Spiritual Poems by Top Critiquers
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Poetry which debates religion, atheism and New Age spirituality
Poems written by Top Critiquers
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
28th Jul 2014 12:39pm
28th Jul 2014 12:39pm
Fastball - My Spiritual Awakening through Baseball
I can hit the fastball
But I really want to hit the slider
Same thing in writing verse
The erotic comes easy
but my own core emotions
always leave me wanting more
fom myself
So, no erotic poems this morning
Going back to the basics
My need to write
I hope you will let me in
Even though I have been hard on you
I'm not a bad guy
And I don't spit too much
When I'm at the plate
But I really want to hit the slider
Same thing in writing verse
The erotic comes easy
but my own core emotions
always leave me wanting more
fom myself
So, no erotic poems this morning
Going back to the basics
My need to write
I hope you will let me in
Even though I have been hard on you
I'm not a bad guy
And I don't spit too much
When I'm at the plate
563 reads
6 Comments
robert43041
Viking
Viking
Poem Published
14th Nov 2021 00:44am
14th Nov 2021 00:44am
Karma (@@)
Karma does not know
The laws of physics,
That of action which begets
Full reaction
A sort of spiritual concept
Which, like or not,
Roams over your head
Your life long.
For good actions and bad
You will feel the reactions
Bad ones, a nasty feeling in the guts
A good one, a tap on the shoulder
From an angel.
Karma does not exist
But is it very real.
The laws of physics,
That of action which begets
Full reaction
A sort of spiritual concept
Which, like or not,
Roams over your head
Your life long.
For good actions and bad
You will feel the reactions
Bad ones, a nasty feeling in the guts
A good one, a tap on the shoulder
From an angel.
Karma does not exist
But is it very real.
#philosophical
46 reads
4 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
25th Nov 2021 6:22am
25th Nov 2021 6:22am
Thy Kingdom Come...
I’ve gotten multiple inquiries asking me in regards to why I write about Angels
If I close my eyes, I can picture the reminisce of Hell and Heaven, as if I was there among the three Kings journeying, awaiting to see a false illusion in a manger
Ancient times is so misunderstood, everyone claiming to be some Demigod or the encircled one in grandeur rites of the five rings of witchhood
Exemplifying to be the best, casting first stones, promising in vanity to be the chosen one, no, it is only an assertion which wallows when the mind is mentally unfit, resurrected as a...
If I close my eyes, I can picture the reminisce of Hell and Heaven, as if I was there among the three Kings journeying, awaiting to see a false illusion in a manger
Ancient times is so misunderstood, everyone claiming to be some Demigod or the encircled one in grandeur rites of the five rings of witchhood
Exemplifying to be the best, casting first stones, promising in vanity to be the chosen one, no, it is only an assertion which wallows when the mind is mentally unfit, resurrected as a...
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#myself
#philosophical
#morality
75 reads
12 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
10th Apr 2021 5:27am
10th Apr 2021 5:27am
Power of Light
Power of the Light
is filling up with
Kindness and Respect
Cuz that's way I
treat all of the
Ladies because they
are all unique and
special in their own
way so let the
light shine upon
me and all the Ladies
who need to be shown
Respect and Kindness
Filling us all with the
Power of the Light
is filling up with
Kindness and Respect
Cuz that's way I
treat all of the
Ladies because they
are all unique and
special in their own
way so let the
light shine upon
me and all the Ladies
who need to be shown
Respect and Kindness
Filling us all with the
Power of the Light
#kindness
#women
#men
#gratitude
#respect
174 reads
10 Comments
WilliamEdwardNight
Poem Published
14th Nov 2021 3:47pm
14th Nov 2021 3:47pm
A Measure Of Impendance
A Measure Of Impendance
A measure of impendance
Inquiry collection
E=mc2
Energy over time
A measure of impendance
If a persons iq is opposed
Inquiry collection
To add something to your iq
A measure of impendance
Inquiry collection
E=mc2
Energy over time
A measure of impendance
If a persons iq is opposed
Inquiry collection
To add something to your iq
#love
38 reads
4 Comments
Adelphina
Poem Published
1st Dec 2021 1:20am
1st Dec 2021 1:20am
Death Wish Kiss
Born from the rib of my brother
Didn't ask to be the starter sister
Looking over my shoulder
Lost eyes searching for my mother
Guess it wasn't meant to be
Long past time to be set free
So I headed toward the Knowledge Tree
The slithering snake was irrelevant
Didn't feel right being a servant
Needing to make my own mistakes
In the form of a shiny ruby red apple
Juicy and plump ready for the pluck
My sharp teeth wished me luck
As I took my first bite of rebellion
And...
Didn't ask to be the starter sister
Looking over my shoulder
Lost eyes searching for my mother
Guess it wasn't meant to be
Long past time to be set free
So I headed toward the Knowledge Tree
The slithering snake was irrelevant
Didn't feel right being a servant
Needing to make my own mistakes
In the form of a shiny ruby red apple
Juicy and plump ready for the pluck
My sharp teeth wished me luck
As I took my first bite of rebellion
And...
