The Greatest Storyteller
faithmairee
Faith Elizabeth Brigham
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Faith Elizabeth Brigham
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 29th Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 208
Poetry Contest Description
Submit one poem that tells a story. It must be your own work.
This challenge is for all poets that are natural born storytellers. Let's see which poet on here is the greatest storyteller. The subject is open. You have one week. Good luck and have fun!
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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jade tiger
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The Perfect Place To Die
( Rensaku: linked Tanka )
1) Aokigahara Dream
this belov’ed sight
I’ve grown up with a lifetime,
even out at sea
helping Father mend his nets—
he and brother haul a catch
lurching from the waves,
thoughts of late spring pilgrimage
family outing days—
tossing back the smaller fish
before we set sail for home
early next morning,
Mother’s honored sisters come,
cherished reunion—
helping prepare the lunches
when we honor Fuji-San
Father’s ‘Buddha’ truck
loading for the trip, and us
packed just like sardines—
off we go with happy shouts,
Yamanashi Prefecture!
2) In Mount Fuji’s Shadow
honored sisters sing
old tradition travel songs—
men on bicycles
smile and wave as we pass by
watching glancing scenery
Father nodding head
in time with sisters’ singing,
brother Yoshi grins
as Mother leans, turns around
focusing through camera lens
and when we arrive,
the forest, black, forbidding
where no sun enters,
of bones dangling from branches
and no life leaves after dark
we walk the thin trail,
it fades where thick roots tangle
when time and rain caught,
o’er layers of eruption
the humid breath and strangle
I haven’t seen them,
anyone, since darkness fell,
and only silence
what I hear and cannot tell
if I died or everyone
3) The Black Sea Of Trees
costs of being old
the elderly forgotten—
abandon a soul
having done what love dictates
for the chance to die in bed
and the lovers flock
like two birds of a feather,
for they too are mocked
as the end, their tragedy,
never knows eternity
hoops of braided hemp
as if trees make offerings—
the death po’ms of monks,
scratched out kanji on tree bark
of sentinels’ no longer
a single bird call,
rustlings of its floundering—
in which direction
did it make its last mistake,
‘fore once again a calming
4) The Suicide Forest
as the forest stands,
forever firm in lava
regurgitated
a millennium ago—
storing its own in the caves
trespassers no more
and the volcano is stilled,
snow cap is unchanged,
with the belly of the beast
bulging till more come again
to honor dark spawn,
to consecrate the mother,
the roots with their blood—
and even they are all gone
In the fires of Fuji-San
1) Aokigahara Dream
this belov’ed sight
I’ve grown up with a lifetime,
even out at sea
helping Father mend his nets—
he and brother haul a catch
lurching from the waves,
thoughts of late spring pilgrimage
family outing days—
tossing back the smaller fish
before we set sail for home
early next morning,
Mother’s honored sisters come,
cherished reunion—
helping prepare the lunches
when we honor Fuji-San
Father’s ‘Buddha’ truck
loading for the trip, and us
packed just like sardines—
off we go with happy shouts,
Yamanashi Prefecture!
2) In Mount Fuji’s Shadow
honored sisters sing
old tradition travel songs—
men on bicycles
smile and wave as we pass by
watching glancing scenery
Father nodding head
in time with sisters’ singing,
brother Yoshi grins
as Mother leans, turns around
focusing through camera lens
and when we arrive,
the forest, black, forbidding
where no sun enters,
of bones dangling from branches
and no life leaves after dark
we walk the thin trail,
it fades where thick roots tangle
when time and rain caught,
o’er layers of eruption
the humid breath and strangle
I haven’t seen them,
anyone, since darkness fell,
and only silence
what I hear and cannot tell
if I died or everyone
3) The Black Sea Of Trees
costs of being old
the elderly forgotten—
abandon a soul
having done what love dictates
for the chance to die in bed
and the lovers flock
like two birds of a feather,
for they too are mocked
as the end, their tragedy,
never knows eternity
hoops of braided hemp
as if trees make offerings—
the death po’ms of monks,
scratched out kanji on tree bark
of sentinels’ no longer
a single bird call,
rustlings of its floundering—
in which direction
did it make its last mistake,
‘fore once again a calming
4) The Suicide Forest
as the forest stands,
forever firm in lava
regurgitated
a millennium ago—
storing its own in the caves
trespassers no more
and the volcano is stilled,
snow cap is unchanged,
with the belly of the beast
bulging till more come again
to honor dark spawn,
to consecrate the mother,
the roots with their blood—
and even they are all gone
In the fires of Fuji-San
Written by Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
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Swing
I pass it on the way
as I start the day
it hangs frayed
crestfallen
from a
wide
oak
Each
time I
have to ...
