Poems About Looking For Love Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about looking for love seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Jukebox Words
There are words, sometimes single words
Little orphan words, solitary words like
Stupid
That hide in my head
As in fill in the blank:
You are…?
Stupid?
Exactly.
I know logically it isn’t true
But of what value was logic
Before the Greeks formalized it?
I prefer the upper Pleistocene
When five plus five
Equaled plenty.
Lots and lots.
What value is logic
When the grownups in the room
Are listening to their own
Greatest hits from their own
Wire-Monkey childhoods ...
Little orphan words, solitary words like
Stupid
That hide in my head
As in fill in the blank:
You are…?
Stupid?
Exactly.
I know logically it isn’t true
But of what value was logic
Before the Greeks formalized it?
I prefer the upper Pleistocene
When five plus five
Equaled plenty.
Lots and lots.
What value is logic
When the grownups in the room
Are listening to their own
Greatest hits from their own
Wire-Monkey childhoods ...
#childhood
#LookingForLove
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4 Comments
she Loitered in an alternate eternity
#hope
#inspirational
#passion
#LookingForLove
#karma
253 reads
6 Comments
Today May Get Fatey
It was the kind of day you step in front of traffic, then dare fate to fold you up in newspaper headlines.
Oh dreams came true alright, but you should have dreamed about not being a foolhardy dreamer; who can know these things.
Your mind is an ashtray full of stumped out intentions, it’s overflowing and starting to look like a barrel cactus. And you’re in just the right kind of mood, to burn another one down.
Your eyes slowly break open and you realize how much you look forward to that double shot of communal antacid and how much you dread pouring yourself...
Oh dreams came true alright, but you should have dreamed about not being a foolhardy dreamer; who can know these things.
Your mind is an ashtray full of stumped out intentions, it’s overflowing and starting to look like a barrel cactus. And you’re in just the right kind of mood, to burn another one down.
Your eyes slowly break open and you realize how much you look forward to that double shot of communal antacid and how much you dread pouring yourself...
#secrets
#determination
#LookingForLove
#obsession
#ThrillSeeking
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Quest
how do we
extract each other
from sprawling communites
from ever-shifting locations
from convenient
but contrived
meeting methods
how do we
drop our defenses
clean our filters
trust fall into optimism
knowing
love
more often than not
leads to hurt
how do we
accept each other's faults
surrender
the promised land
of 'normal'
know
for sure
what's okay
and what really
is not okay
how do we get to know
all of each other ...
extract each other
from sprawling communites
from ever-shifting locations
from convenient
but contrived
meeting methods
how do we
drop our defenses
clean our filters
trust fall into optimism
knowing
love
more often than not
leads to hurt
how do we
accept each other's faults
surrender
the promised land
of 'normal'
know
for sure
what's okay
and what really
is not okay
how do we get to know
all of each other ...
#acceptance
#LookingForLove
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15 Comments
I remember...
I remember back what he said
I remember back the words he left
I thought I have forgotten
But i remember them clearly like blur
When shadows came to my life
When I'd been enchanted
When I had nothing in my mind
Cause I was floating in space
I just could whispered one thing
Can I wake up when the sun appears?
But
My fears come true
No rather chance to be young
My fears come true
I stuck forever in my mind
I told myself don't...
I remember back the words he left
I thought I have forgotten
But i remember them clearly like blur
When shadows came to my life
When I'd been enchanted
When I had nothing in my mind
Cause I was floating in space
I just could whispered one thing
Can I wake up when the sun appears?
But
My fears come true
No rather chance to be young
My fears come true
I stuck forever in my mind
I told myself don't...
#LifeCycle
#aging
#LookingForLove
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4 Comments
your intentions
No matter how obscure my emotion, I’m convinced I will meet the version of you that seems as though you were made with the intention of exalting my exact emotion in one single touch
#dating
#LookingForLove
#obsession
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Anagapesis
I’ve not been clear or we haven’t? I never approached you from the beginning with intentions of partnership and beyond.
I’ve grown to get a glimpse of you and you’re pleasing and comfortable to me. I am looking for happiness, however it represents in anyone beyond myself.
