Spiritual Poems Seeking Friendly Advice
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Poetry which debates religion, atheism and New Age spirituality
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Adelphina
Poem Published
1st Dec 2021 1:20am
1st Dec 2021 1:20am
Death Wish Kiss
Born from the rib of my brother
Didn't ask to be the starter sister
Looking over my shoulder
Lost eyes searching for my mother
Guess it wasn't meant to be
Long past time to be set free
So I headed toward the Knowledge Tree
The slithering snake was irrelevant
Didn't feel right being a servant
Needing to make my own mistakes
In the form of a shiny ruby red apple
Juicy and plump ready for the pluck
My sharp teeth wished me luck
As I took my first bite of rebellion
And...
Didn't ask to be the starter sister
Looking over my shoulder
Lost eyes searching for my mother
Guess it wasn't meant to be
Long past time to be set free
So I headed toward the Knowledge Tree
The slithering snake was irrelevant
Didn't feel right being a servant
Needing to make my own mistakes
In the form of a shiny ruby red apple
Juicy and plump ready for the pluck
My sharp teeth wished me luck
As I took my first bite of rebellion
And...
#women
#God
#morality
64 reads
16 Comments
goldenmyst
Poem Published
30th Nov 2021 4:53pm
30th Nov 2021 4:53pm
Powwow & Father
Powwow & Father
Iroquois Chanteuse sings a Celtic mood
For Powwow gatherers deep in the dusk
When shadows of the quiet quilt the evening
In the forever dream of a lost sun
Whose whereabouts are in the blackberry fields
On the horizon of silent tears
Of a Tibetan plateau where rhymes grow
Far from the piney halls of Valhalla
Where mystic embers go on a spark journey
To ascend the fires of Eden
But the keepers of the peace torch understand
And follow our trail
On roads etched in charcoal night
That veils...
Iroquois Chanteuse sings a Celtic mood
For Powwow gatherers deep in the dusk
When shadows of the quiet quilt the evening
In the forever dream of a lost sun
Whose whereabouts are in the blackberry fields
On the horizon of silent tears
Of a Tibetan plateau where rhymes grow
Far from the piney halls of Valhalla
Where mystic embers go on a spark journey
To ascend the fires of Eden
But the keepers of the peace torch understand
And follow our trail
On roads etched in charcoal night
That veils...
#father
#nature
#fatherhood
18 reads
0 Comments
APissPoorShaman
Poem Published
29th Nov 2021 6:20pm
29th Nov 2021 6:20pm
Finding a Way back Home
sunlight plays across the wings of a dragonfly,
shattering light in a thousands rays of laughter
My spirit drifting on the breath of fate,
seeking the beating heart of faith
I am the tree, the sunlight, and the meadow,
I am the dragonfly shattering the sunlight into joy,
I am the journey that we left behind ...
shattering light in a thousands rays of laughter
My spirit drifting on the breath of fate,
seeking the beating heart of faith
I am the tree, the sunlight, and the meadow,
I am the dragonfly shattering the sunlight into joy,
I am the journey that we left behind ...
#faith
#rebirth
#fate
#redemption
#philosophical
40 reads
1 Comment
Vferry
Poem Published
28th Nov 2021 2:35am
28th Nov 2021 2:35am
The End Again
The end begins again
Between the pause
Of musical notes
That drop from the air
An orchestra’s pain
Too heavy to hold
By the violin strings
We held hands to
Until we could not
You are gone
And became a prayer
That starts and ends day
Wishing eternal rest
But in the end
Tomorrow begins again
Between the pause
Of musical notes
That drop from the air
An orchestra’s pain
Too heavy to hold
By the violin strings
We held hands to
Until we could not
You are gone
And became a prayer
That starts and ends day
Wishing eternal rest
But in the end
Tomorrow begins again
#love
#loneliness
#death
44 reads
1 Comment
TheFutureEmbrace
Poem Published
26th Nov 2021 8:45am
26th Nov 2021 8:45am
The Meadow
In dreams we bloom
like snowdrops in the sun
carpets of white, amongst
the whistling of the winds.
But no Autumn comes
no branches laid bare
only leaves singing,
green and rich,
and teeming with warmth.
Upon hills we loom,
where valleys call
to us. Booming, louder
than ever before.
Here within the heather
the voice of the next,
beckoning us to leave
those phantoms behind,
transcend these bonds.
I can still smell you, ...
like snowdrops in the sun
carpets of white, amongst
the whistling of the winds.
But no Autumn comes
no branches laid bare
only leaves singing,
green and rich,
and teeming with warmth.
Upon hills we loom,
where valleys call
to us. Booming, louder
than ever before.
Here within the heather
the voice of the next,
beckoning us to leave
those phantoms behind,
transcend these bonds.
I can still smell you, ...
#love
#dreams
#nature
55 reads
4 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
25th Nov 2021 6:22am
25th Nov 2021 6:22am
Thy Kingdom Come...
I’ve gotten multiple inquiries asking me in regards to why I write about Angels
If I close my eyes, I can picture the reminisce of Hell and Heaven, as if I was there among the three Kings journeying, awaiting to see a false illusion in a manger
Ancient times is so misunderstood, everyone claiming to be some Demigod or the encircled one in grandeur rites of the five rings of witchhood
Exemplifying to be the best, casting first stones, promising in vanity to be the chosen one, no, it is only an assertion which wallows when the mind is mentally unfit, resurrected as a...
