Poems About Looking For Love Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about looking for love seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
tating
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 5:01pm
20th Dec 2024 5:01pm
The Real Thing!
This feels like the real thing!
So much so, it makes my heart Sing!
Girlfriend so wet, she starts to ring!
The absence of our lust still burns and stings!
This feels like the real thing!
Five foot eight, one-hundred fifty eight pounds and strong!
Girlfriend takes it all night long
Enter her temple and make her sing a song!
This feels like the real thing!
You lick my lips and then my clit
Girlfriend starts trembling,
She’s about to lose her shit!
This feels like the real thing
Bend me over, go for the gold! ...
So much so, it makes my heart Sing!
Girlfriend so wet, she starts to ring!
The absence of our lust still burns and stings!
This feels like the real thing!
Five foot eight, one-hundred fifty eight pounds and strong!
Girlfriend takes it all night long
Enter her temple and make her sing a song!
This feels like the real thing!
You lick my lips and then my clit
Girlfriend starts trembling,
She’s about to lose her shit!
This feels like the real thing
Bend me over, go for the gold! ...
#crush
#LookingForLove
#relationships
89 reads
2 Comments
Koulouri
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 5:16am
10th Dec 2024 5:16am
Fruit Puzzles
I try to picture you in my life,
sometimes it is hard.
It often feels like
you complete the impossible
puzzle that I have
broken my back hunching over.
Then sometimes
I worry you might
be holding some pieces
behind your back.
The thought scares me.
I desperately need
my life to fall together
like a nice fruit bowl
at the...
sometimes it is hard.
It often feels like
you complete the impossible
puzzle that I have
broken my back hunching over.
Then sometimes
I worry you might
be holding some pieces
behind your back.
The thought scares me.
I desperately need
my life to fall together
like a nice fruit bowl
at the...
#dating
#LookingForLove
#love #lover
#love #lover
85 reads
1 Comment
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 3:48am
6th Dec 2024 3:48am
You will never know
It's me again the story teller of words ✍️ they say that we will never know, what is waiting for us that it could change the very outcome, of what is expected that we found it in another person, that happens in time. For sure we can talk about what we know that we want and need, 🤔 to help us navigate through the process, of the ups, Still and yet there will be downs. For sure we will try to create a vision of what we need and want, 🤨 but yet find ourselves involved in a entanglement.🤨 Trying to figure out how did we get here and now. 😞 YET there is...
#faith
#fate
#LookingForLove
#relationships
#TruthOfLife
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 11:54pm
1st Dec 2024 11:54pm
Why we do what we do
There comes a time in each of our lives, that we have to learn to walk away from the very darkness of deepness, with it's negativity that draws us into a different kind of space that's out of this world. 🌎 For sure my question. ❓ TO you is more beneficial, to the well being of your insanity that has taken, over your life even your thoughts and dreams. For my question to you. ❓Why do we do that what we do 😞 when it comes to our relationships, as we choose to stay in a bad situation. For is it out of the love that you have not yet truly received, for is it that you...
#dating
#ForbiddenLove
#LifeCycle
#LookingForLove
#misunderstood
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copingwithwords__
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 9:23am
10th Nov 2024 9:23am
lucid dreams
sometimes it haunts me
the girl i used to be
the girl i couldn’t be
so glad that today it’s not me.
i wake up, terrified
stare at the ceiling, petrified
it always comes down at night
or when my life’s without light.
used to thrive on hatred
my vision became tainted
while my being felt sedated,
today my dreams are lucid.
it wasn’t me, but it was
lived for praise and applause
but never by your laws
i began so many new wars.
i should be sleeping
but my past has me weeping
in the...
the girl i used to be
the girl i couldn’t be
so glad that today it’s not me.
i wake up, terrified
stare at the ceiling, petrified
it always comes down at night
or when my life’s without light.
used to thrive on hatred
my vision became tainted
while my being felt sedated,
today my dreams are lucid.
it wasn’t me, but it was
lived for praise and applause
but never by your laws
i began so many new wars.
i should be sleeping
but my past has me weeping
in the...
#confusion
#grief
#LookingForLove #shame
#LookingForLove #shame
88 reads
1 Comment
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 3:58am
10th Nov 2024 3:58am
Changes
I shuttered my eyes and plugged my ears.
Even in touch did I not venture to feel.
I froze my heart and barricaded my fears.
Just so that there would be no more tears.
I took a chance and let you near.
You gave me life and made it clear.
Now I wonder where do we go from here.
Just give me direction which way to steer.
Even in touch did I not venture to feel.
I froze my heart and barricaded my fears.
Just so that there would be no more tears.
I took a chance and let you near.
You gave me life and made it clear.
Now I wonder where do we go from here.
Just give me direction which way to steer.
#crush
#dating
#FallingInLove
#LookingForLove
#love
129 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
3rd Nov 2024 10:26pm
3rd Nov 2024 10:26pm
WHEN YOU HAVE SOMETHING
They say when you have something else, that you've never had before. DUE to the fact that there was no real commitment, and consistency of honesty and truth and trust. But yet you were willing to give it a chance, just to see how much of the words hold TRUTH. 🤨 FOR it's true what they say, knowone is sent to you by chance 💕 or accident 😞 FOR it is the cycle of life. Yet soon you will find out the truth, when we encounter someone, who doesn't have the ability to understand, the true meaning of real communications. Between a woman and man or man to woman who is going...
