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Touch me...
Touch me....
To reach through the skin, body, soul, to my heart.....
To a small point in the middle of the hollow abyss,
To the darkness in the middle of my BEING......
Weave me a shawl made of a web of dreams
And the sun dust of it scattered stuck there like glitter.
Press your cheek against the glare on the crest of the wave
that swept up to the fading horizon.
Give me plenty of wetness from your palms.
Scoop me a handful of stars from your erection.
Burn me with the ashes of forgotten roads.
Touch me.
To reach through the skin, body, soul, to my heart.....
To a small point in the middle of the hollow abyss,
To the darkness in the middle of my BEING......
Weave me a shawl made of a web of dreams
And the sun dust of it scattered stuck there like glitter.
Press your cheek against the glare on the crest of the wave
that swept up to the fading horizon.
Give me plenty of wetness from your palms.
Scoop me a handful of stars from your erection.
Burn me with the ashes of forgotten roads.
Touch me.
Author's Note
You touch me with your words... ;)
And I always need more...
And I always need more...
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Re. Touch me...
22nd Aug 2023 9:12pm
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22nd Aug 2023 11:34pm
Hey Ron, I am so glad you get me and found it a beautiful read. To be touched feels so good in every way. The mind, body, and soul... You touch me with your lovely comments. X
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22nd Aug 2023 9:22pm
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22nd Aug 2023 11:34pm
Hi Philis, thank you so much for wonderful comment. Knowing that you LOVE this really touches my heart. And I really appreciate you taking the time to make me feel that. <3 X
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22nd Aug 2023 10:09pm
Reading you is an erection festival of the lively arts ....
Does anyone write it better for mankind?
I don't fucking think so and if they try then they are copying you and those losers don't stand a chance with my cock....
BIG
Does anyone write it better for mankind?
I don't fucking think so and if they try then they are copying you and those losers don't stand a chance with my cock....
BIG
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Re: Re. Touch me...
22nd Aug 2023 11:37pm
An erection festival of the lively arts! Well hell I really love that description a lot. What could be more fun than an erection festival? (at least for me lol) And what can I say, I love mankind damnit and I want mankind to be fulfilled. :p I love the strong endorsement too!
BIG is good. ;)
BIG is good. ;)
Re. Touch me...
22nd Aug 2023 10:51pm
beautiful Kristina I'm utterly captivated by your dark seduction
wow woman I have to confess I read just your title and was inspired
you move me like that lovely lady... so sexy and enthralling I am deeply affected
by the mere thought of your charm...sorry I'm not trying to come onto you
but you make me think passionately in the moment...you take things to another level
and I deeply enjoy that about you ❤️
wow woman I have to confess I read just your title and was inspired
you move me like that lovely lady... so sexy and enthralling I am deeply affected
by the mere thought of your charm...sorry I'm not trying to come onto you
but you make me think passionately in the moment...you take things to another level
and I deeply enjoy that about you ❤️
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23rd Aug 2023 00:15am
That's my intent to utterly captivate you with my dark seduction. ;)
And what is more inspiring than touch when there is attraction...
But knowing I move you like that is so sexy and enthralling to me.
And wow, I must admit you have me at a loss for words now.
Although I have to say that I do love the struggle... bound...
Definitely no reason to apologize that's for sure because it
feels so good when you are thinking passionately... ;)
Damn, this really is such a lovely comment! It definitely touched me! X
And what is more inspiring than touch when there is attraction...
But knowing I move you like that is so sexy and enthralling to me.
And wow, I must admit you have me at a loss for words now.
Although I have to say that I do love the struggle... bound...
Definitely no reason to apologize that's for sure because it
feels so good when you are thinking passionately... ;)
Damn, this really is such a lovely comment! It definitely touched me! X
Re. Touch me...
22nd Aug 2023 11:15pm
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 absolutely marvelous ♥ my favorite lines" Give me plenty of wetness from your palms.
