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Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
¡.
Your words
tuck in
neatly
under
my heart
where
each beat
gently
caresses
reminders
safekeeping
their magic
¡¡.
Tingling harmonies
petal{to}petal
silky
vibrant
salvation
e c h o e s
howls of truth
exquisitely sung
in the key
of
ecstasy
¡¡¡.
Deep
cleansing
breaths
taking
it
as. it. comes.
finding you
allows quiet
to...... prevail
hand
in
hand
<
-
>
are where
my mysteries
are solved
Author's Note
Playing with format, minimalism and various ideas.... musings tumbling 'round my head...
©Blu2022
©Blu2022
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Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
18th Jan 2022 9:35pm
Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
Hey there, KP...
I'm so glad you do!
Minimalism is always a challenge for me, so your thoughts are especially appreciated (you being so talented with that form) and sincerely meaningful to me... ✨
Very much obliged, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
I'm so glad you do!
Minimalism is always a challenge for me, so your thoughts are especially appreciated (you being so talented with that form) and sincerely meaningful to me... ✨
Very much obliged, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
18th Jan 2022 9:58pm
Go girl this is lovely. I really, really love the layout but it made my heart smile. Great job beautiful, great job
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
19th Jan 2022 5:20am
Awwww.... To have that awesomely, beautiful tender heart of yours smile 😁 wide @ my little musings!!!...Well, that's totally day. made.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me and for enjoying the read. It's a great compliment you bestow and I'm extremely appreciative 🙏🏻
Much love, my dear brave knight!
🌹 - 💙 - ⚔️
—B
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me and for enjoying the read. It's a great compliment you bestow and I'm extremely appreciative 🙏🏻
Much love, my dear brave knight!
🌹 - 💙 - ⚔️
—B
Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
18th Jan 2022 10:07pm
words
filter through
as breaths
sighs
reflecting a heart
souls
caress
the stars
like a
trail of fire
across the sky
love's magic
twinkles
unoticed
till.....
its vibrancy
tingles
as a melody
that never
leaves
your head
our mysteries
found together
long forgoþen
remnants
ignited
allowing
an ache.....
to quiten
filter through
as breaths
sighs
reflecting a heart
souls
caress
the stars
like a
trail of fire
across the sky
love's magic
twinkles
unoticed
till.....
its vibrancy
tingles
as a melody
that never
leaves
your head
our mysteries
found together
long forgoþen
remnants
ignited
allowing
an ache.....
to quiten
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Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
19th Jan 2022 5:13am
"Allowing an ache to quiet" is such a profound and delicious notion, Colin.
So many meanings and different connotations...
Your poetic voice and in the moment off the cuff poem-ply really lends to some further soul searching and pondering on my end... Which you know that I do enjoy. Thanks so much for your creative ideas and thoughts upon my page... it's a true joy, dear friend 🙏🏻
All my warmest appreciation and much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
So many meanings and different connotations...
Your poetic voice and in the moment off the cuff poem-ply really lends to some further soul searching and pondering on my end... Which you know that I do enjoy. Thanks so much for your creative ideas and thoughts upon my page... it's a true joy, dear friend 🙏🏻
All my warmest appreciation and much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
18th Jan 2022 10:33pm
It's a lovely poem
With a lovely layout
It reminds me of
First true love
When the heart soars
No feeling quite like this
With bated breath
Each spoken word
Eternitys prisoner
To be lovingly remembered
Keeping the hearts
Fire burning bright
Each new day brings
Hope for more
Endearing words of love
So that they
Too are cherished and loved
These words I write
Is how I perceive your
Deliciousness of vocabulary
Excellent and delicious my dear Blue
💜💜💜
With a lovely layout
It reminds me of
First true love
When the heart soars
No feeling quite like this
With bated breath
Each spoken word
Eternitys prisoner
To be lovingly remembered
Keeping the hearts
Fire burning bright
Each new day brings
Hope for more
Endearing words of love
So that they
Too are cherished and loved
These words I write
Is how I perceive your
Deliciousness of vocabulary
Excellent and delicious my dear Blue
💜💜💜
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Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
I love and adore reading where my words were able to take your thoughts, WM. It's truly affirming and so beautiful to process. Sincerely!! I'm totally stoked and extremely grateful, my friend 🙏🏻
It's a lovely pleasure ✨
All my warmest regards and deep appreciation,
🌹 - B
x
It's a lovely pleasure ✨
All my warmest regards and deep appreciation,
🌹 - B
x
Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
18th Jan 2022 10:52pm
I love your writing style and words as if they hush out of your heart and surprise you at the end.
