Spiritual Poems Seeking Friendly Advice
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Poetry which debates religion, atheism and New Age spirituality - Friendly feedback has been requested for these poems.
TIG
Poem Published
Today 4:31pm
Today 4:31pm
Scripture (spoken to them, speaks to us)
You call me out through all the masses
to your heavenly table, gold plates and glasses
Give me your strength and your Holy Spirit
Keeping me humble, your kingdom to inherit
Help me each day to sort out confusion
in a turbulent world, and enemies delusions
I double down on my faith, ask you into my heart
Protect me from evil and wisdom impart
I wanna hear you, more than I wanna hear me
I do not need a miracle or parting of seas
Speak to my family and all of my friends
let them all see, how your love never ends
and as in heaven, so on...
to your heavenly table, gold plates and glasses
Give me your strength and your Holy Spirit
Keeping me humble, your kingdom to inherit
Help me each day to sort out confusion
in a turbulent world, and enemies delusions
I double down on my faith, ask you into my heart
Protect me from evil and wisdom impart
I wanna hear you, more than I wanna hear me
I do not need a miracle or parting of seas
Speak to my family and all of my friends
let them all see, how your love never ends
and as in heaven, so on...
#God
#TruthOfLife
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PeaceFlpw
Peace Flow
Peace Flow
Poem Published
Today 6:49am
Today 6:49am
the lone wolf perception
this life chose me; one of few genuinely friendly; this isn't where I deeply want to be; I'm called a fool as the other wolves laugh and stare in indifference embracing there instinctive nature they assume to be true....they're fighting for territory, mates, and food. a dangerous game called claim....though it's in my nature; my veiw not quite the same; I alter my pain; I lick my wounds in shame for rebelling against the rules of the pack; I'm a hunter at heart, though I howl in the night for many reasons....
#spiritual
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adamtherapy69
adam templar
adam templar
Poem Published
14th Oct 2018 5:21pm
14th Oct 2018 5:21pm
let the glory come in
LET THE GLORY COME IN
Too long
have I allowed
rubbish
to rule
my life
All this confusion
these feelings
so many events
have let me
rejected
and lost
The world teaches
do what you want
do what you like
do what feels right
There are no rights
and wrongs
we are just on a journey
taking the lies
from the shelf
Drinking from death
and yet expecting life
When frustrated
we all need comfort
but the comfort you take
may become your ruler ...
Too long
have I allowed
rubbish
to rule
my life
All this confusion
these feelings
so many events
have let me
rejected
and lost
The world teaches
do what you want
do what you like
do what feels right
There are no rights
and wrongs
we are just on a journey
taking the lies
from the shelf
Drinking from death
and yet expecting life
When frustrated
we all need comfort
but the comfort you take
may become your ruler ...
#sadness
#regret
#hope
#religion
#disappointment
20 reads
3 Comments
AEMelia564
Y
Y
Poem Published
14th Oct 2018 9:25am
14th Oct 2018 9:25am
Elfin
May I confess
To be found guilty
Chasing chivalry
Like wind plays
These drooping branches
Minstrel , I am your mistress
Lulled by the lapis lazuli
Of your eyes
That hold fire's potency
Floating like oil
Canvassed
Stirred by reflections
Of neirides
Drinking in
The nectar
Of hazel dew
You were my suitor
As you bade me farewell
It is you I inhale
Your image
Vaporizing aether's veil
To be found guilty
Chasing chivalry
Like wind plays
These drooping branches
Minstrel , I am your mistress
Lulled by the lapis lazuli
Of your eyes
That hold fire's potency
Floating like oil
Canvassed
Stirred by reflections
Of neirides
Drinking in
The nectar
Of hazel dew
You were my suitor
As you bade me farewell
It is you I inhale
Your image
Vaporizing aether's veil
#love
#FallingInLove
41 reads
8 Comments
AstralLeeWilson
Poem Published
14th Oct 2018 1:21am
14th Oct 2018 1:21am
The Blood Rose
I was often hunted
But never gathered.
Ill equipped and without stature
I could not be captured.
My pieces scattered
From the initial shatter.
Though I was always tired
I rarely appeared tattered
But fairly put together
And well dressed for the weather.
But it has never mattered.
It's funny what image does.
Your rotten milk reflection.
When all the flies buzz
Until there is nothing left to eat.
With all of their erections
And rotten meats.
In the askew direction
It is always me
And just my...
But never gathered.
Ill equipped and without stature
I could not be captured.
My pieces scattered
From the initial shatter.
Though I was always tired
I rarely appeared tattered
But fairly put together
And well dressed for the weather.
But it has never mattered.
It's funny what image does.
Your rotten milk reflection.
When all the flies buzz
Until there is nothing left to eat.
With all of their erections
And rotten meats.
In the askew direction
It is always me
And just my...
#religion
#spiritual
#philosophical
21 reads
2 Comments
oskar
Poem Published
13th Oct 2018 11:37am
13th Oct 2018 11:37am
the casket
The Casket
I saw a coffin the church
Didn't see the body
The casket was bare
No flowers
They are wasted on the dead
I have no religion
For me, death holds no sting
It is merely the end of life.
I saw a coffin the church
Didn't see the body
The casket was bare
No flowers
They are wasted on the dead
I have no religion
For me, death holds no sting
It is merely the end of life.
#Easter
#Christmas
#MothersDay #apocalypse
#MothersDay #apocalypse
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SaloKaviar
Dark Sun
Dark Sun
Poem Published
12th Oct 2018 11:03pm
12th Oct 2018 11:03pm
Interstellar
Her saline tears condense through snow
In pyroclastic lava flows,
Which kiss the sea in vents of steam,
Erasing clouds of misery.
