Submissions by JiltedJohnny
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Shibari - senryu
It’s knotfull thoughtful
It’s called Shibari - a knot
Is knot just a not
It’s called Shibari - a knot
Is knot just a not
#ILoveYou
95 reads
3 Comments
Ripples - coop between DUP’s talented RubyRedHeart (lyrics) and myself
This is a repost of RbyRedHeart’s Ripples.
I was captured by the poems dream like quality. I tried to express that with the song. A rather noisy dream, but a dream nevertheless.
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/ripples-coop-rubyredheart-lyrics-gus-music
Thank you @RubyRedHeart for a very nice coop.
The lyrics:
Ripples
Your scent on my skin
Satisfaction tingling within
Imagining your magical touch again
Were you with me in spirit?
I summoned you with my whispers
I beckoned you with my catching...
I was captured by the poems dream like quality. I tried to express that with the song. A rather noisy dream, but a dream nevertheless.
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/ripples-coop-rubyredheart-lyrics-gus-music
Thank you @RubyRedHeart for a very nice coop.
The lyrics:
Ripples
Your scent on my skin
Satisfaction tingling within
Imagining your magical touch again
Were you with me in spirit?
I summoned you with my whispers
I beckoned you with my catching...
#ILoveYou
219 reads
6 Comments
Two hearts in the snow - cooperation with MichaelA
This song was part of a ‘same lyrics challenge’, when everyone involved made a song, based on MichaelA’s lovely lyrics.
As the first advent started today, it seemed like a good idea to dig this one up.
Instead of a syrupy Christmas song, I made a festival one.
Please copy paste this link in your browser, as DUP still hasn’t answered my prayers for clickable links:
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/2018-259-5-same-lyrics-challenge
And here‘s the most important thing of this challenge, @MichaelA ’s beautiful lyrics:
Two...
As the first advent started today, it seemed like a good idea to dig this one up.
Instead of a syrupy Christmas song, I made a festival one.
Please copy paste this link in your browser, as DUP still hasn’t answered my prayers for clickable links:
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/2018-259-5-same-lyrics-challenge
And here‘s the most important thing of this challenge, @MichaelA ’s beautiful lyrics:
Two...
#love
#Christmas
#lover
170 reads
4 Comments
As we lay - a cooperation with Miss Tess
The link. Please copy/paste in your browser:
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/as-we-lay
As We Lay
Love.
Lust.
Fuel my desire.
Her divine aroma
Sets my senses on fire.
Taking me higher.
Don’t want to come down.
On a mission to explore her.
Ecstasy bound.
Lips so soft and sweet
As they become one with mine.
So wet and luscious.
Inhibitions left behind.
My tongue searches
For her delectable essence.
Probing deeper and deeper.
I just might keep her
Entangled...
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/as-we-lay
As We Lay
Love.
Lust.
Fuel my desire.
Her divine aroma
Sets my senses on fire.
Taking me higher.
Don’t want to come down.
On a mission to explore her.
Ecstasy bound.
Lips so soft and sweet
As they become one with mine.
So wet and luscious.
Inhibitions left behind.
My tongue searches
For her delectable essence.
Probing deeper and deeper.
I just might keep her
Entangled...
#love
#lust
#lover
251 reads
8 Comments
Expensive habits
Sometimes cheap habits are even worse than expensive habits. Please consider that when you are reading this.
And this one’s called:
Expensive habits
Jill smiles and winks for good measure
‘I am here to make amends
I’m destined for greater things’
And slid her hands down Lenny’s pants
His hands lingered a bit too long
On Jill’s creamy thighs
Hands are not supposed to have brains
But Lenny’s hands thought: nice
A marriage is just like cleaning
It’s a job that’s never done
So shut up, grit your teeth and...
And this one’s called:
Expensive habits
Jill smiles and winks for good measure
‘I am here to make amends
I’m destined for greater things’
And slid her hands down Lenny’s pants
His hands lingered a bit too long
On Jill’s creamy thighs
Hands are not supposed to have brains
But Lenny’s hands thought: nice
A marriage is just like cleaning
It’s a job that’s never done
So shut up, grit your teeth and...
#courage
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#admiration
#emotions
280 reads
6 Comments
Lights on - a cooperation - lyrics written by her
Hoi hoi
I hope you’ll enjoy this cooperation!
The poem/lyrics are truly wonderful!
I’ve set ‘her’ poem to music.
You can paste this link to SoundCloud to listen.
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/lights-on-cooperation-with-her-2022-355-track-7
Lights On
Oh, eyes filled with lust
Showing your appetite
Seeing my amazement
For finding you so tight
I prefer the lights on
Where I can see
(Where I can see)
Your face, your face
As you are fucking me
Now...
I hope you’ll enjoy this cooperation!
The poem/lyrics are truly wonderful!
