Spiritual Poems by Top Critiquers
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Poetry which debates religion, atheism and New Age spirituality
Poems written by Top Critiquers
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
12th Jun 2024 6:32am
12th Jun 2024 6:32am
Carry Me Back Home
Memories fade like seasons
Slowly losing them all
Holding on for the right reasons
Waiting to receive the call
Spent way too many years
Chasing down every ghost
Struggling against my fears
Wondering who I’ll miss most
Life is difficult to survive
Crawling towards the light
When the show goes live
Under the cover of night
In the midst of great strife
The beast will fall like Rome
Dear lord who gave me life
Please carry me back home
Slowly losing them all
Holding on for the right reasons
Waiting to receive the call
Spent way too many years
Chasing down every ghost
Struggling against my fears
Wondering who I’ll miss most
Life is difficult to survive
Crawling towards the light
When the show goes live
Under the cover of night
In the midst of great strife
The beast will fall like Rome
Dear lord who gave me life
Please carry me back home
#faith
113 reads
9 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Sep 2024 7:23pm
13th Sep 2024 7:23pm
The Last Upper
Jesus had a huge supper, with large amounts of uppers
Cocaine, amphetamines & methamphetamine
The aliens from our future planet came to visit him on this special day
They offered him food, drink & loads of drugs
Most disciples were upset with this and walked out
A few stayed for the debauchery
There were also punks, metal heads, hip artists and free thinkers at this gathering
Such unity, democracy, in one social gathering
The image I included here is the original Leonardo da Vinci painting that showcased what was really happening during...
Cocaine, amphetamines & methamphetamine
The aliens from our future planet came to visit him on this special day
They offered him food, drink & loads of drugs
Most disciples were upset with this and walked out
A few stayed for the debauchery
There were also punks, metal heads, hip artists and free thinkers at this gathering
Such unity, democracy, in one social gathering
The image I included here is the original Leonardo da Vinci painting that showcased what was really happening during...
#aliens
#God
#nonfiction
#scifi
#TruthOfLife
83 reads
11 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2024 4:38pm
3rd Oct 2024 4:38pm
Sacred Dust
In moonlight’s glow
and shadows grey
wafting incense
and cleansing sage
a coarsen circle of salt
seals shut the gate
A potion of spells
begins to take hold
a Life-force of energy
emanating Love
Transcendental planets
begin to align—
Uranus, Neptune
and Pluto by design
The binds of ancient portals
release their sacred lock
Spirits of our Ancestors
beyond the veil come forth
Incandescent bodies of light
illuminate the hour
Ashes of Earth begin to rise ...
and shadows grey
wafting incense
and cleansing sage
a coarsen circle of salt
seals shut the gate
A potion of spells
begins to take hold
a Life-force of energy
emanating Love
Transcendental planets
begin to align—
Uranus, Neptune
and Pluto by design
The binds of ancient portals
release their sacred lock
Spirits of our Ancestors
beyond the veil come forth
Incandescent bodies of light
illuminate the hour
Ashes of Earth begin to rise ...
#magic
#pagan
#witches
77 reads
10 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
8th Oct 2016 6:36pm
8th Oct 2016 6:36pm
I. Ishvara
my beloved one
will you carry me
help me surrender
to this life's destiny
what is this existence
is it simply a daydream
the phantasy of a seraph
the shadow of the rainbow
the inkling and the twinkling
in the blink of an all seeing eye
will you remain a mysterious why
reveal yourself and lead me, please
retrace the course back to its source
to end in innocence and divine peace
help me remember the beauty of life
help me surrender to the unknown
guide me to the garden of eden
where your...
will you carry me
help me surrender
to this life's destiny
what is this existence
is it simply a daydream
the phantasy of a seraph
the shadow of the rainbow
the inkling and the twinkling
in the blink of an all seeing eye
will you remain a mysterious why
reveal yourself and lead me, please
retrace the course back to its source
to end in innocence and divine peace
help me remember the beauty of life
help me surrender to the unknown
guide me to the garden of eden
where your...
795 reads
40 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Sep 2024 00:05am
5th Sep 2024 00:05am
FREQUENCY OF HEALING
It's me again the story teller of words ✍️ I want to take a deep break, moment of your time, ⌚ to dig deeper than deep, into the deepness of your own thoughts. Have you ever felt like that the world is fighting against you, and you can't understand for the life of you WHY. When you lose your own chain of thoughts and insight, into this senseless mindless game trap fighting between the walls of steel and stones. Do you know what it is to possess knowledge and wisdom, do you know your power of your own frequency of healing 🤔 For when you are going through some...
#evolution
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#universe
89 reads
14 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
21st Apr 2021 2:33pm
21st Apr 2021 2:33pm
WHY I WORSHIP YOU
To me worship includes
adoration, honor, reverence,
awe, valuing, above all else,
declaration of worth and
love beyond the highest meaning.
Why do I worship YOU?
It's not because of your beauty
because you are breathtaking.
It's not because of your intellect
and membership in Mensa.
Why do I worship YOU?
It's not because of your passion
that is off the scale.
It's not because of your sense
of humor which is amazing.
Why do I worship YOU?
It's not because of your wealth
which is in seven figures.
