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Eternity
A time grown out of pity like rain on the asphalt. Pain is a pleasure to the unassuming masses. It was not the vow that was broken, but the innocence that stumbled out of reach of lovers torn at the seams
Published 3rd Oct 2023
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3rd Oct 2023 8:36am
Wow! Michael that was so good.
Pain is a pleasure to the unassuming masses - loved that line.
Impressive 😍
Pain is a pleasure to the unassuming masses - loved that line.
Impressive 😍
3rd Oct 2023 7:47pm
Thank you. I'm going to start putting pictures with my work in the future.
3rd Oct 2023 7:57pm
That's right, you obviously figured it out. I like the way you did it with the picture.
3rd Oct 2023 8:17pm
