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The Greatest Storyteller

faithmairee
Faith Elizabeth Brigham
Tyrant of Words
United States 11awards
Joined 29th Aug 2012
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Poetry Contest

Submit one poem that tells a story. It must be your own work.

This challenge is for all poets that are natural born storytellers. Let's see which poet on here is the greatest storyteller. The subject is open. You have one week. Good luck and have fun!

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
United States 154awards
Joined 9th Nov 2015
Forum Posts: 5134

The Perfect Place To Die

( Rensaku: linked Tanka )  

1) Aokigahara Dream  
 
this belov’ed sight  
I’ve grown up with a lifetime,  
even out at sea  
helping Father mend his nets—  
he and brother haul a catch  
 
lurching from the waves,  
thoughts of late spring pilgrimage  
family outing days—  
tossing back the smaller fish  
before we set sail for home  
 
early next morning,  
Mother’s honored sisters come,  
cherished reunion—  
helping prepare the lunches  
when we honor Fuji-San  
 
Father’s ‘Buddha’ truck  
loading for the trip, and us  
packed just like sardines—  
off we go with happy shouts,  
Yamanashi Prefecture!  
 
2) In Mount Fuji’s Shadow  
 
honored sisters sing  
old tradition travel songs—  
men on bicycles  
smile and wave as we pass by  
watching glancing scenery  
 
Father nodding head  
in time with sisters’ singing,  
brother Yoshi grins  
as Mother leans, turns around  
focusing through camera lens  
 
and when we arrive,  
the forest, black, forbidding  
where no sun enters,  
of bones dangling from branches  
and no life leaves after dark  
 
we walk the thin trail,  
it fades where thick roots tangle  
when time and rain caught,  
o’er layers of eruption  
the humid breath and strangle  
 
I haven’t seen them,  
anyone, since darkness fell,  
and only silence  
what I hear and cannot tell  
if I died or everyone  
 
3) The Black Sea Of Trees  
 
costs of being old  
the elderly forgotten—  
abandon a soul  
having done what love dictates  
for the chance to die in bed  
 
and the lovers flock  
like two birds of a feather,  
for they too are mocked  
as the end, their tragedy,  
never knows eternity  
 
hoops of braided hemp  
as if trees make offerings—  
the death po’ms of monks,  
scratched out kanji on tree bark  
of sentinels’ no longer  
 
a single bird call,  
rustlings of its floundering—  
in which direction  
did it make its last mistake,  
‘fore once again a calming  
 
4) The Suicide Forest  
 
as the forest stands,  
forever firm in lava  
regurgitated  
a millennium ago—  
storing its own in the caves  
 
trespassers no more  
and the volcano is stilled,  
snow cap is unchanged,  
with the belly of the beast  
bulging till more come again  
 
to honor dark spawn,  
to consecrate the mother,  
the roots with their blood—  
and even they are all gone  
In the fires of Fuji-San
Written by Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
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LilDragonFly
Tyrant of Words
United States 69awards
Joined 22nd July 2017
Forum Posts: 96

Swing

I pass it on the way          
as I start the day            
it hangs frayed              
crestfallen            
from a        
wide      
oak            
             
Each          
time  I          
have to ...              
quickly glance            
hoping to chance            
upon some girl at play            
             
Feet kicking to the sky            
never asking why            
her ride always            
must end        
without    
me
Written by LilDragonFly
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Calamityofgin
Fire of Insight
United States 5awards
Joined 10th May 2020
Forum Posts: 149

A horse called West

There was an infinite horse called West
He cantered Stallion chest
Heaving, thrusting forward
Beads of salted sweat
To the throttled floor
And hardened salt bed flats
With gifts of pound and precision
The grand machinery of nature
Without untimely death
To reign the beast in

Mortality can appear a noose
Even when the hangman has just cause
And the look of a saint
Beneath his dark hood

West had no knowledge
Of discourage

opposable thumbs were not in his
Chocolate brown make up
His eye dipped
Creamy and soft
If you stared into them
He might appear
To gaze back
Like a lover

Ready and willing
For care and soft
Gentle caress
He might appear to be
But would not stop
A break neck pace
Towards....

