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Poetry which debates religion, atheism and New Age spirituality
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SaloKaviar
Dark Sun
Dark Sun
Poem Published
Today 6:29pm
Today 6:29pm
Nebula
The nebula of love was lost
In psychic waves that time forgot.
The atoms split a thousand suns
In astral clouds of radium.
These distant realms of hyperspace,
Where conscience flows in altered states.
The truth that circumnavigates,
Inceptions of the human race.
Deeper onwards through the veil
In crystal ships of light we sail.
Towards the cosmic clouds we dream;
Traversing spiral galaxies.
The swirl of starlight through the void,
Careering through the asteroids,
As shockwaves rip through ancient time, ...
In psychic waves that time forgot.
The atoms split a thousand suns
In astral clouds of radium.
These distant realms of hyperspace,
Where conscience flows in altered states.
The truth that circumnavigates,
Inceptions of the human race.
Deeper onwards through the veil
In crystal ships of light we sail.
Towards the cosmic clouds we dream;
Traversing spiral galaxies.
The swirl of starlight through the void,
Careering through the asteroids,
As shockwaves rip through ancient time, ...
#love
#utopia
#universe
#spiritual
#heaven
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0 Comments
AEMelia564
Y
Y
Poem Published
Today 11:17am
Today 11:17am
Blot (sacrifice)
https://youtu.be/ZxnqSTzq6-w
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Flow into
Libation,
The act of pouring a liquid
In a non religious way
Liberation
Sings hymns
Of sage
Cleansing our ethereal body
with air
catching breath
Through nostrils of the skies
Shaking off dead cells
That fall from me
Like reason, like rain
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The autopsy has now begun ...
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Flow into
Libation,
The act of pouring a liquid
In a non religious way
Liberation
Sings hymns
Of sage
Cleansing our ethereal body
with air
catching breath
Through nostrils of the skies
Shaking off dead cells
That fall from me
Like reason, like rain
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The autopsy has now begun ...
#animals
#nature
#spiritual #sacrifice
#spiritual #sacrifice
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LIFE4ME
Poem Published
16th Jan 2019 3:59am
16th Jan 2019 3:59am
Spiritual Battle
heavenly beings
holy ones rose to defend
the kingdom of God
against the dragon
and his fallen followers
all were defeated
place in heaven gone
together they were thrown down
forever earth bound
holy ones rose to defend
the kingdom of God
against the dragon
and his fallen followers
all were defeated
place in heaven gone
together they were thrown down
forever earth bound
#religion
#Christian
#spiritual
24 reads
2 Comments
LIFE4ME
Poem Published
16th Jan 2019 3:35am
16th Jan 2019 3:35am
Where Are You
Where are you O God
Whose back has been turned
for I am looking
But I do not see your face
I am seeking
But I cannot find your presence
Where are you O God
Where are you O God
Whose back has been turned
For I am waiting to hear you speak
But I do not notice a sound
I am listening for your voice
But I do not recognize your word
Where are you O God
Where are you my dear child
For all I see is your back
Turn to me
So that you may see my face
And you may hear my word
The sight of your eyes...
Whose back has been turned
for I am looking
But I do not see your face
I am seeking
But I cannot find your presence
Where are you O God
Where are you O God
Whose back has been turned
For I am waiting to hear you speak
But I do not notice a sound
I am listening for your voice
But I do not recognize your word
Where are you O God
Where are you my dear child
For all I see is your back
Turn to me
So that you may see my face
And you may hear my word
The sight of your eyes...
#religion
#Christian
24 reads
1 Comment
Heaven_sent_Kathy
Poem Published
15th Jan 2019 7:30am
15th Jan 2019 7:30am
In My Book of Devotions
Today is a day that He made for me,
Because I’m alive and now I can see.
For which I will rise and gladly rejoice,
As I greet the morn’, I know it’s His choice.
I’m bless’d & wash’d clean as was His own son,
The rains finally came as once He had done.
Down in the southland, where I’d always been;
Fire of Hell was bringing drought for our sins.
To burn and ravage our homes to the ground,
Taking my family away, into harm.
Rains turned to flooding, hills’ mudslides yellowed,
I listened, trembling, as thunder...
Because I’m alive and now I can see.
For which I will rise and gladly rejoice,
As I greet the morn’, I know it’s His choice.
I’m bless’d & wash’d clean as was His own son,
The rains finally came as once He had done.
Down in the southland, where I’d always been;
Fire of Hell was bringing drought for our sins.
To burn and ravage our homes to the ground,
Taking my family away, into harm.
Rains turned to flooding, hills’ mudslides yellowed,
I listened, trembling, as thunder...
#rain
#fire
#God
#faith
#myself
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6 Comments
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
jade tiger
Poem Published
13th Jan 2019 3:38am
13th Jan 2019 3:38am
Essence
it likes to imagine
appendages
to yawn and stretch
quiet testing,
then owns the sunrise
to meld with and warm
from its answer
alone, it yearns
then comes into
our sphere,
idillic form to be free in
( shapeless, eternal
Is nothing new
in a universe )
it fancies form with its
rudiments and
shortcomings
providing curves
it wants a connection,
a dialect ...
appendages
to yawn and stretch
quiet testing,
then owns the sunrise
to meld with and warm
from its answer
alone, it yearns
then comes into
our sphere,
idillic form to be free in
( shapeless, eternal
Is nothing new
in a universe )
it fancies form with its
rudiments and
shortcomings
providing curves
it wants a connection,
a dialect ...
