Spiritual Poems Seeking Friendly Advice
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Poetry which debates religion, atheism and New Age spirituality - Friendly feedback has been requested for these poems.
george4man2box
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:17pm
Yesterday 9:17pm
Claire Wineland -
(whose video powerfully, profoundly, and
positively affected this southeastern residing
Pennsylvania papa)!
Afflicted with Cystic Fibrosis since her birth
contagious exuberance, gung-ho,
infectious jubilance noah dearth
which eye opening (then tearing)
podcast link sent tummy
FaceBook account,
she distilled and
didst poignantly blog the
purpose driven life,
no matter...hmm...
her existential time
nearing thee finis
line on planet Earth
though upworthy defying ...
positively affected this southeastern residing
Pennsylvania papa)!
Afflicted with Cystic Fibrosis since her birth
contagious exuberance, gung-ho,
infectious jubilance noah dearth
which eye opening (then tearing)
podcast link sent tummy
FaceBook account,
she distilled and
didst poignantly blog the
purpose driven life,
no matter...hmm...
her existential time
nearing thee finis
line on planet Earth
though upworthy defying ...
#strength
#hope
#courage
#motivational
#inspirational
5 reads
0 Comments
AEMelia564
Y
Y
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:55am
Yesterday 8:55am
Meteor of the muses
When sad the sea whispered
Nautic nebula
Washed her face in these tides.
I saught my siblings
Between fleeting stars
When sad the sea spoke
Her articulate landscape
Planted these words
When sad the sea silenced
I heard horizons pledge
This place of poetry
Nautic nebula
Washed her face in these tides.
I saught my siblings
Between fleeting stars
When sad the sea spoke
Her articulate landscape
Planted these words
When sad the sea silenced
I heard horizons pledge
This place of poetry
#water
#shadows
#silence #PowerOfWords
#silence #PowerOfWords
22 reads
3 Comments
rockyriver
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:05am
Yesterday 6:05am
Restore
When three days I’ve wandered
When three days I’ve cried
When three days I’ve hidden
When three days I’ve lied
Three less days to be with you
Three less whispers of love
Three less thoughts to share with you
Three less stories thereof
Three less questions to bring to you
Three less notions to wonder
Three less visions to dream with you
Three less ideas to ponder
Three less words to speak to you
Three less affections to give
Three less journeys...
When three days I’ve cried
When three days I’ve hidden
When three days I’ve lied
Three less days to be with you
Three less whispers of love
Three less thoughts to share with you
Three less stories thereof
Three less questions to bring to you
Three less notions to wonder
Three less visions to dream with you
Three less ideas to ponder
Three less words to speak to you
Three less affections to give
Three less journeys...
#hope
#redemption
76 reads
0 Comments
rockyriver
Poem Published
19th Jul 2018 8:53pm
19th Jul 2018 8:53pm
Come
Come with boldness
with confident heart
to love unfailing
love never ending
love unpretending
love transcending
Come with trust
with open heart
to faith believing
faith meditating
faith motivating
faith celebrating
Come expecting
with steadfast heart
new day dawning
hope reclaiming
joyful praising
God amazing
Come be present
with mindful heart
aware of mercy
grace forgiving
kindness giving
generous living
Come be holy
for God is holy ...
with confident heart
to love unfailing
love never ending
love unpretending
love transcending
Come with trust
with open heart
to faith believing
faith meditating
faith motivating
faith celebrating
Come expecting
with steadfast heart
new day dawning
hope reclaiming
joyful praising
God amazing
Come be present
with mindful heart
aware of mercy
grace forgiving
kindness giving
generous living
Come be holy
for God is holy ...
#love
#hope
#God #faith
#God #faith
95 reads
1 Comment
oskar
Poem Published
18th Jul 2018 8:08am
18th Jul 2018 8:08am
poets and religion
Religion and a poet
When I was nine years of age I came to see religion
as a fairy tale and as we know the bible is written
by many scribes during a time, some of them were wise.
I like the Old Testament because it is full
of blood and thunder, the New Testament is a construction
a clean-up of the real thing making palatable for the squeamish.
I think the creator of our world as an overarching intelligence that when the job was done left its way.
The creator is neither good nor bad for it has no interest in
the world besides creating it, so it...
When I was nine years of age I came to see religion
as a fairy tale and as we know the bible is written
by many scribes during a time, some of them were wise.
I like the Old Testament because it is full
of blood and thunder, the New Testament is a construction
a clean-up of the real thing making palatable for the squeamish.
I think the creator of our world as an overarching intelligence that when the job was done left its way.
The creator is neither good nor bad for it has no interest in
the world besides creating it, so it...
