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Whisper insanity
Gently cover the lotus with your lips,
And fall to the bud with a secret.
And caress the petals for a bonus
Lick the nectar that flows.
Draw a trace of love on my skin,
Dipping your fingers into mousses of passion,
And with your tongue, like a whip, hot,
Leave the stigma with the seal of power.
Make me moan again,
Whisper insanity-spells,
So that for the umpteenth time, savoring spasms,
Orgasm to pour Love confession ...
And fall to the bud with a secret.
And caress the petals for a bonus
Lick the nectar that flows.
Draw a trace of love on my skin,
Dipping your fingers into mousses of passion,
And with your tongue, like a whip, hot,
Leave the stigma with the seal of power.
Make me moan again,
Whisper insanity-spells,
So that for the umpteenth time, savoring spasms,
Orgasm to pour Love confession ...
Author's Note
Just trying to spread some erotic love and joy. :)
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Whisper insanity
26th Jul 2022 11:10pm
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26th Jul 2022 11:28pm
Well hey there Remy, it's so nice to see you again. That is such a lovely compliment. I really needed a smile right now so thank you! And thank you so much for stopping in to see me and sharing your thoughts. <3
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Re: Re. Whisper insanity
The satin chalice, now that is definitely a poem that needs to be written. ;) Leaving an impact of longing is definitely where I was going with this. I am longing for it all the time so may as well make other people too, right? lol I love that you found it very hot and thanks do much for coming by to visit me and share your thoughts. <3
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26th Jul 2022 11:46pm
Re. Whisper insanity
26th Jul 2022 11:27pm
Re: Re. Whisper insanity
26th Jul 2022 11:34pm
Every flower needs a great gardener to thrive, flourish, be continuously wet (because flowers need lots of water), and well orgasm. :p All that love and light definitely helps a flower grow too. ;) Thanks so much for visiting my garden and helping it grow with your wonderful thoughts. <3
Re. Whisper insanity
26th Jul 2022 11:31pm
Exquisite passion ànd long astonishing satisfaction.....
Phenomenal erotic experience
BIG LIKE ALWAYS
Phenomenal erotic experience
BIG LIKE ALWAYS
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Re: Re. Whisper insanity
26th Jul 2022 11:39pm
You know I have all kinds of crazy passion. :p Long astonishing satisfaction is soooo beautiful... To give or receive, that's what any flower wants and needs to feel fulfilled. And providing a phenomenal experience. ;) I am going to remember that damnit, BIG LIKE ALWAYS so don't forget. lol Thanks so much for checking out my flower (poem) and sharing your thoughts. <3
Re. Whisper insanity
27th Jul 2022 00:27am
your efforts are most appreciated.
your pen has a knack for the "erotic love and joy"
my mind has a knack for translating each of your lines.
gifted you are.
thanks for sharing
your pen has a knack for the "erotic love and joy"
my mind has a knack for translating each of your lines.
gifted you are.
thanks for sharing
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Re: Re. Whisper insanity
27th Jul 2022 1:04am
Thanks mystic, I really appreciate that so much. This past week has been very difficult for me; here included because of some things that happened. But I love that there are so many wonderful people and writers here that are kind, compassionate, and don't mind having fun too. Unfortunately there are other types as well that would rather intimidate and threaten. So knowing that I am contributing something for those people that I always want to make smile is really great. Thanks for stopping by and translating my lines in your mind, you always do that so well. <3
Re. Whisper insanity
27th Jul 2022 00:41am
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Ah yes! a pretty lotus is irresistible right BC. ;) I am full of all kinds of metaphors, not sure how many are wonderful but there are tons of them. lol Thanks so much for stopping in to see my 'lotus' * cough * and sharing your thoughts with me. :p I really appreciate it a lot. <3
Re. Whisper insanity
27th Jul 2022 1:28am
Thank you for spreading love and joy. Picture is hot. I want to spread love and joy to you, LOL. Hope you enjoyed orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing.
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You know how much I love to spread love and joy. That is important to me. ;) The picture, right! I was wondering if anyone would mention it; I thought it was great. lol Always enjoy orgasmic bliss when the flower is being tended to. :) Self watering and always thirsty for... * nevermind, innocent look * Thanks so much for stopping by to see me and sharing your thoughts Francisco. <3
Re: Re. Whisper insanity
27th Jul 2022 1:51am
I will always stop by and water your garden. Next time I would like a picture of you all natural.
