Poems About Love Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about love seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
The Rising...
Easter is a fabulous time of year
Spring is in the air
Sun shines bright
Flowers bloom
It's feeling fresh
But something isn't right
For someone is dying, lying on a cross
He is in hell and no one can help
He is carrying the burden
The weight of our sins
But with death comes life
A sense of beginning
Renewal
Salvation
Starting over
The best part of Easter is...
Knowing he has risen
Born again
A man you can't put down
After your resurrection
You reigned for forty days - ...
Spring is in the air
Sun shines bright
Flowers bloom
It's feeling fresh
But something isn't right
For someone is dying, lying on a cross
He is in hell and no one can help
He is carrying the burden
The weight of our sins
But with death comes life
A sense of beginning
Renewal
Salvation
Starting over
The best part of Easter is...
Knowing he has risen
Born again
A man you can't put down
After your resurrection
You reigned for forty days - ...
#love
#hope
#spring
#Easter
#Christian
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Luce The First
insulated honesty beholding Majesty
it is the laws of attraction
it's not hard to detect
you are envious of me
I'm unsure why, I am a whipping stone
seduce the need and explain
while I show honor and restraint
you love me but...
It's always been there, the ellipsis
valiantly I showed you proof, of my love
but you are ruthless
beings bound to truth we seethe
inside the chaos I see pain
pure and simple
did it ever occur to you, that I could fall in love with another?
deeply troubling...
it is the laws of attraction
it's not hard to detect
you are envious of me
I'm unsure why, I am a whipping stone
seduce the need and explain
while I show honor and restraint
you love me but...
It's always been there, the ellipsis
valiantly I showed you proof, of my love
but you are ruthless
beings bound to truth we seethe
inside the chaos I see pain
pure and simple
did it ever occur to you, that I could fall in love with another?
deeply troubling...
#love
#angels
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after all this time
after all this time
belongs my heart to you, it’s not mine
anymore, it’s all yours
it always has been
the love omnipresent
like the fear i feel
can’t handle feeling safe
my heart sending an appeal
but the way to my brain’s been blocked
highway congestion, veins clogged
“i’m only seventeen,
i don’t know anything
but i know i miss you“
don’t want to hurt your feelings
wanna find out first what i want -
or can handle -
but it feels impossible
without your warm hugs
and tender...
belongs my heart to you, it’s not mine
anymore, it’s all yours
it always has been
the love omnipresent
like the fear i feel
can’t handle feeling safe
my heart sending an appeal
but the way to my brain’s been blocked
highway congestion, veins clogged
“i’m only seventeen,
i don’t know anything
but i know i miss you“
don’t want to hurt your feelings
wanna find out first what i want -
or can handle -
but it feels impossible
without your warm hugs
and tender...
#love
#girlfriend
#confusion
#denial
#fear
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Sweet Tea
On our first date,
She ordered sweet tea.
A whiff of nostalgia swept my being,
As I couldn't imagine the enchantress I was seeing.
Soft russet hair extends to her collar,
Orbs of glacier blue gazes back.
Appearing so delicate and dainty,
Words of honey, she speaks of faintly.
Casual beetroot cardigan, whisked with her complexion,
God, was she beautiful.
Each date to come,
She ordered a sweet tea.
Stunning with every stroll,
Assertiveness branded in her soul.
Appearances hardly seem to differ, ...
She ordered sweet tea.
A whiff of nostalgia swept my being,
As I couldn't imagine the enchantress I was seeing.
Soft russet hair extends to her collar,
Orbs of glacier blue gazes back.
Appearing so delicate and dainty,
Words of honey, she speaks of faintly.
Casual beetroot cardigan, whisked with her complexion,
God, was she beautiful.
Each date to come,
She ordered a sweet tea.
Stunning with every stroll,
Assertiveness branded in her soul.
Appearances hardly seem to differ, ...
#happiness
#love
#romantic #FallingInLove
#romantic #FallingInLove
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sorrow
write a poem of infamy
my story is nothing new
I love with my soul that's what I do
Twelve Years of Sorrow written out
inked with a well of tears
you were there to jeer and cheer
you don't want to hold on or let go of me either
the years have been good to you
time isn't on my side
cruelly, you hurt me with sadness
acutely aware of your movements
I let you down...sure, sure
you reintroduced drugs into my life you were a trigger
so you could play mean hearted games
now a conscience has appeared from...
my story is nothing new
I love with my soul that's what I do
Twelve Years of Sorrow written out
inked with a well of tears
you were there to jeer and cheer
you don't want to hold on or let go of me either
the years have been good to you
time isn't on my side
cruelly, you hurt me with sadness
acutely aware of your movements
I let you down...sure, sure
you reintroduced drugs into my life you were a trigger
so you could play mean hearted games
now a conscience has appeared from...
#love
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Angel Hudson
This name
Oh oh this name
Well I represented
With youthful pride
To be one of you
Is like honouring Christ
Like the resurrection today
Good Friday
My name represents unity
Unity meaning all
Our genre all the generic
People get together
To celebrate success
With Mr Saul Hudson Slash
I love you all
And hope I can bring
Some mercy to the
People that nominated us
In good faith to be winners
And Hudson
My love for you
Is deeper than any river
Maybe the rockpool in Darwin
Where we met...
