amazing work.
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18th Nov 2022 4:09pm
"You could probably write a series of books in this genre and make millions." WOW! Damn, thank you so much for the absolutely incredible compliment. I am definitely left speechless. I have started to think about writing a book actually which seems totally weird considering it's not something I have thought much about before. "Holy Moly" is perfect. Oh yeah, those angelic tongues really intensify the sensation. ;) I love pulling you in the my titillating lines Wally. This is such an incredible comment, thanks again...
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19th Nov 2022 2:23am
Gave this another read
So much mayhem to address
Double session in Chamber 13
Plunging into all your orifices with acute accuracy
Tomorrow morning 6am
Do not be late
So much mayhem to address
Double session in Chamber 13
Plunging into all your orifices with acute accuracy
Tomorrow morning 6am
Do not be late
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19th Nov 2022 2:04pm
I love it when you want to come back for another pass. ;) All kinds of mayhem yes... Double session - ooooo that's exciting. ;) Chamber 13 knows me well. So much plunging in the Chamber huh? If you are going to do something then do it with acute accuracy. ;) For now, heading out to do some hiking with friends... Visiting the Chamber later. :p
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16th Jan 2023 11:29pm
I really like the immediate image the title of this one evokes. The use of details and imagery is lurid and tempestuous. The metaphoric approach to the physical aspects of sexuality is well rendered. I'm not surprised Rob was the mirror on this one he's a hell of a writer, you both are.
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18th Jan 2023 1:04pm
I quite liked the image the title evokes as well. Lurid and tempestuous, that's me for sure. ;) There is so much sexuality throughout and I am really glad you found it well rendered. I was easily inspired by Rob, he is one hell of a writer that's for sure; and you are too. Sorry kind of copied you there but anyway thank you for the wonderful compliment. That really means a lot to me.