Spiritual Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry which debates religion, atheism and New Age spirituality
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Ahavati
Poem Published
14th Sep 2019 10:35pm
14th Sep 2019 10:35pm
absence of logic and presence of pain
( after Rupi Kaur )
#spiritual
#meditation
#philosophical
#wisdom
#RupiKaur
203 reads
13 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
Today 2:28pm
Today 2:28pm
UNSPOKEN WORDS
WHEN I SEE YOU"...Here I lay as the sun touches my skin, I rise and open my eyes to see another day of my life. For when I see you, I see life as I'm given life by you, my God, for its because of you, God, that I can dream under the skies and stars. For when I see you, I know it is going to be alright, for you got my back even when I fall down.
...
...
#faith
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
8 reads
0 Comments
Tallen
earth_empath
earth_empath
Poem Published
12th Sep 2019 11:39pm
12th Sep 2019 11:39pm
elysian impinging
In the sultry skin-hot evening
Selene rose in Her fullness
& Glory beaming
over the desert beach
where the arid sea bore
no wet
Textile worshippers clothed
among us Pagan Witches --
they transgress with sweat
covered thatch & tissue
tumbling over one another
with the grace of a tavern
sop
We will not allow these
Interlopers to spoil our fun
our ritual to our Goddess
No, they will not topple
over our rites
No trampling upon tenets
Selene’s shine and magick
Is near...
Selene rose in Her fullness
& Glory beaming
over the desert beach
where the arid sea bore
no wet
Textile worshippers clothed
among us Pagan Witches --
they transgress with sweat
covered thatch & tissue
tumbling over one another
with the grace of a tavern
sop
We will not allow these
Interlopers to spoil our fun
our ritual to our Goddess
No, they will not topple
over our rites
No trampling upon tenets
Selene’s shine and magick
Is near...
#moon
#night
#pagan
#magic
#witches
128 reads
25 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
12th May 2019 9:27pm
12th May 2019 9:27pm
Rebuking Hell
Poem Inspired By The Show Lucifer
Death of a spirit as you know earthly roam
Looking for comfort, oh thy wicked heart of stone
Condemned and sentenced from a Birthright Bankrupt
Consequences you have suffered from the revolt of being Satan’s slut
His following Angel’s intentions, to grasp fame, and lust
Archangel Michael and his league of Angels fought with such passion under God’s ordinance, the war in Heaven was a must
No more bowing to the Heavens, as you’ve stated, for a Mistaken Angel, no more, In God for you I trust
Yes, you have...
Death of a spirit as you know earthly roam
Looking for comfort, oh thy wicked heart of stone
Condemned and sentenced from a Birthright Bankrupt
Consequences you have suffered from the revolt of being Satan’s slut
His following Angel’s intentions, to grasp fame, and lust
Archangel Michael and his league of Angels fought with such passion under God’s ordinance, the war in Heaven was a must
No more bowing to the Heavens, as you’ve stated, for a Mistaken Angel, no more, In God for you I trust
Yes, you have...
#God
#devil
#morality
165 reads
12 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
23rd May 2018 1:41am
23rd May 2018 1:41am
proof
God does
not
respond
to
empirical
data
(c) 2018 R.R. Zinn
not
respond
to
empirical
data
(c) 2018 R.R. Zinn
#spiritual
164 reads
4 Comments
PandoraUnleashed
Poem Published
13th Mar 2019 10:19pm
13th Mar 2019 10:19pm
He Is In My Story
Epiphanies & intuitive reflections; silently, has He whispered to me
So sacred & dear; His penalties were never to free me from travesty
Equipped with my every downfall & gift; from His draft, was I built
Life isn't a reverie in which I have any authority to write my script
I was born a child into a life where all to ever be, was broken
Ornaments of pain; I carry - a better soul though, they've woven
An angel often unworthy of His graces; cling ever so to sweet sin
A moth to it's flame - as I crash; His light ignites within ...
So sacred & dear; His penalties were never to free me from travesty
Equipped with my every downfall & gift; from His draft, was I built
Life isn't a reverie in which I have any authority to write my script
I was born a child into a life where all to ever be, was broken
Ornaments of pain; I carry - a better soul though, they've woven
An angel often unworthy of His graces; cling ever so to sweet sin
A moth to it's flame - as I crash; His light ignites within ...