Transcending death, she holds the key,
Through psychic waves of symmetry.
The light that blinds her soul eclipse,
Is dancing through her fingertips.
Her Neptune eyes in shades of blue,
Beneath the gates of Xanadu;
In corridors of granite tombs,
The zeitgeist of a truth renewed.
Synaptic sparks a storm of fusion.
Thunder cracks a grand illusion.
Perception rains,...
In pyroclastic lava flows,
Which kiss the sea in vents of steam,
Erasing clouds of misery.
Transcending death, she holds the key,
Through psychic waves of symmetry.
The light that blinds her soul eclipse,
Is dancing through her fingertips.
Her Neptune eyes in shades of blue,
Beneath the gates of Xanadu;
In corridors of granite tombs,
The zeitgeist of a truth renewed.
Synaptic sparks a storm of fusion.
Thunder cracks a grand illusion.
Perception rains,...
#love
#universe
#stars
#spiritual
#philosophical
33 reads
9 Comments
EliW
Illusion
Illusion
Poem Published
11th Oct 2018 10:14pm
11th Oct 2018 10:14pm
The Dark oNe
To tame a beast you have to know it's there.
It is.
You can ignore it, but eventually,
it will gnaw the flesh off your bones.
So you look.
Here, you discover the monster demonstrated
in the mirror...
Standing before you, glowing dead eyes,
and a smile that masks demise.
You panic.
Maybe, turn away... denial, dealy.
But for how long will you be it,
and walk the streets blindfolded?
Not seeing your reflection in the windows,
cars... or peoples eyes?
Soon, you have had it.
You throw away the rag, ...
It is.
You can ignore it, but eventually,
it will gnaw the flesh off your bones.
So you look.
Here, you discover the monster demonstrated
in the mirror...
Standing before you, glowing dead eyes,
and a smile that masks demise.
You panic.
Maybe, turn away... denial, dealy.
But for how long will you be it,
and walk the streets blindfolded?
Not seeing your reflection in the windows,
cars... or peoples eyes?
Soon, you have had it.
You throw away the rag, ...
#shadows
#TruthOfLife
#SelfReflection #SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection #SelfDiscovery
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0 Comments
TIG
Poem Published
11th Oct 2018 8:34pm
11th Oct 2018 8:34pm
I am fine, I am a good person?
Are they commandments, or are they suggestions
as I look at my life and all my reflections
Yes, I have lied, and yes I have stolen
Ok, maybe one or two of His laws have been broken
but I give to charities and I go to church
I volunteer time and the bible I search
but still, I have lusted(coveted), and even acted on it
So, then I'm a sinner, I have to admit
But I think overall I've done more good than bad?
yet, I guess there are a few more sins we could add
Taken His name in vain, during anger
Ok, now the feeling, my soul is in...
as I look at my life and all my reflections
Yes, I have lied, and yes I have stolen
Ok, maybe one or two of His laws have been broken
but I give to charities and I go to church
I volunteer time and the bible I search
but still, I have lusted(coveted), and even acted on it
So, then I'm a sinner, I have to admit
But I think overall I've done more good than bad?
yet, I guess there are a few more sins we could add
Taken His name in vain, during anger
Ok, now the feeling, my soul is in...
#God
#redemption
31 reads
6 Comments
Silent_One
Poem Published
11th Oct 2018 7:24am
11th Oct 2018 7:24am
Thank You for the Laughs
Ignorance has been my blessing
insults the protein of my being
I shall dance from now on in my illusions
july mornings are filled with heat and scorn
my friends have sold me in chains
I am blacker than the slave I claimed
If you abuse the human soul
I thank you from the devils heart
there is a new world order coming
one where parents love
and love their offspring
my hate will fade
in a newborn wind
I shall be earth
which will bring
love not mockery
compassion not judgment
kindness not Jehovah's trash ...
insults the protein of my being
I shall dance from now on in my illusions
july mornings are filled with heat and scorn
my friends have sold me in chains
I am blacker than the slave I claimed
If you abuse the human soul
I thank you from the devils heart
there is a new world order coming
one where parents love
and love their offspring
my hate will fade
in a newborn wind
I shall be earth
which will bring
love not mockery
compassion not judgment
kindness not Jehovah's trash ...
#hate
#abuse
#religion #God
#religion #God
29 reads
1 Comment
TIG
Poem Published
8th Oct 2018 10:05pm
8th Oct 2018 10:05pm
say no to fear
F aith can be shaken
E nemy uses this more than any other weapon
A nxiety, worry, nervousness, confusion are all seeds for it
R ealize God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, love, sound mind.
2 Timothy 1:7
E nemy uses this more than any other weapon
A nxiety, worry, nervousness, confusion are all seeds for it
R ealize God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, love, sound mind.
2 Timothy 1:7
#God
24 reads
5 Comments
memoo1490
Poem Published
8th Oct 2018 10:16am
8th Oct 2018 10:16am
pray to God
i heard the sound at night
get up from that fright
get ride from that sight
wish and stay for a time
pray to me ask me your desire
ask me to cure you from the paralysis
cry to me see me your weakness
ask me if you want some money
ask me if you want tobe a guy
that everyone wants to be that guy
all minds admire himand so the eye
obey me in doing the good
you gain the help of me
the god calls you ,who will be that guy
get up from that fright
get ride from that sight
wish and stay for a time
pray to me ask me your desire
ask me to cure you from the paralysis
cry to me see me your weakness
ask me if you want some money
ask me if you want tobe a guy
that everyone wants to be that guy
all minds admire himand so the eye
obey me in doing the good
you gain the help of me
the god calls you ,who will be that guy
#hope
#night
#God
#scary
#TimeHeals
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