Spiritual Poems by Top Critiquers
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Poetry which debates religion, atheism and New Age spirituality
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
9th May 2022 9:38am
9th May 2022 9:38am
The eternal color palette of connected astral energies
To be a spec of stardust
upon which such force is cast;
painted primordial start
crisp, dynamic colors enforce the blast
Spread forth and s t r e t c h
brushed hands of certain hue
reflective introspection
of profound creative truth
'Tis shapely dance
astral curve-twisting to excite
awash in an abundance
this aura of omnipotent light
Dark sectors swell, expounding
celebrating love that'll set us free
shaded tones ebb and flow through time
accentuating...
upon which such force is cast;
painted primordial start
crisp, dynamic colors enforce the blast
Spread forth and s t r e t c h
brushed hands of certain hue
reflective introspection
of profound creative truth
'Tis shapely dance
astral curve-twisting to excite
awash in an abundance
this aura of omnipotent light
Dark sectors swell, expounding
celebrating love that'll set us free
shaded tones ebb and flow through time
accentuating...
#love
#universe
#rhyming
#PowerOfWords
#art
230 reads
31 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
25th Jun 2022 4:23am
25th Jun 2022 4:23am
Under the Pale Moon Light
She dances naked under the pale moon light
Around the fire invoking energy from the night
And as the flames sway she prays with quite delight
The bright embers seem like dreams that take flight
And while the cinders fly off into the night air
Her body moves to the lively rhythm of the flame
Her fair skin glows along with her red flowing hair
Like fiery cascades - picture perfect in every frame
She raises her hands upward with a joyous grin
Then tilts her head upward looking up at the moon
The cool breeze caresses every inch of...
Around the fire invoking energy from the night
And as the flames sway she prays with quite delight
The bright embers seem like dreams that take flight
And while the cinders fly off into the night air
Her body moves to the lively rhythm of the flame
Her fair skin glows along with her red flowing hair
Like fiery cascades - picture perfect in every frame
She raises her hands upward with a joyous grin
Then tilts her head upward looking up at the moon
The cool breeze caresses every inch of...
#pagan
#witches
63 reads
4 Comments
S-m-sawyer
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:27am
Yesterday 4:27am
I feel your pain, but offer my heart
Give me your heart
And I'll give you mine
Let our souls intertwine
Like vines so devine
Slip into a trance
And let our spirits dance
Let our minds bind
and unwind as one
I feel you pain and offer
An ear to hear
all you darkest fears
I was put on this earth
As a blessing and a curse
To absorb all your pain
And sometimes it hurts
I cannot change or rearrange
But I'll still catch your tears when it rains
And I'll give you mine
Let our souls intertwine
Like vines so devine
Slip into a trance
And let our spirits dance
Let our minds bind
and unwind as one
I feel you pain and offer
An ear to hear
all you darkest fears
I was put on this earth
As a blessing and a curse
To absorb all your pain
And sometimes it hurts
I cannot change or rearrange
But I'll still catch your tears when it rains
#strength
#spiritual
#bittersweet
51 reads
8 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
28th Jul 2014 12:39pm
28th Jul 2014 12:39pm
Fastball - My Spiritual Awakening through Baseball
I can hit the fastball
But I really want to hit the slider
Same thing in writing verse
The erotic comes easy
but my own core emotions
always leave me wanting more
fom myself
So, no erotic poems this morning
Going back to the basics
My need to write
I hope you will let me in
Even though I have been hard on you
I'm not a bad guy
And I don't spit too much
When I'm at the plate
But I really want to hit the slider
Same thing in writing verse
The erotic comes easy
but my own core emotions
always leave me wanting more
fom myself
So, no erotic poems this morning
Going back to the basics
My need to write
I hope you will let me in
Even though I have been hard on you
I'm not a bad guy
And I don't spit too much
When I'm at the plate
646 reads
6 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
16th Sep 2021 2:16pm
16th Sep 2021 2:16pm
reverie
in the dawning hours I am silent
solemnly beholding beauty
gentle quiet embraces my soul
as first blush kisses the horizon
I find myself in sync with nature
the dew kisses the grass
and the trees change guard
in the flower beds the buds start to open
and the sun warms their faces
I walk in the garden every day amazed by it's grander
delicate epiphany everything so perfectly formed
with the mind of a true artist
the birds take to the winds
and song fills the air
I become one with my mother Earth
...
solemnly beholding beauty
gentle quiet embraces my soul
as first blush kisses the horizon
I find myself in sync with nature
the dew kisses the grass
and the trees change guard
in the flower beds the buds start to open
and the sun warms their faces
I walk in the garden every day amazed by it's grander
delicate epiphany everything so perfectly formed
with the mind of a true artist
the birds take to the winds
and song fills the air
I become one with my mother Earth
...
#love
#nature
#spiritual
208 reads
6 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
19th Jun 2022 4:11pm
19th Jun 2022 4:11pm
Unto My Heavenly Father...
This particular incantation is about the wickedness of the human heart and sometimes, yes God uses his most humbling servants to do battle to balance the scales of good and evil, therefore, sometimes you most utilize the tongue of evil and the sword to castrate the wicked tree to make room to sow the reaping of good harvest.
In a better sense of judgment, take Lucifer the highest and most Cherub in Heaven until he tried to overtake the third Heaven upon where God sits.
It was his envious not as he stood as the highest, but the knowledge, and spiritual wisdom he...
In a better sense of judgment, take Lucifer the highest and most Cherub in Heaven until he tried to overtake the third Heaven upon where God sits.
It was his envious not as he stood as the highest, but the knowledge, and spiritual wisdom he...