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Re: Re. Whisper insanity
27th Jul 2022 2:31am
Flowers are beautiful and they smell good and they make you feel good. :p That's all for guys right? lol I am sure you have tended some flowers SMS. What you do with all those flowers, huh? Inquiring minds (well my mind) really wants to know. I generate a lot of heat damnit, I can't help it. That's why I like cooler climates. Thanks so much for visiting my flower shop and sharing your thoughts with me. I love that. <3
Re. Whisper insanity
27th Jul 2022 2:37am
Kristina......u are a blast....Kristina. Marvelous lesson writing as Muh ah says! That's some stomach ah touched felt erotica.
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Re: Re. Whisper insanity
27th Jul 2022 2:42am
You know I have to be a blast to keep you coming back to see me Birchel. I love touching people, myself, anything really lol but it does get me in a lot of trouble. Damn rules. I don't like rules. I always want to break them. I love that I touched you with this one. Thanks so much for coming by and sharing with me. I love that. <3
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27th Jul 2022 5:58am
Re. Whisper insanity
27th Jul 2022 3:09am
Oh My Kristina:)
All the lines have such a lushness to them. The opening line is brilliant.
Start out with the lotus and you made it bloom inside a poem.
Great writing amiga.
That picture is awesome - Is that a wedding veil? hahaha
All the lines have such a lushness to them. The opening line is brilliant.
Start out with the lotus and you made it bloom inside a poem.
Great writing amiga.
That picture is awesome - Is that a wedding veil? hahaha
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Re: Re. Whisper insanity
27th Jul 2022 3:32am
It's super sexy when you say 'Oh My Kristina:)' Not sure if that should get me all worked up but... * nevermind *
The lushness is to pull you in Adelphina because if I am going to cover the lotus with my lips then * nevermind * I just really like you a lot girl. lol
Great avatar, that's so you. ;)
I love the picture, she looks like she is really getting ... well you know what I am getting at. :p Yeah, pretty sure that's a wedding veil. You know how I am, proper and all. lol
I have to say nevermind a lot with you Chica. You know being proper and all.
The lushness is to pull you in Adelphina because if I am going to cover the lotus with my lips then * nevermind * I just really like you a lot girl. lol
Great avatar, that's so you. ;)
I love the picture, she looks like she is really getting ... well you know what I am getting at. :p Yeah, pretty sure that's a wedding veil. You know how I am, proper and all. lol
I have to say nevermind a lot with you Chica. You know being proper and all.
Re: Re. Whisper insanity
27th Jul 2022 3:39am
Hahahah - you big flirt:)
Yes - I am blushing right now - so your flirting worked!!!
Too funny. LOL
Have a wonderful evening amiga:)
You are honestly a lovely person!!!
Keep smiling and that sense of humor no matter what!!!
Yes - I am blushing right now - so your flirting worked!!!
Too funny. LOL
Have a wonderful evening amiga:)
You are honestly a lovely person!!!
Keep smiling and that sense of humor no matter what!!!
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In so many ways the poem and picture are readable with sense of joy, so you have not failed in your aim to spread it. I could sense the picture shows she was enjoying some oral pleasing from him, her arms probably stretched back towards his head. Just noticed the 'wedding veil' Adelphina did, the poem and picture connote some honeymoon enjoyment.
Awesome beauty, makes me want to RL this.
Awesome beauty, makes me want to RL this.
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Re: Re. Whisper insanity
27th Jul 2022 1:18pm
I am so happy you felt the joy and felt I accomplished that aim. Lately there have been some things on here that have really made me feel pretty bad. I just want to help make people smile, feel things, and for everyone to have some fun. And it's hard when people say threatening and offensive things to you though. So I really appreciate what you said that really helps me feel better. She definitely seems to be enjoying some oral pleasure and I loved the picture. Marriage can be a very beautiful thing and that's definitely the way to get off to a good start so to speak. lol Thanks so much for stopping by and for sharing your wonderful thoughts with me. I love 'awesome beauty' <3
Re: Re. Whisper insanity
27th Jul 2022 7:48pm
'Marriage...good place to get off to a good start' - feel the heat of double-entendre there.
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27th Jul 2022 8:18pm
Re. Whisper insanity
27th Jul 2022 6:51am
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27th Jul 2022 1:18pm
Ah yes! watching a bee with a flower, it's skillful extraction of all that sweet nectar. Touching the petals delicately in a way that makes the flower open and give itself completely while the bee delves into all the delights. What an absolutely wonderful relationship they have. ;) I am so glad my flower could attract your bee and thank you so much for sharing with me. <3
Re. Whisper insanity
27th Jul 2022 7:34am
Dear K,
Sizzling hot! I think what I like the most in this write is your ability to take your readers to “that place”.
If I tried this we’d have to stop for a snack, a potty break, you can guide the image very carefully so the outcome is just right. H🌷
Sizzling hot! I think what I like the most in this write is your ability to take your readers to “that place”.