quickly glance
hoping to chance
upon some girl at play
Feet kicking to the sky
never asking why
her ride always
must end
without
me
as I start the day
it hangs frayed
crestfallen
from a
wide
oak
Each
time I
have to ...
quickly glance
hoping to chance
upon some girl at play
Feet kicking to the sky
never asking why
her ride always
must end
without
me
Written by LilDragonFly
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Calamityofgin
Forum Posts: 149
Fire of Insight
5
Joined 10th May 2020Forum Posts: 149
A horse called West
There was an infinite horse called West
He cantered Stallion chest
Heaving, thrusting forward
Beads of salted sweat
To the throttled floor
And hardened salt bed flats
With gifts of pound and precision
The grand machinery of nature
Without untimely death
To reign the beast in
Mortality can appear a noose
Even when the hangman has just cause
And the look of a saint
Beneath his dark hood
West had no knowledge
Of discourage
opposable thumbs were not in his
Chocolate brown make up
His eye dipped
Creamy and soft
If you stared into them
He might appear
To gaze back
Like a lover
Ready and willing
For care and soft
Gentle caress
He might appear to be
But would not stop
A break neck pace
Towards....
For kind things and touch
But for Omega
He had no vision
No need or desire
To hinder him
He was
As well
Without desperation
He was.....
Just as well
Another horse
Would halt him two foaled
And creation would bring the East
And a certainty
He had yet to see a sun rise
Nor see a sun set
He cantered Stallion chest
Heaving, thrusting forward
Beads of salted sweat
To the throttled floor
And hardened salt bed flats
With gifts of pound and precision
The grand machinery of nature
Without untimely death
To reign the beast in
Mortality can appear a noose
Even when the hangman has just cause
And the look of a saint
Beneath his dark hood
West had no knowledge
Of discourage
opposable thumbs were not in his
Chocolate brown make up
His eye dipped
Creamy and soft
If you stared into them
He might appear
To gaze back
Like a lover
Ready and willing
For care and soft
Gentle caress
He might appear to be
But would not stop
A break neck pace
Towards....
For kind things and touch
But for Omega
He had no vision
No need or desire
To hinder him
He was
As well
Without desperation
He was.....
Just as well
Another horse
Would halt him two foaled
And creation would bring the East
And a certainty
He had yet to see a sun rise
Nor see a sun set
Written by Calamityofgin
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Kaden_Malis
Kaden Malis
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Kaden Malis
Fire of Insight
5
Joined 2nd July 2020Forum Posts: 22
Dream
I fell into a deep sleep
And dreamt of visions untold
A land as far as my eye could see
Covered in rubies and gold
The trees would sway within the breeze
Dancing back and forth
Whispering secrets into the wind
A tale of ancient lore
And as I began my approach
To the city beyond the golden sea
My ears were pierced by a horn
As loud as it could be
The land began to tremble and shake
And stars began to fall
The amber sky turned dark gray
Seemingly to answer the horns call
The golden city where rubies abound
Started sinking into the sea
And a booming voice from nowhere
Demanded that I leave
It was with this that I awoke
Puzzled by this dream
Just what it meant, I have no clue
Sometimes a dream is just a dream.
And dreamt of visions untold
A land as far as my eye could see
Covered in rubies and gold
The trees would sway within the breeze
Dancing back and forth
Whispering secrets into the wind
A tale of ancient lore
And as I began my approach
To the city beyond the golden sea
My ears were pierced by a horn
As loud as it could be
The land began to tremble and shake
And stars began to fall
The amber sky turned dark gray
Seemingly to answer the horns call
The golden city where rubies abound
Started sinking into the sea
And a booming voice from nowhere
Demanded that I leave
It was with this that I awoke
Puzzled by this dream
Just what it meant, I have no clue
Sometimes a dream is just a dream.