#religion
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#humankind
#philosophical
135 reads
8 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
10th Jul 2021 11:33am
10th Jul 2021 11:33am
Quantum Leap
The meditation modulates
& creates
What a thought-form
postulates
Be it
dark or light
As the electron orbits
out of sight
working wonders
as a thought-form ponders
The medium
&
The method
By which the performance
will commence
by which
the frequency will switch
And the electron
will take on
a quantum
Leap
into the
Unknown
& creates
What a thought-form
postulates
Be it
dark or light
As the electron orbits
out of sight
working wonders
as a thought-form ponders
The medium
&
The method
By which the performance
will commence
by which
the frequency will switch
And the electron
will take on
a quantum
Leap
into the
Unknown
#rebirth
#spiritual
#philosophical
231 reads
8 Comments
Adelphina
Poem Published
27th Jun 2022 00:19am
27th Jun 2022 00:19am
White Buffalo
Roaming on a white cloud
No matter time of year
In the blistering sun
Or frozen sleet and snow
A spiritual sacred creature to call upon
That grazes on illness and ailment
Replaces uncertainty with tenacity
Bestowing bravery for your next step
To stampede into a war cry
Towards the cliff of cancer
Challenging it with strength
Mustered prayer and faith
To take the courageous leap
To be graced with hope
And a herd of
White Buffalo
No matter time of year
In the blistering sun
Or frozen sleet and snow
A spiritual sacred creature to call upon
That grazes on illness and ailment
Replaces uncertainty with tenacity
Bestowing bravery for your next step
To stampede into a war cry
Towards the cliff of cancer
Challenging it with strength
Mustered prayer and faith
To take the courageous leap
To be graced with hope
And a herd of
White Buffalo
#strength
#hope
#courage
82 reads
Phantom2426
Poem Published
10th Apr 2021 5:27am
10th Apr 2021 5:27am
Power of Light
Power of the Light
is filling up with
Kindness and Respect
Cuz that's way I
treat all of the
Ladies because they
are all unique and
special in their own
way so let the
light shine upon
me and all the Ladies
who need to be shown
Respect and Kindness
Filling us all with the
Power of the Light
is filling up with
Kindness and Respect
Cuz that's way I
treat all of the
Ladies because they
are all unique and
special in their own
way so let the
light shine upon
me and all the Ladies
who need to be shown
Respect and Kindness
Filling us all with the
Power of the Light
#kindness
#women
#men
#gratitude
#respect
331 reads
10 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2021 8:10am
2nd Apr 2021 8:10am
SOUNDS OF THE FIRST GOOD FRIDAY
Humanity held not its breath
when Jesus was sent to His death.
Many were crying to the sky
that Pilate ought to "CRUCIFY!"
Others called "You save yourself!"
as His feet hung to the cross shelf.
I imagine a noisy day
on morning of first 'Good Friday'
as, serenaded by a crowd
In jeers, at his forced walk, quite loud
bar some women , more sensitive,
who wept for Him, not long to live.
Then finally, his great death cry -
"It is finished!" ("Tetalestai!") -
emanating like explosion,
making the old centurion
say this...
when Jesus was sent to His death.
Many were crying to the sky
that Pilate ought to "CRUCIFY!"
Others called "You save yourself!"
as His feet hung to the cross shelf.
I imagine a noisy day
on morning of first 'Good Friday'
as, serenaded by a crowd
In jeers, at his forced walk, quite loud
bar some women , more sensitive,
who wept for Him, not long to live.
Then finally, his great death cry -
"It is finished!" ("Tetalestai!") -
emanating like explosion,
making the old centurion
say this...
#death
#Christian
#rhyming
263 reads
4 Comments
Sandals
Poem Published
24th Jun 2022 6:50am
24th Jun 2022 6:50am
U Should Be Here.......Gotta Get Back To U
Gotta Get Back To...........U..............
U should be here
But u are not so it's okay
The hurt and the pain
I talk to as without u I lay
Breathe to me I say
During this awet ah day
Even amongst my ah course
Of this mine Awet ah dark night lay
Luv u I do too much
To not talk to this pain
Because here to is the hurt
And u I don't want it to stain
U should be here yeah
U should be here awesome
U be to this heart of mine
But without sweet is gruesome
...
U should be here
But u are not so it's okay
The hurt and the pain
I talk to as without u I lay
Breathe to me I say
During this awet ah day
Even amongst my ah course
Of this mine Awet ah dark night lay
Luv u I do too much
To not talk to this pain
Because here to is the hurt
And u I don't want it to stain
U should be here yeah
U should be here awesome
U be to this heart of mine
But without sweet is gruesome
...
#love
#dark
#evil
#despair
#dirty
53 reads
0 Comments
Rianne
Poem Published
Today 2:09pm
Today 2:09pm
Fair is our language
Elfenland
Alfheimr
Abode
Other king, other kin
all who do not blong
fairy star
Septagram
Burn away, burn away, old sand
blow, blow, threefold
live yourself, for only you can do this
love yourself , for only you can do this
live yourself, for only you can do this
you can do this
other kin
I welcome you in
other kin
all who do not belong
but here
but here
but here
away
seven stones
spirit mound
seven stones
spirit mouth
...
Alfheimr
Abode
Other king, other kin
all who do not blong
fairy star
Septagram
Burn away, burn away, old sand
blow, blow, threefold
live yourself, for only you can do this
love yourself , for only you can do this
live yourself, for only you can do this
you can do this
other kin
I welcome you in
other kin
all who do not belong
but here
but here
but here
away
seven stones
spirit mound
seven stones
spirit mouth
...
#fairies
#magic
#support #healing
#support #healing
22 reads
2 Comments
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