Scoop me a handful of stars from your erection"
Excellent 👌 ink spill 👏 please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings always 🙏
Scoop me a handful of stars from your erection"
Excellent 👌 ink spill 👏 please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings always 🙏
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22nd Aug 2023 11:49pm
Hey Richy, I love that you feel me so much. You know exactly what I am talking about with those lines I can tell. ;) Rest assured there would be plenty of wetness and lots of stars to be seen. And so much to hear as well because I am not a quiet one. lol X
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23rd Aug 2023 2:44pm
I absolutely agree 👍:) glad to know that Kris 👍 please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 lmk when you ready to collab with me ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
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24th Aug 2023 4:05pm
yes, we can it a go. ;) this week is a difficult one but maybe we can shoot for next week. <3
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24th Aug 2023 7:27pm
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23rd Aug 2023 1:07am
I loved the flow of your spoken words just dripping out of your mind and heart and soul nicely done 👍🙏
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23rd Aug 2023 5:32pm
Hey Stoney, so good to see you! Well I love how you described it. ;) The words are just dripping out of me in every way. I get wet easily. * nevermind, innocent look * What does wolf bay33 mean? X
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23rd Aug 2023 11:08pm
Wolf Bay 33 what it means to me 🤔 it's a symbol of the journey and travel and walk of my rebirth to be able to have a second chance at LOVE AND LIFE 🪷🤗🐺😉🙏
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24th Aug 2023 4:04pm
That's very interesting, thanks for sharing... Each journey is so unique and sometimes we definitely need a rebirth and second chance at love and life. Sometimes the journey can be a very difficult one with so many way-points.
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24th Aug 2023 4:10pm
That's true as well as I am a witness to the fact that it is deeply rooted in the process of struggling and dealing with sudden changes to the mind and heart and spiritual soul 🙏💯😘💟
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23rd Aug 2023 2:09am
Touch she
T - Touch you
O - Only the way i can
U - Undress she so slowly
C - Caress her skin
H - Hold she close
S - Smoking her wetness
H - Height her desire
E - Explore what we share
T - Touch you
O - Only the way i can
U - Undress she so slowly
C - Caress her skin
H - Hold she close
S - Smoking her wetness
H - Height her desire
E - Explore what we share
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23rd Aug 2023 5:32pm
Hey MP, I love what you did there touching me with your words. There is so much seductive power in a touch or kiss. The anticipation of being undressed and the caresses that follow. 'Smoking her wetness' with the tongue. Oh yeah! The height of desire is so amazing, exploring it together. X
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Mis KistinaX I want to touch you until you are feeling orgasmic bliss all over beautiful sexy naked body. Keep on writing you sexy woman. 😘
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23rd Aug 2023 5:32pm
Hey Francisco, I live for orgasmic bliss. ;) Without it I don't know how I could survive. I would be left frantically searching. :p Thank you so much for your thoughts and the encouragement. X
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23rd Aug 2023 5:33pm
Hey Pink, I am really happy you thought it was beautiful. And thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me. :) X
Re. Touch me...
23rd Aug 2023 2:47pm
Having the ability to touch her core, setting off chain-reaction of emotional and passionate fireworks. The imagery now imprinted in her memory. The feeling you have touched her, uplifting and bonding.
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23rd Aug 2023 5:38pm
Hey DaVinci, oh yeah when you can touch her core there is definitely a chain-reaction of emotional and passionate fireworks. As usual you described that so beautifully. What could feel better than making those imprints in her memory. ;) Touching her deeply and that is incredibly uplifting and bonding. You know she will be longing for more fireworks. Oh yeah! X
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23rd Aug 2023 7:20pm
What I reckon hottest line here:
Scoop me a handful of stars from your erection.
Scoop me a handful of stars from your erection.
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24th Aug 2023 3:58pm
Hey SS, it's good to hear from you. :) Oh yeah! I can certainly see why that would be the hottest line. I absolutely love being on the receiving end of those stars. That's something I can't live without. ;) X
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The line had me imagining how it would be portrayed on screen, like a genie showering magic represented by glittering stars. One might call it a beautiful ejaculation! (Both the words themselves and what they describe.)