Oh oh this name
Well I represented
With youthful pride
To be one of you
Is like honouring Christ
Like the resurrection today
Good Friday
My name represents unity
Unity meaning all
Our genre all the generic
People get together
To celebrate success
With Mr Saul Hudson Slash
I love you all
And hope I can bring
Some mercy to the
People that nominated us
In good faith to be winners
And Hudson
My love for you
Is deeper than any river
Maybe the rockpool in Darwin
Where we met...
#love
#BestFriend
#friendship #rose
#friendship #rose
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The Withered
Warped wallpaper
& sharp edges
Peeled back paint
& concrete stairs
Reinforced doors
& stained carpet
The smell of nicotine
In the air
Time worn wrinkles
Held me tightly
Tone deaf cords
& brushed out hair
Beauty could not
Be afforded
But adoration
Was not spared
Maybe my love
For the withered
Does not come
From lack of wealth
But because
It was the last time
I felt true love
In that old...
& sharp edges
Peeled back paint
& concrete stairs
Reinforced doors
& stained carpet
The smell of nicotine
In the air
Time worn wrinkles
Held me tightly
Tone deaf cords
& brushed out hair
Beauty could not
Be afforded
But adoration
Was not spared
Maybe my love
For the withered
Does not come
From lack of wealth
But because
It was the last time
I felt true love
In that old...
#love
#family
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Grief
ill becomings. ill-gotten to what end?
laughing your happy ass off
to know Joy you first must grieve
does it entertain stuffing your face on others' pain?
does it suffice you in your hollow places?
anyone will do hey, hey
seeking affections not due you
right number wrong caller
you're not the first to till the garden
planting hurt of mistrust in my thoughts
you won't be the last
with brazen lust
Hectate knows well,
inflated Ego knows me
I am Karma nice to greet you
...
laughing your happy ass off
to know Joy you first must grieve
does it entertain stuffing your face on others' pain?
does it suffice you in your hollow places?
anyone will do hey, hey
seeking affections not due you
right number wrong caller
you're not the first to till the garden
planting hurt of mistrust in my thoughts
you won't be the last
with brazen lust
Hectate knows well,
inflated Ego knows me
I am Karma nice to greet you
...
#love
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Yearning
I’m tossing
I’m turning
I won’t lie
I’m yearning
Yearning for your spirit
Yearning for your soul
Searching for a time
That I lost long ago
I’m turning
I won’t lie
I’m yearning
Yearning for your spirit
Yearning for your soul
Searching for a time
That I lost long ago
#love
#heartbroken
#breakup
#MovingOn
#emotions
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Brother
magics cast, I witness the elements being maneuvered
while the seemly claim innocence
no witchcraft here
spelling on the airs
it's a binding tradition
say the spell
Our Father....
Catholic until King Henry wanted a new wife
then Christians struck fear in the weak-minded
talking too much, spin the verb and dissect
see if you can keep up
silence is the way
your favorite brother hardly
Your favorite sister I don't think so
set at odds from the start
with weapons thrust in our hands ...
while the seemly claim innocence
no witchcraft here
spelling on the airs
it's a binding tradition
say the spell
Our Father....
Catholic until King Henry wanted a new wife
then Christians struck fear in the weak-minded
talking too much, spin the verb and dissect
see if you can keep up
silence is the way
your favorite brother hardly
Your favorite sister I don't think so
set at odds from the start
with weapons thrust in our hands ...
#love
#angels
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What a great loss
The mornings
I imagine his sweet
Face next to mine
Whilst the pita pata
Of his feet moving
Across the room
The smell of the oatmeal
Shine on his coat
His sweet like voice
And the other loss
I'll be forever seeking
His shadow wheñ he leaves
Only he does not know me
In that manner
My actions are subtle and abrupt
We never have the time
To explore what an old age
Might be
I think he's never satisfied
Because I doñt know him enough
I just need some freedom
To get to know him
As we...
I imagine his sweet
Face next to mine
Whilst the pita pata
Of his feet moving
Across the room
The smell of the oatmeal
Shine on his coat
His sweet like voice
And the other loss
I'll be forever seeking
His shadow wheñ he leaves
Only he does not know me
In that manner
My actions are subtle and abrupt
We never have the time
To explore what an old age
Might be
I think he's never satisfied
Because I doñt know him enough
I just need some freedom
To get to know him
As we...
#love
#grief
#friendship
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lovers places
It hurts when
God gives you a voice
But it's not permitted
to be heard
By those who
matter in our lives
Some people will
never learn to listen
It seems they haven't
got it in them
That's got to be
the saddest thing
Because it never
hurts to listen
God gives you a voice
But it's not permitted
to be heard
By those who
matter in our lives
Some people will
never learn to listen
It seems they haven't
got it in them
That's got to be
the saddest thing
Because it never
hurts to listen
#love
#lover
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DU Poetry : Poems About Love Seeking Honest Critique