Spiritual Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Poetry which debates religion, atheism and New Age spirituality
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JohnnyBlaze
Poem Published
Yesterday 12:35pm
Yesterday 12:35pm
D I S T R I B U T A R Y
Everything desirable
or deemed necessary
pours from an abundance
often referred to as God
greeting you in the flowing
stream your daily existence is
until convinced otherwise
---there is not enough
food on the table
shelter from the elements
pure oxygen for breathing
time to accomplish goals
money in any pocket
physical health
companionship
purpose to Life
Love to go around
And when this happens
misery is experienced
in all of its glorious
abundance as well'ed
...
or deemed necessary
pours from an abundance
often referred to as God
greeting you in the flowing
stream your daily existence is
until convinced otherwise
---there is not enough
food on the table
shelter from the elements
pure oxygen for breathing
time to accomplish goals
money in any pocket
physical health
companionship
purpose to Life
Love to go around
And when this happens
misery is experienced
in all of its glorious
abundance as well'ed
...
#universe
#spiritual
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SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2021 2:34pm
2nd Dec 2021 2:34pm
Dear Corine's eyes,
When the world
Makes you sting and cry
And feel used up
The daylight hurts
And dark impossible
Isolation
Feels necessary
Remember to leave
The door open
For grandmother
Who has vision to spare
Makes you sting and cry
And feel used up
The daylight hurts
And dark impossible
Isolation
Feels necessary
Remember to leave
The door open
For grandmother
Who has vision to spare
#family
#LifeStruggles
#hurt
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5 Comments
asbr808
Anthony R
Anthony R
Poem Published
1st Dec 2021 00:15am
1st Dec 2021 00:15am
4 Way Street
Breath, breadth, depth, death
Intriguing that all 4 mean the same thing, mirrored,
Take a breath, no more: death
Breadth=depth=no more life to live left
The canary sings from its cage
Let it out and
The cat kills it
And the frost has not yet frozen the earth
So digging the grave is still viable
And I kiss you
And I tell you we’ll be together in love
Intriguing that all 4 mean the same thing, mirrored,
Take a breath, no more: death
Breadth=depth=no more life to live left
The canary sings from its cage
Let it out and
The cat kills it
And the frost has not yet frozen the earth
So digging the grave is still viable
And I kiss you
And I tell you we’ll be together in love
#winter
#graveyard
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2 Comments
kittyCat
Poem Published
30th Nov 2021 10:19pm
30th Nov 2021 10:19pm
Born in the the Primordial Waters
Breathe deep, feel deeply, and love even deeper..💜 go into your heart, remember your power, embrace it and share it with the world so all may remember who they are, awaken the divinity within, we are no longer sleeping.. Awaken to your divine purpose embody the I am. The I that was never born and could never die. Remember you are eternity in a form; but you are born out of the formless. A being of pure consciousness✨ the divine I Am presence manifest upon the 🌎.
#LifeChangingMoment
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kittyCat
Poem Published
30th Nov 2021 8:03pm
30th Nov 2021 8:03pm
the Eternal Majesty
to dream is to behold the splendor that ever permeates all things
what it means to be alive
and feel the changing of the tides
closer now more than ever
feel you with every breathe
home is now
what it means to be alive
and feel the changing of the tides
closer now more than ever
feel you with every breathe
home is now
#dreams
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Wired6
Poem Published
29th Nov 2021 11:31pm
29th Nov 2021 11:31pm
Imperceptible 2 The Touch.
Just Like gravity,
this entity is a natural Law.
No vengeance lives,
just Justice and fairness
2 everything and every one involved.
A Divine simplicity,
yet complex,in its form.
You must remember,through all thoughts,
via action,this entity,distributes consequences,
dark or light,or both,2 all.
This entity,we know(or do we know?),
As "Karma"- A great cosmic teacher,
We cannot ignore.
One of the most important laws,governing our human lives.
2 evolve,we must experience the Karmic nature oscillating ...
this entity is a natural Law.
No vengeance lives,
just Justice and fairness
2 everything and every one involved.
A Divine simplicity,
yet complex,in its form.
You must remember,through all thoughts,
via action,this entity,distributes consequences,
dark or light,or both,2 all.
This entity,we know(or do we know?),
As "Karma"- A great cosmic teacher,
We cannot ignore.
One of the most important laws,governing our human lives.
2 evolve,we must experience the Karmic nature oscillating ...