If I tried this we’d have to stop for a snack, a potty break, you can guide the image very carefully so the outcome is just right. H🌷
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Re: Re. Whisper insanity
27th Jul 2022 1:21pm
I love taking you to somewhere sizzling hot Honoria. ;) You are the best type of person and that always gets things sizzling hot. I think everyone here knows just how awesome you are but you. I know you can take anyone to any "place" that you want. And you take us to the most amazing places with your writing. And yes there is definitely a reason that everything you write is so loved, because you are a phenomenal writer. If anything your modesty makes you that much more attractive. :p So if that's what you are going for then... :) <3
Re. Whisper insanity
27th Jul 2022 1:40pm
Hoi hoi
I’ve been practicing real hard to get a convincing ‘whisper insanity’.
One day I will get it done!
A very gentle and fine piece of work!
Thanks for sharing it.
Kind regards, Gus
I’ve been practicing real hard to get a convincing ‘whisper insanity’.
One day I will get it done!
A very gentle and fine piece of work!
Thanks for sharing it.
Kind regards, Gus
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27th Jul 2022 2:10pm
Hey Gus, I whisper all kinds of insanity... I make people go insane all the time. lol
I love that you found it gentle and worth stopping in to see me for. :) Thanks so much for coming by, reading, and sharing your thoughts with me. I really love knowing that you enjoyed it. :) Best regards, Kristina. <3
I love that you found it gentle and worth stopping in to see me for. :) Thanks so much for coming by, reading, and sharing your thoughts with me. I really love knowing that you enjoyed it. :) Best regards, Kristina. <3
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Re: Re. Whisper insanity
27th Jul 2022 4:33pm
Perfect, I am so happy that you are happy PW. Eroticism is interesting, I am caught between expressing things in a more poetic way trying to avoid the graphic and as you say lead the reader with their own imagination hopefully feeling the feelings I was, and seeing the images most pleasurable for them. And on the other hand graphic straight from the mind in a way that draws the actual picture in a much more descriptive way. I think both have a place in my opinion. I don't think it's bad to express those things too and writing it can really work me up. lol Thanks so much for stopping by and giving me your awesome thoughts. I really appreciate it so much. <3
Re. Whisper insanity
27th Jul 2022 6:43pm
This could be considered a short oral course. There is absolutely nothing wrong with your steamy metaphors, they increase the intensity of the piece. This is really tight work Lil X
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27th Jul 2022 6:58pm
Ah, I am good at giving oral courses. :p Steamy metaphors are the best in my mind. They certainly can elevate while not being graphic but drawing those thoughts in your mind. I can be really intense. :p I always want to provide really tight work for you I_IS_ME. Thank you so much for stopping by to visit me and sharing your thoughts. <3
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Re: Re. Whisper insanity
27th Jul 2022 9:23pm
Damn Tim... That such an awesome compliment, I don't know what to say. I adore leaving the reader wanting more so I absolutely love this. You really made me happy with that. Thank you so much for stopping by, reading, and giving me your thoughts. I really appreciate it so much. <3
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Re. Whisper insanity
28th Jul 2022 3:50am
(When I first looked at the picture, her hand looked like two tiny baby feet! So maybe she's giving birth!) Lol.
Nah, her maid of honor is just pulling her corset tight! Yeah, that is why that look!
Okay, so here we go. I've said it plenty before but will bring it up again. Erotic beats graphic because it makes the reader work for the details. Just like if a man sees a hundred sets of boobs, he will dwell on the set in the nightie that disguises what he wants to see. That allure. It is so powerful.
That being said , you've crafted pure allure here! There is an art to it, and you're the artist. The chosen imagery works very well, as does the word choices obviously.
It actually leaves the picture seeming below the standard of the write.
Well done Scooby! It's awesome to see this result.
Nah, her maid of honor is just pulling her corset tight! Yeah, that is why that look!
Okay, so here we go. I've said it plenty before but will bring it up again. Erotic beats graphic because it makes the reader work for the details. Just like if a man sees a hundred sets of boobs, he will dwell on the set in the nightie that disguises what he wants to see. That allure. It is so powerful.
That being said , you've crafted pure allure here! There is an art to it, and you're the artist. The chosen imagery works very well, as does the word choices obviously.
It actually leaves the picture seeming below the standard of the write.
Well done Scooby! It's awesome to see this result.
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28th Jul 2022 12:52pm
Oh my god! I don't know what to say to that first part. That just put and image in my mind I am trying to get rid of. lol Maybe her maid of honor is ... * nevermind, innocent look * <--- but yeah maybe that's why that look. :p
Well I like it when you say more Styx. :p Always say more please. But I like erotic and graphic... :p Well I should say I like writing graphic because it really gets me * nevermind * Definitely know what you mean with your comparison, some lingerie will always gets things moving in the right direction. That allure is definitely powerful.
