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As we lay - a cooperation with Miss Tess
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As We Lay
Love.
Lust.
Fuel my desire.
Her divine aroma
Sets my senses on fire.
Taking me higher.
Don’t want to come down.
On a mission to explore her.
Ecstasy bound.
Lips so soft and sweet
As they become one with mine.
So wet and luscious.
Inhibitions left behind.
My tongue searches
For her delectable essence.
Probing deeper and deeper.
I just might keep her
Entangled in the web of my arms.
Holding her captive,
But she don’t want to be free.
Together blissfully.
As we lay.
MissTessWritten by MissTess
Published 4th Nov 2022
Dear Miss Tess,
Thank you for a very very nice cooperation.
Kind regards, Gus
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/as-we-lay
As We Lay
Love.
Lust.
Fuel my desire.
Her divine aroma
Sets my senses on fire.
Taking me higher.
Don’t want to come down.
On a mission to explore her.
Ecstasy bound.
Lips so soft and sweet
As they become one with mine.
So wet and luscious.
Inhibitions left behind.
My tongue searches
For her delectable essence.
Probing deeper and deeper.
I just might keep her
Entangled in the web of my arms.
Holding her captive,
But she don’t want to be free.
Together blissfully.
As we lay.
MissTessWritten by MissTess
Published 4th Nov 2022
Dear Miss Tess,
Thank you for a very very nice cooperation.
Kind regards, Gus
Published 9th Nov 2022
Author's Note
A beautiful and deeply human poem.
Love knows no boundaries.....
Love knows no boundaries.....
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15th Nov 2022 9:08am
Congrats to you both...an excellent piece of work! Your attention to detail shows!
-Ted
-Ted
15th Nov 2022 10:53am
Hoi hoi
Thank you for reading/listening to ‘our’ song.
It was a very swift and fine cooperation.
And thank you on behalf of Miss Tess too.
Kind regards, Gus
Thank you for reading/listening to ‘our’ song.
It was a very swift and fine cooperation.
And thank you on behalf of Miss Tess too.
Kind regards, Gus
18th Nov 2022 11:46am
Hoi hoi @DevilsChild
Thank you for putting ‘As we lay’ on your reading list entries.
I’m sure that Miss Tess is as grateful as I am. She was the one who started off with this steaming text after all.
Kind regards, Gus
Thank you for putting ‘As we lay’ on your reading list entries.
I’m sure that Miss Tess is as grateful as I am. She was the one who started off with this steaming text after all.
Kind regards, Gus
2nd Feb 2023 5:01pm
Be jaysus, didn't expect that. Very retro, shades of Joy Division. Musician myself, so really enjoyed that. Loving this site and people.
11th Mar 2023 1:45pm
Hoi hoi
Thank you so much @BITS!
I was travelling in areas, where connection (or no connection) can’t be counted on.
Your comment didn’t go unnoticed, but I could post a reaction to my regret.
The song is still being listened to. Approx 3000 times in the meantime and getting favourable comments.
Like yours actually. It’s much appreciated!
Kind regards, Gus
P.s. as we speak, on another platform the comment came in:
<@1031808764338241546> love it. lost sixties psychedelic! magic!
I’m glad that you like our music. I like your taste!
Thank you so much @BITS!
I was travelling in areas, where connection (or no connection) can’t be counted on.
Your comment didn’t go unnoticed, but I could post a reaction to my regret.
The song is still being listened to. Approx 3000 times in the meantime and getting favourable comments.
Like yours actually. It’s much appreciated!
Kind regards, Gus
P.s. as we speak, on another platform the comment came in:
<@1031808764338241546> love it. lost sixties psychedelic! magic!
I’m glad that you like our music. I like your taste!
22nd Jul 2023 7:52pm
23rd Jul 2023 8:24am
Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well.
I like it a lot that you came to read and listen. And thank you for the compliments. Also on behalf of @MissTess of course.
The amount of listens is now roughly 4.400. I don’t write for the public as it were, but it’s always a nice thought that people come to read and listen.
This is what I wish for you too. A ‘fanbase’ large enough to encourage you…..
You deserve it.
Kind regards, Gus
Hope this finds you well.
I like it a lot that you came to read and listen. And thank you for the compliments. Also on behalf of @MissTess of course.
The amount of listens is now roughly 4.400. I don’t write for the public as it were, but it’s always a nice thought that people come to read and listen.
This is what I wish for you too. A ‘fanbase’ large enough to encourage you…..
You deserve it.
Kind regards, Gus
25th Jul 2023 5:34am
Oh I am fairly certain at least three people here will argue about the fan base comment but thanks for the kind sentiment!
Ted
Ted
