Spiritual Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry which debates religion, atheism and New Age spirituality
Poems written by Top Critiquers
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
28th Jul 2014 12:39pm
28th Jul 2014 12:39pm
Fastball - My Spiritual Awakening through Baseball
I can hit the fastball
But I really want to hit the slider
Same thing in writing verse
The erotic comes easy
but my own core emotions
always leave me wanting more
fom myself
So, no erotic poems this morning
Going back to the basics
My need to write
I hope you will let me in
Even though I have been hard on you
I'm not a bad guy
And I don't spit too much
When I'm at the plate
But I really want to hit the slider
Same thing in writing verse
The erotic comes easy
but my own core emotions
always leave me wanting more
fom myself
So, no erotic poems this morning
Going back to the basics
My need to write
I hope you will let me in
Even though I have been hard on you
I'm not a bad guy
And I don't spit too much
When I'm at the plate
713 reads
6 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
22nd Jul 2022 11:53pm
22nd Jul 2022 11:53pm
1100 Souls
Each note is a heartbeat
Each drum is a soul
Where they will go is a matter of fate
And only Juha will know
And on his time working
It’s a spiritual meditation for the man
The primitive art and craftsmanship
Is a mystical journey for a shaman
By some grand design
The universe guides his hand
Even figure, shape and pattern
Has a transcendental plan
Perhaps this is where some paths will cross
As he makes drums for 1100 souls
Those seeking a connection
That only Juha will know
Each drum is a soul
Where they will go is a matter of fate
And only Juha will know
And on his time working
It’s a spiritual meditation for the man
The primitive art and craftsmanship
Is a mystical journey for a shaman
By some grand design
The universe guides his hand
Even figure, shape and pattern
Has a transcendental plan
Perhaps this is where some paths will cross
As he makes drums for 1100 souls
Those seeking a connection
That only Juha will know
#spiritual
192 reads
4 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
30th Oct 2022 4:34pm
30th Oct 2022 4:34pm
THE SEVEN DAYS OF CREATION
See Genesis Chapters 1 and 2 verses 1-7.
On day one God made day light
And the darkness He called "night".
On the second day He made the sky
Parting sea from rain clouds with space dry.
The first plants grew on day three,
When He raised dry land from the sea.
The moon, stars and sun He made on day four
To light skies above, behind and before.
Birds, water beasts, came alive
By His hand on day five.
Land animals, then man, He made on the sixth day,
Completing earth and heavens in their vast array.
Seeing all...
On day one God made day light
And the darkness He called "night".
On the second day He made the sky
Parting sea from rain clouds with space dry.
The first plants grew on day three,
When He raised dry land from the sea.
The moon, stars and sun He made on day four
To light skies above, behind and before.
Birds, water beasts, came alive
By His hand on day five.
Land animals, then man, He made on the sixth day,
Completing earth and heavens in their vast array.
Seeing all...
#nature
#God
#spiritual #rhyming
#spiritual #rhyming
101 reads
5 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
16th Sep 2021 2:16pm
16th Sep 2021 2:16pm
reverie
in the dawning hours I am silent
solemnly beholding beauty
gentle quiet embraces my soul
as first blush kisses the horizon
I find myself in sync with nature
the dew kisses the grass
and the trees change guard
in the flower beds the buds start to open
and the sun warms their faces
I walk in the garden every day amazed by it's grander
delicate epiphany everything so perfectly formed
with the mind of a true artist
the birds take to the winds
and song fills the air
I become one with my mother Earth
...
solemnly beholding beauty
gentle quiet embraces my soul
as first blush kisses the horizon
I find myself in sync with nature
the dew kisses the grass
and the trees change guard
in the flower beds the buds start to open
and the sun warms their faces
I walk in the garden every day amazed by it's grander
delicate epiphany everything so perfectly formed
with the mind of a true artist
the birds take to the winds
and song fills the air
I become one with my mother Earth
...
#love
#nature
#spiritual
299 reads
6 Comments
Adelphina
Poem Published
27th Jun 2022 00:19am
27th Jun 2022 00:19am
White Buffalo
Roaming on a white cloud
No matter time of year
In the blistering sun
Or frozen sleet and snow
A spiritual sacred creature to call upon
That grazes on illness and ailment
Replaces uncertainty with tenacity
Bestowing bravery for your next step
To stampede into a war cry
Towards the cliff of cancer
Challenging it with strength
Mustered prayer and faith
To take the courageous leap
To be graced with hope
And a herd of
White Buffalo
No matter time of year
In the blistering sun
Or frozen sleet and snow
A spiritual sacred creature to call upon
That grazes on illness and ailment
Replaces uncertainty with tenacity
Bestowing bravery for your next step
To stampede into a war cry
Towards the cliff of cancer
Challenging it with strength
Mustered prayer and faith
To take the courageous leap
To be graced with hope
And a herd of
White Buffalo
#strength
#hope
#courage
287 reads
Phantom2426
Poem Published
10th Apr 2021 5:27am
10th Apr 2021 5:27am
Power of Light
Power of the Light
is filling up with
Kindness and Respect
Cuz that's way I
treat all of the
Ladies because they
are all unique and
special in their own
way so let the
light shine upon
me and all the Ladies
who need to be shown
Respect and Kindness
Filling us all with the
Power of the Light
is filling up with
Kindness and Respect
Cuz that's way I
treat all of the
Ladies because they
are all unique and
special in their own
way so let the
light shine upon
me and all the Ladies
who need to be shown
Respect and Kindness
Filling us all with the
Power of the Light
#kindness
#women
#men
#gratitude
#respect
391 reads
10 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2022 6:07pm
2nd Dec 2022 6:07pm
Mmm.. I Love You Man..
