Spiritual Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry which debates religion, atheism and New Age spirituality
Poems written by Top Critiquers
FeNyX
Poem Published
21st Mar 2019 12:45pm
21st Mar 2019 12:45pm
Resonating With Passion
I feel her vibrate like a reed cut into a distant Clarinet crooning
Leaning into the Days and relaxing into the Nights
Her Heart searching for what her Soul cannot find
Dawn breaks often and still there is little light
The night is brighter with sparkling dancing shows
Drama played across a universe's window
Eyed longingly and achingly amidst clouded bustle
Her heart aches as her soul searches for peaceful afterglow
Time and space contrive to bring solace to a misplanted Rose
Dug maybe too deep into metropolitan...
Leaning into the Days and relaxing into the Nights
Her Heart searching for what her Soul cannot find
Dawn breaks often and still there is little light
The night is brighter with sparkling dancing shows
Drama played across a universe's window
Eyed longingly and achingly amidst clouded bustle
Her heart aches as her soul searches for peaceful afterglow
Time and space contrive to bring solace to a misplanted Rose
Dug maybe too deep into metropolitan...
#love
#LifeStruggles
28 reads
4 Comments
PandoraUnleashed
Poem Published
13th Mar 2019 10:19pm
13th Mar 2019 10:19pm
He Is In My Story
Epiphanies & intuitive reflections; silently, has He whispered to me
So sacred & dear; His penalties were never to free me from travesty
Equipped with my every downfall & gift; from His draft, was I built
Life isn't a reverie in which I have any authority to write my script
I was born a child into a life where all to ever be, was broken
Ornaments of pain; I carry - a better soul though, they've woven
An angel often unworthy of His graces; cling ever so to sweet sin
A moth to it's flame - as I crash; His light ignites within ...
So sacred & dear; His penalties were never to free me from travesty
Equipped with my every downfall & gift; from His draft, was I built
Life isn't a reverie in which I have any authority to write my script
I was born a child into a life where all to ever be, was broken
Ornaments of pain; I carry - a better soul though, they've woven
An angel often unworthy of His graces; cling ever so to sweet sin
A moth to it's flame - as I crash; His light ignites within ...
#hope
#God
#spiritual
#tragedy
#suffering
103 reads
23 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
25th Jan 2019 12:56pm
25th Jan 2019 12:56pm
s.o.s
take me to that place
where I can breathe
no fear of the darkness
it was here first
quietly it evolved an identity
it just was...
while contemplating its existence
it dreamed of us...
chaotic thought became rational
we are evolving nicely
a great family of entities
moving towards the edge
of this dimension...
to enter into a new one
by force of nature
we have outgrown our nursery
this is an s.o.s to those listening in
this plane of existence can barely contain us ...
where I can breathe
no fear of the darkness
it was here first
quietly it evolved an identity
it just was...
while contemplating its existence
it dreamed of us...
chaotic thought became rational
we are evolving nicely
a great family of entities
moving towards the edge
of this dimension...
to enter into a new one
by force of nature
we have outgrown our nursery
this is an s.o.s to those listening in
this plane of existence can barely contain us ...
#universe
#aliens
#philosophical
137 reads
15 Comments
Sky_dancer
Poem Published
17th Mar 2019 00:07am
17th Mar 2019 00:07am
Shrine
I make an offering
At the altar
Of The Muse:
Nectar of life
Marble bathing chambers
Flower gardens
Billowing incense
Flickering butter lamps
Scents that delight the senses
Nutritious food
Offered on every atom
Of the universe
Bless us here
With your inspiration
May we be your vessel
To tell the world
Your lore
At the altar
Of The Muse:
Nectar of life
Marble bathing chambers
Flower gardens
Billowing incense
Flickering butter lamps
Scents that delight the senses
Nutritious food
Offered on every atom
Of the universe
Bless us here
With your inspiration
May we be your vessel
To tell the world
Your lore
#universe
#religion
#spiritual
#MyInspiration
#PowerOfWords
75 reads
22 Comments
Hunterapsych
Poem Published
21st Feb 2019 2:25am
21st Feb 2019 2:25am
Cosmik chords
Pulsating orbs
pulling me towards
total transcendence..
The Eternal reward.
The cosmic chords
echo throughout celestial chasms..
I spasm as I get absorbed into
the swirling swarm of galactic storms,
far from the norm
I could've sworn the threads of time were just torn into pieces..
The universal aura
alluring me into astral realms
of bliss and wonder..
Not so
overwhelmed
not as restless,
it's amazing how one hit
Just 1one1 hit 👆
Of cannabis
can drastically help me stress...
pulling me towards
total transcendence..
The Eternal reward.
The cosmic chords
echo throughout celestial chasms..
I spasm as I get absorbed into
the swirling swarm of galactic storms,
far from the norm
I could've sworn the threads of time were just torn into pieces..
The universal aura
alluring me into astral realms
of bliss and wonder..
Not so
overwhelmed
not as restless,
it's amazing how one hit
Just 1one1 hit 👆
Of cannabis
can drastically help me stress...
