Spiritual Poems Seeking Friendly Advice
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Poetry which debates religion, atheism and New Age spirituality
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adagio
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2024 12:49pm
2nd Oct 2024 12:49pm
Shadows and Hush
Dark shadows and hush in silhouette
grace and hidden face until tomorrow
lingering silent sweep pendulum do
in footprints of my mind's whispers
across the dunes oasis
grace and hidden face until tomorrow
lingering silent sweep pendulum do
in footprints of my mind's whispers
across the dunes oasis
#philosophical
#spiritual
#WritingPoetry #dark
#WritingPoetry #dark
91 reads
2 Comments
a_methyste
hlightdroid
hlightdroid
Poem Published
1st Oct 2024 9:16pm
1st Oct 2024 9:16pm
Poetry
You want to get to know me
Get into my
Poetry
Poetry
Poetry
I can not lie there
It is my sweet
sweet trap
Get into my
Poetry
Poetry
Poetry
I can not lie there
It is my sweet
sweet trap
#love
44 reads
4 Comments
Anne-Ri999
Poem Published
24th Sep 2024 4:27pm
24th Sep 2024 4:27pm
She tells me
Her name is spring
born when lambs sprung forth
He remembers going to the airport remembering how alive each memory
carried by this duffel bag. Her hand gripped tight around it. A worn out string hung transparent.
Upon black peat lay her reflection. Within fleeting fog an embryo morning came
Dismembered remnants
At the safety check he recognised her eyelashes upon a face of a bystander.
Rustic irises spoke from another female face. Bearded men doing a spine piercing ritual observing his posture while grimness oozed from their static face. He...
born when lambs sprung forth
He remembers going to the airport remembering how alive each memory
carried by this duffel bag. Her hand gripped tight around it. A worn out string hung transparent.
Upon black peat lay her reflection. Within fleeting fog an embryo morning came
Dismembered remnants
At the safety check he recognised her eyelashes upon a face of a bystander.
Rustic irises spoke from another female face. Bearded men doing a spine piercing ritual observing his posture while grimness oozed from their static face. He...
#admiration
#symbolism
62 reads
1 Comment
adagio
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2024 2:18pm
22nd Sep 2024 2:18pm
So it is...
..and so it is, a time of solitude
a place to reflect
what could have been
and so on this note
I weep in the winds
and listen to the silence of it all
lighting the torch
for a new beginning
and so it is, a time of solitude
a place to reflect
what could have been
and so on this note
I weep in the winds
and listen to the silence of it all
lighting the torch
for a new beginning
and so it is, a time of solitude
#inspirational
#strength
#WritingPoetry
114 reads
4 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
21st Sep 2024 1:46pm
21st Sep 2024 1:46pm
Ransacked by Rain - with Lilliputian
Dark as the silence in abstract
ransacked by the falling rain
listening to the overture
bringing harmony to the pane
a symphony coating the stillness
soothing unrestful souls
looking for solace in a storm
muted only by pelting downpour
ransacked by the falling rain
listening to the overture
bringing harmony to the pane
a symphony coating the stillness
soothing unrestful souls
looking for solace in a storm
muted only by pelting downpour
#collaboration
#dreams
#philosophical #spiritual
#philosophical #spiritual
102 reads
2 Comments
Confluence
Poem Published
17th Sep 2024 8:23pm
17th Sep 2024 8:23pm
The Shadow Scape
it's one thing to sit comfortably with your demons
a whole other to give them free rein
as covenants go...sovereignty over self reigns supreme
even within the 'scape of dreams
stand tall to see how their shadows work
...how they lurk...
working overtime to overthrow their chains
because you are master of your own mind
& they...only aspects of moments in time
important to know them...by all means understand their origins
...their mutiny...
a whole other to give them free rein
as covenants go...sovereignty over self reigns supreme
even within the 'scape of dreams
stand tall to see how their shadows work
...how they lurk...
working overtime to overthrow their chains
because you are master of your own mind
& they...only aspects of moments in time
important to know them...by all means understand their origins
...their mutiny...