Mmm.. I love you man...
To the emollient of your scent to the aura from which you stand
Is the canal of my womb my brother’s keeper
The intellectual placenta to give him his philosophical ingenuity
A soft voice of perceptions when in his primitive state of mind
Are his ears entrenched to the outcries of society’s deprivation of mistrust
The faint echoes of ancient times carousels through the lineage of his marrow
Does he not comprehend he commands fate by his whispers to the winds
Until his hand like a staff and rod they will always...
To the emollient of your scent to the aura from which you stand
Is the canal of my womb my brother’s keeper
The intellectual placenta to give him his philosophical ingenuity
A soft voice of perceptions when in his primitive state of mind
Are his ears entrenched to the outcries of society’s deprivation of mistrust
The faint echoes of ancient times carousels through the lineage of his marrow
Does he not comprehend he commands fate by his whispers to the winds
Until his hand like a staff and rod they will always...
#spiritual
#lover
#passion
98 reads
8 Comments
Em-ily
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2022 8:12pm
23rd Nov 2022 8:12pm
Pause and effect
Pause and effect
3:25
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A deepundergroundpoetry.com
3 目 2
1
Menu
How It Started
#religion
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My Drafts (called me)
Hey
Hey
Hey
Hey
#LifeChangingMoment
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Hey...
3:25
.5G
A deepundergroundpoetry.com
3 目 2
1
Menu
How It Started
#religion
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My Drafts (called me)
Hey
Hey
Hey
Hey
#LifeChangingMoment
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Hey...
#love
42 reads
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
18th Dec 2021 11:14pm
18th Dec 2021 11:14pm
A Sign
I'm on my knees praying for the last time
I only pray that I can do it with a clear heart and mind
To beg forgiveness for all that I've ever done
I'm faced with a time I thought would never come
On my way to my Father's house for the first time
And I hope that I won't be seeing my lord for the last time
But how can I beg to enter his house
When the words of my deeds start to come out
Begging forgiveness for the times I didn't ask
Even though I was taught better, I performed Satan's task
For the times that you knew that I...
I only pray that I can do it with a clear heart and mind
To beg forgiveness for all that I've ever done
I'm faced with a time I thought would never come
On my way to my Father's house for the first time
And I hope that I won't be seeing my lord for the last time
But how can I beg to enter his house
When the words of my deeds start to come out
Begging forgiveness for the times I didn't ask
Even though I was taught better, I performed Satan's task
For the times that you knew that I...
#religion
#spiritual
446 reads
9 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
10th Jul 2021 11:33am
10th Jul 2021 11:33am
Quantum Leap
The meditation modulates
& creates
What a thought-form
postulates
Be it
dark or light
As the electron orbits
out of sight
working wonders
as a thought-form ponders
The medium
&
The method
By which the performance
will commence
by which
the frequency will switch
And the electron
will take on
a quantum
Leap
into the
Unknown
& creates
What a thought-form
postulates
Be it
dark or light
As the electron orbits
out of sight
working wonders
as a thought-form ponders
The medium
&
The method
By which the performance
will commence
by which
the frequency will switch
And the electron
will take on
a quantum
Leap
into the
Unknown
#rebirth
#spiritual
#philosophical
308 reads
8 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
4th Apr 2021 11:35pm
4th Apr 2021 11:35pm
In the silence of the grave
In the silence of the grave
The Resurrection of Our Lord
Jesus won the victory!
He conquered sin, hell and the grave
He conquered all for you and me!
Oh what wonderous love un-matchless
That our Savior humbly died
There upon the cruel Golgotha
He was willingly crucified
For three days, His body lay
In the silence of the grave
But on the Third day He arose
Triumphant over every foe!
Oh victorious deed un-matchless
When our Savior did arise
He is the Life and Resurrection
Our High Priest...
The Resurrection of Our Lord
Jesus won the victory!
He conquered sin, hell and the grave
He conquered all for you and me!
Oh what wonderous love un-matchless
That our Savior humbly died
There upon the cruel Golgotha
He was willingly crucified
For three days, His body lay
In the silence of the grave
But on the Third day He arose
Triumphant over every foe!
Oh victorious deed un-matchless
When our Savior did arise
He is the Life and Resurrection
Our High Priest...
#LifeChangingMoment
344 reads
7 Comments
robert43041
Viking
Viking
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2022 2:25pm
23rd Nov 2022 2:25pm
Where is your God?
Where is your God
Who allows so much pain and misery
In this, yes, very miserable world He (or She) created?
Who allows so much pain and misery
In this, yes, very miserable world He (or She) created?
#religion
#Christian
#Buddhist
#Taoism
#Hindu
36 reads
3 Comments
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