If I close my eyes, I can picture the reminisce of Hell and Heaven, as if I was there among the three Kings journeying, awaiting to see a false illusion in a manger
Ancient times is so misunderstood, everyone claiming to be some Demigod or the encircled one in grandeur rites of the five rings of witchhood
Exemplifying to be the best, casting first stones, promising in vanity to be the chosen one, no, it is only an assertion which wallows when the mind is mentally unfit, resurrected as a...
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#myself
#philosophical
#morality
75 reads
12 Comments
Em-ily
_Erica
_Erica
Poem Published
24th Nov 2021 11:13pm
24th Nov 2021 11:13pm
Dirty Blue
Al Tve said above a whisper
There is a sortow to be desired
What they say is true
This color around you You're curled up warm
in your own ecomer of Sodom Did you agree to be This fall has no bottom?
There is a sonow to be desired To be somow's desire
All we move by the book of numbers Im held together by sing I hear not the voices of others The bells of Leuven ring Fear...
There is a sortow to be desired
What they say is true
This color around you You're curled up warm
in your own ecomer of Sodom Did you agree to be This fall has no bottom?
There is a sonow to be desired To be somow's desire
All we move by the book of numbers Im held together by sing I hear not the voices of others The bells of Leuven ring Fear...
#nature
#mountains
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Em-ily
_Erica
_Erica
Poem Published
24th Nov 2021 1:33pm
24th Nov 2021 1:33pm
And don't know how
Sleep beneath the multing sky
I whopor all your sm I know not where you
And I'm of love
And I'm hullof wonder
And I'm full of love
And I'm falling
Were here
Im men now
And don't yet know how
I whopor all your sm I know not where you
And I'm of love
And I'm hullof wonder
And I'm full of love
And I'm falling
Were here
Im men now
And don't yet know how
#love
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Em-ily
_Erica
_Erica
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2021 9:14pm
23rd Nov 2021 9:14pm
Awakening, flaming dart
↑
Today
I'm five years old It's getting cold
I've got my big coat on
I hear your laugh And look up smiling at you
You
Through the woods, and frosted moors Bed down upon the drifting snow I know not where you are
I run and run
Past the pumpkin patch
And the tractor rides
Look now, the sky is gold
Past the snow-caked hedgerows I
I am nothing without
Listen
The Good Hand
...
Today
I'm five years old It's getting cold
I've got my big coat on
I hear your laugh And look up smiling at you
You
Through the woods, and frosted moors Bed down upon the drifting snow I know not where you are
I run and run
Past the pumpkin patch
And the tractor rides
Look now, the sky is gold
Past the snow-caked hedgerows I
I am nothing without
Listen
The Good Hand
...
#spiritual
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0 Comments
Em-ily
_Erica
_Erica
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2021 9:13pm
23rd Nov 2021 9:13pm
Concepts combined with understanding
There's also this
There's also this (with) (for) don't even (Remember) It's good (Encouragement) (i do) Speak (decide) know from the beginning Strong (Speak, decide) (Speak, decide) Cloudy and warm (This image) (I hold The Chair on the bridge) How is it set (I died) I'm sorry
Remember that bitterness (is easy) Knowledge (reconnect) It was sharp I'm happy today The one who came before the one who came before is happy) Wonderful Great (Introduction) These simple (tonight) Or a spiritual method that is (Easy to forget) (Many are the song)...
There's also this (with) (for) don't even (Remember) It's good (Encouragement) (i do) Speak (decide) know from the beginning Strong (Speak, decide) (Speak, decide) Cloudy and warm (This image) (I hold The Chair on the bridge) How is it set (I died) I'm sorry
Remember that bitterness (is easy) Knowledge (reconnect) It was sharp I'm happy today The one who came before the one who came before is happy) Wonderful Great (Introduction) These simple (tonight) Or a spiritual method that is (Easy to forget) (Many are the song)...
#spiritual
30 reads
0 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2021 3:55am
23rd Nov 2021 3:55am
Oh Luna... How Sweet Thy Sight
Relax your lungs, open your mind
Let your heart soothe your blood flow as my words shall caress any lactic concerns
There are no enigmas in this one, so just listen to my story and harmonize if you may
Enjoy this tranquil ride
It’s as if my mind is roaming an allegorical realm and just spurts thoughts into the galaxy
In an endless trance of amazement
My mind is a living allegory, constantly thinking and imagining beyond the stratosphere
Hmmm, a divine logician who is in awe with the connection and...
Let your heart soothe your blood flow as my words shall caress any lactic concerns
There are no enigmas in this one, so just listen to my story and harmonize if you may
Enjoy this tranquil ride
It’s as if my mind is roaming an allegorical realm and just spurts thoughts into the galaxy
In an endless trance of amazement
My mind is a living allegory, constantly thinking and imagining beyond the stratosphere
Hmmm, a divine logician who is in awe with the connection and...
#universe
#moon
#astronomy
71 reads
6 Comments
Write-On
Poem Published
20th Nov 2021 4:21pm
20th Nov 2021 4:21pm
light
We exist in a plane of balance, a speck of light.
#minimalist
35 reads
0 Comments
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