Poems About Looking For Love Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about looking for love seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Challenges with love
They say that through this cycle of life 🙏 we will have to go through so much sometimes with things that will even change our own lives. Down to the way of how deep does the hurt and pain, goes deeper than deep, into the subconscious of our deepest thoughts. Yes the truth is that what we have to do for thyself, is to analyze our own chains of thoughts. 🤔 telling ourselves we have to learn how to navigate, through times like these and have a different kind of perception. For sure there will be real challenges, with love and honor and respect. For each other as one. But yet we...
#admiration
#FallingInLove
#happiness
#LifeCycle
#LookingForLove
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Special Healing
They say that through this life we all will go through somethings that will affect, us in so many ways that will have us to take a moment, to analyze as we exchange our thoughts turning them around. BUT yet it's those things that can break us or make us, change what needs to be done, for the true betterment of life. For sure things will happen to make us stop, taking things for granted and be thankful and grateful and blessed, for sure sometimes we are given a second chance at life. Just like we are given a chance of finding a love, to call our own woman to man and man to woman. For sure we...
#emotional
#LifeCycle
#LookingForLove
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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My Master

#LookingForLove
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Seeing the Rain
If they do not know what it is to see
The rain from my window, then they will miss
The way you have me held, yet fast and free;
And take the rainfall in as you'd take bliss;
Snow falls, as do my letters stained with tears;
Sleet does not know what it is to see:
The undeliverable: those winter fears
That will not permeate: best leave them be;
Who'd mend the jigsaw, after lost souls flee?
Who'd repair damage in the aftermath,
If they do not know what it is to see
The pleasure in my eyes, at your bold laugh?
We...
The rain from my window, then they will miss
The way you have me held, yet fast and free;
And take the rainfall in as you'd take bliss;
Snow falls, as do my letters stained with tears;
Sleet does not know what it is to see:
The undeliverable: those winter fears
That will not permeate: best leave them be;
Who'd mend the jigsaw, after lost souls flee?
Who'd repair damage in the aftermath,
If they do not know what it is to see
The pleasure in my eyes, at your bold laugh?
We...
#frustration
#LookingForLove
#love
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MOTHER
Blind
I see her beauty
deaf
I hear her melody
ignorant
I partake of her knowledge
poor
I share her wealth
in-drawn
her vision reigns my heart
yet the darkness of dust
veils my being
I don't understand
the hidden words
though I sit
under her tree of love
she's still away from me
just one pace
if I could take
I enter
the pavilion of eternity
R K Singh
I see her beauty
deaf
I hear her melody
ignorant
I partake of her knowledge
poor
I share her wealth
in-drawn
her vision reigns my heart
yet the darkness of dust
veils my being
I don't understand
the hidden words
though I sit
under her tree of love
she's still away from me
just one pace
if I could take
I enter
the pavilion of eternity
R K Singh
#LookingForLove
#mother
#spiritual
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Ways to end a first date...
Handshake unless you see him pick his nose.
He wore his finest Goodwill clothes but hasn't
brushed his teeth since childhood!
Hug unless you can smell his BO from 4 feet away.
He was homeless with a: WILL DATE FOR FOOD sign.
You were sick of eating Big Macs alone!
Kiss on cheek and a thank you. Friend zone.
Too polite. Keep his hopes up. Keep him around to borrow money, run errands and move furniture.
Restraining order because he doesn't understand the word "no". Just say NO to surprise amateur pap smears.
At...
He wore his finest Goodwill clothes but hasn't
brushed his teeth since childhood!
Hug unless you can smell his BO from 4 feet away.
He was homeless with a: WILL DATE FOR FOOD sign.
You were sick of eating Big Macs alone!
Kiss on cheek and a thank you. Friend zone.
Too polite. Keep his hopes up. Keep him around to borrow money, run errands and move furniture.
Restraining order because he doesn't understand the word "no". Just say NO to surprise amateur pap smears.
At...