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Anonymous
24th Aug 2023 10:34am
Ooh, girl. You get right to the heart of the matter. Just fucking touch me.
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24th Aug 2023 4:01pm
Hey Mary, you definitely get to the heart of the matter too. ;) And I love that about you. <3 'Just fucking touch me' really gets my mind thinking and my body... * nevermind, naughty look * I love how your words touch me. X
Re. Touch me...
24th Aug 2023 10:56am
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24th Aug 2023 4:03pm
Oh yes! the power of touch is so amazing. I think we all need it so badly. Some of us perhaps more than others. :p Thank you so much for sharing your touch with me. I really love that you think it is well penned. X
Re. Touch me...
25th Aug 2023 5:32pm
Wow, Kristina❣ I love this piece. How it illustrates so well our need for deep, intimate, sincere touch. To be touched by words is a lasting memory. An anchor to keep one centered and whole. I'd be a tad, concerned, mystified, amazed, and, you know me, turned if stars came from my erection😮😍 I'd certainly stand out. Bravissima tres jolie poétesse.
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30th Aug 2023 8:04pm
Hey GW, sorry for the late reply... things have been hectic lately. Deep, intimate, and sincere touch is one of the most beautiful things in the world. And I love how you associated being touched by words also. Touch definitely helps me stay centered and whole. :) I would go crazier otherwise. :p When a guy can make stars come from his erection, at least for me, then that's an incredible thing. X
Re. Touch me...
14th Sep 2023 6:46pm
This has a perfect balance of eroticism and romance, the physical, the emotional, even the spiritual blending all so well.
Great work
Great work
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25th Sep 2023 2:23am
Ah yes! eroticism and romance are a perfect pairing. Physical, emotional, and spiritual orgasm is definitely what I want. ;) And I can tell you totally understand from your wonderful comment Wally. Thanks so much!
Re. Touch me...
21st Sep 2023 1:46pm
I find so much to think about in this... the web of dreams... the ashes of forgotten roads... and that means your words have touched me. 😊 Of course there's all the obvious erotic charm too - nobody can write that stuff like you do. It catches my attention (I mean, I'm not dead...LOL), but I can't help noticing there's so much more... it's all quite luscious. Humans wither without the tender touch of other souls.
❤k
❤k
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25th Sep 2023 2:33am
I love that it made you think BT. ;) The web of dreams and the ashes of forgotten roads.... that definitely sounds like a poem waiting to be written. And your words have touched me too. ;) I do love erotic charm and damn! what a wonderful compliment. I absolutely adore what you said. And I always want to get your attention, you are definitely not dead. :p Luscious, what a beautiful word... It's so true that humans would wither without the tender touch of souls. I think that's another one waiting to be written. ;) X
Re. Touch me...
26th Sep 2023 1:03am
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26th Sep 2023 2:23pm
To the chamber, yes! But I am insatiable and so tiring out is not a problem for me, but it will be for you. ;) 40 winks huh? Okay... :p Always love the BIG...
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28th Sep 2023 11:17am
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29th Sep 2023 9:27pm
Hey there Gigashadow... You are very welcome. It makes me happy that I could move you. ;) And I really appreciate you taking a little time to share this moment with me. X
Re. Touch me...
6th Nov 2023 7:50pm
There's nothing more dangerous than a woman possessed by the demon of lust. The raging inferno within turns her skin bright red and her eyes can light up the night. Only a man of equal fire may approach in a saintly attempt to calm her burning desires by embracing her needs with a firm, yet subtle touch.
Xxx
Xxx
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7th Nov 2023 3:24pm
Ah, the demon of lust possesses me entirely, I cannot get away from it. ;) And yeah, what could be more dangerous than an insatiably horny woman. Ah a succubus indeed, bright red skin and eyes that light up the night. I know them well. ;) And it definitely takes a certain type of man to satisfy those needs and in return he will be taken to heaven and hell, again and again. A firm touch oh yes... That really gets me going. ;) X