Spiritual Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry which debates religion, atheism and New Age spirituality
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
18th Mar 2024 1:00am
18th Mar 2024 1:00am
For the Golden Dusts in the Valley of Nysa
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Joro
I held roses
for the dying heart
a bruise emblem sleeve to footwear
O Wizened Entity, placed in greatness long may those eyes protect,
bless and save thee.
Gatekeepers watch, awaiting those that book passage
into hidden garden grove
thy wooden wise one we place our faith to Your protection
hearth of spirit, looking glass divine
we Your children,dress Your spritely visage
emblazoned emblem, totem to All Faith
She The Goddess praised within place ...
Joro
I held roses
for the dying heart
a bruise emblem sleeve to footwear
O Wizened Entity, placed in greatness long may those eyes protect,
bless and save thee.
Gatekeepers watch, awaiting those that book passage
into hidden garden grove
thy wooden wise one we place our faith to Your protection
hearth of spirit, looking glass divine
we Your children,dress Your spritely visage
emblazoned emblem, totem to All Faith
She The Goddess praised within place ...
#memorial
89 reads
8 Comments
Ahavati
Poem Published
1st Apr 2024 3:20pm
1st Apr 2024 3:20pm
[NaPoWriMo 2024 Collection]: Untitled
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Most seek poems
in the iris of the earth
because the well of her pupil
is too deep
for ink to survive
They believe
But poetry lives
its life in shadows
between the pages
of forgotten or buried books
tucked in drawers
old envelops
and tombs of the dead
Its scent is distinct:
chrysanthemum, worn leather
lavender and peppermint
we catch its waft
when least expected
Its language is unspoken
infused...
Most seek poems
in the iris of the earth
because the well of her pupil
is too deep
for ink to survive
They believe
But poetry lives
its life in shadows
between the pages
of forgotten or buried books
tucked in drawers
old envelops
and tombs of the dead
Its scent is distinct:
chrysanthemum, worn leather
lavender and peppermint
we catch its waft
when least expected
Its language is unspoken
infused...
#NaPoWriMo2024
218 reads
7 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
29th Oct 2023 00:39am
29th Oct 2023 00:39am
Hecatean Pursuits
#moon
#night
#TruthOfLife
#evolution
#witches
80 reads
0 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
11th Jun 2023 4:02am
11th Jun 2023 4:02am
Will You
Ah will you let go, let go
Of everything you know, of everything you know
For thirty pieces of silver, thirty pieces of silver
Will your tongue fork and slither, fork and slither
Ah will you deny,deny
Before the sunrise, sunrise
Everything that you know, that you know
Before the cock crows, you deny what you know
Is the truth in you, after all that we've been through
How many times did I defend you, proving that my words are true
You placed your problems like wishes on my list
Claimed an undying love for me then did me like...
Of everything you know, of everything you know
For thirty pieces of silver, thirty pieces of silver
Will your tongue fork and slither, fork and slither
Ah will you deny,deny
Before the sunrise, sunrise
Everything that you know, that you know
Before the cock crows, you deny what you know
Is the truth in you, after all that we've been through
How many times did I defend you, proving that my words are true
You placed your problems like wishes on my list
Claimed an undying love for me then did me like...
#spiritual
232 reads
7 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
10th Apr 2021 5:27am
10th Apr 2021 5:27am
Power of Light
Power of the Light
is filling up with
Kindness and Respect
Cuz that's way I
treat all of the
Ladies because they
are all unique and
special in their own
way so let the
light shine upon
me and all the Ladies
who need to be shown
Respect and Kindness
Filling us all with the
Power of the Light
is filling up with
Kindness and Respect
Cuz that's way I
treat all of the
Ladies because they
are all unique and
special in their own
way so let the
light shine upon
me and all the Ladies
who need to be shown
Respect and Kindness
Filling us all with the
Power of the Light
#kindness
#women
#men
#gratitude
#respect
565 reads
10 Comments
Kinkwizard_95
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:02am
Yesterday 8:02am
Exploring
During the night
I travel my dreams
Within my dreams
I search for my soul
Whilst exploring my soul
I experience reality
From reality
To realness
Through dissecting my mind
I sense my body
Interacting with body
Brings me to life
In life we live our dreams
If we’re so lucky
Or if we so choose
By our choosing
We make conscious decisions
Within decisions
Lies a whole world
Lest we stop exploring
Lest we forget whence we came from
The who, what, when,...
I travel my dreams
Within my dreams
I search for my soul
Whilst exploring my soul
I experience reality
From reality
To realness
Through dissecting my mind
I sense my body
Interacting with body
Brings me to life
In life we live our dreams
If we’re so lucky
Or if we so choose
By our choosing
We make conscious decisions
Within decisions
Lies a whole world
Lest we stop exploring
Lest we forget whence we came from
The who, what, when,...