Written by Kaden_Malis
(Kaden Malis)
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poetOftragedy
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Dangerous Mind
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adagio
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A flight of fancy
Once upon a time
in a land where sleep is banned
I would sit upon the telling chair
entrance you with a tale
pin back your ears whilst I regale
In that Noslumberland
don't rub your eyes
my precious child
there lived a bird that could not fly
gawky ostrich long and lanky
and his name was Fancy
for he was mute and could not squawk
he employed an umbrella
so he could point
and strut around with dignity
to find the things he might require
perhaps some training for a glider
a deposit for a Turkish Carpet
to levitate, on a rug that has no cockpit
try to find some credibility
soar aloft like ancestors could
not just paddle in the sticky mud
and walk around on bony stilts
a puppet, hear the crowd
all laugh out loud
for he was trapped within his cage
he fumed and glowered with great outrage
that man could fly and he was trapped
so a cunning plan he hatched
just to flutter like a partridge
the lead shot blown from the cartridge
now do not yawn and close your eyes
for this tale holds a surprise
self belief high as an eagles aerie
just to escape that life so dreary
tunnel underneath the wire netting
escape that park of paradise
a chance to find a brand new setting
for next door was big top circus
a brave idea to reach the heights
under cover of the darkness
the brolly underneath a wing
the hook, the end for extra purchase
escape the bonds of trapped despair
brave intentions clarity
to seek the need for parity
to become the feathered cannon
climb in the bore with gay abandon
and come the time to test the fuse
be discharged into the blue
once airborne spread ones wings and glide
now the chance to soar
terra firma always clamping thee
and each deserve; a flight of fancy
not tire in that pursuit of legacy
just one more verse before you sleep
float down on his open umbrella
say the day had been quite stellar
in a land where sleep is banned
I would sit upon the telling chair
entrance you with a tale
pin back your ears whilst I regale
In that Noslumberland
don't rub your eyes
my precious child
there lived a bird that could not fly
gawky ostrich long and lanky
and his name was Fancy
for he was mute and could not squawk
he employed an umbrella
so he could point
and strut around with dignity
to find the things he might require
perhaps some training for a glider
a deposit for a Turkish Carpet
to levitate, on a rug that has no cockpit
try to find some credibility
soar aloft like ancestors could
not just paddle in the sticky mud
and walk around on bony stilts
a puppet, hear the crowd
all laugh out loud
for he was trapped within his cage
he fumed and glowered with great outrage
that man could fly and he was trapped
so a cunning plan he hatched
just to flutter like a partridge
the lead shot blown from the cartridge
now do not yawn and close your eyes
for this tale holds a surprise
self belief high as an eagles aerie
just to escape that life so dreary
tunnel underneath the wire netting
escape that park of paradise
a chance to find a brand new setting
for next door was big top circus
a brave idea to reach the heights
under cover of the darkness
the brolly underneath a wing
the hook, the end for extra purchase
escape the bonds of trapped despair
brave intentions clarity
to seek the need for parity
to become the feathered cannon
climb in the bore with gay abandon
and come the time to test the fuse
be discharged into the blue
once airborne spread ones wings and glide
now the chance to soar
terra firma always clamping thee
and each deserve; a flight of fancy
not tire in that pursuit of legacy
just one more verse before you sleep
float down on his open umbrella
say the day had been quite stellar
Written by slipalong
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Magnetron
Forum Posts: 433
Fire of Insight
6
Joined 20th July 2014Forum Posts: 433
[ SciFi & Fantasy ] The Tenth Melissa
Five kilometers underground
manufactured in secret
along with nine others
Shadow government facility
Absent parents or brothers
a hive of sisterhood
intentions far from altruistic
pretensed as Greater Good
plaus • i • ble de • ni • a • bil • i • ty
Thus a little known story
in which chaos erupted;
cloning experiment gone awry---
gene pool corrupted
Siblings
anywhere from deformed
to downright psychotic
full of rage, pent up violence
to passive, quite robotic---
unlike her
perfect in every way:
balanced, beautiful, intelligent
from conception
she was the exception
The Tenth Melissa
And then one artificial sun day
she lifted a security guard's pistol
---shot him point blank in the face
Level 9 Access card, she stole
Commandeered the control room
---locked down every exit
That this was ever coming
Not a single soul saw it
No matter how much praise
was heaped upon on her
she viewed herself a monster
an abomination
and refused to go on living
knowing the worst in her
was manifest in her kin
knowing the worst in them
resided just below the surface of her
skin
Self Destruct Mechanism Activated
Self Destruct Mechanism Activated
Self Destruct Mechanism Activated
Countdown To Detonation Sequence Commencing
Ten
Pounding the shatter proof glass
they begged her to let them in
fearing for their lives
Nine
Trapped
Rats in a maze scurrying
Cell Phones Not Permitted On Premises
No calling children, husbands, wives
Eight
"Wait, Melissa - wait!
