Autumnal ceremony

Dear Z,

I really enjoyed the picture you paint and the story you created. It was so visually alive in my minds eye. The autumn leaves dotted among your words were a great visual effect that punctuated the poem. Lovely write. H🌷

Hi!! Honoria, warmest thanks for your lovely seasoned comment. Enjoy the autumn.🍁🌷

Beautiful read and autumnal expressions
Love and light
Ron

Thanks soo much for the feedback,

Hi Zaynab,
How are U?

This pen is rich with vivid imagery.
Gr8t piece.

Take care.
X

Am fine, thanks soo much for the feedback. Nice to meet you too.

Beautiful words and images.
Color just right

BIG LIKE

Aw thanks soo much for the super comment!

Hi Z
I love fairies and elves. Blending them
into this poem with Autumn - quite a talent:)
Loved all the color and imagery.
Even the emoji leaves added a great flare to it.
Great write:)

Good morning,  and warmest thanx for the lovely comment, yeah fairies are fun for imagination blended with reality,

Fall and nature is really cool.  Keep on writing.

Thanks soo much for the comment, cheers!

woww!!
You have written very beautiful words specially decorated with autumn leaves  

Warmest thanx for beautiful comment dear,🍁

i do enjoy nature themed poems, i enjoy the artwork as well

I'm glad you do since most poems here seem to be about love, erotica and not nature so i hope to catch up on that too someday but until then i hope poets can enjoy nature and other topics from me. Thanks soo much for great comment,

Any thing about autumn rains down colors to me. I like this.

Thanks soo much for the super feedback, happy late autumn 🍁

Thanks soo much for fab super comment 🍁

A great picture painted with your words, makes us want a slice of pumpkin pie. tight

Makes me think pumpkin pie must be an autumn dish or its colors eh. Warm thanks for seasoned comment.

Dude pumpkin and sweet potato pie are both great anytime of the year. But in the autumn it carries a different meaning, it's a connection to the earth. That warm slice from something that was cold and in the ground or lying atop it reminds of the life cycles in all things. The colors remind of the seasonal changes and it's the perfect folk food. You can be dirt poor and still have something to eat from either pumpkins or sweet potatoes, kinda like finding cassava or taro

Great to know! Cool about the pumpkin eh. Happy Autumn.

Thanks for the invite to read...SURE glad I came!! 😊 ❤ FALL and SPRING are my favorite seasons. You expressed the "colors of the wind" magically and magnificently. 🥰💯❤

Nice to know its your fav season. Thanks soo much for your lovely comment🍁.

Nicely penned... atmospheric.

🌹-B

Warm thanks for fine comment. 🌷

Wow, Zayk, this is so magical and beautiful. I love this fantasy world you have created in my mind. The imagery is vivid and gorgeous. Fairies and elfin brides.... saffron maple trees. prism hues. Silken gossamers. And of course the wedding theme being something I just did one on as well. :p But yours portrays the beauty and celebration of it. The magic. Bronze leaves and brides frolicking about. Ceremony and ritual mixed with natural beauty. I absolutely love Autumn. Welcoming the cool weather. A reprieve from the summer heat. And the colours so amazing. The blending of east and west is so lovely. And the format really works so well. Thank you for inviting me over to see your writing. :) It's wonderful.

I'm super happy that you appreciated the blend of two different cultures, nature and all, it is fantasy, religious figures and nature reality all in one.
Warmest thanks for seasonal feedback , take care 🍁🌷

Zaynab,

      This poem is everything u explained within the author's note, but before I had seen it, I could think of someone telling of how much fun they were having with someone within the nature of their ah surroundings. Thought first to be to young luvaz within their ah teens just luving the ah glimpse of what is their right now ah reality with enjoyment. Excellent expression of feelings though! 👍👁️🥂🍻🍺🥃🍹🍄👄🥥💎👁️💋🍑

Aw warm warm thanx for a lovely fun comment that was enjoyable ah to read.🌷🍁. Im loving the ah now poetess.

Ah thank u!👍💎👁️🍻🍺🍻🍺🍻🍜🍜🍜🍜🍜

Lovely poem with great  imagery! Love the colorful picture and words. This is a great tribute to autumn in my opinion!

Good morning and warmest thanx for lovely comment. 🍁🍂

Like many comments above, it paints a lovely Autumn picture. Like the mix with the fairie world too.

Thanks so much for feedback  🍂

This poem brings forth a fey imagination in the most beautiful way. I enjoyed. Keep it flowing.

Yeah i tried my hand at imagination,  im mostly too reality oriented so warm thanks for comment.

Excellent imagery to communicate the beauty of Autumn wonder.


hugs.
buddhakitty.

being a November baby, I appreciate this on a surreal level
Thx for posting this eloquent vibe.
Much respect