KS
KS
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Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
19th Jan 2022 6:05am
Hey there, KS ;)
I'm all smiles that you feel some pleasure from my poetry. It's a joy to know that you find it surprising as well.... What a wonderful treat and fantastic compliment.... The tenderness that I hoped to convey in these three little installments I think might have been part of that hushed quality you speak of..... ;)
I'm glad you caught it!
My deep appreciation for leaving your thoughts - 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
I'm all smiles that you feel some pleasure from my poetry. It's a joy to know that you find it surprising as well.... What a wonderful treat and fantastic compliment.... The tenderness that I hoped to convey in these three little installments I think might have been part of that hushed quality you speak of..... ;)
I'm glad you caught it!
My deep appreciation for leaving your thoughts - 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
One of the things I love about your poetry is how you experiment… try new things… vary your themes… not a one poem poet… I usually prefer left justification… but you use centering so effectively… using line length and line breaks to speed up and slow down the cadence… I have enjoyed watching you grow in your writing…
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Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
You made me so proud and fully illuminated in a warm glow, even as I battle this horrible winter cold that I have. (I've tested myself twice for covid, it's negative, thankfully!) You're probably one of the only ones left that has really been there, supporting, encouraging and allowing me to learn from your exquisite pen. I am so so fortunate that you can see growth and progression because of that... and that it brings you some enjoyment.
It's been a pleasure ✨ every step of the way, LilD
I hope I can continue to explore and evolve. I still feel like I've barely skimmed the surface... lol.
Your feedback.... means so so much, a zillion thank you's.... ;)
🌹 - 💙
x
It's been a pleasure ✨ every step of the way, LilD
I hope I can continue to explore and evolve. I still feel like I've barely skimmed the surface... lol.
Your feedback.... means so so much, a zillion thank you's.... ;)
🌹 - 💙
x
Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
18th Jan 2022 11:22pm
Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
19th Jan 2022 5:17am
Hey there, Marks ;)
It's a trifecta of tender moments that direct a reader's attention to different avenues, indeed...
You have a knack for summation!!
It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋 I hope you are doing well, dear poet
Be well and be safe out there,
🌹 - 💙
B
It's a trifecta of tender moments that direct a reader's attention to different avenues, indeed...
You have a knack for summation!!
It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋 I hope you are doing well, dear poet
Be well and be safe out there,
🌹 - 💙
B
Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
19th Jan 2022 2:42pm
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- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
18th Jan 2022 11:28pm
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Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
19th Jan 2022 5:43pm
haha... Your last line here made me belly laugh... thanks for that!... 😁
I do cherish every. single. point. of. contact. I reply in earnest kindness and honest openness, when commenting. It's as amazing to me as it probably is to you!! I am completely aware that type of response could end with the very next poem I decide to publish....and that's, aok, too. I can only control my own actions and my deep want of honest and truly interesting, informative interactions amongst others.... That's what brings me joy, along with growth and progression....
Hopefully there are still opportunities for all of that, going forward!
🌹 - B
I do cherish every. single. point. of. contact. I reply in earnest kindness and honest openness, when commenting. It's as amazing to me as it probably is to you!! I am completely aware that type of response could end with the very next poem I decide to publish....and that's, aok, too. I can only control my own actions and my deep want of honest and truly interesting, informative interactions amongst others.... That's what brings me joy, along with growth and progression....
Hopefully there are still opportunities for all of that, going forward!
🌹 - B
Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
19th Jan 2022 00:19am
That reminds me so much of me...musings around the heart...you're so talented dear Blue 🌹
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Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
Awww... To be compare to you is such an amazing compliment, in my opinion!! You really made my day with your extremely kind thoughts!! I'm so very glad you found similar heartfelt connection here, Grace!!
💙 - hugs
🌹B
x
💙 - hugs
🌹B
x
Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
19th Jan 2022 10:06pm
Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
19th Jan 2022 00:29am
Your heart is beating for me, LOL. Go after what you want. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
19th Jan 2022 8:02pm
lol...😂 😂.... lol..
You are positively silly and I'm so very glad you stopped by to leave me your thoughts, Francisco!