For kind things and touch

But for Omega
He had no vision
No need or desire
To hinder him

He was
As well
Without desperation
He was.....

Just as well

Another horse
Would halt him two foaled
And creation would bring the East
And a certainty

He had yet to see a sun rise
Nor see a sun set
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Kaden_Malis
Kaden Malis
Fire of Insight
United States 5awards
Joined 2nd July 2020
Forum Posts: 22

Dream

I fell into a deep sleep
And dreamt of visions untold
A land as far as my eye could see
Covered in rubies and gold

The trees would sway within the breeze
Dancing back and forth
Whispering secrets into the wind
A tale of ancient lore

And as I began my approach
To the city beyond the golden sea
My ears were pierced by a horn
As loud as it could be

The land began to tremble and shake
And stars began to fall
The amber sky turned dark gray
Seemingly to answer the horns call

The golden city where rubies abound
Started sinking into the sea
And a booming voice from nowhere
Demanded that I leave

It was with this that I awoke
Puzzled by this dream
Just what it meant, I have no clue
Sometimes a dream is just a dream.
Written by Kaden_Malis (Kaden Malis)
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poetOftragedy
Dangerous Mind
South Africa 3awards
Joined 13th May 2018
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LITTLE BIRD

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slipalong
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 41awards
Joined 1st Jan 2018
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A flight of fancy

Once upon a time
in a land where sleep is banned  
I would sit upon the telling chair  
 entrance you with a tale  
pin back your ears whilst I regale  
In that Noslumberland  
don't rub your eyes  
my precious child  
there lived a bird that could not fly  
 gawky ostrich long and lanky  
and his name was Fancy  
for he was mute and could not squawk  
 he employed an umbrella  
so he could point  
and strut around with dignity  
to find the things he might require  
perhaps some training for a glider  
a deposit for a Turkish Carpet  
to levitate, on a rug that has no cockpit  
try to find some credibility  
soar aloft like ancestors could  
not just paddle in the sticky mud  
and walk around on bony stilts  
a puppet, hear the crowd  
all  laugh out loud  
for he was trapped within his cage  
he fumed and glowered with great outrage  
that man could fly and he was trapped  
so a cunning plan he hatched  
just to flutter like a partridge  
the lead shot blown from the cartridge  
now do not yawn and close your eyes  
for this tale holds a surprise  
self belief high as an eagles aerie  
just to escape that life so dreary  
tunnel underneath the wire netting  
escape that park of paradise  
a chance to find a brand new setting  
for next door was big top circus  
a brave idea to reach the heights  
under cover of the darkness  
the brolly underneath a wing  
the hook, the end for extra purchase  
escape the bonds of trapped despair  
brave intentions clarity  
to seek the need for parity  
 to become the feathered cannon  
climb in the bore with gay abandon  
and come the time to test the fuse  
be discharged into the blue  
once airborne spread ones wings and glide  
now the chance to soar  
terra firma always clamping thee  
and each deserve; a flight of fancy  
not tire in that pursuit of legacy  
just one more verse before you sleep  
float down on his open umbrella  
 say the day had been quite stellar
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Magnetron
Fire of Insight
United States 6awards
Joined 20th July 2014
Forum Posts: 433

[ SciFi & Fantasy ] The Tenth Melissa

              
Five kilometers underground            
     manufactured in secret                
along with nine others            
     Shadow government facility                
               
Absent parents or brothers            
     a hive of sisterhood           
intentions far from altruistic            
     pretensed as Greater Good              
               
plaus • i • ble   de • ni • a • bil • i • ty                
               
Thus a little known story                
in which chaos erupted;              
cloning experiment gone awry---                
gene pool corrupted                
               
