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Fastball - My Spiritual Awakening through Baseball
I can hit the fastball
But I really want to hit the slider
Same thing in writing verse
The erotic comes easy
but my own core emotions
always leave me wanting more
fom myself
So, no erotic poems this morning
Going back to the basics
My need to write
I hope you will let me in
Even though I have been hard on you
I'm not a bad guy
And I don't spit too much
When I'm at the plate
But I really want to hit the slider
Same thing in writing verse
The erotic comes easy
but my own core emotions
always leave me wanting more
fom myself
So, no erotic poems this morning
Going back to the basics
My need to write
I hope you will let me in
Even though I have been hard on you
I'm not a bad guy
And I don't spit too much
When I'm at the plate
Published 28th Jul 2014
| Edited 11th May 2018
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28th Jul 2014 12:54pm
This is marvelous, Granite, luv :-* ~
What great juxtaposition of metaphor you're using between baseball and your emotions.
What great juxtaposition of metaphor you're using between baseball and your emotions.
28th Jul 2014 1:01pm
Thx Savaja
Stepping outside of my comfort zone a bit, it's time for me to go here
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Stepping outside of my comfort zone a bit, it's time for me to go here
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