Obviously there’s so much to know about each other but I’m happy that I feel pleasures with you. We laugh, talk, and express everything.
I know I live somewhat in a fantasy, seeing with rose colored glasses. I’ve lived life in dramas, chaos, and sometimes misery.
I don’t want...
I’ve grown to get a glimpse of you and you’re pleasing and comfortable to me. I am looking for happiness, however it represents in anyone beyond myself.
Obviously there’s so much to know about each other but I’m happy that I feel pleasures with you. We laugh, talk, and express everything.
I know I live somewhat in a fantasy, seeing with rose colored glasses. I’ve lived life in dramas, chaos, and sometimes misery.
I don’t want...
#romantic
#honesty
#FallingInLove
#ForbiddenLove
#LookingForLove
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A Perfectly Pleasant Quickie
#lust
#erotic
#funny
#dating
#LookingForLove
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Mother of kings who only have love for queens
Sinisterly, wicked it would seem far from average, as we begin to indulge in this 😉 scheme,
Overtaken by desires of lust, as we rush into forbidden rituals, old traditions giving birth to new cultures other creations and such,
Refusing to surrender 🙏 or give in, an catering from a man's touch, only to be submissive in bed 🛏 other than that like 👍 a race track all bets 😉 are off!
Resisting all urges and engagements and arrangements, canceling all advances pursuing any further, for future entertainments,
Disciplined being in total...
Overtaken by desires of lust, as we rush into forbidden rituals, old traditions giving birth to new cultures other creations and such,
Refusing to surrender 🙏 or give in, an catering from a man's touch, only to be submissive in bed 🛏 other than that like 👍 a race track all bets 😉 are off!
Resisting all urges and engagements and arrangements, canceling all advances pursuing any further, for future entertainments,
Disciplined being in total...
#motherhood
#LifeCycle
#fatherhood
#LookingForLove
#pregnancy
416 reads
4 Comments
Untitled *
Untitled
Hard to resist
People's love affair
An obvious void
Searching
Not finding
Searching
Finding something or someone
Un .....
That's the mysterious part
Drawn to a scaled down version
Artist's view
Comfortable in Non
Untitled *
Hard to resist
People's love affair
An obvious void
Searching
Not finding
Searching
Finding something or someone
Un .....
That's the mysterious part
Drawn to a scaled down version
Artist's view
Comfortable in Non
Untitled *
#TruthOfLife
#art
#philosophical
#LookingForLove
#emotions
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event horizon
during the midday lull of
a small mountain cafe, in the winter
of 2011, i fucked for the first time
(it was her first time too)
as i hovered around the membrane
of pleasure and pain, a man tried to
see through the glass; struggling to
yank the bolted door open
we giggled and fucked harder: till earth
lost its gravity, i lost my girth and the floor
seemed like an appropriate resting place
(he had come for a free glass of chai)
later, a couple of pigeons kept flying into
the tinted glass...
a small mountain cafe, in the winter
of 2011, i fucked for the first time
(it was her first time too)
as i hovered around the membrane
of pleasure and pain, a man tried to
see through the glass; struggling to
yank the bolted door open
we giggled and fucked harder: till earth
lost its gravity, i lost my girth and the floor
seemed like an appropriate resting place
(he had come for a free glass of chai)
later, a couple of pigeons kept flying into
the tinted glass...
#death
#confessional
#SelfDiscovery #LookingForLove
#SelfDiscovery #LookingForLove
374 reads
4 Comments
WHEN YOU ARE READY
From the truth of the heart and soul even the subconscious of your mind. There are something's that we may never understand. As it is necessary that we have to understand that we are both human as we are a man and woman. As we sometimes see ourselves, through the eyes and spiritual soul of another life form. But yet it is a common sense of exchange between the two WORLDS, which tells us that it is necessary to understand subconsciously. That sometimes we have to take a deep look into our own lives. As we bury the past behind us and forget, about what use to be but what we can find in the...
#relationships
#friendship
#lover
#ForbiddenLove
#LookingForLove
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DU Poetry : Poems About Looking For Love Seeking Honest Critique