Spiritual Poems by Top Critiquers
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Poetry which debates religion, atheism and New Age spirituality
Poems written by Top Critiquers
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
28th Jul 2014 12:39pm
28th Jul 2014 12:39pm
Fastball - My Spiritual Awakening through Baseball
I can hit the fastball
But I really want to hit the slider
Same thing in writing verse
The erotic comes easy
but my own core emotions
always leave me wanting more
fom myself
So, no erotic poems this morning
Going back to the basics
My need to write
I hope you will let me in
Even though I have been hard on you
I'm not a bad guy
And I don't spit too much
When I'm at the plate
But I really want to hit the slider
Same thing in writing verse
The erotic comes easy
but my own core emotions
always leave me wanting more
fom myself
So, no erotic poems this morning
Going back to the basics
My need to write
I hope you will let me in
Even though I have been hard on you
I'm not a bad guy
And I don't spit too much
When I'm at the plate
846 reads
6 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
25th Mar 2023 7:55am
25th Mar 2023 7:55am
IF I WAS ADAM.....
#spiritual
#rhyming
#sensual
199 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
26th Nov 2023 1:01am
26th Nov 2023 1:01am
War Of Faith
Cynical war of faith
Asking for help and hold my breath and wait
exhale deep and sigh within
Groaning in terror I don't have a pattern to follow
for one like me
the texts of human thinking
fail to alter
I seek audience with himself
Audacious pain speaks loudest and grieve
is it your will I faulter and fall?
My mind a stranger to me
I'm having flashbacks
all the years I've forgotten
or neglected inside me
Afraid of the feelings
my psyche crumbles under the weight
Lucifer laughs
I can...
Asking for help and hold my breath and wait
exhale deep and sigh within
Groaning in terror I don't have a pattern to follow
for one like me
the texts of human thinking
fail to alter
I seek audience with himself
Audacious pain speaks loudest and grieve
is it your will I faulter and fall?
My mind a stranger to me
I'm having flashbacks
all the years I've forgotten
or neglected inside me
Afraid of the feelings
my psyche crumbles under the weight
Lucifer laughs
I can...
#God
#spiritual
71 reads
7 Comments
moroccanpoet
Poem Published
27th Aug 2023 4:56pm
27th Aug 2023 4:56pm
Night Has Thousand Eyes
The night has a thousand eyes,
But the day have one.
Yet the light of the bright world dies
With the dying sun.
The mind has a thousand eyes,
but the heart have one.
Yet the light of a whole life dies,
When love is done.
But the day have one.
Yet the light of the bright world dies
With the dying sun.
The mind has a thousand eyes,
but the heart have one.
Yet the light of a whole life dies,
When love is done.
#sadness
#loneliness
#dark #nostalgia
#dark #nostalgia
106 reads
0 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
4th Nov 2023 10:11am
4th Nov 2023 10:11am
my Lady
Clothed in her glow...
#love
#beauty
#moon
44 reads
8 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
26th Nov 2023 11:10pm
26th Nov 2023 11:10pm
The Ordained Rite Of Passage (The Oungan)
May the soft winds of my culture speak the faith of my tongue
May my Hebrew ancestors uphold the credence of my intellect
May my footsteps propel me forward where my pilgrimage will not be in vain
This incantation is about the wickedness of the human heart and sometimes, yes God uses his most humbling servants to do battle to balance the scales of good and evil, therefore, sometimes you most utilize the tongue of evil and the sword to castrate the wicked tree to make room to sow the reaping of good harvest.
In a better sense of judgment,...
May my Hebrew ancestors uphold the credence of my intellect
May my footsteps propel me forward where my pilgrimage will not be in vain
This incantation is about the wickedness of the human heart and sometimes, yes God uses his most humbling servants to do battle to balance the scales of good and evil, therefore, sometimes you most utilize the tongue of evil and the sword to castrate the wicked tree to make room to sow the reaping of good harvest.
In a better sense of judgment,...
#war
#moon
#religion #culture
#religion #culture
116 reads
2 Comments
monovox128
Poem Published
21st Mar 2023 11:12pm
21st Mar 2023 11:12pm
I FOUND SOMEONE
Who is S/He that loves me so?
Who treats me just right
Some people really wanna know.
How did we find one another?
Just how did it come to be
That I have found Someone
Who loves me unconditionally.
I truly never thought would arrive
That I'd find this Special Someone
But, S/He came into my life.