🌹 - B
You are positively silly and I'm so very glad you stopped by to leave me your thoughts, Francisco!
🌹 - B
Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
20th Jan 2022 00:49am
Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
19th Jan 2022 3:20am
This is so beautiful.
The image and words fluttering from the heart:)
Work of beauty!!
The image and words fluttering from the heart:)
Work of beauty!!
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Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
19th Jan 2022 8:05pm
Hey there, A!
Glad you're back with us!! 👍🏻
Thanks so very much for the visit and the extremely generous list add— your thoughts are so lovely and I feel sincerely lucky that you've found a little bit of beauty here 🦋 🍃
Hope you are doing well!
🌹 - 💙
B
Glad you're back with us!! 👍🏻
Thanks so very much for the visit and the extremely generous list add— your thoughts are so lovely and I feel sincerely lucky that you've found a little bit of beauty here 🦋 🍃
Hope you are doing well!
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
19th Jan 2022 4:34am
Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
19th Jan 2022 5:08am
Ohh Vick!
You just made me blush!
I'm so happy to see you 🦋 and hope you had a wonderful holiday season and that the new year is treating you well.
I'm extremely thankful for your lovely kind words and the very generous list add.
Please don't be a stranger, you're always a sincerely welcomed sight!
Be well and be safe out there,
🌹 - 💙
—B
You just made me blush!
I'm so happy to see you 🦋 and hope you had a wonderful holiday season and that the new year is treating you well.
I'm extremely thankful for your lovely kind words and the very generous list add.
Please don't be a stranger, you're always a sincerely welcomed sight!
Be well and be safe out there,
🌹 - 💙
—B
Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
Anonymous
- Edited 19th Jan 2022 7:15am
19th Jan 2022 7:08am
I like the format! Love the upside down exclamation points as Roman numerals. Classy touch. I dig it the most.
To riff on a New York Dolls song, better a bunch of muses tumbling 'round your head than a friend of a friend of a friend of a friend staring back at you in the mirror! (Personality Crises.) Well done 😀!
To riff on a New York Dolls song, better a bunch of muses tumbling 'round your head than a friend of a friend of a friend of a friend staring back at you in the mirror! (Personality Crises.) Well done 😀!
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Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
19th Jan 2022 8:16pm
Ohh Em!
Thanks so much for visiting and for the generosity of sharing your thoughts with me!! I am stoked you enjoyed the format, oh how I love playing around there.... ;) These little 'poem-nuggets' are such great opportunities to push ideas of how poems are supposed to look /feel... I hoped it would work and not be too much of a convoluted clusterfuck.... ha!!!... Cuz, I just never know!
You always seem to know that I have such an affinity for that era of music - early glam /punk ... I was just listening to the stooges earlier... lol..I have a weirdo thing for David Johansen!!... lmao.... I'm just drawn to him! 😂
Terrific quote and so apropos.
I dig seeing you on my page... 🦋
Much love sent your way
🌹 - 💙
—B
Thanks so much for visiting and for the generosity of sharing your thoughts with me!! I am stoked you enjoyed the format, oh how I love playing around there.... ;) These little 'poem-nuggets' are such great opportunities to push ideas of how poems are supposed to look /feel... I hoped it would work and not be too much of a convoluted clusterfuck.... ha!!!... Cuz, I just never know!
You always seem to know that I have such an affinity for that era of music - early glam /punk ... I was just listening to the stooges earlier... lol..I have a weirdo thing for David Johansen!!... lmao.... I'm just drawn to him! 😂
Terrific quote and so apropos.
I dig seeing you on my page... 🦋
Much love sent your way
🌹 - 💙
—B
Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
19th Jan 2022 8:25am
From the companion artwork to the piece itself, there is such an elegance and sophistication,
which interacts with the mind in caresses of graceful things.
... And how you pull from the aether, implementations, in the form of
unconventional poetic applications, in order to bring to life your ideas, and shine in the mind of the reader, in different forms of movement...
That is very much... Such a high form of brilliance.
Oh... And killer title.
(You know... It was actually earlier today. I was just... Thinking about
how grateful I am to interact with your energies and how much they have made me think and expand my perception.)
which interacts with the mind in caresses of graceful things.
... And how you pull from the aether, implementations, in the form of
unconventional poetic applications, in order to bring to life your ideas, and shine in the mind of the reader, in different forms of movement...
