thing about religion? is just a smidgeon of faith will take you far through deserts as a dewdrop does the flower or a mud puddle for a camel couple because having nothing to believe in? it's the worst thing to believe in - a not so kind kind of insanity - such deluge of delusion requiring a massive ark type of undertaking as you try to save yourself from this universe out to drown you
If only I could write inside this mind of mine and give these fingers a break - blistered, bleeding, they ache needing to release the swelling - so much storytelling! pumped, primed, ready for bursting epidermis
Guillotine Macabre eating machine chomping off another pissant peasant head Irrelevant bloodlines spilled Baskets overflow with the killed filled with dripping poetic verse; recitals of the disembodied dead
Non-compliance; defiance of decrees by the Throne swallowed whole by shadow dying alone Waterboarded with one's own hot breath while listening to the ass-inine excuses for your being put to death
And the reign of darkness continues black hoods custom fit drawn over eyes vacant of hope ...
I want to thank you once again for your critique that saved the life of my pathetic poem, It Came From Stephen King's Brain. I am honored that you took time out of your incredibly busy schedule to examine it ( and the 34 other poems that accompanied ) under nothing short of a microscope to discover areas of improvement, not to mention reveal flaws that escaped the attention of so many others ( like that Todski69 fellow ).
How fortunate I was that we crossed paths in an extremely busy...