I’ve set ‘her’ poem to music.
You can paste this link to SoundCloud to listen.
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/lights-on-cooperation-with-her-2022-355-track-7
Lights On
Oh, eyes filled with lust
Showing your appetite
Seeing my amazement
For finding you so tight
I prefer the lights on
Where I can see
(Where I can see)
Your face, your face
As you are fucking me
Now...
#lust
#erotic
#lover
#sensual
#passion
243 reads
4 Comments
Let your heart decide II
Let your heart decide
When I walk through the dark
I realise love is hard to find
when I see the beauty
I never give up. Let your heart decide
When I walk through the dark
I realise there is love to find
when I see the beauty
I never give up. Let your heart decide
Let your heart decide
I am not afraid. So come closer
I am not afraid. At all
I am not afraid. So come closer
And let your heart decide
(Katze Konigsberg - lyrics)
On behalf of Katze too, kind regards,...
When I walk through the dark
I realise love is hard to find
when I see the beauty
I never give up. Let your heart decide
When I walk through the dark
I realise there is love to find
when I see the beauty
I never give up. Let your heart decide
Let your heart decide
I am not afraid. So come closer
I am not afraid. At all
I am not afraid. So come closer
And let your heart decide
(Katze Konigsberg - lyrics)
On behalf of Katze too, kind regards,...
#love
469 reads
16 Comments
Eating or heating
Did you think they would take it lying down?
My spendable income has taken a beating
You’ve every reason to govern honest and fair
How come I’ve to choose between eating and heating?
W5sep2022
Kind regards, Gus
My spendable income has taken a beating
You’ve every reason to govern honest and fair
How come I’ve to choose between eating and heating?
W5sep2022
Kind regards, Gus
#LifeStruggles
248 reads
8 Comments
Loving You (repost) - Faithmaree (Faith Elisabeth Brigham) & Jilted Johnny aka Gus
In spite of two bumps, many DUP’ers didn’t read or listen the beautiful lyrics that inspired this song. It is a huge success abroad, would you believe? Yes, of course you would. In approx. 14 days after posting, over a 1.000 listens. Edit: as 2023 is approaching, I checked the state of affaires where the reads and listens are concerned.
It has stopped at 8.450 as per 1st of Nov 2023!!!
I am extremely proud to have had this cooperation!
This poem was written by
@Faithmairee
The song is is coop, and posting has her full OK.
...
It has stopped at 8.450 as per 1st of Nov 2023!!!
I am extremely proud to have had this cooperation!
This poem was written by
@Faithmairee
The song is is coop, and posting has her full OK.
...
#love
338 reads
16 Comments
Do I hear impeachment
This one was written some 2.5 years ago. And, perhaps naïvely, I thought that he had left the stage. Now I’m no longer sure…..
A higgeldy piggeldy:
Two sets of four lines.
6 syllables per line.
Second line of the second set is one word of 6 syllables.
Last line of each set (to your own liking) 4 or 6 syllables.
Last lines of the two sets must rhyme.
This one = 3 groups of 2 sets.
Voilà!
Do I hear impeachment?
Trotsky was removed from
a picture of Stalin
almost a century
foul politics
Leaked talks...
A higgeldy piggeldy:
Two sets of four lines.
6 syllables per line.
Second line of the second set is one word of 6 syllables.
Last line of each set (to your own liking) 4 or 6 syllables.
Last lines of the two sets must rhyme.
This one = 3 groups of 2 sets.
Voilà!
Do I hear impeachment?
Trotsky was removed from
a picture of Stalin
almost a century
foul politics
Leaked talks...
#politics
324 reads
2 Comments
IWVB
IWVB
Ik wil
Van bil
W1967
I’ve taken the liberty to be prompted by Dizzzzzzy’s So, what your saying is....
Mine is Dutch (yes, sorry), very old, and very compact.
Untranslatable, alas.
Kind regards, Gus
Ik wil
Van bil
W1967
I’ve taken the liberty to be prompted by Dizzzzzzy’s So, what your saying is....
Mine is Dutch (yes, sorry), very old, and very compact.
Untranslatable, alas.
Kind regards, Gus
#sex
316 reads
1 Comment
Oriënt expres murder
It’s Poirot’s mistake
Orient express: murder?
No! Chinese kitchen!
W22jul2022
Inspired by the murder mystery haiku thread. A senryu.
https://www.orientexpressamsterdam.nl/
Enjoy the senryu or your meal.
Kind regards, Gus
Orient express: murder?
No! Chinese kitchen!
W22jul2022
Inspired by the murder mystery haiku thread. A senryu.
https://www.orientexpressamsterdam.nl/
Enjoy the senryu or your meal.
Kind regards, Gus
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
319 reads
5 Comments
DU Poetry : Submissions by JiltedJohnny