#universe
#spiritual
#marijuana
#FreeVerse
#philosophical
44 reads
4 Comments
Tallen
Poem Published
21st Mar 2019 7:51pm
21st Mar 2019 7:51pm
Creativity
Once upon a while. . .
When there was only the Word (John 1: 1-3)
Heavens and earth began the style (Gen 1:1)
and so began creativity's birth.
In seven short days
All we observe and know to be
God created in ways.....
unknown to us,
but His creativeness we do see.
Once upon a today. . .
there were people with imagination:
sculpting, painting, writing away,
and acting with great dissertation.
In a few short thoughts
all they saw and didn't see,
they created many knots
to fill in...
When there was only the Word (John 1: 1-3)
Heavens and earth began the style (Gen 1:1)
and so began creativity's birth.
In seven short days
All we observe and know to be
God created in ways.....
unknown to us,
but His creativeness we do see.
Once upon a today. . .
there were people with imagination:
sculpting, painting, writing away,
and acting with great dissertation.
In a few short thoughts
all they saw and didn't see,
they created many knots
to fill in...
#religion
#Christian
34 reads
16 Comments
JusTim_
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2017 9:00pm
23rd Feb 2017 9:00pm
Missteps
Dirty hair and a rag tag shirt with spots of blood
sitting on Cathedral steps spilling out love
smiles greet finely polished Cole-Hann's, Carter's, Valentino's
along with gentle out-stretched strokes to the well-fed
Doe eyes dance in Hanna Anderson at the base of Sunday's best
holding close the moments where every child is blessed
gifts of bread and water waived off politely
not wanting to be the needy but just another part
Hymn's ring loud in an empty soul begging
along with a lost flock fledging to be whole
filled with sounds of...
sitting on Cathedral steps spilling out love
smiles greet finely polished Cole-Hann's, Carter's, Valentino's
along with gentle out-stretched strokes to the well-fed
Doe eyes dance in Hanna Anderson at the base of Sunday's best
holding close the moments where every child is blessed
gifts of bread and water waived off politely
not wanting to be the needy but just another part
Hymn's ring loud in an empty soul begging
along with a lost flock fledging to be whole
filled with sounds of...
270 reads
8 Comments
Lookawaynow
Rose
Rose
Poem Published
28th Feb 2019 2:01pm
28th Feb 2019 2:01pm
Dream Writing
The little things we
remember
Details
but for a brief glimpse
Dreams..they come and go...
I was searching on foot
Unfamiliar
territory local
An address with a conservatory
Someone from my past whom
I disliked
I said I'd be there
On foot
No phone
No direction but a road name
A postman for directions
Finding a sunny square
Still the wrong place
People milling in the sunshine
On their phones
One quite loud to my right
To my left
Tall ...
#SelfDiscovery
35 reads
6 Comments
theEgoEffect
Poem Published
21st Mar 2019 6:20pm
21st Mar 2019 6:20pm
droplets
droplets in a squall
calm amidst empty uproars
no storm to weather
calm amidst empty uproars
no storm to weather
#rain
#peace
#spiritual
#haiku
#gratitude
51 reads
7 Comments
crowfly
Poem Published
24th Feb 2019 1:35am
24th Feb 2019 1:35am
Benighted
I still struggle to believe
Take the needed "leap of faith"
I fall short, land without grace
Slim hope left that I am redeemed
I recall my perverse days
Transgressions from the distant past
They still weigh upon my soul
And may well never dissipate
Yes, I on occasion do indulge
Savor vices that I now relive
The impulses that persuade me
So much to pardon, and forgive.
Take the needed "leap of faith"
I fall short, land without grace
Slim hope left that I am redeemed
I recall my perverse days
Transgressions from the distant past
They still weigh upon my soul
And may well never dissipate
Yes, I on occasion do indulge
Savor vices that I now relive
The impulses that persuade me
So much to pardon, and forgive.
#forgiveness
#spiritual
64 reads
8 Comments
LilDragonFly
Poem Published
27th Apr 2018 4:26pm
27th Apr 2018 4:26pm
Elemental
Deep seated earth roots all space-time
As clear crystal sheets flow, cascade
carrying away reflections untrue
Below molten flames bellow
sulphured depths swirl volcanic
with fire consuming-transformation
While upon the surface
cooling breeze lifts
filling nostrils, lungs, cavities
connecting self to self to others
All of this a ritual eternal
unfurling body
calming...
As clear crystal sheets flow, cascade
carrying away reflections untrue
Below molten flames bellow
sulphured depths swirl volcanic
with fire consuming-transformation
While upon the surface
cooling breeze lifts
filling nostrils, lungs, cavities
connecting self to self to others
All of this a ritual eternal
unfurling body
calming...
#spiritual
237 reads
48 Comments
Ahavati
Poem Published
9th Mar 2019 2:25pm
9th Mar 2019 2:25pm
Turn Off the Lights
Visual
#love
#universe
#faith
#spiritual
#astronomy
141 reads
18 Comments
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