Poems About Looking For Love Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about looking for love seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Somewhere
Biting the lip of intrigue,
conviction in his writing
such concepts; dancing
words pervade my façade;
worn through time and lost love
to know of perfection
whispered here, and upon me
tickles spirit and senses, as
a breeze in summer’s evening,
on the rise of one sun.
conviction in his writing
such concepts; dancing
words pervade my façade;
worn through time and lost love
to know of perfection
whispered here, and upon me
tickles spirit and senses, as
a breeze in summer’s evening,
on the rise of one sun.
#romantic
#dating
#crush #LookingForLove
#crush #LookingForLove
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That's My New Boyfriend
It started with one of my 6th grade reading groups.
A story about Blackbeard's ghost.
Students commenting on his mangey appearance.
Hey, be nice, I said
That's my new boyfriend.
Silence
Looking at each other
The blowing out sound that precedes a guilty laugh
Followed by five happy guilty laughs.
So why stop there?
My new boyfriends have included Mr. Six,
a scowling, old Chinese emperor,
a minotaur,
and Henry VIII.
I don't know if my students are laughing at me,
or with me.
I...
A story about Blackbeard's ghost.
Students commenting on his mangey appearance.
Hey, be nice, I said
That's my new boyfriend.
Silence
Looking at each other
The blowing out sound that precedes a guilty laugh
Followed by five happy guilty laughs.
So why stop there?
My new boyfriends have included Mr. Six,
a scowling, old Chinese emperor,
a minotaur,
and Henry VIII.
I don't know if my students are laughing at me,
or with me.
I...
#aging
#LookingForLove
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11 Comments
Chance Meeting
#lust
#sex
#passion
#LookingForLove
#orgasm
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6 Comments
CHANCE MEETING
Two weeks ago upon joining DUP
fell in love with someone’s poetry
a beauty shined through in words
speak in a voice we never heard.
We decided to converse and discuss
many topics, also of of sex & lust
before long we began to fantasize
what is the color of their eyes?
Do they have beautiful, soft skin?
are they heavy or are they thin?
don't wanna be shallow as I sound
hope to one day meet in a crowd
Only can imagine what we'd say
if we were so granted such a day...
fell in love with someone’s poetry
a beauty shined through in words
speak in a voice we never heard.
We decided to converse and discuss
many topics, also of of sex & lust
before long we began to fantasize
what is the color of their eyes?
Do they have beautiful, soft skin?
are they heavy or are they thin?
don't wanna be shallow as I sound
hope to one day meet in a crowd
Only can imagine what we'd say
if we were so granted such a day...
#lust
#lover
#passion #LookingForLove
#passion #LookingForLove
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TAKE A CHANCE ON ME
I see you across the crowded room
my heartbeat begins to go boom
I am mesmerized by your glance
thinking this time I'll take a chance.
Warm tingles flood through me
as I want to get closer to your body....
Shyly looking over in your direction
hoping for an opportunity of affection
To my wondering eyes I gladly see
you too are taking a sneak peek at me.
Slowly we stroll towards one another
while still keeping ourselves under cover....
As I walk towards you, my heart races
each of us mischievously cover our faces ...
my heartbeat begins to go boom
I am mesmerized by your glance
thinking this time I'll take a chance.
Warm tingles flood through me
as I want to get closer to your body....
Shyly looking over in your direction
hoping for an opportunity of affection
To my wondering eyes I gladly see
you too are taking a sneak peek at me.
Slowly we stroll towards one another
while still keeping ourselves under cover....
As I walk towards you, my heart races
each of us mischievously cover our faces ...
#happiness
#hope
#honesty #LookingForLove
#honesty #LookingForLove
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4 Comments
Heartbeat - trying to write a Blackpink song
I never thought I could fall in love, was the furthest thing from my reality
I never bought into fairy tales, relationships built on emotional frailties
I'd look upward to those flickering stars in the skies
And try as I might, they'd put no romance in my eyes
Men buying my drinks, I'd cheer as they sank in flames
I'd put another charm on my bracelet and cross off their names
Never saw the sincerity, they were destined to fail
Deep down I resisted and put them through hell
Never expecting some prince would place me on his personal throne
And I...