#universe
#evolution
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0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
29th Nov 2021 10:37am
29th Nov 2021 10:37am
I Believe In
Here my son
Take this food
I can see
You and your Child
Are Hungry
It is
A Gift from god
No priest
It Is Not
A Gift
From a god
It Is A Gift
From You
A Kind Human Being
It is You
I thank
It is You
I Believe
Take this food
I can see
You and your Child
Are Hungry
It is
A Gift from god
No priest
It Is Not
A Gift
From a god
It Is A Gift
From You
A Kind Human Being
It is You
I thank
It is You
I Believe
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
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Laluma
Poem Published
28th Nov 2021 5:00pm
28th Nov 2021 5:00pm
The scandal of church
The hypocrisy in the sanctified sacred walls of shame
Where secrets are kept for centuries to preserve a semblance of normality
Buried beneath in the ancient crypts deep in death those sins lies lay
Practised perfectly is the art of eluding with delusions of piety
While embraced by the priceless customized fisherman's ring
Filling pews with thousands of faithful worshippers in churches
Globally numbering more than two billion
The televangelists who have kept coffers full with offerings
Live in mansions in millionaire celebrity neighbourhoods
While...
Where secrets are kept for centuries to preserve a semblance of normality
Buried beneath in the ancient crypts deep in death those sins lies lay
Practised perfectly is the art of eluding with delusions of piety
While embraced by the priceless customized fisherman's ring
Filling pews with thousands of faithful worshippers in churches
Globally numbering more than two billion
The televangelists who have kept coffers full with offerings
Live in mansions in millionaire celebrity neighbourhoods
While...
#lies
#religion
#faith
#hypocrisy
#manipulation
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Wired6
Poem Published
28th Nov 2021 3:22pm
28th Nov 2021 3:22pm
Our Lord.
How Great and Glorious you are Oh Lord
To accept me as I am.
You died,but after three days,
came back alive again.
To you Jesus Christ,I show Reverence.
I show Reverence Jesus Christ.
I may not be a Chris- ti- an,2 Christian's that view.
Or may not have been enlightened
In a Christian's world view.
But I'm bathed in Jesus' Light
And I'm a Believer,
Of Our Lord,Jesus Christ,
For I don't need a church 2 believe
In Our Lord Jesus Christ.
Amen. Amen.
©Wired6.22/07/2021
To accept me as I am.
You died,but after three days,
came back alive again.
To you Jesus Christ,I show Reverence.
I show Reverence Jesus Christ.
I may not be a Chris- ti- an,2 Christian's that view.
Or may not have been enlightened
In a Christian's world view.
But I'm bathed in Jesus' Light
And I'm a Believer,
Of Our Lord,Jesus Christ,
For I don't need a church 2 believe
In Our Lord Jesus Christ.
Amen. Amen.
©Wired6.22/07/2021
#spiritual
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Keilani
Poem Published
28th Nov 2021 1:25pm
28th Nov 2021 1:25pm
Those Who Have Ears Let Them Hear
Sequestered
in the opiate
of silence
I near
the Root
and Cause
Deeper
where wind
is assuaged
and a flicker
ignites
to flame
cliffs slide
into oceans
submerging the burden
of notions
Death and life
...
in the opiate
of silence
I near
the Root
and Cause
Deeper
where wind
is assuaged
and a flicker
ignites
to flame
cliffs slide
into oceans
submerging the burden
of notions
Death and life
...
#TruthOfLife
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drone
Poem Published
28th Nov 2021 9:49am
28th Nov 2021 9:49am
Buddhism?
Has one never
Considered
The possibility
When it is said
That your God is
Within
Your doubts
The thoughts
That you speak to
That you
Argue with
That you blame
When things
Go wrong
Could it be
The only god
That Exists
Is You
Considered
The possibility
When it is said
That your God is
Within
Your doubts
The thoughts
That you speak to
That you
Argue with
That you blame
When things
Go wrong
Could it be
The only god
That Exists
Is You
#honesty
#SelfReflection
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4 Comments
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
27th Nov 2021 6:05pm
27th Nov 2021 6:05pm
Contentment
seek not
fleeting sensation
happiness
seen briefly
then disappearing
without a trace
seek instead
enduring satisfaction
contentment
seek to be content in life
at the end of each day
and again when you awake each morning
(C) 2021 Raibeart Bruis
fleeting sensation
happiness
seen briefly
then disappearing
without a trace
seek instead
enduring satisfaction
contentment
seek to be content in life
at the end of each day
and again when you awake each morning
(C) 2021 Raibeart Bruis
#spiritual
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3 Comments
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