Poems About Love by Top Critiquers
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Poems about love by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:25pm
Yesterday 6:25pm
~of this elongating ever life… dotted in differential deltaic deaths
this young midnight’s chilling air
in a weirdly turning on groovy beat
mixing in your smoking touchy heat
-tastes a warm spice of musky mace
I crave for
a metallic blood flower rapturous
I bleed and bloom in a pleasantly~
pungent addictive blossom.. that
even this waiting nocturne animal
in your plunging deep purplish trysts..
pierces sharp unto this seductive
self digging hell in an unreturning
pathway spiral..
hitting red & black as sky~ high
cranial kicks..
this unbearably...
in a weirdly turning on groovy beat
mixing in your smoking touchy heat
-tastes a warm spice of musky mace
I crave for
a metallic blood flower rapturous
I bleed and bloom in a pleasantly~
pungent addictive blossom.. that
even this waiting nocturne animal
in your plunging deep purplish trysts..
pierces sharp unto this seductive
self digging hell in an unreturning
pathway spiral..
hitting red & black as sky~ high
cranial kicks..
this unbearably...
#death
#love
#night #sensual
#night #sensual
54 reads
3 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
27th Nov 2024 3:22pm
27th Nov 2024 3:22pm
Happy Thanksgiving
Life is meant to be enjoyed, daily supped on all its beautiful pyramids of ancient affiliations
Revered in all its spiritual dedications
Life and rebirth, no death of a vessel's ascension
Your soul’s energy is the book written upon your past lives, your earthly foundation
Uprise from this 3-D dimension, filtered with hate, and strife, the blueprint of your narrations
Spiritual growth to accept the laws of higher vibrations
Beyond that pineal gland, it’s yours to partake as we all stand on tainted gravity
Allow time to progress...
Revered in all its spiritual dedications
Life and rebirth, no death of a vessel's ascension
Your soul’s energy is the book written upon your past lives, your earthly foundation
Uprise from this 3-D dimension, filtered with hate, and strife, the blueprint of your narrations
Spiritual growth to accept the laws of higher vibrations
Beyond that pineal gland, it’s yours to partake as we all stand on tainted gravity
Allow time to progress...
#love
#morality
#peace
245 reads
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 4:54pm
27th Jan 2025 4:54pm
She Walks In Silence
She walks in silence, like a lapping wave
drowned in chastity and flooded with rave
holding dear and tight her very beauties
denying all her gems and rubies.
Her powers disabled under the spell
the flame in wouldn’t break out of its shell.
Tempted to trace a humming call of fate
allured but reluctant to take the bait.
The strings of her heart lost their pitch and tone
the clutches of mind hurting to the bone.
Untraceable are the paths to no end
unable to soul unself and ascend.
She walks in silence, like a gliding breeze ...
drowned in chastity and flooded with rave
holding dear and tight her very beauties
denying all her gems and rubies.
Her powers disabled under the spell
the flame in wouldn’t break out of its shell.
Tempted to trace a humming call of fate
allured but reluctant to take the bait.
The strings of her heart lost their pitch and tone
the clutches of mind hurting to the bone.
Untraceable are the paths to no end
unable to soul unself and ascend.
She walks in silence, like a gliding breeze ...
#courage
#inspirational
#love
#strength
#TimeHeals
62 reads
8 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
3rd Nov 2024 00:18am
3rd Nov 2024 00:18am
Ofrenda
My father’s ashes sit on my sister’s windowsill
Along with other family members overlooking the yard
And whenever I visit on festive occasions
I make sure I have a drink
With a slight nod and toast to him
In honor of his memory
So I think…
Maybe when my time comes
And my kids and grandkids put my picture out
I’d want them to remember our times
As they read some of my poetry
Giggling while reading them rhymes
Then I’ll come across the bridge
Smelling the food and hearing them laugh
And I’ll say - laugh because...
Along with other family members overlooking the yard
And whenever I visit on festive occasions
I make sure I have a drink
With a slight nod and toast to him
In honor of his memory
So I think…
Maybe when my time comes
And my kids and grandkids put my picture out
I’d want them to remember our times
As they read some of my poetry
Giggling while reading them rhymes
Then I’ll come across the bridge
Smelling the food and hearing them laugh
And I’ll say - laugh because...
#children
#family
#father #love
#father #love
121 reads
8 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:31pm
Yesterday 11:31pm
Two Sheets of Vampire
Two sheets intoxication dripping
hammered in ecstasy metamorphosis
a burning ember lighting my fire
tasting your skin between my lips
filling me with grace full of life
never ending peace of twilight
hammered in ecstasy metamorphosis
a burning ember lighting my fire
tasting your skin between my lips
filling me with grace full of life
never ending peace of twilight
#love
#romantic
#vampires
33 reads
0 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 10:10am
23rd Jan 2025 10:10am
intimacy
as soon as he saw his reflection in my eyes
colorful rivers rose on my cheeks
as soon as he put his head on my shoulder
i became like an evening even in the middle of the day
as soon as he moved his brush laden with hot ink on my lips
i scattered on his chest like the colours of a rainbow
as soon as he pressed my muffins,
i bowed down like a plant in shame
as soon as he licked my honey-roasted thighs
fragrant lychee drops flowed from me
as soon as his rough tongue kissed my roots
a new world adorned with...
colorful rivers rose on my cheeks
as soon as he put his head on my shoulder
i became like an evening even in the middle of the day
as soon as he moved his brush laden with hot ink on my lips
i scattered on his chest like the colours of a rainbow
as soon as he pressed my muffins,
i bowed down like a plant in shame
as soon as he licked my honey-roasted thighs
fragrant lychee drops flowed from me
as soon as his rough tongue kissed my roots
a new world adorned with...