I adore crafting pure allure, that keeps you coming back to see me. :p Oooo, I love being called an artist. I have so much respect for artists. The picture below the standard of the write is definitely a huge compliment to me, thank you!. Because that picture really gets me going. lol
Thanks for this Scooby snack Styx! It was really awesome to get your thoughts.
Well I like it when you say more Styx. :p Always say more please. But I like erotic and graphic... :p Well I should say I like writing graphic because it really gets me * nevermind * Definitely know what you mean with your comparison, some lingerie will always gets things moving in the right direction. That allure is definitely powerful.
I adore crafting pure allure, that keeps you coming back to see me. :p Oooo, I love being called an artist. I have so much respect for artists. The picture below the standard of the write is definitely a huge compliment to me, thank you!. Because that picture really gets me going. lol
Thanks for this Scooby snack Styx! It was really awesome to get your thoughts.
Re. Whisper insanity
29th Jul 2022 6:21pm
Hot damn, how did I not comment on this one yet?? Yeah, what Styx said, it's the maid of honor.... um... helping to calm her nerves..?
I love all your floral metaphors, lots to imagine here. I like things that get my mind working. Really great writing and OH! so much fun. ;)
❤k
I love all your floral metaphors, lots to imagine here. I like things that get my mind working. Really great writing and OH! so much fun. ;)
❤k
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Re: Re. Whisper insanity
29th Jul 2022 6:41pm
Haha, oh yeah that's my kind of way of calming the nerves or getting the nerves calmed. lol Got to do something to hold over till the honeymoon and all that. We have needs right? ;) Damn, you are getting me all worked up. lol I need to take a break from working and... * nevermind *
Flowers are beautiful, I especially love stargazer lilies, the smell is divine. But I also love getting your mind working. Thanks so much for the wonderful compliment BT, always trying to spread some fun around here. ;) <3 I always love your visits, you are awesome.
Flowers are beautiful, I especially love stargazer lilies, the smell is divine. But I also love getting your mind working. Thanks so much for the wonderful compliment BT, always trying to spread some fun around here. ;) <3 I always love your visits, you are awesome.
Re. Whisper insanity
1st Aug 2022 6:19am
Your erotic pieces offer so much, not just of the imagination but from what we can deduct are experiences. You certainly have a zest that leaves us readers in awe.
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1st Aug 2022 12:18pm
So much of our best writing comes from experiences. I have a lot of passion and always draw on them to inspire and guide my writing. Fantasies and imagination is so important too. I really love leaving readers in awe. :) That is a really great feeling for sure. Thanks so much for stopping by to see me and share your thoughts. I really appreciate it so much. <3
Re. Whisper insanity
2nd Aug 2022 11:55pm
Wow very hot and seductive all in one! You're truly talented with the pen :D
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Re: Re. Whisper insanity
3rd Aug 2022 00:20am
I love being hot and seductive MV. ;) And it makes me really happy you think I am talented, that is a lovely compliment. Hopefully I can keep whispering insanity around here but I suppose we shall see. Thanks so much for stopping by to read and sharing your thoughts with me. I love that. <3
Re. Whisper insanity
2nd Sep 2022 10:00pm
Re: Re. Whisper insanity
15th Sep 2022 12:08pm
Hey Daniel, I love putting 'nice' images in your mind and what could be nicer than erotic and sexy! In my mind nothing. ;) And I wanted to apologize for the really late reply, I did not get a notification on this comment and I only realized since luckily someone else commented. I would never ignore a comment intentionally. Thanks so much for visiting me so that I could whisper some more insanity at you. ;) I love that, especially if you love it too. ;)
Re: Re. Whisper insanity
15th Sep 2022 3:36pm
No need to apologise 😏 but thank you for replying 😊. I especially love it to!
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Re. Whisper insanity
15th Sep 2022 4:23am
Love the way you write...and I'm glad everyone else agrees. You are among the Poet Queens!
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Re: Re. Whisper insanity
15th Sep 2022 12:14pm
Well hey Gil, I love that you love the way I write. I never really planned on posting, although I did one on Mother's day that I just happened to write and people liked it so I kept going. I always thought my writing was perhaps a little odd, strange, or chaotic so people might not connect with it. But anyway, this was my first experience sharing it or for that matter writing 'poetry'. 'glad everyone else agrees' that's very sweet, thank you. Ah, to be among the Poet Queens, Wow - I really love that. I must admit you gave me a smile this morning. That means a lot to me. ;)