That is very much... Such a high form of brilliance.
Oh... And killer title.
(You know... It was actually earlier today. I was just... Thinking about
how grateful I am to interact with your energies and how much they have made me think and expand my perception.)
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Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
19th Jan 2022 8:27pm
Your absolutely otherworldly comments leave me buzzing and truly breathless!!
You're also such a lightning rod of enormous creative force for me, dear Cipher! I find that you can stimulate that area of my brain in the very best of ways!!.... How extraordinary and special!
I'm all Cheshire Cat smile, with your ref to a good title.... You know that's my total 'thing'... I am soooo excited that you found it killer!! Yesssss!! 👍🏻
To be able to have any impact as a writer is a total dream, but to shine in the mind of a reader!!? ✨.... Has me completely gobsmacked, humbled and left awe struck.... Just incredible! 😲
All my warmest gratitude and thanks, my dear friend,
🌹 - 💙
—B
You're also such a lightning rod of enormous creative force for me, dear Cipher! I find that you can stimulate that area of my brain in the very best of ways!!.... How extraordinary and special!
I'm all Cheshire Cat smile, with your ref to a good title.... You know that's my total 'thing'... I am soooo excited that you found it killer!! Yesssss!! 👍🏻
To be able to have any impact as a writer is a total dream, but to shine in the mind of a reader!!? ✨.... Has me completely gobsmacked, humbled and left awe struck.... Just incredible! 😲
All my warmest gratitude and thanks, my dear friend,
🌹 - 💙
—B
Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
19th Jan 2022 9:53am
Suchs a great poem. Love the opening lines, and it carries all the way through. 😁
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Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
19th Jan 2022 8:28pm
I'm so glad you enjoyed reading, DC. I deeply appreciate you sharing your thoughts and I'm grateful for the generous list add, too.
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Dec 2022 8:45pm
19th Jan 2022 12:37pm
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Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
19th Jan 2022 8:46pm
Hey there, Jay ;)
It's always exciting for me to know that you've derived pleasure from my poetry and I'm especially glad that this little dive into a trinity of emotions could accomplish that very feat. Thanks so much for visiting and taking the time to leave me your very kind and insightful feedback.
It's always a pleasure, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
It's always exciting for me to know that you've derived pleasure from my poetry and I'm especially glad that this little dive into a trinity of emotions could accomplish that very feat. Thanks so much for visiting and taking the time to leave me your very kind and insightful feedback.
It's always a pleasure, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
19th Jan 2022 1:26pm
I really enjoyed this Deep spill it's like reading the intro of a book..
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Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
19th Jan 2022 6:13pm
Thanks so much for the visit and for the lovely kind words as well.
I'm so glad you found some enjoyment.
🌹-💙
B
I'm so glad you found some enjoyment.
🌹-💙
B
Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
19th Jan 2022 6:37pm
Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
19th Jan 2022 8:32pm
That's so awesome to be made aware of! ... I sincerely thank you for letting me know.... It's deeply encouraging and beyond moving for me, knowing that you receive continuous enjoyment and like reading what I put out here....I am all smiles from ear to ear...
Very much obliged,
🌹 😁
Very much obliged,
🌹 😁
Anonymous
- Edited 10th Feb 2022 2:45pm
19th Jan 2022 6:36pm
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Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
19th Jan 2022 9:20pm
Dearest Selina,
Your comments are so uplifting and truly consequential. I adore you and your affectionate affinity for my humble poems... I total relish in the mental images of your pleasing enjoyment.. I can't help but imagine it.... Just divine!! 🍃🔥
Thank you so much visiting, for sharing your beautiful and thoughtful sentiments with me and for always being an encouraging driving force.... I fucking love it, my sultry friend ;p
Much love and appreciation your way ✨
🌹 - B
x
Your comments are so uplifting and truly consequential. I adore you and your affectionate affinity for my humble poems... I total relish in the mental images of your pleasing enjoyment.. I can't help but imagine it.... Just divine!! 🍃🔥
Thank you so much visiting, for sharing your beautiful and thoughtful sentiments with me and for always being an encouraging driving force.... I fucking love it, my sultry friend ;p
Much love and appreciation your way ✨
🌹 - B
x
Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
19th Jan 2022 8:36pm
Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
19th Jan 2022 9:09pm
Whoa .. I'm a tad overwhelmed, as your thoughts are especially hallmarked in my mind as a particular kind of cherished... Now, is where I would usually drone on, in a way way WAY too long of a reply. So I'll kindly spare you and leave you the knowledge that your lovely words have echoed profound joy deep within and all throughout. Making a lady who's always prone to severe second guessing and questioning herself, feel truly and completely successful....
