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Craving a painful eternity...
The molten sun will spill into the horizon,
And spread with cloying-honey wax.
After a long separation,
I will come again to His cold captivity,
to put on the loops of fetters.
In the eyes of the dialogue, running into infinity,
In the silence there is only a cry of desires and dreams.
We hadn't seen each other for a long time,
this painful eternity, Lost in each other,
as if in a prison.
And time was lost, falling off the cliff,
Only the pulse of a clear knock of the clock crushes.
We will get a chapter from the archive that night,
To finish it. The plot burns with fire.
I wear guipure lace held by large stitches.
And pearl-caramel, Control is lost,
He tears silk on my skin.
The braid around the neck in two turns / the game is deadly /,
It flows in His captivity like river rapids...
In a hot whisper, He breathes into my mind,
At minimum doses he lets in oxygen.
To make up for the starvation from separation,
He entered me with a jerk,
closing my mouth with His hand.
So roughly and tightly, without demand and doubt,
Without words and regrets,
driving his power in deep.
He became a living fire, I am only a shadow of Him,
Mirroring unbridled passion.
The aorta is pinched, He drinks it in sips,
And moisture spreads through the veins like nectar.
The wrists are tied with openwork stockings,
a fire flares up on the skin from stiffness.
How juicy are the kisses, the bitten lips,
And the abyss beneath the feet,
but we need fight and flight...
I liked that He was skillfully coarse in Love,
That burns with flame then melts like ice.
Hot caramel smells delicious skin,
Carelessly between the fingers of a tuft of my hair.
Tormented by Him to a wet and passionate trembling,
Not hiding my hot tears in pleasure.
Separation fills the glass with the taste of passion,
We finish it and smash it to smithereens on the floor.
The fragments will scatter uncontrollably, dangerously,
He executed a harsh sentence that night.
And spread with cloying-honey wax.
After a long separation,
I will come again to His cold captivity,
to put on the loops of fetters.
In the eyes of the dialogue, running into infinity,
In the silence there is only a cry of desires and dreams.
We hadn't seen each other for a long time,
this painful eternity, Lost in each other,
as if in a prison.
And time was lost, falling off the cliff,
Only the pulse of a clear knock of the clock crushes.
We will get a chapter from the archive that night,
To finish it. The plot burns with fire.
I wear guipure lace held by large stitches.
And pearl-caramel, Control is lost,
He tears silk on my skin.
The braid around the neck in two turns / the game is deadly /,
It flows in His captivity like river rapids...
In a hot whisper, He breathes into my mind,
At minimum doses he lets in oxygen.
To make up for the starvation from separation,
He entered me with a jerk,
closing my mouth with His hand.
So roughly and tightly, without demand and doubt,
Without words and regrets,
driving his power in deep.
He became a living fire, I am only a shadow of Him,
Mirroring unbridled passion.
The aorta is pinched, He drinks it in sips,
And moisture spreads through the veins like nectar.
The wrists are tied with openwork stockings,
a fire flares up on the skin from stiffness.
How juicy are the kisses, the bitten lips,
And the abyss beneath the feet,
but we need fight and flight...
I liked that He was skillfully coarse in Love,
That burns with flame then melts like ice.
Hot caramel smells delicious skin,
Carelessly between the fingers of a tuft of my hair.
Tormented by Him to a wet and passionate trembling,
Not hiding my hot tears in pleasure.
Separation fills the glass with the taste of passion,
We finish it and smash it to smithereens on the floor.
The fragments will scatter uncontrollably, dangerously,
He executed a harsh sentence that night.
Published 27th Sep 2023
Author's Note
Hard to believe it's been over a month since I posted here. Life has a way of grabbing you and time flies... I hope everyone is doing great! Fall is here, hell yeah! I need some cooler weather. :p Chaotic formatting but that's just my mind...
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27th Sep 2023 00:33am
27th Sep 2023 00:57am
Hey ML, thank you so much; it's lovely to hear from you. How things are is a different story but I am trying to keep my head up. Being a positive influence whenever I can makes me happy. :) Hopefully I can get some more time to read and write again.
27th Sep 2023 00:46am
hello beautiful Kristina I want to come back to this one and give it its proper due... holy hell this is fucking sexy ❤️I'll be back to break down the emotions you've evoked...
27th Sep 2023 1:05am
Hi crimsin, always stoked when I see your comments. ;) So I am excited to know you will be coming back to this one, so I can hear more from your enticing and wonderful mind. You already made me happy with your first comment and it's great to see you. <3
27th Sep 2023 00:47am
27th Sep 2023 1:15am
Hey MP, so you missed me then? ;p Glad you enjoyed the reading the poem and thank you so much for the warm welcome back. I really appreciate it.