#dating
#LookingForLove
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The search
You are within my world and I am within yours
But how do I find you behind so many doors
I would cross the ocean but to which of the shores
It's like sifting the sand through a skin with no pores
Looking for the one grain in millions of scores
But how do I find you behind so many doors
I would cross the ocean but to which of the shores
It's like sifting the sand through a skin with no pores
Looking for the one grain in millions of scores
#LookingForLove
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The Real Thing!
This feels like the real thing!
So much so, it makes my heart Sing!
Girlfriend so wet, she starts to ring!
The absence of our lust still burns and stings!
This feels like the real thing!
Five foot eight, one-hundred fifty eight pounds and strong!
Girlfriend takes it all night long
Enter her temple and make her sing a song!
This feels like the real thing!
You lick my lips and then my clit
Girlfriend starts trembling,
She’s about to lose her shit!
This feels like the real thing
Bend me over, go for the gold! ...
So much so, it makes my heart Sing!
Girlfriend so wet, she starts to ring!
The absence of our lust still burns and stings!
This feels like the real thing!
Five foot eight, one-hundred fifty eight pounds and strong!
Girlfriend takes it all night long
Enter her temple and make her sing a song!
This feels like the real thing!
You lick my lips and then my clit
Girlfriend starts trembling,
She’s about to lose her shit!
This feels like the real thing
Bend me over, go for the gold! ...
#crush
#LookingForLove
#relationships
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Fruit Puzzles
I try to picture you in my life,
sometimes it is hard.
It often feels like
you complete the impossible
puzzle that I have
broken my back hunching over.
Then sometimes
I worry you might
be holding some pieces
behind your back.
The thought scares me.
I desperately need
my life to fall together
like a nice fruit bowl
at the...
sometimes it is hard.
It often feels like
you complete the impossible
puzzle that I have
broken my back hunching over.
Then sometimes
I worry you might
be holding some pieces
behind your back.
The thought scares me.
I desperately need
my life to fall together
like a nice fruit bowl
at the...
#dating
#LookingForLove
#love #lover
#love #lover
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You will never know
It's me again the story teller of words ✍️ they say that we will never know, what is waiting for us that it could change the very outcome, of what is expected that we found it in another person, that happens in time. For sure we can talk about what we know that we want and need, 🤔 to help us navigate through the process, of the ups, Still and yet there will be downs. For sure we will try to create a vision of what we need and want, 🤨 but yet find ourselves involved in a entanglement.🤨 Trying to figure out how did we get here and now. 😞 YET there is...
#faith
#fate
#LookingForLove
#relationships
#TruthOfLife
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Why we do what we do
There comes a time in each of our lives, that we have to learn to walk away from the very darkness of deepness, with it's negativity that draws us into a different kind of space that's out of this world. 🌎 For sure my question. ❓ TO you is more beneficial, to the well being of your insanity that has taken, over your life even your thoughts and dreams. For my question to you. ❓Why do we do that what we do 😞 when it comes to our relationships, as we choose to stay in a bad situation. For is it out of the love that you have not yet truly received, for is it that you...
#dating
#ForbiddenLove
#LifeCycle
#LookingForLove
#misunderstood
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lucid dreams
sometimes it haunts me
the girl i used to be
the girl i couldn’t be
so glad that today it’s not me.
i wake up, terrified
stare at the ceiling, petrified
it always comes down at night
or when my life’s without light.
used to thrive on hatred
my vision became tainted
while my being felt sedated,
today my dreams are lucid.
it wasn’t me, but it was
lived for praise and applause
but never by your laws
i began so many new wars.
i should be sleeping
but my past has me weeping
in the...
the girl i used to be
the girl i couldn’t be
so glad that today it’s not me.
i wake up, terrified
stare at the ceiling, petrified
it always comes down at night
or when my life’s without light.
used to thrive on hatred
my vision became tainted
while my being felt sedated,
today my dreams are lucid.
it wasn’t me, but it was
lived for praise and applause
but never by your laws
i began so many new wars.
i should be sleeping
but my past has me weeping
in the...
#confusion
#grief
#LookingForLove #shame
#LookingForLove #shame
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