my thoughts don't seem to come from one person, how could they, so different from each other, and so are my poems. if you like what one of me writes you will hate what the rest of the me's do. if you like it all get therapy quick!!!
if you have read any of my poems, you can see I have no real skill but my content is easy to love or hate. I wont be giving advice on poetry in my comments but I will tell you what I think about what you said.