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IF I WAS ADAM.....
If I'd been Adam in that Garden,
the Fall of Man wouldn't happen.
I'd have told Eve, "DONT pick that fruit,
don't want to lose the birthday suit!"
Its eating was the Judas kiss
that led to end of Man's nude bliss,
parting from Him who did create
the first man and his perfect mate..
the Fall of Man wouldn't happen.
I'd have told Eve, "DONT pick that fruit,
don't want to lose the birthday suit!"
Its eating was the Judas kiss
that led to end of Man's nude bliss,
parting from Him who did create
the first man and his perfect mate..
Published 25th Mar 2023
Author's Note
Developed from a rhyming caption thought up and originally used in comment to Green Arrow's "Until she heard a sudden beeping sound".(Erotic section). The caption was inspired by the full-frontal unfigleaved nude picture that accompanied his poem of what looked like Eve in the act of reaching up for the fruit, which for technical reasons I was unable to copy and use here.)
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25th Mar 2023 9:31am
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- Edited 2nd Jul 2023 5:45pm
25th Mar 2023 12:50pm
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25th Mar 2023 1:04pm
You did a wonderful job at rhyming. Maybe next time youd go for a longer piece! Good job @Solomon_Song
25th Mar 2023 1:27pm
It would be soooooooooo nice if we could have 20-20 vision backwards and forwards.