"It doesn't have to be this way!"
"Just open the door!"
"Let's discuss this some more!"
Seven, Six, Five
They'd say anything to stay alive---
anything to spare their hides
but this Godplay needed exposing
The Truth would set her Free
Five, Four, Three
Not even Melissas Two through Nine
convinced her to stop the countdown
while Crazy Melissa Number One
cheered her on just for fun!
Four, Three, Two
"Sister, please don't do this!"
"You know we all love you!"
"Why, Melissa, Why?!"
Pleading was all they could do
except kiss their asses
One
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PsycoticMastermind
Forum Posts: 209
Thought Provoker
2
Joined 20th Mar 2015Forum Posts: 209
[ Creepfest ] In The Home Of The Mountain Queen
I can just see you
now ...
parked on an ass dented sofa
scarfing down Doritos
cradling a laptop, chatting
in that online sex forum
as usual
Squandering
so much free time in idle gossip
publicly sharing cleavage photos
privately messaging your boobies
posting cat menes, harassing newbies
pausing to lick artificially cheesed digits
when you could be practicing your cello
becoming one with vibrational energy
flowing through delicate fingertips
into those harmonious strings
consciously savoring music in sips
rather than downloaded gulpings
from I-Tunes or slurped
You-Tube streams
Playing your instrument---
you are so much more alive than this
anonymous pseudo existence perpetuated
behind a silly username
and poorly pixelated avatar
feigning to be so many things you are not
Miss MountinQueen91
It saddens me
how you will never live up to your potential
and without my guidance
would remain lost
even though you don't know who I am
despite our having briefly met once
in that very same online forum
where you referred to me as dickbag
I exit the darkly lit hallway
approaching rapidly from behind
pull back on that pretty, blonde mane
while deftly conducting a straight razor
orchestrating a left to right slashing
motion across your throat
so much blood
letting the arterial spray surge in spurts
painting your laptop's screen
as if a mad demon artist
a virtual Jackson Pollock of Molloch
until your gurgling palette is emptied
Now, my dear Mountain Queen
please, indulge me
take my hand in yours
put your other hand on my shoulder
right there
like so
and I will show you what it really feels like
to be
alive
And you and I shall
dance a dance of elegant romance
a Vietnamese Waltz
before the flickering hearth warming
these cold brick 'n' mortared vaults
Imagining your fingers sing
in keys of G, strumming catgut string
auditioning a splendid solo rendition of
In The Hall Of The Mountain King
If only you could witness
this new version of you
removed from the shelf
unwrapped from box
You'd be asking,
Who are these strangers
cutting up the rug
jitterbugging in my home?
Unfortunately
not for you, but for me
your footwork is pathetic
as poetic as my next stalker journal entry
and online competition poem
When playing on the Internets
perhaps you should think twice
before calling someone dickbag
Next time consider trying to be nice
And who knows?
Perhaps I wouldn't be here now
wasting my time showing you how
to be more sophisticated---
oww
oww!
goddammit!
---quit stepping on my toes already!