#religion
#Christian
#Buddhist #Taoism
#Buddhist #Taoism
45 reads
0 Comments
PeaceFlpw
Peace Flow
Peace Flow
Poem Published
16th Jul 2018 7:03pm
16th Jul 2018 7:03pm
I wish
I wish things were different....
#universe
#humankind
#LifeCycle
28 reads
2 Comments
PeaceFlpw
Peace Flow
Peace Flow
Poem Published
16th Jul 2018 1:56pm
16th Jul 2018 1:56pm
Real Depression....gasping for air, above and below; in the stratosphere or the depths of the sea; pure misery
gasping for air,
above and below;
in the stratosphere,
or in the depths of the sea;
this is what it feels like....
above and below;
in the stratosphere,
or in the depths of the sea;
this is what it feels like....
#anxiety
#loneliness
#heartbroken
#despair
#disappointment
33 reads
0 Comments
thelovepoet
Poem Published
15th Jul 2018 5:54pm
15th Jul 2018 5:54pm
All Is Blessed
Every Little Flower
will remind you
of all Beauty
even the changing
of the light
will be like the
blessing of the new
when you can see
one is all ...all is one
will remind you
of all Beauty
even the changing
of the light
will be like the
blessing of the new
when you can see
one is all ...all is one
#TruthOfLife
32 reads
3 Comments
Murk
Poem Published
14th Jul 2018 6:05pm
14th Jul 2018 6:05pm
The Devils fruit
In the beginning of creation man and woman were blind
not in sight but insight and comprehension
given a since of freedom they frolicked amongst the garden
with only directions of God and no sin
who sent or welcomed the serpent
but at this moment
God seen this and knew it was urgent
but he ignored and further more
allowed the serpent to bait and lure
his naïve creations
who had never felt the burn of temptations before
As he slithered that the fruit would make you wise
would give you sight and insight...
not in sight but insight and comprehension
given a since of freedom they frolicked amongst the garden
with only directions of God and no sin
who sent or welcomed the serpent
but at this moment
God seen this and knew it was urgent
but he ignored and further more
allowed the serpent to bait and lure
his naïve creations
who had never felt the burn of temptations before
As he slithered that the fruit would make you wise
would give you sight and insight...
#confusion
40 reads
2 Comments
TIG
Poem Published
12th Jul 2018 7:58pm
12th Jul 2018 7:58pm
Gratitude
Not often enough
do I express thankfulness
so many blessings
i do not know where to start
and when I should ever end
do I express thankfulness
so many blessings
i do not know where to start
and when I should ever end
#love
#gratitude
33 reads
4 Comments
TIG
Poem Published
10th Jul 2018 6:07pm
10th Jul 2018 6:07pm
With Gods help, it i never as bad as it seems
I have slipped into a dark place
I struggle
Webs of history
in the shadows
I try to illuminate (2 Corinthians 4:6)
but feel like their is
a blanket of darkness over me
My mind says familiar
My heart says
undesirable
I am as low as dirt
Is this what it feels like to be invisible
Even smells are dank
Simple things are so difficult
it makes minutes feel longer
Voices now faint
A chill all around
I pray to you God
help me to get out of this funk
I then spring forth like ...
I struggle
Webs of history
in the shadows
I try to illuminate (2 Corinthians 4:6)
but feel like their is
a blanket of darkness over me
My mind says familiar
My heart says
undesirable
I am as low as dirt
Is this what it feels like to be invisible
Even smells are dank
Simple things are so difficult
it makes minutes feel longer
Voices now faint
A chill all around
I pray to you God
help me to get out of this funk
I then spring forth like ...
#happiness
#dark
#emptiness
29 reads
4 Comments
TIG
Poem Published
10th Jul 2018 5:31pm
10th Jul 2018 5:31pm
You are in my heart
A collab (blessing) between Allyzone, TIG and the Holy Spirit
Thanks to all
It feels like I knew your existence way back when
Now we have the same truth, that you spoke then
some were against you, with all your love
the prophecy carried out, from heaven above
You left "The Word" for us it reveals
The truths, your love, which you did not conceal
I feel I have known you from the start
In the depths of my soul and in my heart
God give me your wisdom, fill me like your vessel
to have the...
Thanks to all
It feels like I knew your existence way back when
Now we have the same truth, that you spoke then
some were against you, with all your love
the prophecy carried out, from heaven above
You left "The Word" for us it reveals
The truths, your love, which you did not conceal
I feel I have known you from the start
In the depths of my soul and in my heart
God give me your wisdom, fill me like your vessel
to have the...
#hope
#courage
#forgiveness
#God
#faith
50 reads
7 Comments
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