Why do I...
adoration, honor, reverence,
awe, valuing, above all else,
declaration of worth and
love beyond the highest meaning.
Why do I worship YOU?
It's not because of your beauty
because you are breathtaking.
It's not because of your intellect
and membership in Mensa.
Why do I worship YOU?
It's not because of your passion
that is off the scale.
It's not because of your sense
of humor which is amazing.
Why do I worship YOU?
It's not because of your wealth
which is in seven figures.
Why do I...
#happiness
#inspirational
#gratitude
#admiration
#emotions
562 reads
8 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
28th Jul 2014 12:39pm
28th Jul 2014 12:39pm
Fastball - My Spiritual Awakening through Baseball
I can hit the fastball
But I really want to hit the slider
Same thing in writing verse
The erotic comes easy
but my own core emotions
always leave me wanting more
fom myself
So, no erotic poems this morning
Going back to the basics
My need to write
I hope you will let me in
Even though I have been hard on you
I'm not a bad guy
And I don't spit too much
When I'm at the plate
But I really want to hit the slider
Same thing in writing verse
The erotic comes easy
but my own core emotions
always leave me wanting more
fom myself
So, no erotic poems this morning
Going back to the basics
My need to write
I hope you will let me in
Even though I have been hard on you
I'm not a bad guy
And I don't spit too much
When I'm at the plate
940 reads
6 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
25th Mar 2023 7:55am
25th Mar 2023 7:55am
IF I WAS ADAM.....
#spiritual
#rhyming
#sensual
267 reads
4 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2024 2:11pm
2nd Oct 2024 2:11pm
Adjusting The Dial (collab with adagio)
The gossipers of the clouds
rain down dark's cacophony
Leaving me alone; covered in agony
neath the veil of twilight's shroud
Adjusting the dial to a new sound.
Listening to narcissistic gossipers pound
cued in amongst the symphony.
Agnostics and mannequins confound
as indecent as they are proud
Like a two-toed sloth of the epiphany
Inside the mockery of their frown
wound among the gossipers in infamy
A loneliness intensified by the clouds
buried in a salinity of dark infinity
A promise to search...
rain down dark's cacophony
Leaving me alone; covered in agony
neath the veil of twilight's shroud
Adjusting the dial to a new sound.
Listening to narcissistic gossipers pound
cued in amongst the symphony.
Agnostics and mannequins confound
as indecent as they are proud
Like a two-toed sloth of the epiphany
Inside the mockery of their frown
wound among the gossipers in infamy
A loneliness intensified by the clouds
buried in a salinity of dark infinity
A promise to search...
#freedom
#God
#spiritual
67 reads
7 Comments
InDreamz
Poem Published
16th Sep 2024 11:02pm
16th Sep 2024 11:02pm
The third eye
The moon - a pearly bindi
with its mystical aura,
sits between the invisible eyes
of the skies;
It's the third eye
which opens a portal
to the soul of the heavens
connecting to the divine...
with its mystical aura,
sits between the invisible eyes
of the skies;
It's the third eye
which opens a portal
to the soul of the heavens
connecting to the divine...
#moon
#sky
#spiritual
148 reads
19 Comments
Adelphina
Poem Published
15th Jan 2024 00:12am
15th Jan 2024 00:12am
Era of Angels
Resurrecting the lost
Era of Angels
Playing god with
Grey veined rock
And maybe we
Make them better
If only to catch one
Via vision & stone
Sculpting their story
With gilded wing letters
Writing with chisels
Carving life into feathers
Faith filled hands
Creating angels
Reminding humanity
Of a time when legions flew
Embracing this world
With heavens design
Reminding humanity
To sculpt & find
Miracles
Era of Angels
Playing god with
Grey veined rock
And maybe we
Make them better
If only to catch one
Via vision & stone
Sculpting their story
With gilded wing letters
Writing with chisels
Carving life into feathers
Faith filled hands
Creating angels
Reminding humanity
Of a time when legions flew
Embracing this world
With heavens design
Reminding humanity
To sculpt & find
Miracles
#angels
#art
431 reads
25 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
8th Sep 2024 3:37am
8th Sep 2024 3:37am
Sedated In The Afterthought Of Reminisce
Calling out his name, his tongue sinking deeper, my creamy abyss getting moisten
My thighs arresting the sides of his face, my pelvis softly meeting his mouth
Squeezing my breasts, licking over a nipple to comfort the sweet pleasure of paradise
Laying here with him, opening me wide as he eagerly takes of me
Mm... moaning out his name
My body reaching that climatic zenith of no return, back bending over and over again
His impatient palms cupping my buttocks, my fine pussy hairs kissing his succulent lips
Veiling the...
My thighs arresting the sides of his face, my pelvis softly meeting his mouth
Squeezing my breasts, licking over a nipple to comfort the sweet pleasure of paradise
Laying here with him, opening me wide as he eagerly takes of me
Mm... moaning out his name
My body reaching that climatic zenith of no return, back bending over and over again
His impatient palms cupping my buttocks, my fine pussy hairs kissing his succulent lips
Veiling the...
#lover
#passion
#seductive #sensual
#seductive #sensual
262 reads
4 Comments
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