Siblings                
anywhere from deformed              
to downright psychotic                
full of rage, pent up violence                
to passive, quite robotic---                
unlike her                
               
perfect in every way:                
balanced, beautiful, intelligent            
     from conception            
       she was the exception                
               
The Tenth Melissa                
               
And then one artificial sun day                
she lifted a security guard's pistol            
---shot him point blank in the face              
Level 9 Access card, she stole               
               
Commandeered the control room             
---locked down every exit               
That this was ever coming  
Not a single soul saw it                
               
No matter how much praise                
was heaped upon on her                
she viewed herself a monster        
         
an abomination       
            
and refused to go on living                
knowing the worst in her                
was manifest in her kin            
               
knowing the worst in them                
resided just below the surface of her                
skin                
               
Self Destruct Mechanism Activated                
               
Self Destruct Mechanism Activated                
               
Self Destruct Mechanism Activated                
               
Countdown To Detonation Sequence Commencing                
               
Ten
               
               
Pounding the shatter proof glass                
they begged her to let them in                
fearing for their lives                
               
Nine                
               
Trapped            
Rats in a maze scurrying                
Cell Phones Not Permitted On Premises                
No calling children, husbands, wives                
               
Eight                
               
"Wait, Melissa - wait!                
"It doesn't have to be this way!"                
"Just open the door!"                
"Let's discuss this some more!"                
               
Seven, Six, Five                
               
They'd say anything to stay alive---                
anything to spare their hides                
but this Godplay needed exposing                
               
The Truth would set her Free                
               
Five, Four, Three                
               
Not even Melissas Two through Nine                
convinced her to stop the countdown                
while Crazy Melissa Number One                
cheered her on just for fun!                
               
Four, Three, Two                
               
"Sister, please don't do this!"                
"You know we all love you!"                
"Why, Melissa, Why?!"                
               
Pleading was all they could do                
except kiss their asses                
               
One              
               
     
 
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PsycoticMastermind
Thought Provoker
United States 2awards
Joined 20th Mar 2015
Forum Posts: 209

[ Creepfest ] In The Home Of The Mountain Queen

            
I can just see you
now ...             
             
parked on an ass dented sofa              
scarfing down Doritos              
cradling a laptop, chatting    
in that online sex forum              
as usual              
             
Squandering      
so much free time in idle gossip            
publicly sharing cleavage photos    
privately messaging your boobies        
posting cat menes, harassing newbies              
pausing to lick artificially cheesed digits              
             
when you could be practicing your cello              
becoming one with vibrational energy    
flowing through delicate fingertips              
into those harmonious strings              
consciously savoring music in sips              
rather than downloaded gulpings              
from I-Tunes or slurped      
You-Tube streams              
             
Playing your instrument---          
you are so much more alive than this          
anonymous pseudo existence perpetuated              
behind a silly username    
and poorly pixelated avatar              
feigning to be so many things you are not          
Miss MountinQueen91              
             
It saddens me              
how you will never live up to your potential              
             
and without my guidance              
would remain lost              
             
even though you don't know who I am              
despite our having briefly met once        
          
in that very same online forum              
where you referred to me as dickbag              
              
I exit the darkly lit hallway              
approaching rapidly from behind              
pull back on that pretty, blonde mane          
while deftly conducting a straight razor    
orchestrating a left to right slashing    
motion across your throat         
              
so much blood          
           
letting the arterial spray surge in spurts              
painting your laptop's screen              
as if a mad demon artist              
a virtual Jackson Pollock of Molloch              
until your gurgling palette is emptied              
           
Now, my dear Mountain Queen              
please, indulge me              
take my hand in yours              
put your other hand on my shoulder              
right there              
like so              
and I will show you what it really feels like              
to be              
alive              
             
And you and I shall              
dance a dance of elegant romance              
a Vietnamese Waltz              
before the flickering hearth warming              
these cold brick 'n' mortared vaults              
             
Imagining your fingers sing              
in keys of G, strumming catgut string              
auditioning a splendid solo rendition of              
In The Hall Of The Mountain King              
             
If only you could witness              
this new version of you              
removed from the shelf              
unwrapped from box            
You'd be asking,              
Who are these strangers              
cutting up the rug              
jitterbugging in my home?
             