27th Sep 2023 1:11am
27th Sep 2023 1:18am
Hey there Francisco, oh yeah Vampire love is definitely hot! Who doesn't like a biter. lol Yeah I might bite when I get really excited so there. :p Thanks so much for the kind message and encouragement.
28th Sep 2023 1:18am
Your talent is phenomenal in detail and scope. Who would have the wherewithal to find solace and sexual adventure in blood thirsty vampires. Somehow you make it exciting and accepted in underground thoughts...
DUP is better with you here. You bring flair and substance. You bring a writing style that should be revered. We are all better in your presence and getting drunk on your words.
For this there is no question for this is a coveted KX write.
BIG LIKE my vixen of blood ....
RL AWARD
DUP is better with you here. You bring flair and substance. You bring a writing style that should be revered. We are all better in your presence and getting drunk on your words.
For this there is no question for this is a coveted KX write.
BIG LIKE my vixen of blood ....
RL AWARD
27th Sep 2023 1:35am
Well damn! you just want to shut me up. lol What a wonderful thing to say, that means a lot to me. Well you know the answer to that question. Blood thirsty vampires can be a really fun time damnit! If they don't kill you anyway. Although at the very least they kill you slowly I guess. Underground thoughts... oh boy! * innocent look * (yeah yeah who am I kidding).
Damnit, there you go shutting me up again. I don't know what to say... I might have to think on that. :p I love what you said so much though. ;) And I like getting people drunk too, as long as they have fun.
And you know I always love a BIG LIKE. RL Award too... Damn! <3
Damnit, there you go shutting me up again. I don't know what to say... I might have to think on that. :p I love what you said so much though. ;) And I like getting people drunk too, as long as they have fun.
And you know I always love a BIG LIKE. RL Award too... Damn! <3
27th Sep 2023 2:19am
27th Sep 2023 12:37pm
Hey there Ron, thank you so much for taking some time out to read me. :) I love that you enjoyed it and the wonderful compliment. Sending so much love and light back your way always.
27th Sep 2023 7:19am
Always with the smoldering intensity
and exquisite sensuality
Your pen is
fluid as ever
Good to see you writing again
Kristina
Much respect
Naaj
and exquisite sensuality
Your pen is
fluid as ever
Good to see you writing again
Kristina
Much respect
Naaj
27th Sep 2023 12:40pm
Hey Naaj, oh yes always smoldering intensity that sometimes I burn myself. lol And I do love exquisite sensuality, I certainly see that in your writing. :) And thanks for the wonderful compliment, it's great to hear that. Hopefully I can be less of a stranger. Thanks so much for the respect and sending so much back at ya. ;)
2nd Oct 2023 9:42am
was reading, to wanting beating, from a meating, of sin, doom growing within, goodbye salvation, ill go to the sensation, of this nude damnation.
4th Oct 2023 12:15pm
Ah yes! such a sublime rhyme... ;) I suppose I am always in need of a good meating. That's my salvation, going to the intense sensation. So glad you found your way to my little dark corner of the underground SR. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it.
3rd Oct 2023 11:44pm
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 absolutely amazing 👏 ♥ 👌 excellent 👌 ink spill 👏!!
The way you illicitly express your feelings and passion in your musing brilliant 👏 work 👌!!
Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
The way you illicitly express your feelings and passion in your musing brilliant 👏 work 👌!!
Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
4th Oct 2023 12:16pm
I love your enthusiasm REMARKABLE. It's very uplifting. I have so many feelings and so much intense passion that I cannot help but to express them. Thanks so much for the encouragement and lovely comment Richy. I really appreciate it.
4th Oct 2023 2:42pm
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4th Oct 2023 12:16pm
Hey there AMBC, I am so glad you love the poem. I am a creature of the night myself so of course I love vampyres. ;) Welcome to DUP and thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. I really appreciate it.
17th Oct 2023 00:28am
Of course, the sentence was harsh for not responding to his needs for a month.
I now know what guipure lace is (one of the many details throughout your poem). Another nice detail, fetters.
“The molten sun will spill into the horizon” – dawn and the night, your playground.
“It flows in His captivity like river rapids...” – drenched ecstasy.
The “Bad Boy” that all say isn’t right for you, but you still crave the dark power he has over your sexuality and personal fulfillment. A recurring fantasy, the vampire provides you with immortality for the small price of your soul, which you gladly give to feed your carnal submissive addiction. Although the submissive, you are also on the Master’s level – you both provide the needs of each other. A battery as an example, there is no juice unless there is a positive and a negative. But combined, there are sparks.
As I’ve come to expect from you, the conveying of your emotions, fantasies and experiences interweaved into the poetic narration; is exceptional.