I never bought into fairy tales, relationships built on emotional frailties
I'd look upward to those flickering stars in the skies
And try as I might, they'd put no romance in my eyes
Men buying my drinks, I'd cheer as they sank in flames
I'd put another charm on my bracelet and cross off their names
Never saw the sincerity, they were destined to fail
Deep down I resisted and put them through hell
Never expecting some prince would place me on his personal throne
And I...
#relationships
#FallingInLove
#LookingForLove
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Online dating
An open letter
From the lonely hearts club
To the ones waiting in the wings
For the lone archer cherub
To stand in the spotlove
Where waxing souls sing
Songs of serendipity
Exhausted pace to seek
Will spilled from the open cut minds
Of two humans
Just simply being.
Embrace all that may grow
From romance ground in lust
To rise, writhe and aspire to tower above
Those seeds seldom sewn
But however it goes
No expectations wins
With grace I know
The odds are stacked even
Looking into a bubbling...
From the lonely hearts club
To the ones waiting in the wings
For the lone archer cherub
To stand in the spotlove
Where waxing souls sing
Songs of serendipity
Exhausted pace to seek
Will spilled from the open cut minds
Of two humans
Just simply being.
Embrace all that may grow
From romance ground in lust
To rise, writhe and aspire to tower above
Those seeds seldom sewn
But however it goes
No expectations wins
With grace I know
The odds are stacked even
Looking into a bubbling...
#dating
#LookingForLove
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Cancer’s Prayer
Honestly, I am in the era of my life where I am trying everything I can to be in love.
It is not my intention to be rude, mean, or aggressive just so I can feel protected from the lack of consideration I may receive from others.
All I desire is to experience love in its purest form without any misunderstandings or fights that may impede that experience.
It is a form of expression so pure that it extends to my family and friends as well.
I want to feel loved and appreciated for my true worth, without any expectations or judgement.
I want to...
It is not my intention to be rude, mean, or aggressive just so I can feel protected from the lack of consideration I may receive from others.
All I desire is to experience love in its purest form without any misunderstandings or fights that may impede that experience.
It is a form of expression so pure that it extends to my family and friends as well.
I want to feel loved and appreciated for my true worth, without any expectations or judgement.
I want to...
#kindness
#relationships
#romantic
#respect
#LookingForLove
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Indefinite Yearning
It's a silly thing, watching someone else's love.
Craving it for yourself, but never granting the idea any value.
“Keep your hopes high, but attainable.”
It hurts to know your worth.
To know that all you are capable of,
is being a bystander.
Craving it for yourself, but never granting the idea any value.
“Keep your hopes high, but attainable.”
It hurts to know your worth.
To know that all you are capable of,
is being a bystander.
#love
#loneliness
#emotional #LookingForLove
#emotional #LookingForLove
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Chaos
Chaos is many things
it can be a void of nothingness
Or two entities
with two different perspectives
that clash and
create confusion or creation
After this chaos I am reminded and can
Not help to compare
this situation to a nuclear bomb
Going off
I feel as though
our forces caused me
to die physically and spiritually
and resurrect me
like a phoenix from the ashes
Truthfully I’m not pleased with the results
What’s the point
everything in this world is vanity
The pass...
it can be a void of nothingness
Or two entities
with two different perspectives
that clash and
create confusion or creation
After this chaos I am reminded and can
Not help to compare
this situation to a nuclear bomb
Going off
I feel as though
our forces caused me
to die physically and spiritually
and resurrect me
like a phoenix from the ashes
Truthfully I’m not pleased with the results
What’s the point
everything in this world is vanity
The pass...
#birth
#death
#fate
#aging
#LookingForLove
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2 Comments
JUST A MIRAGE
I'm just gonna sit this down right here for I am the STORY TELLER📿🪷♀️☯️. Excuse me may I have a few minutes of your time, to talk to you about something that has been heavy upon my mind. It's nothing bad. For it's about what's good between you and I, for there's no other way to say what I need to say, as I want to say to you, that since you stepped in my life you've changed me in so many ways. For sometimes I have to get personal with my silent, thoughts that keep running through my mind. For I've never thought that I would find out here in the...
#kindness
#honesty
#support
#ForbiddenLove
#LookingForLove
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Eternity
A time grown out of pity like rain on the asphalt. Pain is a pleasure to the unassuming masses. It was not the vow that was broken, but the innocence that stumbled out of reach of lovers torn at the seams
#FallingInLove
#ForbiddenLove
#dating
#crush
#LookingForLove
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DU Poetry : Poems About Looking For Love Seeking Honest Critique