             
Unfortunately              
not for you, but for me              
your footwork is pathetic              
as poetic as my next stalker journal entry              
and online competition poem              
             
When playing on the Internets              
perhaps you should think twice              
before calling someone dickbag              
Next time consider trying to be nice              
             
And who knows?              
Perhaps I wouldn't be here now              
wasting my time showing you how              
to be more sophisticated---      
           
oww              
             
   oww!              
             
      goddammit!           
   
---quit stepping on my toes already!    
   
 
 
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Anarchitect
Twisted Dreamer
United States 1awards
Joined 21st Apr 2015
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[2015] Rebelnations

      
Feigning ignorance as he takes the throne        
---the Great Deceiver of untold lies        
awaiting for enemies to atone        
after silver Falcons cross the skies        
       
cast westward by King of Terror into flight        
tearing asunder mirrored monument        
a forceful display of wicked might        
drawing forth a wary Eagle in descent        
       
Enter the insatiable belly of the Beast        
with ten horns rising  
in the Middle East        
       
A mockery of the One adorned        
crowned in many thorns;        
long ago, this was forewarned        
       
Prepare for the bloodbath        
of the millenium        
when brother hath        
buried the dagger deep        
inside each other        
       
Marching the desert sand        
his people will go        
led by the Falsest of Prophets        
into the land of        
       
Megeddio        
       
Prelude to madness        
by which the fabled were enticed        
Be witness to the dawning of the       
third generation Antichrist        
       
As he crushes nations into nation        
within his iron vice        
This is the New World Order        
of the final Antichrist        
       
Bow down  
before the one you serve        
Sever loyal ties;        
let old bonds be sliced        
       
Now comes the armies of the ANTICHRIST!  
 
 
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Bluevelvete
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PittinixDesigns
Fire of Insight
Jamaica 3awards
Joined 8th Feb 2020
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She Is Just A Woman

Mia holds herself in the darkness of inexperience.
She is a young, chaste sister of the Catholic faith.
He has been admiring her since she attained puberty.
She stares at him whenever he passes the convent.
 
He can tell that she has a secret craving for love,
But he is too diffident to say something to her.
She flatly rejects the advances of all the other men,
And so he thinks she is not likely to fall for him.
 
Mia is like a gemstone in a vitrine in a museum.
She is the only daughter of a reputable bishop.
Her angelic beauty catches the author’s eye.
He feels her pain as she smiles to feign happiness.
 
Her parents are overprotective and self-righteous.
They have indoctrinated her in religious philosophy.
It seems so impossible to win the love of a nun,
But he does not intend to give up without trying.
 
He beckons her and tells her how he feels about her.
Mia presents firm arguments as he expected.
She boldly expresses her opinion on morality,
And she respectfully defends her Christian beliefs.
 
She says nobody can contaminate her virtuous mind.
Nevertheless, he discovers a weakness in her heart.
He thinks he can soften her if he tries hard enough.
After all, she is just a woman despite her rectitude.
 
She had ceremonially vowed to adhere to the rules,
But now she wants to make her own decisions.
He sees an opportunity to manipulate the situation,
And he will try to seduce her one way or another.
 
It is easier to arouse her emotion than he thought.
She has carnal desires like any normal person.
Her tears are not different from other women’s tears.
She reveals her sadness and loneliness to him.
 
Finally Mia picks the forbidden fruit and eats it.
Her eyes are open and she wants sensual pleasures.
She starts to do things she had never done before.
And she becomes excessively desirous of his love.
 
Biblical laws cannot guide her behaviour anymore.
She willingly defiles her purity with extramarital sex.
If she is caught, they will banish her from the church.
Her secret eros proves that she is just a woman.
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