#identity
#universe
#nature
#spiritual
#SelfDiscovery
78 reads
4 Comments
Eerie
Poem Published
13th Jan 2019 1:29am
13th Jan 2019 1:29am
Rebirth
I remembered who took me
into their dark kingdoms, before
breathing fire among my trees.
They fell branches by the dozen;
grappling with nothing but darkness—
least doom.
As if all had never heard insects’ thoughts.
So, she slept on a stone bed of white
lichens between night and
morning stars; small birds
vanished seeds tenderly
around her light water skirts.
River pockets do moths work; floated
back in better thought—
Earth rose full; at times perfect.
Arranging something...
into their dark kingdoms, before
breathing fire among my trees.
They fell branches by the dozen;
grappling with nothing but darkness—
least doom.
As if all had never heard insects’ thoughts.
So, she slept on a stone bed of white
lichens between night and
morning stars; small birds
vanished seeds tenderly
around her light water skirts.
River pockets do moths work; floated
back in better thought—
Earth rose full; at times perfect.
Arranging something...
#mother
#earth
#trees #nature
#trees #nature
71 reads
21 Comments
TIG
Poem Published
11th Jan 2019 5:03pm
11th Jan 2019 5:03pm
Loving myself
Your love is without end and I am falling deeper
My mind is filled with swirling euphoric feelings
I can not resist you and want to submit myself
I do not ever remember loving like this
My trust in you is growing and profound
I want more of you and you continue to give
I feel so safe within your magnificent presence
No feeling of being abandon or betrayed exist
Letting me feel good and grand beside you
With your grace and wisdom no feelings of anxiety
Your promises are always fulfilled without hesitation
When guilt creeps in you slay it...
My mind is filled with swirling euphoric feelings
I can not resist you and want to submit myself
I do not ever remember loving like this
My trust in you is growing and profound
I want more of you and you continue to give
I feel so safe within your magnificent presence
No feeling of being abandon or betrayed exist
Letting me feel good and grand beside you
With your grace and wisdom no feelings of anxiety
Your promises are always fulfilled without hesitation
When guilt creeps in you slay it...
#love
#God
#gratitude
35 reads
4 Comments
TIG
Poem Published
10th Jan 2019 2:56pm
10th Jan 2019 2:56pm
A solders prayer
Submitted to MadameLavenders
"Through The Alphabet: Letter A" competition
Please give me forgiveness, for I can not make amends
Let me worship you in your glory, help me appease my guilt
aglow are the fiery battles of my life, extract me
And with the arched end of your anvil Lord
I pray that you shape me in your Holy image
Give me strength to avoid all sin, break our anarchy of faith
"Keep me as the apple of your eye
Hide me in the shadow of your wings "(psalm 17:8)
In April when discharged, bring me safely home to family
and not...
"Through The Alphabet: Letter A" competition
Please give me forgiveness, for I can not make amends
Let me worship you in your glory, help me appease my guilt
aglow are the fiery battles of my life, extract me
And with the arched end of your anvil Lord
I pray that you shape me in your Holy image
Give me strength to avoid all sin, break our anarchy of faith
"Keep me as the apple of your eye
Hide me in the shadow of your wings "(psalm 17:8)
In April when discharged, bring me safely home to family
and not...
#atheism
#faith
#spiritual #redemption
#spiritual #redemption
43 reads
6 Comments
Greywolfman
Poem Published
6th Jan 2019 5:43pm
6th Jan 2019 5:43pm
Shaking my fist at the Heaven
#sadness
#anger
#birth
#religion
#tragedy
42 reads
1 Comment
AEMelia564
Y
Y
Poem Published
6th Jan 2019 10:33am
6th Jan 2019 10:33am
THe bewildered
Chapter one
Labyrinth
Enter
In a world of sound there is a language
You will be the first to enter
where sillhoutted raindrops write these initials
Trees mimmiced a path
Their balm faded into tears of ashen
Carved into each bask
Each heart
He arrives
Preparing ungracefull journey
Signaling a certain departure
Reading history
Of prehistorical skulls
Skeletons, teeth, claws
And yet still
we are but mammals
Death not
Sets us free
Labyrinth
Enter
In a world of sound there is a language
You will be the first to enter
where sillhoutted raindrops write these initials
Trees mimmiced a path
Their balm faded into tears of ashen
Carved into each bask
Each heart
He arrives
Preparing ungracefull journey
Signaling a certain departure
Reading history
Of prehistorical skulls
Skeletons, teeth, claws
And yet still
we are but mammals
Death not
Sets us free
#spiritual
#magic
#sacrifice
64 reads
12 Comments
Heaven_sent_Kathy
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2019 3:57pm
2nd Jan 2019 3:57pm
Let Nature, Let Go, Let God
In my disinterest to travel and roam,
And locked up inside and between, alone;
Disabilities within my own head
Keep me from setting foot outside of home
I rail in my chair, I sweat from the dread.
The nights are no better, tossing in bed.
Try not to think that I wish I were dead.
Attempt to be what I should be instead.
For rainy days and weeks, the sun and moon,
All rise and setting, and always too soon.
I watch the window, the shadows that cast,
And hear the wind blow, but seasons don't last. ...
And locked up inside and between, alone;
Disabilities within my own head
Keep me from setting foot outside of home
I rail in my chair, I sweat from the dread.
The nights are no better, tossing in bed.
Try not to think that I wish I were dead.
Attempt to be what I should be instead.
For rainy days and weeks, the sun and moon,
All rise and setting, and always too soon.
I watch the window, the shadows that cast,
And hear the wind blow, but seasons don't last. ...
#depression
#rain
#nature
#God
#emptiness
53 reads
5 Comments
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