#aging
#fatherhood
#LifeCycle
#LookingForLove
#motherhood
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0 Comments
BaldyBrown
Poem Published
31st Oct 2024 8:52am
31st Oct 2024 8:52am
Sordid and Sacred
In my waking dreams I see a lady walking with me in the wind
and I with her. We are the same in essence, different in function.
I'm on this road to find out whether she walks among us, or elsewhere
and what makes her the same as me. Sordid and sacred.
The wind may twist her stiff straight swarthy hair
but love spins all things round right.
Is there a lady going this way, brave enough to do her heart’s bidding
not gazing into the social mirror nor counting its reflection dearer, unwitting?
Point us in the direction of where the...
and I with her. We are the same in essence, different in function.
I'm on this road to find out whether she walks among us, or elsewhere
and what makes her the same as me. Sordid and sacred.
The wind may twist her stiff straight swarthy hair
but love spins all things round right.
Is there a lady going this way, brave enough to do her heart’s bidding
not gazing into the social mirror nor counting its reflection dearer, unwitting?
Point us in the direction of where the...
#dating
#hope
#LookingForLove
118 reads
0 Comments
Koulouri
Poem Published
29th Oct 2024 1:18pm
29th Oct 2024 1:18pm
There is No Floor Here
I want to be possessive of you.
Reminding you how much I want you,
in my life,
and in my space.
There is a desperation to cry out:
"YOU ARE MINE."
"You are mine."
Picture the life I see for us,
see it the same way I do.
Long car rides,
holding your hand,
sun-coated mornings,
quiet evenings.
It's a little mundane,
I know.
Yet it's all I want in the world.
You.
With me.
And each scene plays over in my...
Reminding you how much I want you,
in my life,
and in my space.
There is a desperation to cry out:
"YOU ARE MINE."
"You are mine."
Picture the life I see for us,
see it the same way I do.
Long car rides,
holding your hand,
sun-coated mornings,
quiet evenings.
It's a little mundane,
I know.
Yet it's all I want in the world.
You.
With me.
And each scene plays over in my...
#boyfriend
#crush
#FallingInLove
#girlfriend
#LookingForLove
249 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Oct 2024 10:31am
25th Oct 2024 10:31am
All the fear ahead, without you
We are only strangers
Looking for some reason to live
But what if we seem to shiver
Just looking through the horizon
Poor strangers we are
That can't look so far
Tiny eyes opening hard
When there are no twinkling stars
Paradise in disgrace
Landscape over my shoulder
And where are you now?
Aging before I get older
So I pray that I could die
But the pain never seems to surface
These tears that I cry
Emptiness making me nervous
I wish it could be enough
All the fear ahead
And...
Looking for some reason to live
But what if we seem to shiver
Just looking through the horizon
Poor strangers we are
That can't look so far
Tiny eyes opening hard
When there are no twinkling stars
Paradise in disgrace
Landscape over my shoulder
And where are you now?
Aging before I get older
So I pray that I could die
But the pain never seems to surface
These tears that I cry
Emptiness making me nervous
I wish it could be enough
All the fear ahead
And...
#heartbroken
#LookingForLove
#love
#rhyming
#sadness
145 reads
4 Comments
ChloesPoeticInk
Poem Published
29th Sep 2024 6:32pm
29th Sep 2024 6:32pm
It’s Hard to Love a Poet
It’s hard to love a poet, I know it’s true,
because I’ll love you deeply, but never just you.
I’ll love the pain, the ache in my chest,
the quiet moments when I can’t find rest.
You’ll think you hold me, but I’m never there,
lost in a world you can’t touch, I swear.
I’ll whisper sweet lines, make you feel seen,
but between the verses, I’ll slip in between.
I bleed my love on pages, not in your arms,
and you’ll feel like you’re losing to invisible harms.
You’ll watch me drift, lost in my mind,
chasing ghosts...
because I’ll love you deeply, but never just you.
I’ll love the pain, the ache in my chest,
the quiet moments when I can’t find rest.
You’ll think you hold me, but I’m never there,
lost in a world you can’t touch, I swear.
I’ll whisper sweet lines, make you feel seen,
but between the verses, I’ll slip in between.
I bleed my love on pages, not in your arms,
and you’ll feel like you’re losing to invisible harms.
You’ll watch me drift, lost in my mind,
chasing ghosts...
#ForbiddenLove
#ILoveYou
#LookingForLove
#relationships
#romantic
227 reads
2 Comments
Artavious25
Taypen99
Taypen99
Poem Published
19th Sep 2024 3:38pm
19th Sep 2024 3:38pm
The V Story
My curiosity peaks for this unknown
Wandering thoughts on what lies past this door
Mind riddled with new beginnings and endings
Lust rattles my soul as my imagination takes control
Excitement takes over my body yet fear takes over my mind
Hedonistic fantasies playing on repeat
Knowing that this waiting game will end
To be stripped of my last piece of innocence.
Wandering thoughts on what lies past this door
Mind riddled with new beginnings and endings
Lust rattles my soul as my imagination takes control
Excitement takes over my body yet fear takes over my mind
Hedonistic fantasies playing on repeat
Knowing that this waiting game will end
To be stripped of my last piece of innocence.
#dating
#FirstLove
#LookingForLove #vulnerability
#LookingForLove #vulnerability
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