#dark
#dreams
#spiritual
151 reads
8 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
16th Sep 2024 12:56pm
16th Sep 2024 12:56pm
Pale Moon
Conceptual metaphors, "In death, do us part," with
the presence of a shadow in a long dark veil and the
twilight's pale moon listening to the acapella silence
but God knows where you will rest when the fading
light disappears
the presence of a shadow in a long dark veil and the
twilight's pale moon listening to the acapella silence
but God knows where you will rest when the fading
light disappears
#philosophical
#spiritual
111 reads
2 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
8th Sep 2024 11:51pm
8th Sep 2024 11:51pm
Spirit in The Sky - with Shilohverse
Shep awakes from his dream with a migraine headache. "Oh! Late again for school. Mom, why didn't you wake me up!" He only hears his echo, a calendar on the back of his bedroom door an Autumn Landscape, 1954. The echo sounds hollow as if a hole, void of all feelings. He realizes that he is dead with a breath but no pulse and his vacation is to be, going home to Louisville.
"The old hometown looks the same,'' as he stepped down from the Greyhound Bus. Looking around nothing had changed, in Louisville. His one piece of baggage sat beside the bus. Heat waves of...
"The old hometown looks the same,'' as he stepped down from the Greyhound Bus. Looking around nothing had changed, in Louisville. His one piece of baggage sat beside the bus. Heat waves of...
#collaboration
#inspirational
#spiritual
106 reads
9 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
8th Sep 2024 4:36pm
8th Sep 2024 4:36pm
Spiritual Sleuths
Spiritual sleuths, souls of man
behind the veil of curiosity
decoding the Gospel
connecting dots
mystery solved
with the word of God
and a stenographer
connecting dots
behind the veil of curiosity
decoding the Gospel
connecting dots
mystery solved
with the word of God
and a stenographer
connecting dots
#faith
#philosophical
#spiritual
137 reads
6 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
8th Sep 2024 3:37am
8th Sep 2024 3:37am
Sedated In The Afterthought Of Reminisce
Calling out his name, his tongue sinking deeper, my creamy abyss getting moisten
My thighs arresting the sides of his face, my pelvis softly meeting his mouth
Squeezing my breasts, licking over a nipple to comfort the sweet pleasure of paradise
Laying here with him, opening me wide as he eagerly takes of me
Mm... moaning out his name
My body reaching that climatic zenith of no return, back bending over and over again
His impatient palms cupping my buttocks, my fine pussy hairs kissing his succulent lips
Veiling the...
My thighs arresting the sides of his face, my pelvis softly meeting his mouth
Squeezing my breasts, licking over a nipple to comfort the sweet pleasure of paradise
Laying here with him, opening me wide as he eagerly takes of me
Mm... moaning out his name
My body reaching that climatic zenith of no return, back bending over and over again
His impatient palms cupping my buttocks, my fine pussy hairs kissing his succulent lips
Veiling the...
#lover
#passion
#seductive #sensual
#seductive #sensual
264 reads
4 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
3rd Sep 2024 11:30pm
3rd Sep 2024 11:30pm
Hey! Bo Diddley
The grey bones of a rocking chair
listening to the lungs wheezing
where Mama used to sit
and smoke a little stogie
Finding her in a unique disposition
dead as mahogany on the jukebox
stuffed with botox
Listening to Bo Diddley...
"You can't judge an apple by looking at a tree."
listening to the lungs wheezing
where Mama used to sit
and smoke a little stogie
Finding her in a unique disposition
dead as mahogany on the jukebox
stuffed with botox
Listening to Bo Diddley...
"You can't judge an apple by looking at a tree."
#memories
#spiritual
114 reads
4 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
3rd Sep 2024 2:15pm
3rd Sep 2024 2:15pm
Tomorrow's Glades
Neath the moon's haunting
midnight thralling
deep within the soul of man
the starved mind
in glades of tomorrow's song
listening to the sorrows
of poetic philosophy
silently gazing
neath the moon's haunting
midnight thralling
deep within the soul of man
the starved mind
in glades of tomorrow's song
listening to the sorrows
of poetic philosophy
silently gazing
neath the moon's haunting
#philosophical
#spiritual
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