Needless to say , I'm beyond thankful.
🌹 - B
Needless to say , I'm beyond thankful.
🌹 - B
Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
20th Jan 2022 4:44am
Dear BV,
This poem is pretty.
I know I’m a little more long winded than this but I kept trolling my thoughts Rolodex and pretty just kept coming back. I very much like the format. Job well done. And the words are pretty. Now I’ve said it three times. Now this looks like a lot of words😊.
Seriously, “pretty” great poem. 😄
H🌷
This poem is pretty.
I know I’m a little more long winded than this but I kept trolling my thoughts Rolodex and pretty just kept coming back. I very much like the format. Job well done. And the words are pretty. Now I’ve said it three times. Now this looks like a lot of words😊.
Seriously, “pretty” great poem. 😄
H🌷
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Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
20th Jan 2022 6:20am
Hey there, Honoria :)
I'll take "pretty" all day long! It's a word (I'm completely sincere, now... ) that I never heard myself, growing up or even that much as an adult, so I take it to heart and I'm totally ok with you repeating as many times as needed... lol...Har Har!
I'm delighted you found some prettiness here.
It's a lovely sentiment, (with just the right amount of words! 👌🏻) dear lady and I deeply thank you for it....
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
I'll take "pretty" all day long! It's a word (I'm completely sincere, now... ) that I never heard myself, growing up or even that much as an adult, so I take it to heart and I'm totally ok with you repeating as many times as needed... lol...Har Har!
I'm delighted you found some prettiness here.
It's a lovely sentiment, (with just the right amount of words! 👌🏻) dear lady and I deeply thank you for it....
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
20th Jan 2022 6:53am
Okay, I'm exhausted from scrolling down the comments 😜
I love the first stanza and "petals to petals" is sensual dynamite 💥💥💥💥 Lady Blue, your writing makes me happy and comforts me with its warm caress.🐻💞🐰
I love the first stanza and "petals to petals" is sensual dynamite 💥💥💥💥 Lady Blue, your writing makes me happy and comforts me with its warm caress.🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
21st Jan 2022 7:44pm
Hee hee hee... ohh c'mon! .... (blushes)
My goodness....how I do so love warm caressing with my words.... deeply penetrating, mind body and souls.... strong enough to feel so very good but tender enough to melt the harshest of hearts 💕..... *wink
I'm so glad you enjoyed, dearest BB!!!
I miss you, your visits and encouragements, everyday.....
Be well and safe.... I'm thinking of you!
🌹 - 🐻🤗🐰
xo
B
My goodness....how I do so love warm caressing with my words.... deeply penetrating, mind body and souls.... strong enough to feel so very good but tender enough to melt the harshest of hearts 💕..... *wink
I'm so glad you enjoyed, dearest BB!!!
I miss you, your visits and encouragements, everyday.....
Be well and safe.... I'm thinking of you!
🌹 - 🐻🤗🐰
xo
B
Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
21st Jan 2022 3:25pm
OMG. How do you continually take your poetry to new, higher, and more creative levels? I know! It's because of amazing YOU, one of a kind. Hugs and kisses to my special friend, xoxox, Oral
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Re: Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenm
21st Jan 2022 3:33pm
You definitely know how to make a girl smile like she's never smiled before....Thank you, Oral. I'm beyond excited that you found enjoyment in my words. Your kindness and beautiful comments are otherworldly, in their affects on me.
I'm so appreciative 🙏🏻 The real amazement is you finding some pleasure within my poetry...
All my warmest gratitude, dearest O
Returned hugs and kisses - xoxo
🌹💋
-B
I'm so appreciative 🙏🏻 The real amazement is you finding some pleasure within my poetry...
All my warmest gratitude, dearest O
Returned hugs and kisses - xoxo
🌹💋
-B
Re. Thoughts of admiration, aching desire and attempted enlightenment
24th Jan 2022 7:56pm
Excellent verse blue. I like the changing dynamic, keeping us intrigued from beginning to end.
Well done!
Well done!
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24th Jan 2022 10:41pm