#dreams
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical
#NaPoWriMo2024
45 reads
3 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
14th Apr 2024 5:40pm
14th Apr 2024 5:40pm
Sunday
We praise you, O God,
our redeemer, creator…”
Almost time to get tidied up
presentable
for the parade of washed and scrubbed souls
lined up in our chairs in the chemo ward
waiting for that weekly infusion of faith
“Not what my hands have done
can save my guilty soul…”
I do want to look like I have my shit together,
at least enough for basic hygiene
forget that an hour before, I was stinking and greasy.
I’ll stand up there and sing
and they’ll imagine me “mature in faith”, ...
our redeemer, creator…”
Almost time to get tidied up
presentable
for the parade of washed and scrubbed souls
lined up in our chairs in the chemo ward
waiting for that weekly infusion of faith
“Not what my hands have done
can save my guilty soul…”
I do want to look like I have my shit together,
at least enough for basic hygiene
forget that an hour before, I was stinking and greasy.
I’ll stand up there and sing
and they’ll imagine me “mature in faith”, ...
#religion
#faith
#music #NaPoWriMo2024
#music #NaPoWriMo2024
47 reads
4 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:37pm
Yesterday 1:37pm
Haunting Memories
Haunting memories weeping
from inside myself screaming
hungering for ruins of twilight
to love even on bad days
when it rains a lullaby
and I wear my galoshes
from inside myself screaming
hungering for ruins of twilight
to love even on bad days
when it rains a lullaby
and I wear my galoshes
#dreams
#ghosts
#memories
38 reads
2 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2024 5:11pm
2nd Apr 2024 5:11pm
The Tides Will Bind (The Oracle)
Ersatz ideology professing from the birth of Clay rainbows with slithering tongues of dialects
To evolve you must enthuse, could you imagine how the begotten son in the final hour as he looked unto the Heavens unto His Heavenly Father and wept
Humanity you sit in the circle of blessed miracles, my helm, have been reached
My universal most trusted infinitive disciples may the gospel of the truth you must always preach
Is the hindrance of your thoughts, Judas cascaded in envy to be
I am exalted and you are the...
To evolve you must enthuse, could you imagine how the begotten son in the final hour as he looked unto the Heavens unto His Heavenly Father and wept
Humanity you sit in the circle of blessed miracles, my helm, have been reached
My universal most trusted infinitive disciples may the gospel of the truth you must always preach
Is the hindrance of your thoughts, Judas cascaded in envy to be
I am exalted and you are the...
#sun
#moon
#angels
#spiritual
#water
164 reads
2 Comments
Connotation
Poem Published
14th Apr 2024 11:37pm
14th Apr 2024 11:37pm
Spirit in Humankind
Literal context
Physical disposition
Minds sensational
Physical disposition
Minds sensational
#nature
#spiritual
#humankind
#SelfReflection
#metaphor
39 reads
2 Comments
mysteriouslady
Poem Published
19th Dec 2019 00:38am
19th Dec 2019 00:38am
Because I believe....
Mary did you know?
and when did you believe...
Was is upon the most Oh Holy Night...
Did you Go tell it on the mountain?
Did you witness your baby boy
walk on all that water?
And when you did,
did Oh come all ye faithful
or did they think you were crazy
only because you did indeed
see what was needed
and Mary, I do believe...
and when did you believe...
Was is upon the most Oh Holy Night...
Did you Go tell it on the mountain?
Did you witness your baby boy
walk on all that water?
And when you did,
did Oh come all ye faithful
or did they think you were crazy
only because you did indeed
see what was needed
and Mary, I do believe...
#spiritual
471 reads
20 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2023 6:33pm
3rd Dec 2023 6:33pm
rock solid
in recovery for over
40 years now
watched em'
come
watched em'
go
many lived
more than a
few died
sat in the rooms
embraced
pain
shared
joy
waded through the
hip deep shit of daily
life without boots
but there was always
a clarity like a crystal
mountain lake
a higher power
looking
down
some would say
"God"
but I would say that God
is too small a term
to define the ...
40 years now
watched em'
come
watched em'
go
many lived
more than a
few died
sat in the rooms
embraced
pain
shared
joy
waded through the
hip deep shit of daily
life without boots
but there was always
a clarity like a crystal
mountain lake
a higher power
looking
down
some would say
"God"
but I would say that God
is too small a term
to define the ...
#addiction
#responsibility
#vulnerability
138 reads
8 Comments
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