Blue Jean Sea

Vivid… rich in image… in metaphor… flawless flow… one of my favorites of yours…

Awhhh - thank you so much LIlD:)
This is such a great comment amiga.
Honestly touched my heart with a smile:)

Let us tell you LDF doesn't pull your chain, if she doesn't like she doesn't lie. This is a great piece, it's amazing how much you can get out of a pair jeans and some salt water. To tight Lady

Hahah!!

Dude I have a personal connection with my wardrobe. LOL
In a way - not me but characters I put on - except my jeans.
Love all of my blue jeans with frayed edges. All comfy and soft.
I feel at home with them on. So I just put into a metaphor for the sea.
Yes - I tend to overthink things. LOL

Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment.

Dear A,

From the title to the end this was stellar. Outstanding in creating a visual in the minds eye of color, water, characters. The story arch is very cool. I’m adding a merman to my version of this piece. 😉
Awesome as per. H🌷

Hey H:)

So glad you used the word stellar!! Whaat!!  Yay!!
Hahaha.

So happy you enjoyed my Blue Jean Sea:)  Love my jeans!!!
Just popped in my mind and tried to figure out how to write this into a metaphor without it sounding random. Took me a couple of days to really get a feel for it before I decided to post.

Thanks so much for the RL and your awesomeness!!!

Hi Rianne:)

You know the sea is around 70% of the earth. Who knows what is down there. We have a lot of books in our gift shop regarding lost battleships and sailors. So much life in the sea and death. Just got my mind in the zone along with the song. Thinking of the sea actually having a soul just grabbed onto my mind. But for me I'm sure there are many souls down there. Along with families without closure but somehow living day to day trying to find some sort of piece with it - and I'm rambling. LOL  

thanks for stopping by and leaving me a comment amiga:)

Hi Sawyer:)

Awhh thanks - Music is a great jump start for me. It gives me flashes of images in my mind to build upon.
Tuning into it has never really
been a problem for me but putting it down on paper - that is challenging for me at times. Sometimes things just flow - other times it takes me a few days - one phrase at a time.

Thanks for the RL and comment buddy!!
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Geez, I am so late getting here. Sorry chica. Agree with SMS, you are a metaphorical queen. Absolutely love the imagery you create, it's so creative and beautiful. I love your special style that is all you. And I think you are beautiful so that works really well for me. (and everyone else too). Love the blue jeans combined with the ocean, I was definitely riding the waves smelling the salt in the air. Haunted shoreline reminds me of when I would swim in the ocean and it was dark with a storm in the distance watching the lightning, getting hit by the rain. 'My soaked lungs will help you breathe, A sigh of relief in each denim wave' Well that just sounds really dirty to me. I love dirty. lol

Hi Kristina!!!

It's never too late for you. So glad you enjoyed by Blue Jean Sea:)
That sounds amazing - I don't live by the ocean so
I have yet to try that. You just gave me a great vision of being in the ocean at night while it's raining!!!
I just felt cool water pellets hitting me. LOL

I've been offsite more often lately. Got to dig into my other side project for the time being. But I will log on and read when I need a need a break. So happy to hear from ya.

P.S. I love dirty too!!  heheheheh

I agree with SMS - troublemaker - but one with a great heart:)

Thanks for stopping by and the RL!!!
Woop Woop

How'd I miss this?!   Shit!  So I'm slower than some.  Lol.  

"White cap crests like hands" !!!   Excellent line.

I also can't help but think of a woman's hips, swaying.  Because of the references to denim and frayed edges, pockets....  So I'm a guy, sue me.  Lol.  

This is a very good write from you!  You're pulling out the metaphors like sparklers!
I love it.  

Awhh hey Styx - no worries:)

I can totally see how you interpret this piece like swaying hips. LOL
Too cool!!!  I love when people see something different when my reading my stuff.
Just something that came to me while listening to music. And I love
my blue jeans. Yes - I love dressing up but I also enjoy the flip side as well. Love comfy jeans.

Where I can eat a burger and still feel comfortable. No skinny jeans!!!!! hahahah

Have a great weekend amgio:)

Awhhh - I love that you called me Adelly. Never heard that one:)

To have you give me such a wonderful comment on my writing is the best reward possible. I so respect all of your writing!!! I have learned so much from reading your stuff and others on the site.  
I felt I needed to share that with ya:)  
Always been a great friend ever since I got on the site so I would like to thank you for your consistency in giving me great feedback and inspiration.  

We dig our music don't we. LOL
Great to see ya on site again:)

I love how you did it - Adelly it is!!!

So...you like denim then? ;-)

hahahah

Asks the denim Avatar. LOL
I sure do Billy Blue:)

I like it...Rockin' All Over The World! Subtle hint to my favourite band, Status Quo (pronounced State-us Quo in the uk), lol. They like dressing up in tight denim. ;-)

I like a little space in my denim. I only wear skinny jeans if I don't plan
to eat a big dinner. LOL
Otherwise I am miserable. I love food. Not one of those females
who is too shy to eat. hahahah

Glad you enjoyed this. Rockin' All Over The World. I remember you
recommended them to me once. They do kick some UK butt!!

*per your new pic, watermelon please!  Damn my mouth is watering!   I won't even bring up the vitamin C aspect.  
Okay carry on!

Hahahahah, Hey Styx:)

My fav jolly rancher is watermelon!!!!
I gotta admit - I kinda tasted before I put them on. heheheheh
What? I was curious.

I LOVE to almost freeze the watermelon, so it's a slushy.  Omg so good.  Lol.

I need to try that!!!

I've never froze.
Doesn't last long enough.
When I was pregnant with my boys I could
down a whole watermelon all by myself.
Only thing that didn't get me sick.
Good times - hahahahah

Try watermelon on a completely EMPTY belly.  Its still good.  You don't have to be pregnant.  Lol