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Anarchitect
Forum Posts: 105
Twisted Dreamer
1
Joined 21st Apr 2015Forum Posts: 105
[2015] Rebelnations
Feigning ignorance as he takes the throne
---the Great Deceiver of untold lies
awaiting for enemies to atone
after silver Falcons cross the skies
cast westward by King of Terror into flight
tearing asunder mirrored monument
a forceful display of wicked might
drawing forth a wary Eagle in descent
Enter the insatiable belly of the Beast
with ten horns rising
in the Middle East
A mockery of the One adorned
crowned in many thorns;
long ago, this was forewarned
Prepare for the bloodbath
of the millenium
when brother hath
buried the dagger deep
inside each other
Marching the desert sand
his people will go
led by the Falsest of Prophets
into the land of
Megeddio
Prelude to madness
by which the fabled were enticed
Be witness to the dawning of the
third generation Antichrist
As he crushes nations into nation
within his iron vice
This is the New World Order
of the final Antichrist
Bow down
before the one you serve
Sever loyal ties;
let old bonds be sliced
Now comes the armies of the ANTICHRIST!
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Bluevelvete
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Tyrant of Words
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PittinixDesigns
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Fire of Insight
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She Is Just A Woman
Mia holds herself in the darkness of inexperience.
She is a young, chaste sister of the Catholic faith.
He has been admiring her since she attained puberty.
She stares at him whenever he passes the convent.
He can tell that she has a secret craving for love,
But he is too diffident to say something to her.
She flatly rejects the advances of all the other men,
And so he thinks she is not likely to fall for him.
Mia is like a gemstone in a vitrine in a museum.
She is the only daughter of a reputable bishop.
Her angelic beauty catches the author’s eye.
He feels her pain as she smiles to feign happiness.
Her parents are overprotective and self-righteous.
They have indoctrinated her in religious philosophy.
It seems so impossible to win the love of a nun,
But he does not intend to give up without trying.
He beckons her and tells her how he feels about her.
Mia presents firm arguments as he expected.
She boldly expresses her opinion on morality,
And she respectfully defends her Christian beliefs.
She says nobody can contaminate her virtuous mind.
Nevertheless, he discovers a weakness in her heart.
He thinks he can soften her if he tries hard enough.
After all, she is just a woman despite her rectitude.
She had ceremonially vowed to adhere to the rules,
But now she wants to make her own decisions.
He sees an opportunity to manipulate the situation,
And he will try to seduce her one way or another.
It is easier to arouse her emotion than he thought.
She has carnal desires like any normal person.
Her tears are not different from other women’s tears.
She reveals her sadness and loneliness to him.
Finally Mia picks the forbidden fruit and eats it.
Her eyes are open and she wants sensual pleasures.
She starts to do things she had never done before.
And she becomes excessively desirous of his love.
Biblical laws cannot guide her behaviour anymore.
She willingly defiles her purity with extramarital sex.
If she is caught, they will banish her from the church.
Her secret eros proves that she is just a woman.
She is a young, chaste sister of the Catholic faith.
He has been admiring her since she attained puberty.
She stares at him whenever he passes the convent.
He can tell that she has a secret craving for love,
But he is too diffident to say something to her.
She flatly rejects the advances of all the other men,
And so he thinks she is not likely to fall for him.
Mia is like a gemstone in a vitrine in a museum.
She is the only daughter of a reputable bishop.
Her angelic beauty catches the author’s eye.
He feels her pain as she smiles to feign happiness.
Her parents are overprotective and self-righteous.
They have indoctrinated her in religious philosophy.
It seems so impossible to win the love of a nun,
But he does not intend to give up without trying.
He beckons her and tells her how he feels about her.
Mia presents firm arguments as he expected.
She boldly expresses her opinion on morality,
And she respectfully defends her Christian beliefs.
She says nobody can contaminate her virtuous mind.
Nevertheless, he discovers a weakness in her heart.
He thinks he can soften her if he tries hard enough.
After all, she is just a woman despite her rectitude.
She had ceremonially vowed to adhere to the rules,
But now she wants to make her own decisions.
He sees an opportunity to manipulate the situation,
And he will try to seduce her one way or another.
It is easier to arouse her emotion than he thought.
She has carnal desires like any normal person.
Her tears are not different from other women’s tears.
She reveals her sadness and loneliness to him.
Finally Mia picks the forbidden fruit and eats it.
Her eyes are open and she wants sensual pleasures.
She starts to do things she had never done before.
And she becomes excessively desirous of his love.
Biblical laws cannot guide her behaviour anymore.
She willingly defiles her purity with extramarital sex.
If she is caught, they will banish her from the church.
Her secret eros proves that she is just a woman.
Written by PittinixDesigns
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