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Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment


¡.  
Your words    
tuck in  
neatly    
under  
my heart    
   
where  
each beat    
gently    
caresses  
reminders    
   
    
safekeeping    
their magic
 
   
   
   
¡¡.  
Tingling harmonies    
petal{to}petal  
silky  
vibrant  
salvation    
e  c  h  o  e  s    
howls of truth  
exquisitely sung    
in the key    
of    
ecstasy  
   
   
   
¡¡¡.  
Deep    
cleansing    
breaths
   
   
taking  
it    
as. it. comes.    
   
finding you  
   
allows quiet    
to...... prevail  
   
   
hand    
in    
hand  
<  
-  
>  
are where    
my mysteries    
are solved    
   
   
   
   
   
   
   
Written by Bluevelvete
Published | Edited 5th Aug 2022
Author's Note
Playing with format, minimalism and various ideas.... musings tumbling 'round my head...

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