Spiritual Poems by Top Critiquers
Poetry which debates religion, atheism and New Age spirituality written by the DU Poetry top critiquers
(members who have given lots of useful comments to other poets this month)
Ahavati
Poem Published
1st Apr 2018 9:51pm
1st Apr 2018 9:51pm
Anatomy of Loss: NapoWriMo 2018 Collection
Prelude
The Known Unknown:
a subconscious Being residing
amid our Living waters;
an under-pulse within reach
of understanding
Its indecipherable meaning
barely beyond explainable feeling
neonatal in our inked pens
gestating awareness
An unconscious Light Source ...
The Known Unknown:
a subconscious Being residing
amid our Living waters;
an under-pulse within reach
of understanding
Its indecipherable meaning
barely beyond explainable feeling
neonatal in our inked pens
gestating awareness
An unconscious Light Source ...
#universe
#NaPoWriMo2018
#humankind #WritingPoetry
#humankind #WritingPoetry
240 reads
74 Comments
ElrondSirfalas
Poem Published
20th Apr 2018 1:39pm
20th Apr 2018 1:39pm
Do The Gods Recycle ? (A Collaboration With Blackwolf)
There Is The Defined And The Abstract
The Raw And Refined And What Is Said To Be Fact
There Are Thoughts , Unformed And Manifest
There Is Mental Stirring And The Mind At Rest
The Id The Idea The Vision Visualization
The Art Of Content Or Contemplation
The Nuance So Subtly And Softly Just Suggested
And Then All The Words To Be Digested ;
Surrender Of Suppression To It's Expansive Counterpart
The Inaudible Creation Of Temporal Substance As The Art
Endless Lucidity Dancing Upon The Relative Floor Of The Senses ...
The Raw And Refined And What Is Said To Be Fact
There Are Thoughts , Unformed And Manifest
There Is Mental Stirring And The Mind At Rest
The Id The Idea The Vision Visualization
The Art Of Content Or Contemplation
The Nuance So Subtly And Softly Just Suggested
And Then All The Words To Be Digested ;
Surrender Of Suppression To It's Expansive Counterpart
The Inaudible Creation Of Temporal Substance As The Art
Endless Lucidity Dancing Upon The Relative Floor Of The Senses ...
#birth
#death
#universe #LifeCycle
#universe #LifeCycle
46 reads
9 Comments
AtoMikbomb
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2018 7:45am
22nd Apr 2018 7:45am
Verdure
You extend Your
forever hands
further into
this canyon bend;
...a murmur
sweeps walled leather - toughened
gulfs...
You mend the end
forever hands
further into
this canyon bend;
...a murmur
sweeps walled leather - toughened
gulfs...
You mend the end
#love
#peace
42 reads
5 Comments
TIG
Poem Published
Today 7:13pm
Today 7:13pm
The power of the....
C rown of thorns, no, actually Gods Glory
R econciling our sins, to all who repent
O vercoming death and ascended into heaven
S acrifice made with his holy blood
S aved for eternity, you and I
R econciling our sins, to all who repent
O vercoming death and ascended into heaven
S acrifice made with his holy blood
S aved for eternity, you and I
#God
#Christian
#heaven #redemption
#heaven #redemption
1 read
0 Comments
DevlinDLC
Poem Published
20th Apr 2018 6:18am
20th Apr 2018 6:18am
jesus loves you
Death
text me this morning
and asked if I was ready to go?
Heaven
text me later that morning
and said, 'jesus loves you.'
Instead
of slitting my wrists,
I perfumed them.
author's note:
... for someone
text me this morning
and asked if I was ready to go?
Heaven
text me later that morning
and said, 'jesus loves you.'
Instead
of slitting my wrists,
I perfumed them.
author's note:
... for someone
#hope
64 reads
11 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
18th Apr 2018 2:02pm
18th Apr 2018 2:02pm
Experience
When I saw you
I wanted you
I liked you
Lusted for you
Swore in my soul that I needed you
You felt for me
Then fell for me
And came to love me as I do you
I like you as much now
As I did when I first saw you
Yet now I appreciate that which I did not notice thru my lust clouded youthful vision
You cook for me
Better even than my grandmother
Who taught me the pleasures of real meals
You cling to me
Tighter than a weight belt during a 750 squat
Offering the same protection
So that the pressures...
I wanted you
I liked you
Lusted for you
Swore in my soul that I needed you
You felt for me
Then fell for me
And came to love me as I do you
I like you as much now
As I did when I first saw you
Yet now I appreciate that which I did not notice thru my lust clouded youthful vision
You cook for me
Better even than my grandmother
Who taught me the pleasures of real meals
You cling to me
Tighter than a weight belt during a 750 squat
Offering the same protection
So that the pressures...
#love
#spiritual
34 reads
2 Comments
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