I now know what guipure lace is (one of the many details throughout your poem). Another nice detail, fetters.
“The molten sun will spill into the horizon” – dawn and the night, your playground.
“It flows in His captivity like river rapids...” – drenched ecstasy.
The “Bad Boy” that all say isn’t right for you, but you still crave the dark power he has over your sexuality and personal fulfillment. A recurring fantasy, the vampire provides you with immortality for the small price of your soul, which you gladly give to feed your carnal submissive addiction. Although the submissive, you are also on the Master’s level – you both provide the needs of each other. A battery as an example, there is no juice unless there is a positive and a negative. But combined, there are sparks.
As I’ve come to expect from you, the conveying of your emotions, fantasies and experiences interweaved into the poetic narration; is exceptional.
18th Oct 2023 6:06pm
Oh I can only imagine, but I could never not respond to his needs...
Teaching you something, I love it! And that you are taking in all of the details...
Perfectly stated... dawn and the night are definitely the playground.
And drenched ecstasy, what could be better?!
That always seems to be the case doesn't it, always craving his dark power. Wanting to be submissive to him, for him to take control and do everything he has always wanted to. Ah yes 'carnal submissive addiction' perfectly said. I was writing my reply as I read and so I only just saw that following what I wrote previously. Alas, you interpret things so well my dear DaVinci. And even more so what you said next. What a perfect interpretation. Yin and Yang, Positive and Negative, Dark and Light. How much they require and are drawn to each other. Lots of sparks to follow...
'exceptional' Oh wow! how do I respond to that. Damn, I love how you get the conveying of my emotions, fantasies, and experiences...
Teaching you something, I love it! And that you are taking in all of the details...
Perfectly stated... dawn and the night are definitely the playground.
And drenched ecstasy, what could be better?!
That always seems to be the case doesn't it, always craving his dark power. Wanting to be submissive to him, for him to take control and do everything he has always wanted to. Ah yes 'carnal submissive addiction' perfectly said. I was writing my reply as I read and so I only just saw that following what I wrote previously. Alas, you interpret things so well my dear DaVinci. And even more so what you said next. What a perfect interpretation. Yin and Yang, Positive and Negative, Dark and Light. How much they require and are drawn to each other. Lots of sparks to follow...
'exceptional' Oh wow! how do I respond to that. Damn, I love how you get the conveying of my emotions, fantasies, and experiences...
24th Oct 2023 9:55pm
Glad to see you're back and posting some amazing erotic content that delivers a dark and exciting piece. It's perfect for the season, especially when it comes to alluring creatures of the night.
Well done.
Well done.
25th Oct 2023 7:33pm
Who can resist alluring creatures of the night? Definitely perfect for the season. I so love this time of year, it's my favorite. And I love dark and exciting too. That's my downfall. ;) So happy you enjoyed this one Wally and always great to see you! I wish I had more time to read and post right now but alas... Anyway, thanks again for stopping in to see me.
7th Nov 2023 00:23am
Not entirely sure what this is about...is it a clothing commercial? A science poem? Why is he so angry at your lady parts? 😂 Jk. Great write
7th Nov 2023 1:37am
A clothing commercial or a science poem. lol sigh * shaking my head * And why indeed, no reason to be angry at the lady parts; you know how good they make you feel damnit and all you have to do is put up with a lot of crazy. lol You almost had me going there for a minute. You are a joker aren't you? Yeah you are... Whew, thanks for the Great write. :p
7th Nov 2023 7:17am
Ma'am I'm a virgin lol I refuse to touch anyone because I want to find the flying spaghetti monster one day 😂
7th Nov 2023 4:12pm
Yeah sure! lol Is that a requirement for meeting the flying spaghetti monster? I thought he was all handsy and loved to... * nevermind, innocent look *
7th Nov 2023 4:38pm
Gasp! You tempted the Italian lord??! You noodle slut!!! Did you at least swallow the sauce.... 😂 Wtf is wrong with us
7th Nov 2023 8:51pm
lol...I can't help but tempt it's not my fault damnit! noodle slut, that sounds sexy. I always... * nevermind, innocent look * yeah wtf indeed..
7th Nov 2023 8:57pm
5th Apr 2024 7:20am
Hola chica, hows it goin... man, dig your writes, but when I read just the words written in bold, it is a story within a story, an very right on man... Take good care: deadwolf
5th Apr 2024 12:22pm
Hey there deadwolf, well I love that you are digging my writing, that makes me happy. And although my formatting is very impatient I aim to create a story within a story through it so I love that you were able to pick up on that too. I can tell you get it... ;) You take care too and thanks for stopping by to share with me.
