water's life and feels alive

A streaming cascade of poetic thoughts, masterly conducted like a symphony; thru the waving ebb and flow of words, stringed with magic fingers, ending with a rhyming continuous time, means that water is eternally splashing, streaming, gurgling, spurting from the ever begining of creation,,
water is life, life is water......then we are safe on this sacred Earth our mortal and eternal resort ...God bless you for ever. '' just stream you are a poetic theme. !!! kudos .''

Hi poet 632,  thanks soo very much for a funny , charming, streaming comment, it added a sensational touch to my watered poem.
God bless you too for ever.

Great message. Lots of gerunds. I thought it was awkwardly cool that you used the word "oughtn't".

Hi dear, warm thanks for your fine cool comment,

Water is exhilarating bringing forth renewed energy...lovely dear

Thanks soo much for the great feedback on this watery poem.

A heavy waterfall of feelings and solidarity

Um well yes this is just about water in various forms, my feelings on water . Thanks soo much for nice fine comment.

The meaning is clear and water can penetrate anything and reach any place

We made everything alive from water

Very dear Zaynab,
I love your poem very much. You wrote about everything that concerns water. It's not easy to write such a poem that can give a global idea about everything that concerns water. It's a great poem, Zaynab. Great work.

Thanks so much for that great apt feedback,

The rhyming gets a little monotonous after a while because it’s all just “ing” sounds. It might help if you focused on non-rhyming verse for now and created more images, as there are some neat expressions here, like dreams and dreamers being dragged down the drain, which is also nicely alliterative. Furthermore, rather than asking rhetorical questions in the last verse, it might help the poem to make them implicit in the text (i.e. “the water wastes as man harvests it”). JMHO, of course! Thanks for the read.

Um yeah monotonous like water trickling, ok like monorhyme type,  i don't always write in such rhyming , this is just for a change, and more focused on the varied way water moves.
Thanks so much for your fine critique.

The water of life is a true passion.  Keep on writing.

Thanks so much for nice comment,

It's a good poem about how important water is, and sometimes how bad it can be too, which is kind of how nature can be in general. Part of the whole balance of life and all that.

Warm thanks for such a lovely , nice comment, take care,

Water is the essence of like

BIG LIKE

Thanks soo much for feedback,

This is excellent. I can hear the imagery through the rhythm of the writing.

Good morning poet, thanks soo much for the nice comment,

How poor we are as a species to believe ANY resource is eternal. We have fought wars over land. We have fought wars over oil. The next war will be over water because we have wasted so many years wasting water.
Thoughtful write.

hugs,
buddhakitty.

Wow thanks for that great realization and concerned wise comment , indeed man is rapacious with water ahh.

Bravissimo, Zaynab! This flows like a beautiful waterfall and I am thrilled to have stood neath the cascade of these fantastically  arranged  word. Amen, to the message.

Good morning,  thanks soo much for that fab poetic comment .

We are an ignorant species, we are more like a disease than anything, we move in destroy, then use up til we die out.

Indeed we are thankless and careless many of our species. Thanks soo much for that concerned wise thoughts on this. Concern for the planet is much needed.

This reminds me of how much I love your poetry. It has been so long since I've read one of your gems. You explore water's many facets with dazzling virtuosity of imagery and power. This is the best and most detailed exploration of water and humanity's relationship to this life-giving element. I love the stream of words that takes me into the heart of our planet's liquid in all its life-giving power. And your ending brought home the need to preserve the resource that indeed makes up most of our bodies. Superbly penned and strongly evoked my friend.

John

Hii poet goldenmyst im super glad you enjoy my poetry as much as i do yours, always great to hear from you, thanks so much for your great delightful comment.

Dear ZK,

Absolutely smashed it. Great spotlight on an essential necessity for human survival. I enjoyed all the thoughts you had regarding the subject and your overall concern for the caretaking of this vital resource. Wonderful write! H🌷

Warmest thanx honoria for your lovely caring smart comment. Take care  always,🌷

At our very fingertips, the source that quells our inner fire. We neglect and pollute that which sustains our life.

You have written a stunning poem my friend. Continue to spread the message of a clean earth.

Thanks soo much for that awesome caring comment, its great that you care about the planet from such a young age poet.

Excellent poem! Love your choice of words .  You have nicely captured the essence of water and it's great to see you ending the piece with a thoughtful message.

Im glad you liked the msg too, it shows your care for the planet. Warm thanks for the lovely comment.

Great piece. It's interesting that it's essential for life to survive, but too much of it can also cause death.

Awesome work.

Indeed, you summed it up superly, thanks soo much for your fine thoughts on this poet!

We need more piece reminding people of taking care of our planet, water is an element so of course it has life within it. But we humans are slowly draining the life out of everything that we need to survive. Tight

Thanks ever so much for that great eco friendly comment.

The endless river, forever & ever! Pink Floyd. You describe water like it's oil, like it's gold & the lifeblood of life. Jesus lived for 40 days on water alone. I seem to remember that David Blaine also did something similar, suspended up high in a glass box by the tower of London!

Thanks  soo much poet Bill for your very interesting comment. Indeed water is valuable like gold.

An awesome poem. We are drying out our water, in many places around the globe, water is legislated by politicians paid by big business for their use and consumption especially in farming and beverage making while ordinary are left thirsty.

Fabulous work. You have  made use of many writer's tools, showing your skills as well as your uniqueness. I have nothing but praise for your brilliant work in this beautiful poem. I applaud you!

This write gave me a lot of imagery all the way through. Really helps give one perspective and shows us how to recognize the true beauty of water, and all the important ways it plays its role in this beautiful existence. Thank you greatly for sharing, this was nice to come across💜