#hope
#God
#spiritual
#tragedy
#suffering
297 reads
23 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
30th Jul 2019 5:44am
30th Jul 2019 5:44am
Offering
Laid bare before you
I surrender my sword and shield
Prostrate and humbled
I offer you my insecurity
It’s my most trusted trait
I beseech you to accept it gently
From this alter of prayer
I am servant to it no more
Wash away these abject hurts
I envelop your embrace
With your assistance
I will amble toward forgiveness
Accompanied by this gift
I can finally rest
I surrender my sword and shield
Prostrate and humbled
I offer you my insecurity
It’s my most trusted trait
I beseech you to accept it gently
From this alter of prayer
I am servant to it no more
Wash away these abject hurts
I envelop your embrace
With your assistance
I will amble toward forgiveness
Accompanied by this gift
I can finally rest
#redemption
83 reads
5 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
14th Aug 2019 4:39pm
14th Aug 2019 4:39pm
Revelations
come wicked harbinger
oh death where art thou?
picking through the bones of slaughter
I witness you on the horizon
sifting through the ashes of nothingness
yesterdays failed to satisfy
tomorrow will find your arms empty
I will raid your house
steal what you thought was stored...empty hell
what shall you drink--
when I've freed the slaves of iniquity?
incubus over sin
succubus of pain
slurping off the emotions of man
I will empty your coffers
you won't eat from my table ...
oh death where art thou?
picking through the bones of slaughter
I witness you on the horizon
sifting through the ashes of nothingness
yesterdays failed to satisfy
tomorrow will find your arms empty
I will raid your house
steal what you thought was stored...empty hell
what shall you drink--
when I've freed the slaves of iniquity?
incubus over sin
succubus of pain
slurping off the emotions of man
I will empty your coffers
you won't eat from my table ...
#corruption
#politics
#angels
#aliens
#HumanRights
105 reads
12 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
13th Sep 2019 2:45pm
13th Sep 2019 2:45pm
Another Phase of Life
Time and space move so differently here,
The agony and pain have subsided,
Actually my brain understands that fear
Is an illusion the living provided.
There’s no light at the end of this tunnel,
The darkness covers everything around,
There’s nothing here to make me stumble,
Just an echo that makes a faint sound.
But it’s the grief of those that are still living,
Trying to deal with departure and sorrow,
As my body withers I’m shifting,
Knowing for me there is no tomorrow.
I’ve been here before but I can’t remember,
My memories...
The agony and pain have subsided,
Actually my brain understands that fear
Is an illusion the living provided.
There’s no light at the end of this tunnel,
The darkness covers everything around,
There’s nothing here to make me stumble,
Just an echo that makes a faint sound.
But it’s the grief of those that are still living,
Trying to deal with departure and sorrow,
As my body withers I’m shifting,
Knowing for me there is no tomorrow.
I’ve been here before but I can’t remember,
My memories...
#grief
#death
#spiritual
44 reads
4 Comments
DanielChristensen
Poem Published
17th Mar 2018 5:23pm
17th Mar 2018 5:23pm
Untitled pointing to nothing
Standing alone in the surf. Again. Sky is bruised by the endless battle. Changing. Apophis retreats. Nothing. Ra’s spear triumphs. Again.
Silence reigns over all. Rushing. Waters upon waters. Hissing. I bleed. Roaring. I remember. Hushed. I forget. Retreating. Everything.
Everything is music. Raindrops fall.
Make a fist. Tensing. Muscles answer. Growing. Stand out in a circular mound upon my arm. Rising. Veins protrude. Nothing. Forks in rivers of green, beneath translucent shadows of skin. Nothing. Rising like the dawn at my wrist.
Open my...
Silence reigns over all. Rushing. Waters upon waters. Hissing. I bleed. Roaring. I remember. Hushed. I forget. Retreating. Everything.
Everything is music. Raindrops fall.
Make a fist. Tensing. Muscles answer. Growing. Stand out in a circular mound upon my arm. Rising. Veins protrude. Nothing. Forks in rivers of green, beneath translucent shadows of skin. Nothing. Rising like the dawn at my wrist.
Open my...
#morning
316 reads
11 Comments
Tenderloin
Poem Published
7th Apr 2019 2:15am
7th Apr 2019 2:15am
Judging The Minutes
The silence of the room
calls for a moan
to escape
the buried resentments
to free the cycle
of worthless feelings
and no direction
Guilty of rest,
which you clearly need
the best bet
is to get on your knees
and find a suitable spirit
to hold you as a friend
and summon
the unspoken love
that is your right
calls for a moan
to escape
the buried resentments
to free the cycle
of worthless feelings
and no direction
Guilty of rest,
which you clearly need
the best bet
is to get on your knees
and find a suitable spirit
to hold you as a friend
and summon
the unspoken love
that is your right
#anxiety
#loneliness
#faith
105 reads
9 Comments
badmalthus
Harry Rout
Harry Rout
Poem Published
23rd May 2019 00:47am
23rd May 2019 00:47am
Chaos & Confusion
the universe
knows nothing
of love
and hate
kindness
nor cruelty
and treats
all things
as part
of the whole
the wise
understand
the reality
of nature
and live
beyond
good and evil
there is birth
and death
along the way
and the wise
find balance
and harmony
in the midst
of chaos
and
confusion
knows nothing
of love
and hate
kindness
nor cruelty
and treats
all things
as part
of the whole
the wise
understand
the reality
of nature
and live
beyond
good and evil
there is birth
and death
along the way
and the wise
find balance
and harmony
in the midst
of chaos
and
confusion
#nature
#Taoism
170 reads
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