#women
#God
#morality
64 reads
16 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
20th May 2021 4:44am
20th May 2021 4:44am
Saying Goodbye
It’s never easy
A flood of memories rush
Images of smiles
The recollection of your laughter
Blanketed with warmth
Today filled in sadness
We paid our respects
We said our farewells
With sincere and kindhearted thank you’s
For everything you did
And for the loving person you were
My heart went out to your family
Especially to your little girls
I teared up when my boys
Placed sunflowers on your casket
Watching the other children
All those you cared for
Now grown
Saying their goodbyes
A flood of memories rush
Images of smiles
The recollection of your laughter
Blanketed with warmth
Today filled in sadness
We paid our respects
We said our farewells
With sincere and kindhearted thank you’s
For everything you did
And for the loving person you were
My heart went out to your family
Especially to your little girls
I teared up when my boys
Placed sunflowers on your casket
Watching the other children
All those you cared for
Now grown
Saying their goodbyes
#children
#family
#friendship
#death
#pandemic
126 reads
12 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
16th Sep 2021 2:16pm
16th Sep 2021 2:16pm
reverie
in the dawning hours I am silent
solemnly beholding beauty
gentle quiet embraces my soul
as first blush kisses the horizon
I find myself in sync with nature
the dew kisses the grass
and the trees change guard
in the flower beds the buds start to open
and the sun warms their faces
I walk in the garden every day amazed by it's grander
delicate epiphany everything so perfectly formed
with the mind of a true artist
the birds take to the winds
and song fills the air
I become one with my mother Earth
...
solemnly beholding beauty
gentle quiet embraces my soul
as first blush kisses the horizon
I find myself in sync with nature
the dew kisses the grass
and the trees change guard
in the flower beds the buds start to open
and the sun warms their faces
I walk in the garden every day amazed by it's grander
delicate epiphany everything so perfectly formed
with the mind of a true artist
the birds take to the winds
and song fills the air
I become one with my mother Earth
...
#love
#nature
#spiritual
68 reads
6 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2021 8:10am
2nd Apr 2021 8:10am
SOUNDS OF THE FIRST GOOD FRIDAY
Humanity held not its breath
when Jesus was sent to His death.
Many were crying to the sky
that Pilate ought to "CRUCIFY!"
Others called "You save yourself!"
as His feet hung to the cross shelf.
I imagine a noisy day
on morning of first 'Good Friday'
as, serenaded by a crowd
In jeers, at his forced walk, quite loud
bar some women , more sensitive,
who wept for Him, not long to live.
Then finally, his great death cry -
"It is finished!" ("Tetalestai!") -
emanating like explosion,
making the old centurion
say this...
when Jesus was sent to His death.
Many were crying to the sky
that Pilate ought to "CRUCIFY!"
Others called "You save yourself!"
as His feet hung to the cross shelf.
I imagine a noisy day
on morning of first 'Good Friday'
as, serenaded by a crowd
In jeers, at his forced walk, quite loud
bar some women , more sensitive,
who wept for Him, not long to live.
Then finally, his great death cry -
"It is finished!" ("Tetalestai!") -
emanating like explosion,
making the old centurion
say this...
#death
#Christian
#rhyming
128 reads
4 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
4th Apr 2021 11:35pm
4th Apr 2021 11:35pm
In the silence of the grave
In the silence of the grave
The Resurrection of Our Lord
Jesus won the victory!
He conquered sin, hell and the grave
He conquered all for you and me!
Oh what wonderous love un-matchless
That our Savior humbly died
There upon the cruel Golgotha
He was willingly crucified
For three days, His body lay
In the silence of the grave
But on the Third day He arose
Triumphant over every foe!
Oh victorious deed un-matchless
When our Savior did arise
He is the Life and Resurrection
Our High Priest...
The Resurrection of Our Lord
Jesus won the victory!
He conquered sin, hell and the grave
He conquered all for you and me!
Oh what wonderous love un-matchless
That our Savior humbly died
There upon the cruel Golgotha
He was willingly crucified
For three days, His body lay
In the silence of the grave
But on the Third day He arose
Triumphant over every foe!
Oh victorious deed un-matchless
When our Savior did arise
He is the Life and Resurrection
Our High Priest...
#LifeChangingMoment
169 reads
7 Comments
JusTim_
Poem Published
7th Nov 2019 1:45am
7th Nov 2019 1:45am
Purest Of Scent
Bathe me then bring me home
to that inner sanctum,
rigid and strong,
where Bast is known to rest
in the purest of scents
of woman,
protecting sanctity
and the serenity
of a world gone by
hold me where amulets cast
and hands caress each night
bless me with your dance of life
slowly removing the seven veils
birthed in prodigious fertility
anoint the new and the old
let sunrise burn off the haze
where the bluest of blues have laid
lick the wounds of past
allow this light to...
to that inner sanctum,
rigid and strong,
where Bast is known to rest
in the purest of scents
of woman,
protecting sanctity
and the serenity
of a world gone by
hold me where amulets cast
and hands caress each night
bless me with your dance of life
slowly removing the seven veils
birthed in prodigious fertility
anoint the new and the old
let sunrise burn off the haze
where the bluest of blues have laid
lick the wounds of past
allow this light to...
#love
#kindness
321 reads
3 Comments
Baldwin
Poem Published
27th Aug 2021 5:19pm
27th Aug 2021 5:19pm
Giotto's Angel
I watched you take it in,
this ceilinged fresco
of the soaring angel with kohl eyes
and wind chaffed cheek.
I watched then how a broadened smile
so sly, began to trace itself upon your lips
just as I hoped it would,
when you were overcome
within a feathered sigh
by all the heavened sight of him,
and how you soft began to raise your hand
unconsciously
towards his outstretched arm
as if it might be possible
to touch the blessing,
his white fingers offered you;
Oh, how your gaze,
drawn to...
this ceilinged fresco
of the soaring angel with kohl eyes
and wind chaffed cheek.
I watched then how a broadened smile
so sly, began to trace itself upon your lips
just as I hoped it would,
when you were overcome
within a feathered sigh
by all the heavened sight of him,
and how you soft began to raise your hand
unconsciously
towards his outstretched arm
as if it might be possible
to touch the blessing,
his white fingers offered you;
Oh, how your gaze,
drawn to...
#heaven
104 reads
5 Comments
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