A person who was truly unknown
S/He told me stories, their strife.
And began loving me true
I in turn grew to like them too.
We became friends from the start
And as we grew closer and...
Who treats me just right
Some people really wanna know.
How did we find one another?
Just how did it come to be
That I have found Someone
Who loves me unconditionally.
I truly never thought would arrive
That I'd find this Special Someone
But, S/He came into my life.
A person who was truly unknown
S/He told me stories, their strife.
And began loving me true
I in turn grew to like them too.
We became friends from the start
And as we grew closer and...
#love
#hope
#God
#gratitude
#admiration
236 reads
7 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
30th Oct 2023 2:47pm
30th Oct 2023 2:47pm
Sugar Skull House
When I got to the bathroom there’s a sugar skull staring at me
Or if I’m cooking and grab a towel, another is there to dry my hands
Whether I walk in the hallway, sit in my living room or type at my desk
Hanging on the walls or on my bed, sugar skulls are everywhere
My house is a tribute to the dead
All year round like a station downtown where the train is about to leave
And when our ancestors visit us in dreams
We share the memory and stories of those we once grieved
For my wife’s grandfather, they had birthday parties on Halloween
For...
Or if I’m cooking and grab a towel, another is there to dry my hands
Whether I walk in the hallway, sit in my living room or type at my desk
Hanging on the walls or on my bed, sugar skulls are everywhere
My house is a tribute to the dead
All year round like a station downtown where the train is about to leave
And when our ancestors visit us in dreams
We share the memory and stories of those we once grieved
For my wife’s grandfather, they had birthday parties on Halloween
For...
#love
#family
#death
74 reads
2 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
10th Apr 2021 5:27am
10th Apr 2021 5:27am
Power of Light
Power of the Light
is filling up with
Kindness and Respect
Cuz that's way I
treat all of the
Ladies because they
are all unique and
special in their own
way so let the
light shine upon
me and all the Ladies
who need to be shown
Respect and Kindness
Filling us all with the
Power of the Light
is filling up with
Kindness and Respect
Cuz that's way I
treat all of the
Ladies because they
are all unique and
special in their own
way so let the
light shine upon
me and all the Ladies
who need to be shown
Respect and Kindness
Filling us all with the
Power of the Light
#kindness
#women
#men
#gratitude
#respect
538 reads
10 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
26th Aug 2023 3:04pm
26th Aug 2023 3:04pm
Karma is on sale
Passengers are standing
tickets are being sold
half in hell, half in heaven...
tickets are being sold
half in hell, half in heaven...
#karma
109 reads
11 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
4th Apr 2021 11:35pm
4th Apr 2021 11:35pm
In the silence of the grave
In the silence of the grave
The Resurrection of Our Lord
Jesus won the victory!
He conquered sin, hell and the grave
He conquered all for you and me!
Oh what wonderous love un-matchless
That our Savior humbly died
There upon the cruel Golgotha
He was willingly crucified
For three days, His body lay
In the silence of the grave
But on the Third day He arose
Triumphant over every foe!
Oh victorious deed un-matchless
When our Savior did arise
He is the Life and Resurrection
Our High Priest...
The Resurrection of Our Lord
Jesus won the victory!
He conquered sin, hell and the grave
He conquered all for you and me!
Oh what wonderous love un-matchless
That our Savior humbly died
There upon the cruel Golgotha
He was willingly crucified
For three days, His body lay
In the silence of the grave
But on the Third day He arose
Triumphant over every foe!
Oh victorious deed un-matchless
When our Savior did arise
He is the Life and Resurrection
Our High Priest...
#LifeChangingMoment
484 reads
7 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
10th Jul 2021 11:33am
10th Jul 2021 11:33am
Quantum Leap
The meditation modulates
& creates
What a thought-form
postulates
Be it
dark or light
As the electron orbits
out of sight
working wonders
as a thought-form ponders
The medium
&
The method
By which the performance
will commence
by which
the frequency will switch
And the electron
will take on
a quantum
Leap
into the
Unknown
& creates
What a thought-form
postulates
Be it
dark or light
As the electron orbits
out of sight
working wonders
as a thought-form ponders
The medium
&
The method
By which the performance
will commence
by which
the frequency will switch
And the electron
will take on
a quantum
Leap
into the
Unknown
#rebirth
#spiritual
#philosophical
507 reads
8 Comments
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