#erotic
#love
#romantic
188 reads
14 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 00:23am
3rd Dec 2024 00:23am
I can feel it
I can feel it...
the sun on my face
the breeze in my hair
the joy in my gut
the spring in my strut
I can feel it...
the dark in my veins
the shame in my soul
the wrong in my right
the cry in the night
I don't know how to stop
I don't know how to feel it all
I want to shut my eyes
Let the cloak of numbness fall
To feel the love
is to know the hurt
.
the sun on my face
the breeze in my hair
the joy in my gut
the spring in my strut
I can feel it...
the dark in my veins
the shame in my soul
the wrong in my right
the cry in the night
I don't know how to stop
I don't know how to feel it all
I want to shut my eyes
Let the cloak of numbness fall
To feel the love
is to know the hurt
.
#anxiety
#emotions
#hurt #love
#hurt #love
141 reads
19 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
18th Apr 2024 9:00pm
18th Apr 2024 9:00pm
You are the sweetest ingredient...
Hair smells like cinnamon,
skin is as soft as butter.
arching my back, adding curves
Intoxicating mixtures.
Forest honey is on the lips,
And flour, like tenderness,
All plays in the hands,
Turns into dough.
I bake something special,
out of my love and feelings.
I sprinkle beauty...
that I kept for you.
The aroma is incomparable,
I will mix smiles in it.
This dish has a special taste,
I add soul...
All the warmth and care,
an amber ray of sunshine.
Mixing in key lime zest...
I am so tart. ...
skin is as soft as butter.
arching my back, adding curves
Intoxicating mixtures.
Forest honey is on the lips,
And flour, like tenderness,
All plays in the hands,
Turns into dough.
I bake something special,
out of my love and feelings.
I sprinkle beauty...
that I kept for you.
The aroma is incomparable,
I will mix smiles in it.
This dish has a special taste,
I add soul...
All the warmth and care,
an amber ray of sunshine.
Mixing in key lime zest...
I am so tart. ...
#food
#love
#men
#passion
#sexy
764 reads
51 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
15th Jul 2023 4:09pm
15th Jul 2023 4:09pm
some Saturdays
driving on the main
avenue
some Saturdays I
see them leaving
the house
both with hair as
white as the snow
peaks of Kilimanjaro
she on a cane
him with arm wrapped
firmly around her
moving slowly as twilight
on a summers Solstice
as they walk in the final
act of the their lives
together
the gentleness
the grace
the endurance
and under skies as blue
as the face of an angry
child holding his ...
avenue
some Saturdays I
see them leaving
the house
both with hair as
white as the snow
peaks of Kilimanjaro
she on a cane
him with arm wrapped
firmly around her
moving slowly as twilight
on a summers Solstice
as they walk in the final
act of the their lives
together
the gentleness
the grace
the endurance
and under skies as blue
as the face of an angry
child holding his ...
#love
#admiration
#respect
178 reads
6 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 11:51pm
28th Jan 2025 11:51pm
poet, footballer, whatever ..
being an amateur at something
is more enjoyable than when it’s undertaken
for money, although important,
takes away a little from the pleasure ..
is more enjoyable than when it’s undertaken
for money, although important,
takes away a little from the pleasure ..
#love
42 reads
2 Comments
Metropolis
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 12:53pm
18th Jan 2025 12:53pm
Fantasies are False
A new love
can be like flimsy paper;
any errant wind is liable to take it away.
In romance, security is an illusion.
Red flags are like little surprises.
We screw up when we ignore them.
Fantasies blind us to reality.
Even a lover's friends can be red flags.
Lessons are often learned with a heavy heart,
if at all.
Be realistic:
no one is perfect.
If being alone is better—
…is wiser—
so be it.
---------
But why am I telling you all this.
You already...
can be like flimsy paper;
any errant wind is liable to take it away.
In romance, security is an illusion.
Red flags are like little surprises.
We screw up when we ignore them.
Fantasies blind us to reality.
Even a lover's friends can be red flags.
Lessons are often learned with a heavy heart,
if at all.
Be realistic:
no one is perfect.
If being alone is better—
…is wiser—
so be it.
---------
But why am I telling you all this.
You already...
#love
#sex
68 reads
AverageJoe
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 8:01pm
25th Jan 2025 8:01pm
Iron & Wine
Dark shadowed among the thorns
The petals blush
We all seek our wounds
Draw blood and are bloodied
Roses are red
Like passion and anger
You and I
Iron and wine
Dust clouds the sun
The moon in her phases
The stars
Dust is all we are
"Ashes to ashes, dust to dust..."
But life
Life is in the blood
Make me bleed that I might believe
In love
I love you best when my love is unfettered
Raw and raging
Swearing oaths in waves coiling
Breaking
Lashing shores parched of storms ...
The petals blush
We all seek our wounds
Draw blood and are bloodied
Roses are red
Like passion and anger
You and I
Iron and wine
Dust clouds the sun
The moon in her phases
The stars
Dust is all we are
"Ashes to ashes, dust to dust..."
But life
Life is in the blood
Make me bleed that I might believe
In love
I love you best when my love is unfettered
Raw and raging
Swearing oaths in waves coiling
Breaking
Lashing shores parched of storms ...
#love
57 reads
3 Comments
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