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Hello Me
A son, a brother, a father, a lover,
an uncle, a friend, a novice with pen
sinner whose forgiven, Jesus my king
worshiping with poetry, cause I can not sing
an uncle, a friend, a novice with pen
sinner whose forgiven, Jesus my king
worshiping with poetry, cause I can not sing
Published 1st Aug 2022
Author's Note
Written for "Who are you?" competition, 30 words.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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18th Aug 2022 8:35pm
Thank you for your competition entry, and I really wish I could have given multiple prizes. I think this is really strong! I love the breadth of characteristics you shared, and your explanation of what writing and faith mean to you.
26th Sep 2022 7:29pm
A lovely poem of faith, Jesus is our king too, only , we believe he was one of the prophets because he never claimed to be God or asked to be worshipped.
Kudis for the fab poem!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Kudis for the fab poem!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
